專題08應(yīng)用文寫作

1.（2023上?江蘇南通?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，近期你校攝影俱樂部（photographyclub）正在征集以“中

國航天”為主題的短視頻。你打算邀請(qǐng)你校的交換生Terry一起制作，請(qǐng)給他寫一份郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.作品要求（雙語、時(shí)長、截止日期等）；

2.你對(duì)作品的設(shè)想。

注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參匯：bilingualsubtitles雙語字幕

DearTerry,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearTerry,

Recentlyourschool'sphotographyclubiscollectingshortvideosonChina'sspaceindustry.Knowingthatyou

arekeenonthetheme,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutomakeonewithme.

Thevideoisrequiredtobelimitedto10minuteswithsimplifiedChineseandEnglishbilingualsubtitles.And

thedeadlineforthesubmissionisJanuary15th.Toimpresstheviewers,I'mconsideringincludingthehistoryof

ourspaceexplorationandsomeoutstandingastronautsinthevideo.

Isincerelyhopeyoucanjoinmeinmakingawonderfulvideo.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫信邀請(qǐng)學(xué)校的交換生Terry一起制作校攝影俱樂部征集的以

“中國航天”為主題的短視頻，要求寫明征集作品的要求和對(duì)作品的設(shè)想。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

最近：recently—lately

考慮：consider—thinkover

要求：require一request

喜歡：bekeenon一befondof

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thevideoisrequiredtobelimitedto10minuteswithsimplifiedChineseandEnglishbilingualsubtitles.

拓展句：Itisrequiredthatthevideoislimitedto10minuteswithsimplifiedChineseandEnglishbilingual

subtitles.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Knowingthatyouarekeenonthetheme,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutomakeonewithme.

（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]Toimpresstheviewers,I'mconsideringincludingthehistoryofourspaceexplorationandsome

outstandingastronautsinthevideo.（運(yùn)用了不定式作目的狀語、動(dòng)名詞作賓語）

2.（2023上?河北石家莊?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，下個(gè)月你市將舉辦青少年長跑比賽。請(qǐng)寫封郵件,

邀請(qǐng)你的外國朋友Peter一起報(bào)名參加。內(nèi)容包括：

1.比賽地點(diǎn)；

2.報(bào)名方式；

3.長跑益處。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：along-distancerunningrace長跑比賽

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearPeter,

rdliketotellyouapieceofgoodnews.Nextmonth,ourcitywillholdalong-distancerunningracethatis

intendedfbrteenagers.Thethemeofthiseventis"lovingsportsandmakingyourselfheathierandstronger^^.

SomeofmyschoolmatesandIareeagertoparticipateintheevent.Ihopethatyoucanjoinus.Theracewill

beheldintheCityStadiumnearourschool.

Wecangorunningthereafterschooloronweekendstobuildourselvesup.Ifyouareinterestedintheevent

andwanttolearnmoreaboutit,pleasecontactmeintime.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國朋友Peter寫封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他一起報(bào)名參加下個(gè)月將舉

辦的青少年長跑比賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

渴望做某事：beeagertodosth—>beanxioustodosth

參力口：participatein—>takepartin

舉行：beheld—>takeplace

與某人聯(lián)系：contactsb—>getintouchwithsb

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Wecangorunningthereafterschooloronweekendstobuildourselvesup.

拓展句：Wecangorunningthereafterschooloronweekendssothatwecanbuildourselvesup.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Nextmonth,ourcitywillholdalong-distancerunningracethatisintendedforteenagers.

（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

【高分句型2]Ifyouareinterestedintheeventandwanttolearnmoreaboutit,pleasecontactmeintime.（運(yùn)用

了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

3.（2023上?湖南岳陽?高二岳陽一中校考期末）假定你是李華，想要參加ChinaDaily發(fā)起的“AlettertoYear

3023”的時(shí)光膠囊征稿比賽，向3023年的地球人介紹現(xiàn)代中國“新四大發(fā)明”（高速鐵路，移動(dòng)支付，共享單

車和在線購物），并以其中之一為例，說明新四大發(fā)明對(duì)生活的影響。

要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Towhomitmayconcern,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】Towhomitmayconcern,

IcomefromChina,knownforcontemporaryfourgreatnewinventions.Theyarehighspeedrailway,mobile

payment,bicyclesharing,andonlineshopping,whichhaveaddedgreatconveniencetoourdailylife.

WithoutanybarriertotheInternetandahostofuseofmobilepayment,onlineshoppinghasgainedmuch

popularity,engagingthepublictoformdifferentconsumptionhabits.Iseldomshopatbrick-and-mortarshopsnow.

WhatIoftenpurchaseonlineisclothingandstationery.Theeasyaccesstoconsumerreviewshelpsmemake

informedpurchases.Also,shoppingonlinehelpsmesavetimeandmoney.Butbecauseyoucan'tseetherealthing,

thegoodsyoureceivemaynotbethesameasthoseonline,whichisreallyannoying.

Whateverhappens,wehopeyoucanimprovetheshortcomingsofthetechnologyandliveahealthierand

morecolorfullife.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給3023年的地球人寫一封信，介紹現(xiàn)代中國“新四大發(fā)明”（高

速鐵路，移動(dòng)支付，共享單車和在線購物），并以其中之一為例，說明新四大發(fā)明對(duì)生活的影響。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

聞名的：known—>famous

贏得：gain—get—>win

止匕夕卜：also—besides—>inaddition

令人惱火的：annoying—angry

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IcomefromChina,knownforcontemporaryfourgreatnewinventions.

拓展句：IcomefromChina,whichisknownforcontemporaryfourgreatnewinventions.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]WithoutanybarriertotheInternetandahostofuseofmobilepayment,onlineshoppinghas

gainedmuchpopularity,engagingthepublictoformdifferentconsumptionhabits.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）

【高分句型2]WhatIoftenpurchaseonlineisclothingandstationery.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）

4.（2023上?河北保定?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Tom來信說他即將作為交換生來中國

學(xué)習(xí)，他想提前了解中國飲食文化。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示歡迎；

2.介紹中國飲食文化（如食物、筷子、就餐氛圍等）；

3.期待他的到來。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearTom,

IamdelightedthatyouarecomingtoChinasoon.LetmetellyousomethingaboutChineseeatingculture.

Firstly,Chinesefoodhasagreatreputationforitsdelicioustastesanddiversecookingmethods,whichappeals

topeopleathomeandabroad.Typicalexamplesaredumplings,noodlesandhotpots,asyoumayhaveheardof.

Besides,whathighlightsChineseeatinghabitsistheuseofthechopsticks.Whafsmore,ifscommonforChinese

peopletotalkovermeals,whichisregardedasasignofbeingfriendly.

Therearemorewaitingforyoutoexperience.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給將作為交換生來中國學(xué)習(xí)的外國朋友Tom寫一封郵件，幫

助他提前了解中國的飲食文化。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

高興的：delighted-pleased

首先：firstly—firstofall

各種各樣的：diverse-various

而且：whafsmore^-furthermore

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Therearemorewaitingforyoutoexperience.

拓展句：Therearemorethingswhicharewaitingforyoutoexperience.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Besides,whathighlightsChineseeatinghabitsistheuseofthechopsticks.（運(yùn)用了what

引導(dǎo)的主語主句）

[高分句型2]Whafsmore,ifscommonforChinesepeopletotalkovermeals,whichisregardedasasignof

beingfriendly.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性導(dǎo)語從句）

5.（2023上?河北滄州?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，上周五你校開展了“京劇進(jìn)校園”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英

文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)目的；

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；

3.活動(dòng)反響。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

PekingOperaintoCampus

【答案】PekingOperaintoCampus

LastFridaywitnessedanactivitywiththetheme“PekingOperaintoCampus”,whichisaimedtodevelop

students5passionforartandtraditionalChineseculture.

HighlightsofthiseventincludedlivePekingperformancebyrenownedactorsinourauditorium,which

arousedstudents?interestintheuniqueformofart.Additionally,alltheactorsandactresseshadaninteractionwith

theaudienceaftertheperformance.Theygaveafurtherexplanationoftheartformanddemonstratedmany

gracefulmovesandvocals.

Thisactivitywashighlyspokenofbyeverystudent,whohasgainedadeeperinsightintomagnificentChinese

cultureandconsequentlytookmoreprideinourtime-honoredcivilization.

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，報(bào)道上周五你校開展的“京劇進(jìn)校園”

的活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

著名的：renownedifamous

獨(dú)特的：unique—particular

另夕卜：additionally—?furthermore

演示：demonstrate一display

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theygaveafurtherexplanationoftheartformanddemonstratedmanygracefulmovesandvocals.

拓展句：Theygaveafurtherexplanationoftheartform,whiletheydemonstratedmanygracefulmovesandvocals.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型l]LastFridaywitnessedanactivitywiththetheme"PekingOperaintoCampus”,whichis

aimedtodevelopstudents5passionforartandtraditionalChineseculture.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Thisactivitywashighlyspokenofbyeverystudent,whohasgainedadeeperinsightintomagnificent

Chinesecultureandconsequentlytookmoreprideinourtime-honoredcivilization.（who弓I導(dǎo)的非限制T生定語從

句）

6.（2023上?河北唐山?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom來信詢問你校勞動(dòng)課（laborcourse）

開展情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.課程開設(shè)情況；

2.課程內(nèi)容（參加社區(qū)服務(wù)，公益活動(dòng)等）；

3.課后感悟。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearTom,

Howareyourecently?

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearTom,

Howareyourecently?

I'mwringtotellyouaboutourschool'slaborcourse.Toformthestudents9correctviewoflabor,colorful

laborprogramsareopeneveryweek.Wecanhelpplanvegetablesorfeedchickensintheschool-runfarm.Besides,

studentsarealsoencouragedtoparticipateincommunityserviceandvoluntarywork.

Mostofusarefascinatedbythecoursebecauseitoffersanalternativetoourbusyschoollife.Notonlyarewe

relaxedbutwehavegainedahighermoralvalueonlife.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom來信詢問你校勞動(dòng)課(laborcourse)

開展情況。請(qǐng)你給他回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

獲得：gain—obtain

選擇：alternative—'choice

此外：besides一inaddition

觀念：view—?opinion

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Toformthestudents5correctviewoflabor,colorfullaborprogramsareopeneveryweek.

拓展句：Colorfullaborprogramsareopeneveryweek,whoseaimistoformthestudents5correctviewoflabor.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Toformthestudents5correctviewoflabor,colorfullaborprogramsareopeneveryweek.（運(yùn)

用了不定式作目的狀語）

[高分句型2]Mostofusarefascinatedbythecoursebecauseitoffersanalternativetoourbusyschoollife.（運(yùn)用

了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）

7.（2023上?河北邢臺(tái)?高二邢臺(tái)一中?？计谀┈F(xiàn)今，全世界仍有大量的人遭受饑荒，而食物浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象卻

很嚴(yán)重。作為新時(shí)代的青少年，你將在班會(huì)上以“Saynotofoodwaste”為題發(fā)表英文演講。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要

點(diǎn)寫一篇演講稿：

1.食物浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)狀;2.食物浪費(fèi)的影響;3.解決食物浪費(fèi)的措施。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：disastrous極糟糕的；災(zāi)難性的；devastating毀滅性的;令人震驚的；

Saynotofoodwaste

Dearstudents,

Itisagreathonorformetospeakhereonsuchasignificantoccasion.

Thankyouforyourattention.

【答案】Dearstudents,

Itisagreathonorformetospeakhereonsuchasignificantoccasion.Sincemillionsofpeoplearesuffering

fromhungerandtonsoffoodarebeingwasted,mytopicis"Saynotofoodwaste”.

Foodwastehasdevastatingimpacts.Notonlydoesitwastealltheenergyusedtoproduceandtransportthe

food,butitalsocontributestoglobalwarmingoncethrownaway.Thankfully,effortscanbemadetodealwiththe

issue.Wecanadoptstrategiesdailytopreventfoodwaste.Whencookingathome,weshouldplanmealscarefully

andnotcookmorethanneeded.Wheneatingintherestaurant,weshouldorderonlyaccordingtoourneedsand

taketheleftovershome.Fromnowon,lefsfightfoodwasteandbuildabetterworldforall.

Thankyouforyourattention.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“Saynotofoodwaste”為題寫一篇演講稿。要點(diǎn)如下：1.食

物浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)狀;2.食物浪費(fèi)的影響;3.解決食物浪費(fèi)的措施。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

重要的：significant—important

導(dǎo)致：contributeto—resultin

運(yùn)輸：transport一deliver

處理：dealwith一copewith

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)化

原句：Sincemillionsofpeoplearesufferingfromhungerandtonsoffoodarebeingwasted,mytopicis“Saynoto

foodwaste”.

拓展句：Millionsofpeoplearesufferingfromhungerandtonsoffoodarebeingwasted,somytopicis“Saynoto

foodwaste".

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Sincemillionsofpeoplearesufferingfromhungerandtonsoffoodarebeingwasted,my

topicis“Saynotofoodwaste”.（運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Notonlydoesitwastealltheenergyusedtoproduceandtransportthefood,butitalsocontributes

toglobalwarmingoncethrownaway.（運(yùn)用了notonly...butalso...的倒裝句式）

8.（2023上?山東威海?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華。Teens正在舉行主題為“BeingaBetterSelf，的征文活動(dòng)。

請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身生活或?qū)W習(xí)經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愕淖兓透惺堋?/p>

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.不得透露任何與個(gè)人和學(xué)校相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息。

【答案】范例1：

I'mkindofanintrovert.So,ifsnotsurprisingthatI'vebeenmostlyavoidinggroupactivities.Togetpastmy

discomfort,Ibeganwithgoingoutwithclosefriendsandthenworkedmywayuptogoingoutwithasmallgroup

offriends.Ialsotriedtomakeorholdeyecontactwithmostpeopleinaconversation.Now,Ifeelmore

comfortableingroupsandevenwithstrangers.

Changeissteppingoutofcomfortzone,andgrowthrequiresstretchingpastwhatIusedtobe.ButeverystepI

takeispartoftheprocesstowardbecomingthebestversionofmyself.

范例2：

Inmyseniorone,Ihitarutinmystudies.Everytimecomingbackhome,insteadoffocusingonmy

homework,Iwasinteractingwithsocialmediaonmysmartphone.SoobsessivewasIthatIfeltmylifechaotic.To

reclaimmyfocus,IchosetouseaphonewithoutInternetconnection.Thoughhardtoresist,Ikepton.

Withtime,Ibegantoenjoymyquiettime.Ifeellessforcedtocheckmyphoneandcanconcentratemore

closelyonwhatevertaskisathand.Iamgratefultobeabetterselfwithself-discipline.

范例3：

Changeislikeamiracleandusuallybringssurprisetopeople.Tmnoexception.

Lastspringwhenwehadclassesonline,mymotheradvisedmetojogfor3kilometerseverydaytorelaxand

buildmybody.Atfirst,Ijustdidsoastomakemymotherhappy,butasIran,Ifoundmanysurprisingchangesin

myself.Iwasfullofenergyallthedayandfreeofneckpain.Ievenlostsomeweight.

Now,jogginghasbecomeanessentialpartofmylife,andUmjoggingintoabetterlife.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華。Teens正在舉行主題為“BeingaBetterSef的征文活動(dòng)。

請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身生活或?qū)W習(xí)經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愕淖兓透惺堋?/p>

【詳解】1.詞匯積累：

令人驚奇的：surprising—astonishing/amazing

努力做某事：trytodo一attempttodo

舒適的：comfortable一cosy/easefiil

要求：require-askfor

2.句式拓展：

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Togetpastmydiscomfort,Ibeganwithgoingoutwithclosefriendsandthenworkedmywayuptogoing

outwithasmallgroupoffriends.

拓展句：Togetpastmydiscomfort,Ibeganwithgoingoutwithclosefriends,afterwhichIworkedmywayupto

goingoutwithasmallgroupoffriends.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]So,ifsnotsurprisingthatTvebeenmostlyavoidinggroupactivities.（運(yùn)用了it作形式

主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句）

【高分句型2]Changeissteppingoutofcomfortzone,andgrowthrequiresstretchingpastwhatIusedtobe.（運(yùn)

用了what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

【高分句型3】ButeverystepItakeispartoftheprocesstowardbecomingthebestversionofmyself.（運(yùn)用了省

略了關(guān)系代詞的定語從句）

優(yōu)選提升提

9.(2023上?浙江紹興?高二統(tǒng)考期末)假如你是李華，上周你校舉辦了“ScienceLightsUptheFuture”為主題

的科技創(chuàng)新大賽(theScienceandTechnologyInnovationContest)o請(qǐng)你為校報(bào)寫一篇英文報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.比賽目的；

2.比賽內(nèi)容；

3.活動(dòng)感想。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

ScienceLightsUptheFuture

LastweekwitnessedtheScienceandTechnologyInnovationContestofourschoolwiththethemeof"Science

LightsUptheFuture^^.

Toenrichstudents'knowledgeofmodemscienceandtechnologyaswellasinspireuswithscientific

innovationinthis“smarter“world,ourschoolheldavarietyofexhibitionsandlectures,whichwereboth

informativeandinspiring.Thereweremanyhand-onscientificdesignsandinventionsaswell,amongwhichthe

mostpopularoneswererocketsand3Dprinting.

Thecontestwasprovedhugelyrewarding,broadeningourhorizons,promotingourcreativityandcultivating

ourinnovation.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇英文報(bào)道，要求考生以李華的身份對(duì)上周你校舉辦了“ScienceLightsUpthe

Future”為主題的科技創(chuàng)新大賽（theScienceandTechnologyInnovationContest）進(jìn)行報(bào)道。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉行：hold—?stage

許多：many—plentyof

流行的：popular—widespread

證明是：beprovedtobe一turnouttobe

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thecontestwasprovedhugelyrewarding,broadeningourhorizons,promotingourcreativityandcultivating

ourinnovation.

拓展句：Thecontestwassorewardingthatitcanbroadenourhorizons,promoteourcreativityandcultivateour

innovation.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Toenrichstudents5knowledgeofmodemscienceandtechnologyaswellasinspireuswith

scientificinnovationinthis“smarter“world,ourschoolheldavarietyofexhibitionsandlectures,whichwereboth

informativeandinspiring.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Thereweremanyhand-onscientificdesignsandinventionsaswell,amongwhichthemostpopular

oneswererocketsand3Dprinting.（運(yùn)用了“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

10.（2023上?福建廈門?高二統(tǒng)考期末）你校正在組織英語作文比賽，請(qǐng)以身邊令你感動(dòng)的一個(gè)時(shí)刻為題，

寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.描述令你感動(dòng)的時(shí)刻；

2.表達(dá)你的感悟。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AHeart-meltingMomentforMe

【答案】AHeart-meltingMomentForMe

Thingscomeandgo,butthereisalwaysamomentthatneverfadesout.

Onafreezingafternoon,itwaspouringoutside.Allofasudden,abigbranchwastomoffatreebywindand

blockedthestreet,whichmightcauseseriousaccidents.AsIwaswonderingwhattodo,therecameadeliveryman.

Hestoppedtodragthebranchtothesidewithallhisstrength,hisbodywetthrough.

Justatthatmoment,myheartmelt.Ordinaryasheis,hewonmyrespect.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性文。要求考生以身邊令人感動(dòng)的一個(gè)時(shí)刻為題，寫一篇短文參加英語作

文比賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

消逝：fadeout一dieaway

寒冷的：freezing—>chilly

突然地：Allofasudden-Unexpectedly

傾盆大雨：pouring一rainingheavily

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Hestoppedtodragthebranchtothesidewithallhisstrength,hisbodywetthrough.

拓展句：Hestoppedtodragthebranchtothesidewithallhisstrength,asaresultofwhichhisbodywaswet

through.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11A11ofasudden,abigbranchwastornoffatreebywindandblockedthestreet,whichmight

causeseriousaccidents.（運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]AsIwaswonderingwhattodo,therecameadeliveryman.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

H.（2023上?湖南郴州?高二校聯(lián)考期末）“青春有幾年，疫情占三年”，三年疫情你有怎樣的思考與理解？

請(qǐng)結(jié)合親身事例，寫一篇80詞左右的文章。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Asthewordgoes,"Youthhasafewyears,andtheepidemicaccountsforthreeyears”.

【答案】Asthewordgoes,"Youthhasafewyears,andtheepidemicaccountsforthreeyears”.Three-year

epidemicended,butmanymovingstoriesaroundusarestillfreshinmymind.Facedwiththeepidemic,everyone

didtheirbest.Ourteacherswhowerequarantinedawayfromhometaughtlessonsduringtheday,andhelpedus

withourhomeworkafterschool,givingussupportandmakinguspositive.Withtheirhelp,wecouldstudyin

peace.

Theepidemicisover.Althoughithasbroughtsorrowtous,itseemsthateveryonevalueslifemore.As

students,wetreasuretheopportunitytolearn.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放作文，要求考生結(jié)合親身事例來談?wù)勀銓?duì)三年疫情有怎樣的思考與理解。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

結(jié)束：end-cometoanend

令人感動(dòng)的：moving-touching

珍惜：treasure一cherish

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity—chance

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Three-yearepidemicended,butmanymovingstoriesaroundusarestillfreshinmymind.

拓展句：Althoughthethree-yearepidemicended,manymovingstoriesaroundusarestillfreshinmymind.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Ourteacherswhowerequarantinedawayfromhometaughtlessonsduringtheday,and

helpeduswithourhomeworkafterschool,givingussupportandmakinguspositive.（運(yùn)用了who弓|導(dǎo)的限制性

定語從句）

[高分句型2]Althoughithasbroughtsorrowtous,itseemsthateveryonevalueslifemore.（運(yùn)用了although弓|導(dǎo)

的讓步狀語從句）

12.（2023上?廣東廣州?高二統(tǒng)考期末）你校英文報(bào)新開設(shè)了專欄ABCsofSafety,面向全體學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)

你寫一篇短文投稿，講述上周你對(duì)同學(xué)李華實(shí)施燙傷急救的經(jīng)歷，并簡單談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>

注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2.合理增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Accidentsalwayshappen.

【答案】Accidentsalwayshappen.Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,thusspillingthehotwater

onhisrightleg.Onhearinghiscry,Iimmediatelyarosefrommyseatandrantohimatonce.

Concernedabouthisinjury,someclassmatesweregatheringaroundhim,notknowingwhattodo.Itseemed

thatLiwassufferingextremepainandheletoutayellofpain.Icheckedhisinjurywithoutdelayandfoundhis

rightfoothadbecomeredandswollen,followedbysomeblisters.Withthehelpofhisdeskmate,weinstantly

carriedhimtotherestroomandplacedtheburnsundercoolrunningwater,whichlastedabouttenminutes.Toour

relief,thesharppainseemedtobegreatlyeased.Afterdryingtheburntareagentlywithacleancloth,Icoveredit

withaloosebandagefromourfirst-aidkit.

OnlythenwasIawareofwhatadifferenceabasicknowledgeoffirstaidcouldmake,especiallyinsucha

case.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向校英文報(bào)新開設(shè)的專欄ABCsofSafety寫一篇短文投稿，

講述上周自己對(duì)同學(xué)李華實(shí)施燙傷急救的經(jīng)歷，并簡單談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?/p>

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

發(fā)現(xiàn)：findspot

立艮：immediately一innotime

檢查：check一examine

在...的幫助下：withthehelpof-withtheaidwith

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,thusspillingthehotwateronhisrightleg.

拓展句：Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,whichspiltthehotwateronhisrightleg.

【點(diǎn)睛X高分句型1]Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,thusspillingthehotwateronhisrightleg.

（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語）

【高分句型2】OnlythenwasIawareofwhatadifferenceabasicknowledgeoffirstaidcouldmake,especiallyin

suchacase.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝，what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

13.（2023上?廣東深圳?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)正在舉辦以“MyExperienceofaClub

Activity"為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)過程；

2.你的感受。

注意：3.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

4.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

MyExperienceofaClubActivity

【答案】MyExperienceofaClubActivity

IstillremembermyfirstexperienceasanEnglishhostintheNewYear'sEveparty.

MypartnerandIarrivedatthelecturehallanhourearly.Asshehelpedmewithmymakeup,Ifeltincredibly

excitedandnervous.Afterwards,Ipracticedmylinesseveraltimesonthestagetohaveabetterperformance.When

thepartyeventuallybegan,Iwalkedontothestagewithatremblingheart.Lookingattheaudience,Ipresentedthe

openingremarksasconfidentlyasIcould.Withtheapplauseoftheaudience,Iwasencouragedandhadaconfident

smileonmyface.

ThisexperiencehasmademeamoreconfidentpersonandIhaveafirmbeliefthatopportunitiesonlycometo

thosewhoareprepared.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“MyExperienceofaChibActivity”為題，寫一篇記敘文，

描述活動(dòng)過程以及這次經(jīng)歷帶來的的感受。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

難以置信地：incredibly-unbelievably

緊張的：nervous一anxious

堅(jiān)信：haveafirmbelief—stronglybelieve

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunities^chance

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Afterwards,Ipracticedmylinesseveraltimesonthestagetohaveabetterperformance.

拓展句：Afterwards,IpracticedmylinesseveraltimesonthestagesothatIcouldhaveabetterperformance.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Lookingattheaudience,IpresentedtheopeningremarksasconfidentlyasIcould.（運(yùn)

用了非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語）

【高分句型21ThisexperiencehasmademeamoreconfidentpersonandIhaveafirmbeliefthatopportunities

onlycometothosewhoareprepared.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)同位語從句以和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

14.（2023上?廣東佛山?高二統(tǒng)考期末）你校英語報(bào)正在征集主題為“互幫互助”的故事，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投

稿，描述一次你幫助他人的經(jīng)歷，并講述你的感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】Onedayonmywaytoschool,Icaughtsightofanoldladyofabout60standingatacrossroad,where

thetrafficwasverybusy.Althoughthereweretrafficlights,fromherpuzzledfaceIcouldtellthatshedidn'tknow

whatthetrafficlightsmeant.Seeingt