Unit2Healthylifestyle讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)作業(yè)設(shè)計(jì)（含答案）高中英語(yǔ)人教版選擇性必修第三冊(cè)人教版選擇性必修3Unit2HealthyLifestyle讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)作業(yè)

I課文素材庫(kù)

微技能語(yǔ)料出處

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)1.Ittookthesurgeonthreehourstofinishmymother’slungsurgery.2.Beforeexercising,alwaysdoafewwarm-upstobeginwith.3.ButthenIalwaysfeeltootiredtocontinue!4.Don’tkeepthephoneintheroomsoyouwon’tpickitupbeforebed.5.OthertimesIjumpedonmyskateboardandrodearoundmyneighbourhood,orjusttookalongwalk.Page17Exercise1Page17Exercise3Page17Exercise3Page18Exercise2Page20Text1Para4Line4

心理描寫(xiě)Toreachthegoalofchange,apersonmustshowsomedisciplineandrepeatedlytakemanysmallsteps.Student2feelsdepressedaboutbeingalittleoverweight.Ifeelmoredynamicandstrongerthanever,inbothbodyandmind.Bestofall,inmyopinion,ishowIfeelaboutmyself.AsItookpartinthesummercampaboutpersonallifechoices,Istartedtoanalysemychoices,especiallywhatIdidtorelaxandhowitwasaffectingmywholelife.However,Irealizedthattosucceedinquitting,Ihadtoreplaceitwithsomethingelse.SoIthoughtaboutwhattotry.Rockclimbing,bowling,watchingcomedies,andplayingbasketballwerethethingsIthoughtofdoinginstead.1.Page15Para5Line3Page18Exercise2Page20Text1Para5Line2Page20Text1Para5Line5Page20Text2Para1Line1Page20Text2Para3Line3

健康生活方式描寫(xiě)Topreventharmfulhabitslikethesefromdominatingateenager’slifeisessential.Lifeiscomposedofmanyelements,suchasfamily,friends,study,work,entertainment,andsoon.Ifoneelementsdominatesyourlifeandtheothersareignored,youwilllosebalanceandnotfeelgood.Itisnecessarytobeincontrolofwhatyoueat.Ireallyneedtodecideonawaytoexercisemore.1.Page14Para1Line52.Page16Exercise33.Page16Exercise34.Page17Exercise35.Page17Exercise3

不良生活方式描寫(xiě)Therewardmakesusmuchmorelikelytocontinuethecycle,andthebadhabitofrelyingonunhealthysnacksisformed.Student1hastroublesleepingbecauseofusingthephonebeforegoingtosleep.IgotsoabsorbedthatIplayedthegamesdayandnight.Playingwasfun,butIfeltevenmorewornoutafterwards!Page15Para1Line2Page18Exercise2Page20Text2Para2Line3

改變和反思描寫(xiě)Inmanyways,ourlifestyleisthesumofchoiceswehavemade.Tofacilitateapositivechangeinourbadhabits,wemustfirstexamineourbadhabitcyclesandthentrytoadaptthem.Manyofustrytochangebadhabitsquickly,andifwearenotsuccessfulstraightaway,weoftenbecomepessimisticandgiveup.Slowlyfacilitatechangesinyourlifestylebyusingastep-by-stepprocess.Youdon’thavetochangeeverythingatonce.Makesmallchangeseachdayandyourlifestylewillbecomehealthier.Tochangebadhabitsisnevereasy.Tomakechoicesaboutmyselfiswithinmyownpower.ItwasabigstrugglenottojoinmyfriendsinplayingonlinegamesasI’mmadforthem.Ithasenhancedthequalityofmylife,improvingmyhealthandincreasingmyhappiness.1.Page14Para2Line22.Page15Para2Line13.Page15Para3Line14.Page16Exercise35.Page16Exercise36.Page16Exercise37.Page17Exercise18.Page20Text1Para5Line79.Page20Text2Para3Line110.Page20Text2Para4Line2

II語(yǔ)言訓(xùn)練場(chǎng)

漢譯英

1.接下來(lái)的幾個(gè)月里，充滿(mǎn)了物理治療、預(yù)約醫(yī)生和對(duì)母親的不斷照顧。（befilledwith）

_______________

2.我成為了她的主要照顧者，幫助她處理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing做狀語(yǔ))

_______________

3.有時(shí)候，這讓我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必須要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地支撐著她。（并列復(fù)合句）

_______________

4.在此期間，我還必須學(xué)會(huì)如何平衡我的新責(zé)任與學(xué)業(yè)和社交生活。（特殊疑問(wèn)詞+動(dòng)詞不定時(shí)）

_______________

5.照顧我的母親成為了我的首要任務(wù)。（priority）

_______________

6.這種增加的溝通和共同決策加深了我們對(duì)彼此需求和關(guān)切的理解。(deepen)

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7.看到母親經(jīng)歷康復(fù)的困難使我更加耐心和理解她的掙扎。(v.ing作主語(yǔ))

_______________

8.同樣，我的母親欣賞我的努力，并對(duì)我的關(guān)心和支持表示極大的感激。(Likewise)

_______________

9.這次經(jīng)歷讓我們更加親密，加強(qiáng)了我們作為家庭成員的聯(lián)系的重要性。(reinforce)

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Physicalassistance:

Helpyourmotherwitheverydaytasksthatshemayfinddifficultduetoherinjuries.Thiscanincludepreparingmeals,assistingwithbathinganddressing,andhelpingwithmobilityexercisesorphysicaltherapy.提供身體上的幫助：幫助母親完成因傷勢(shì)而困難的日常任務(wù)。這可能包括準(zhǔn)備飯菜、協(xié)助洗澡和穿衣，并幫助進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)或物理治療。

Emotionalsupport:

Offeralisteningearandbetheretoprovideemotionalcomfortduringthisdifficulttime.Encouragehertoexpressherfeelingsandfrustrations,andvalidateheremotions.Remindherthatherrecoveryisajourneyandthatprogresstakestime.提供情感支持：傾聽(tīng)她的傾訴，并在這段困難時(shí)期提供情感上的安慰。鼓勵(lì)她表達(dá)自己的感受和挫折，并驗(yàn)證她的情緒。提醒她康復(fù)是一個(gè)過(guò)程，需要時(shí)間來(lái)取得進(jìn)展。

Attendmedicalappointmentsandcommunicatewithhealthcareprofessionals:

Accompanyyourmothertodoctor’sappointments,therapysessions,oranyothermedicalvisits.Takenotesduringappointments,askquestions,andstayinformedabouthertreatmentplan.Beanadvocateforherbycommunicatingherneedsandconcernstohealthcareprofessionals.陪同就醫(yī)并與醫(yī)療專(zhuān)業(yè)人員溝通：陪同母親去看醫(yī)生、治療或其他醫(yī)療事務(wù)。在就醫(yī)過(guò)程中做筆記、提問(wèn)，并了解她的治療計(jì)劃。通過(guò)向醫(yī)療專(zhuān)業(yè)人員傳達(dá)她的需求和關(guān)切。

Createasafeandcomfortableenvironment:

Makenecessaryadjustmentsinyourhometoensureitisaccessibleandsafeforyourmother’srecovery.Thismayinvolverearrangingfurniture,installinggrabbarsorhandrails,orremovingtrippinghazards.創(chuàng)造一個(gè)安全舒適的環(huán)境：根據(jù)需要在家中進(jìn)行必要的調(diào)整，以確保母親的康復(fù)環(huán)境無(wú)障礙且安全。這可能包括重新布置家具、安裝扶手或扶手，或者清除絆倒隱患。

Encourageahealthylifestyle:

Promoteanutritiousdietandencourageyourmothertoengageinlightexerciseorphysicalactivitiesasrecommendedbyherhealthcareprovider.Helphermaintainabalancedroutinethatincludesrest,relaxation,andpropersleep.鼓勵(lì)健康的生活方式：推廣營(yíng)養(yǎng)均衡的飲食，鼓勵(lì)母親按照醫(yī)療專(zhuān)業(yè)人員的建議進(jìn)行輕度運(yùn)動(dòng)或體育活動(dòng)。幫助她保持一個(gè)平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。

Seekadditionalsupportifneeded:

Reachouttosupportgroupsorcounselingservicesthatspecializeinhelpingindividualsrecoverfromtraumaticexperiencesoraccidents.Theycanprovidevaluableguidanceandemotionalsupportforbothyouandyourmother.如有需要，尋求額外的支持：尋找專(zhuān)門(mén)幫助個(gè)人從創(chuàng)傷經(jīng)歷或事故中康復(fù)的支持團(tuán)體或咨詢(xún)服務(wù)。他們可以為您和母親提供有價(jià)值的指導(dǎo)和情感支持。

III美文體驗(yàn)館

ItwasachillyFridaynight,andIhadjustreturnedfromclimbingoneoftheredrocksofSedona.MyfathertelephonedmeasIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethatmymotherhadbeeninaterriblecarcrashandhadbeentakentotheintensivecareunit(重癥監(jiān)護(hù)病房)ofanearbyhospital.

WhenIgottothehospital,myfatherledmedownawidehallwaywithmachinesallaround.Astrongsmellofmedicinebroughtasickfeelingtomyalreadyturningstomach.AsIturnedintomymother'sward,thecadaverous(形容枯槁的)conditionofherbodyshockedme.Herfacehadswollen,hereyeshadhugedarkbruise,andshehadtubesdownherthroatandinherarms.Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi"inacalmvoice,controllingmyurgetocryout.

Shekeptlookingatmeasshepoundedherhandagainstthebed,lookingpainful.Iturnedmyfaceawayfromher,tryingtohidethetearsthatwererollingdownmyface.ThatwaswhenitstruckmethatIreallymightlosemymother.

Fromthatnighton,mylifecompletelychanged.Uptothatpoint,I'dhadtheluxuryofjustbeingakid,havingtodealwithonlytheexaggeratedmelodramasofteenagelife.Asmymotherstruggledfirsttostayaliveandthentorelearntowalk,mysenseofprioritieschangedsharply.Mymotherneededme.Thetrialsandtroubleofmydailylifeatschool,whichhadseemedsoimportantbefore,nowappearedinsignificant.MymotherandIhadfaceddeathtogether,andlifetookonanewmeaningforbothofus.

Afteraweekoftreatmentinintensivecare,mymother'sconditionimprovedenoughtobemovedtoaregularhospitalward.Shewasfinallyoutofdangerbut，becauseherlegshadbeencrushed,therewasdoubtwhethershewouldbeabletowalkagain.Iwasjustgratefulthatshewasalive.Twomonthslater,asortofhospitalsuitewassetupinourfamilyroom,andshewasallowedtocomehome.

Paragraph1:Mymother'sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.______________

Paragraph2:Mymother'srelianceonmechangedourrelationshiptoo.___

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主題語(yǔ)境人與自我

文章出處蘇州市2024高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)期初調(diào)研考試

詞數(shù)正文英文詞數(shù)364，續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段首句18個(gè)單詞，續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句9個(gè)單詞。

What故事脈絡(luò)(Useonesentencetosummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph)Opening(Para.1)

Build-up(Para.2-5)

Climax(續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段)...butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.

Resolution&Ending(續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段)Ourrelationshipchangedforthebetter.

Why故事主題

How寫(xiě)作手法

人物分析“我”Mydoctor

AstrongsmellofmedicinebroughtasickfeelingShekeptlookingatmeasshepoundedherhandagainstthebed,lookingpainful.Iturnedmyfaceawayfromher,tryingtohidethetearsthatwererollingdownmyface.

Thecadaverousconditionofmymother’sbodyshockedme.

Mysenseofprioritieschangedsharply.

場(chǎng)景

語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格□平實(shí)質(zhì)樸

□含蓄雋永

□幽默風(fēng)趣

伏筆/照應(yīng)Para1:asortofhospitalsuitesetupinourfamilyroom這里的hospitalsuite說(shuō)明作者家里的擺設(shè)發(fā)生了什么變化？

Para2:續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的首句changedourrelationship說(shuō)明了作者和母親的關(guān)系會(huì)怎么樣？

謀篇布局續(xù)寫(xiě)段落Q1:HowdidthehospitalsuitefunctioninmyfamilyroomQ2:WhatweremyresponsibilitiesHowwasIaccustomedtothem

Q3:HowdoIfeelaboutmymother’sreliance？WhatkindofchangediditbringQ4:Whatwasmyreactionandfeeling

【素材積累】

Para1

MyfathertelephonedmeasIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethat...（as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）

returnfrom從某地返回

Para2

Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi"inacalmvoice,controllingmyurgetocryout.（v.ing作狀語(yǔ)）

urgev.催促；竭力主張n.強(qiáng)烈的欲望；沖動(dòng)

Para3

ThatwaswhenitstruckmethatIreallymightlosemymother.（when引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句；it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句）

turnawayfrom被迫離開(kāi)；停止參與某事

Para4

Fromthatnighton從那晚開(kāi)始

Uptothatpoint到那個(gè)時(shí)候?yàn)橹?/p>

Para5

...therewasdoubtwhethershewouldbeabletowalkagain.（whether引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句）

outofdanger脫離危險(xiǎn)

IV技能鍛造營(yíng)

Metaphor(暗喻）

1.定義

暗喻（metaphor）：也稱(chēng)隱喻，是依據(jù)比喻和被比喻兩種不同事物的相似或相關(guān)關(guān)系而構(gòu)成的修辭格。無(wú)需借助比喻詞，直接將甲事物當(dāng)作乙事物來(lái)描寫(xiě)。例如：

★However,thereisno“magicpill”or“delete"buttonthatwillhelpyou.

然而，能幫助你的“魔力丸”或刪除鍵并不存在。

2.作用

這里的magicpill和deletebutton均是暗喻用法，意指“快速改變壞習(xí)慣的良策"。此處的暗喻運(yùn)用巧妙，讓“quickandeffectiveway”的直白意義頓時(shí)形象生動(dòng)起來(lái)，給文字平添一份感染力。

3.用法

★L(fēng)ifeisashipontheoceanmeetingbothsunnydaysandstormydays.

生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既會(huì)遇到晴天，也會(huì)遇到暴風(fēng)雨天。

★L(fēng)aughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface.

笑是驅(qū)走人們臉上寒意的太陽(yáng)。

★Sheisgoingthrougharollercoasterofemotions.

她正經(jīng)歷著情感的過(guò)山車(chē)。

★Atonce,theEasternandWesternChang’anRoadsbecameroaringoceans.

霎時(shí)間，東西長(zhǎng)安街成了喧騰的大海。

由以上各例可知，暗喻沒(méi)有引導(dǎo)詞，這是明喻和暗喻在形式上的最大區(qū)別。換句話(huà)說(shuō)，有為明喻，沒(méi)有為暗喻。如：Hehasaheartofstone.Hehasaheartlikestone.很顯然，前句是暗喻，后句是明喻。暗喻時(shí)，比喻物和被比喻物之間的相似點(diǎn)較為含蓄，猛一看它們毫無(wú)關(guān)系，實(shí)際卻有著某種內(nèi)在聯(lián)系。

4.實(shí)踐

英譯漢

(1)abedofroses

(2)cleanhands

(3)curtain-lecture

(4)mushroomfame/millionaire

(5)Heisaregularoyster.

答案解析

I課文素材庫(kù)

微技能語(yǔ)料出處

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)1.Ittookthesurgeonthreehourstofinishmymother’slungsurgery.2.Beforeexercising，alwaysdoafewwarm-upstobeginwith.3.ButthenIalwaysfeeltootiredtocontinue!4.Don’tkeepthephoneintheroomsoyouwon’tpickitupbeforebed.5.OthertimesIjumpedonmyskateboardandrodearoundmyneighbourhood,orjusttookalongwalk.Page17Exercise1Page17Exercise3Page17Exercise3Page18Exercise2Page20Text1Para4Line4

心理描寫(xiě)Toreachthegoalofchange,apersonmustshowsomedisciplineandrepeatedlytakemanysmallsteps.Student2feelsdepressedaboutbeingalittleoverweight.Ifeelmoredynamicandstrongerthanever,inbothbodyandmind.Bestofall,inmyopinion,ishowIfeelaboutmyself.AsItookpartinthesummercampaboutpersonallifechoices,Istartedtoanalysemychoices,especiallywhatIdidtorelaxandhowitwasaffectingmywholelife.However,Irealizedthattosucceedinquitting,Ihadtoreplaceitwithsomethingelse.SoIthoughtaboutwhattotry.Rockclimbing,bowling,watchingcomedies,andplayingbasketballwerethethingsIthoughtofdoinginstead.1.Page15Para5Line3Page18Exercise2Page20Text1Para5Line2Page20Text1Para5Line5Page20Text2Para1Line1Page20Text2Para3Line3

健康生活方式描寫(xiě)Topreventharmfulhabitslikethesefromdominatingateenager’slifeisessential.Lifeiscomposedofmanyelements,suchasfamily,friends,study,work,entertainment,andsoon.Ifoneelementsdominatesyourlifeandtheothersareignored,youwilllosebalanceandnotfeelgood.Itisnecessarytobeincontrolofwhatyoueat.Ireallyneedtodecideonawaytoexercisemore.1.Page14Para1Line52.Page16Exercise33.Page16Exercise34.Page17Exercise35.Page17Exercise3

不良生活方式描寫(xiě)Therewardmakesusmuchmorelikelytocontinuethecycle,andthebadhabitofrelyingonunhealthysnacksisformed.Student1hastroublesleepingbecauseofusingthephonebeforegoingtosleep.IgotsoabsorbedthatIplayedthegamesdayandnight.Playingwasfun,butIfeltevenmorewornoutafterwards!Page15Para1Line2Page18Exercise2Page20Text2Para2Line3

改變和反思描寫(xiě)Inmanyways,ourlifestyleisthesumofchoiceswehavemade.Tofacilitateapositivechangeinourbadhabits,wemustfirstexamineourbadhabitcyclesandthentrytoadaptthem.Manyofustrytochangebadhabitsquickly,andifwearenotsuccessfulstraightaway,weoftenbecomepessimisticandgiveup.Slowlyfacilitatechangesinyourlifestylebyusingastep-by-stepprocess.Youdon’thavetochangeeverythingatonce.Makesmallchangeseachdayandyourlifestylewillbecomehealthier.Tochangebadhabitsisnevereasy.Tomakechoicesaboutmyselfiswithinmyownpower.ItwasabigstrugglenottojoinmyfriendsinplayingonlinegamesasI’mmadforthem.Ithasenhancedthequalityofmylife,improvingmyhealthandincreasingmyhappiness.1.Page14Para2Line22.Page15Para2Line13.Page15Para3Line14.Page16Exercise35.Page16Exercise36.Page16Exercise37.Page17Exercise18.Page20Text1Para5Line79.Page20Text2Para3Line110.Page20Text2Para4Line2

II語(yǔ)言訓(xùn)練場(chǎng)

漢譯英

1.接下來(lái)的幾個(gè)月里，充滿(mǎn)了物理治療、預(yù)約醫(yī)生和對(duì)母親的不斷照顧。（befilledwith）

Thenextfewmonthswerefilledwithphysicaltherapysessions,doctorappointments,andconstantcareformymother.

2.我成為了她的主要照顧者，幫助她處理生活中的方方面面。(v-ing做狀語(yǔ))

Itookontheroleofherprimarycaregiver,helpingherwitheveryaspectofdailylife.

3.有時(shí)候，這讓我感到精疲力竭和不知所措，但我知道我必須要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地支撐著她。（并列復(fù)合句）

Itwasexhaustingandoverwhelmingattimes,butIknewthatIhadtobestrongforher.

4.在此期間，我還必須學(xué)會(huì)如何平衡我的新責(zé)任與學(xué)業(yè)和社交生活。（特殊疑問(wèn)詞+動(dòng)詞不定時(shí)）

Duringthistime,Ialsohadtolearnhowtobalancemynewresponsibilitieswithmyschoolworkandsociallife.

5.照顧我的母親成為了我的首要任務(wù)。（priority）

Takingcareofmymotherbecamemytoppriority.

6.這種增加的溝通和共同決策加深了我們對(duì)彼此需求和關(guān)切的理解。(deepen)

Thisincreasedcommunicationandshareddecision-makingdeepenedourunderstandingofeachother’sneedsandconcerns.

7.看到母親經(jīng)歷康復(fù)的困難使我更加耐心和理解她的掙扎。(v.ing作主語(yǔ))

Seeingmymothergothroughthedifficultiesofrecoverymadememorepatientandunderstandingofherstruggles.

8.同樣，我的母親欣賞我的努力，并對(duì)我的關(guān)心和支持表示極大的感激。(Likewise)

Likewise,mymotherappreciatedmyeffortsandshowedimmensegratitudeformycareandsupport.

9.這次經(jīng)歷讓我們更加親密，加強(qiáng)了我們作為家庭成員的聯(lián)系的重要性。(reinforce)

Theexperiencebroughtusclosertogetherandreinforcedtheimportanceofourbondasfamilymembers.

Physicalassistance:

Helpyourmotherwitheverydaytasksthatshemayfinddifficultduetoherinjuries.Thiscanincludepreparingmeals,assistingwithbathinganddressing,andhelpingwithmobilityexercisesorphysicaltherapy.提供身體上的幫助：幫助母親完成因傷勢(shì)而困難的日常任務(wù)。這可能包括準(zhǔn)備飯菜、協(xié)助洗澡和穿衣，并幫助進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)或物理治療。

Emotionalsupport:

Offeralisteningearandbetheretoprovideemotionalcomfortduringthisdifficulttime.Encouragehertoexpressherfeelingsandfrustrations,andvalidateheremotions.Remindherthatherrecoveryisajourneyandthatprogresstakestime.提供情感支持：傾聽(tīng)她的傾訴，并在這段困難時(shí)期提供情感上的安慰。鼓勵(lì)她表達(dá)自己的感受和挫折，并驗(yàn)證她的情緒。提醒她康復(fù)是一個(gè)過(guò)程，需要時(shí)間來(lái)取得進(jìn)展。

Attendmedicalappointmentsandcommunicatewithhealthcareprofessionals:

Accompanyyourmothertodoctor’sappointments,therapysessions,oranyothermedicalvisits.Takenotesduringappointments,askquestions,andstayinformedabouthertreatmentplan.Beanadvocateforherbycommunicatingherneedsandconcernstohealthcareprofessionals.陪同就醫(yī)并與醫(yī)療專(zhuān)業(yè)人員溝通：陪同母親去看醫(yī)生、治療或其他醫(yī)療事務(wù)。在就醫(yī)過(guò)程中做筆記、提問(wèn)，并了解她的治療計(jì)劃。通過(guò)向醫(yī)療專(zhuān)業(yè)人員傳達(dá)她的需求和關(guān)切。

Createasafeandcomfortableenvironment:

Makenecessaryadjustmentsinyourhometoensureitisaccessibleandsafeforyourmother’srecovery.Thismayinvolverearrangingfurniture,installinggrabbarsorhandrails,orremovingtrippinghazards.創(chuàng)造一個(gè)安全舒適的環(huán)境：根據(jù)需要在家中進(jìn)行必要的調(diào)整，以確保母親的康復(fù)環(huán)境無(wú)障礙且安全。這可能包括重新布置家具、安裝扶手或扶手，或者清除絆倒隱患。

Encourageahealthylifestyle:

Promoteanutritiousdietandencourageyourmothertoengageinlightexerciseorphysicalactivitiesasrecommendedbyherhealthcareprovider.Helphermaintainabalancedroutinethatincludesrest,relaxation,andpropersleep.鼓勵(lì)健康的生活方式：推廣營(yíng)養(yǎng)均衡的飲食，鼓勵(lì)母親按照醫(yī)療專(zhuān)業(yè)人員的建議進(jìn)行輕度運(yùn)動(dòng)或體育活動(dòng)。幫助她保持一個(gè)平衡的生活方式，包括休息、放松和良好的睡眠。

Seekadditionalsupportifneeded:

Reachouttosupportgroupsorcounselingservicesthatspecializeinhelpingindividualsrecoverfromtraumaticexperiencesoraccidents.Theycanprovidevaluableguidanceandemotionalsupportforbothyouandyourmother.如有需要，尋求額外的支持：尋找專(zhuān)門(mén)幫助個(gè)人從創(chuàng)傷經(jīng)歷或事故中康復(fù)的支持團(tuán)體或咨詢(xún)服務(wù)。他們可以為您和母親提供有價(jià)值的指導(dǎo)和情感支持。

III美文體驗(yàn)館

ItwasachillyFridaynight，andIhadjustreturnedfromclimbingoneoftheredrocksofSedona.MyfathertelephonedmeasIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethatmymotherhadbeeninaterriblecarcrashandhadbeentakentotheintensivecareunit(重癥監(jiān)護(hù)病房)ofanearbyhospital.

WhenIgottothehospital,myfatherledmedownawidehallwaywithmachinesallaround.Astrongsmellofmedicinebroughtasickfeelingtomyalreadyturningstomach.AsIturnedintomymother'sward,thecadaverous(形容枯槁的)conditionofherbodyshockedme.Herfacehadswollen,hereyeshadhugedarkbruise,andshehadtubesdownherthroatandinherarms.Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi"inacalmvoice,controllingmyurgetocryout.

Shekeptlookingatmeasshepoundedherhandagainstthebed,lookingpainful.Iturnedmyfaceawayfromher,tryingtohidethetearsthatwererollingdownmyface.ThatwaswhenitstruckmethatIreallymightlosemymother.

Fromthatnighton,mylifecompletelychanged.Uptothatpoint,I'dhadtheluxuryofjustbeingakid,havingtodealwithonlytheexaggeratedmelodramasofteenagelife.Asmymotherstruggledfirsttostayaliveandthentorelearntowalk,mysenseofprioritieschangedsharply.Mymotherneededme.Thetrialsandtroubleofmydailylifeatschool,whichhadseemedsoimportantbefore,nowappearedinsignificant.MymotherandIhadfaceddeathtogether,andlifetookonanewmeaningforbothofus.

Afteraweekoftreatmentinintensivecare，mymother'sconditionimprovedenoughtobemovedtoaregularhospitalward.Shewasfinallyoutofdangerbut，becauseherlegshadbeencrushed,therewasdoubtwhethershewouldbeabletowalkagain.Iwasjustgratefulthatshewasalive.Twomonthslater,asortofhospitalsuitewassetupinourfamilyroom,andshewasallowedtocomehome.

第一段：Mymother'sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.

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第二段：Mymother'srelianceonmechangedourrelationshiptoo.

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文章出處蘇州市2024高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)期初調(diào)研考試

詞數(shù)正文英文詞數(shù)364，續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段首句18個(gè)單詞，續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句9個(gè)單詞。

What故事脈絡(luò)(Useonesentencetosummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph)Opening(Para.1)Mymotherhadbeenintheintensivecareunitofnearbyhospitalduetoacarcrash.

Build-up(Para.2-5)Whathappenedinthehospital

Climax(續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段)...butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.

Resolution&Ending(續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段)Ourrelationshipchangedforthebetter.

Why故事主題Afterfacingdeathtogether,Iandmymotherunderstandanewmeaningofourlife.

How寫(xiě)作手法第一人稱(chēng)、記敘、描寫(xiě)

人物分析“我”Mydoctor

AstrongsmellofmedicinebroughtasickfeelingMystomachturned...Shekeptlookingatmeasshepoundedherhandagainstthebed,lookingpainful.Iturnedmyfaceawayfromher,tryingtohidethetearsthatwererollingdownmyface.ThatwaswhenitstruckmethatIreallymightlosemymother.

Thecadaverousconditionofmymother’sbodyshockedme.Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi"inacalmvoice,controllingmyurgetocryout.

Mysenseofprioritieschangedsharply.Mymotherneededme.

場(chǎng)景inthehospital

語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格平實(shí)質(zhì)樸

伏筆Para1:asortofhospitalsuitesetupinourfamilyroom這里的hospitalsuite說(shuō)明作者家里的擺設(shè)發(fā)生了什么變化？更適合患者康復(fù)治療，但是會(huì)給家人帶來(lái)不便。

Para2:續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的首句changedourrelationship說(shuō)明了作者和母親的關(guān)系會(huì)怎么樣？和以前相比，家人的關(guān)系更親近。同時(shí)，作者對(duì)生活和親情重要性的新認(rèn)識(shí)和理解。

謀篇布局續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段Q1:HowdidthehospitalsuitefunctioninmyfamilyroomQ2:WhatweremyresponsibilitiesHowwasIaccustomedtothem

問(wèn)題素材功能

Q1Toreachthegoalofchange,apersonmustshowsomediscipline/patienceandrepeatedlytakemanysmallsteps.心理描寫(xiě)表現(xiàn)作者內(nèi)心活動(dòng)動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)

However,Irealizedthattosucceedinadjusting,Ihadtoreplaceitwithsomethingelse.SoIthoughtaboutwhattotry.心理描寫(xiě)作者的心理活動(dòng)However情節(jié)發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折

Q2Preparingmeals,assistingwithbathinganddressing,andhelpingwithmobilityexercisesorphysicaltherapywerethethingsIthoughtofdoinginstead.具體動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)推進(jìn)情節(jié)發(fā)展

Itisnecessarytobeincontrolofwhatmymothereat.It作形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式作真正主語(yǔ)

謀篇布局續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段Q3:HowdoIfeelaboutmymother’sreliance？WhatkindofchangediditbringQ4:Whatwasmyreactionandfeeling

問(wèn)題素材功能

Q3Itwasadifficultadjustment,butIknewthatmymotherneededmemorethanever.ThatexperiencechangedmeinwaysIcouldhaveneverimagined.心理描寫(xiě)作者的心理活動(dòng)

Youdon’thavetochangeeverythingatonce.Slowlyfacilitatechangesinmylifestylebyusingastep-by-stepprocess.

心理描寫(xiě)作者的心理活動(dòng)

Q4Ihadlearnedhowtoassisthewithoutherhavingtoask,suchasgettingdressed,preparingmeals,andtakingmedication.動(dòng)作鏈推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展，結(jié)合表達(dá)情緒的形容詞反應(yīng)人物情感

Ittaughtmetheimportanceofresilience,gratitude,andthepowerofloveandsupport.呼應(yīng)主旨

【素材積累】

Para1

MyfathertelephonedmeasIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethat...

（as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）

2.returnfrom從某地返回

Para2

Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi”inacalmvoice,controllingmyurg