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ReadingForWritingUnit1TeenagelifeWhatisthepurposeofaletterofadvice?Whatkindofaspectsshouldbeincludedinsuchkindofletter?建議信的目的是針對有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析，并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和合理的建議。建議信的基本框架：1.開頭(beginning)—開門見山,向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn)(stateyouridea)。2.主體(body)—對所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由,接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)。3.結(jié)尾(ending)—呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion)。Ifeelterriblysorrytohear/know/learnthat...開頭1.非常難過聽說...3.這里有一些幫助你的建議。Herearesometips/suggestionstohelpyou.I’dliketoofferyousomeusefuladvice.3.我想給你提供一些有用的建議。Iknowyouhavetroublein...2.我非常理解你...Iunderstandyouquitewellthatyouare...主體部分提3個建議+理由1.Whydon’tyou…?/whynot...?2.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyou...3.Irecommendthatyou...4.You’dbetter…5.Youaresupposedto...6.IfIwereyou,Iwould...為什么不...？如果你...將會是個好主意我建議你...你最好...你應(yīng)該如果我是你...,我會...1.asanoldsayinggoes理由2.because...3.itisbeneficialforyouto...4.Thisisagoodwayof正如古話所說：...對你來說是有益的這是...的好辦法※Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.※Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.我希望你會考慮我的建議。我希望你會覺得這些建議有用。結(jié)尾DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublemakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，itwouldbeagoodideaifyousharedhappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend.Justasanoldsayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，

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putyourheartintomakingfriends.Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaReadtodiscoverwritingdetailsReadaletterofferingsomeadviceonpage18andthensolvethequestionsbelow.1.WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?2.DoyouthinkMsLuo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?3.Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?Her/Hisbestfriendspendstoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline.Yes.SusanadvisesWorriedFriendtoencourageChenLeitotrynewhobbiesanddiscusstheproblemtogether;IthinkChenLeiwillfollowthe3.advice,becausetheyarebestfriends.IadviseChenLeitotakesomeoutdooractivitiessuchasplayingballsorreadinginterestingbooksorevenlisteningtogoodmusic.Wecangowalkingtogether.Ifheisbored,hecanturntomeforhelp,thuswecanhavefuntogether.Readtodiscoverwritingdetails2.WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Writethemdown.Iunderstandquitewell….Irecommendthatyou….Ithinkyoushould…Whynotdo…Iamsurehewill…ReadthepassageonPage18againandfigureouttheorganizationoftheletterWritedownthesentencesfromthepassagethatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.ThisismyadviceandreasonsD.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Yourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehavior.Spendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.….cannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.WritingIalwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.WhatcanIdo?Usewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofadvicetotheteenagerbelow.tips____________Showthereaderyouknowaproblemis.Dear______Youwrotethat___________________Iunderstandthat______________Ithink____________________Because_____________.Iamsure_______________BestWishes,(closeandsigntheletter).______Tellthereaderyouunderstandhe/shefeels.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.Explainyourreasons.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.writethedateandgreetthereaderPossibleversion8October2019DearXuTingYouwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeelquitewell.Ithinkitisagoodideatomakesomegoodfriendsinyouclassandhavefunwiththemafterschool.Inthisway,youwillfeellesslonelybecauseyoucantalktoeachotherabouttheunhappythingstoreduceyourbadfeelingsandhavefuntogether.Itisagoodideanottobealone,tryingtobewithyourbestfriends.Iamsurefinallyyouwillbecheerfulandgetusedtoyourpresentlife.BestWishes,YourssincerelySusan建議信寫作總結(jié)建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信有可能是寫給某個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容和提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。這類文章的基本時態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陳述建議，具體為：建議信首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后指出需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓對方認(rèn)為是投訴，而不是建議。結(jié)尾段：對提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意要有禮貌，使對方容易接受。建議信常用句式：1．段首常用語(照應(yīng)材料，表明寫作意圖)：①Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...②AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat...③Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.④Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto...2．表達(dá)建議常用語：①Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...②Iwouldliketosuggestthat...③You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...④AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion/...⑤Foronething...;foranother...⑥IfIwereyou,Iwould...⑦Itseemstomethatyoucould...⑧Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould.3．段尾常用語：①Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.②Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.③Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.④Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.典

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賞假定你是李華。某中學(xué)生英語報社準(zhǔn)備增設(shè)一個EnvironmentalProtection欄目，為此報社就報道內(nèi)容與方式向讀者征求建議。請你根據(jù)以下提示給編輯寫封信，提出你的建議。1．報道內(nèi)容廣泛；2．報道應(yīng)包括原因、危害并重點(diǎn)突出應(yīng)對方法；3．語言簡單易懂，適合更多的讀者。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緦忣}導(dǎo)引】1．本題要求寫一封建議信，文體上是應(yīng)用文。人稱是第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，一般將來時為輔。2．環(huán)保問題一直以來都是一個熱點(diǎn)話題，學(xué)生對此并不陌生，同時提示較為詳細(xì)。3．本書信的難點(diǎn)是提出這些建議的理由要具體、得當(dāng)，具有較強(qiáng)的說服力?！緟⒖挤段摹緿eareditor，I'mgladtoknowfromyourpaperthatyouareaskingreadersforsuggestionsonyournewsection,Environmental

Protection.Mineareasfollows：Itispracticalthatthesectioncoversawiderangeofenvironmentalconcernsandmeanwhile,eachreportshouldincludecauses,effectsandmoreimportantly,effective