【英語】九年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語試卷英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編題分類匯編含解析一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1．（·黑龍江中考模擬）Writing現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來越多，有的孩子很小的時(shí)候就戴上了眼鏡。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全國愛眼日”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫一篇題目為“It’simportanttoprotectoureyes”的英文稿。內(nèi)容：（1）眼睛的重要性；（2）保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長時(shí)間讀書看報(bào)；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。要求：（1）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。2）要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。It’simportanttoprotectoureyes___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’simportanttoprotectoureyesTheeyesarethewindowofourmind.Weuseoureyestoseeeverythingaroundus.Withouteyes,nothingisleftbesideyoubutdarkness.Howtoprotectoureyes?It’snotrighttokeepyoureyesworkingforalongtime.You’dbetternotreadinstrongorpoorlight.Don’treadinbedoronamovingbus.Remembertokeepyourbooksawayfromyoureyesforaboutafootanddoeyeexerciseseveryday.What’smore,abalanceddietisnecessary.Followmyadviceandformagoodhabit.It’stimetosaygoodbyetothickglasses.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求可知，本文說的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱是第一和第二人稱英語作文一般是三段式第一段：開篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫作目的——保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，以及提建議第二段：文章主體部分——保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長時(shí)間讀書看報(bào)；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，并提出號(hào)召——現(xiàn)在開始養(yǎng)成保護(hù)眼睛的好習(xí)慣。2．（·江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)以下是你校?？痀OUTH中YOURVOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,I’mDavid,theeditorofYOUTH.WeallknowtheexchangestudentsaregoingbacktotheUSsoon.WewouldliketogivethemsometraditionalChinesethingsasgifts,suchasChinesepaintings,silk,tea…TodayIwouldliketocollectsomeideas.Inyourarticle,youshould:recommendtwotraditionalChinesethingsshowyourreasonswhyyourecommendthemLookingforwardtohearingfromyou.David注意事項(xiàng)：1.對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearSir/Madam,Iamgladtosharemyopinionwithyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,Iamgladtosharemyopinionwithyou.IwouldliketorecommendChinesepaintingsasagiftbecauseChinesepaintingshavealonghistory.What’smore,theyarequitedifferentfromtheonesintheUS.ForeignfriendscanlearnmoreaboutChineseartfromthem.ThesecondgiftIwanttorecommendissilkscarves.SilkisasymbolofourgreatcultureandpopularamongChinesepeople.Itfeelsverysoftandcomfortable.Whynotbuythemsomesilkscarves?Ibelievetheexchangestudentswilllikethetwogiftsandalwaysrememberthemomentswithus.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。第一句話點(diǎn)題，隨后引出文章的兩個(gè)主題，一·recommendtwotraditionalChinesethings。例如：IwouldliketorecommendChinesepaintingsasagiftbecauseChinesepaintingshavealonghistory.以及ThesecondgiftIwanttorecommendissilkscarves.二·showyourreasonswhyyourecommendthem。理由一：becauseChinesepaintingshavealonghistory.What’smore,theyarequitedifferentfromtheonesintheUS.理由二：SilkisasymbolofourgreatcultureandpopularamongChinesepeople.Itfeelsverysoftandcomfortable.最后用Ibelievetheexchangestudentswilllikethetwogiftsandalwaysrememberthemomentswithus總結(jié)全篇。文章干凈利落，層次分明。3．（·北京市十一學(xué)校中考模擬）假如你是光明中學(xué)的李陽，你看到了動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織AnimalGroup的招聘信息，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)主要提示，給AnimalGroup的主席Mr.Mario寫一封郵件，并表達(dá)自己想當(dāng)志愿者的意愿。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.表達(dá)自己想當(dāng)志愿者的心愿。2.向AnimalGroup介紹自己。（1）我是李陽，15歲。（2）喜歡喂養(yǎng)小動(dòng)物，運(yùn)動(dòng)，讀書。（3）樂于助人，有愛心。3．至少說出兩點(diǎn)你想要參加動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織的原因。DearMr.Mario,Howareyoudoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply!YoursSincerely,LiYang【答案】IreallyhopeIcanbeavolunteerofAnimalGroup.I'mLiYang.I'm15yearsold.Ilikefeedingsmallanimals,sports,reading.Iamaverylovingboy.Ioftenhelpothers.Ilikesmallanimalsandwanttohelpthem.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用正確的語句表達(dá)了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。4．（·天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)86.某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為“Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動(dòng)。（1）父母規(guī)矩太多，不允許晚上出去，過于強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績，不理解自己。（2）你應(yīng)該理解父母，他們是愛孩子的，希望孩子前程似錦。（3）你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法：努力學(xué)習(xí)，聽父母話。（4）……（至少一條）。要求：（1）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名。（3）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（4）短文的開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowme...【答案】HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhard,listentothem,talktothemasfriends,tellthemmytroubles,andhelpthemdomorehousework.【解析】【詳解】某英文報(bào)社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為“Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動(dòng)。注意文中用第一人稱書寫；2.時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.體裁為說明文，可稍加評(píng)論；4.合理想象，發(fā)表你對(duì)壓力的看法；5.語句通順。意思連貫；【點(diǎn)睛】本文語句通順，段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型：However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,這里給文章增色不少。5．（·天津中考模擬）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“TheStoryofLingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個(gè)錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個(gè)消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對(duì)玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺得……參考詞匯：社區(qū)community身份證IDcard保安guard微信群Wechatgroup失主owner要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheStoryofLinglingLastweek_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheStoryofLinglingLastFriday,Linglingwentoutforawalkwithhermotheraftersupper.Shesawawalletatthedoorofthecommunity.LinglingpickedupherwalletandfoundthattherewereIDcardsandsomemoneyinit.Linglingandhermotherhandedthewallettothesecurityguard,whosentthenewstothemicrophonegroupinthecommunity.Whentheownersawthenews,hecametofetchherwalletandthankedLinglingandhermother..IthinkLiHuadidagooddeed.Weshouldlearnfromher.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“TheStoryofLingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要為第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6．（·甘肅中考模擬）發(fā)明創(chuàng)造改變了世界。作為一名中學(xué)生．假如你夢(mèng)想當(dāng)一名發(fā)明家，應(yīng)該怎樣做才能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的漫畫提示，以“HowtoBecomeanInventor”為題，寫一篇短文。要求：1.80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（文章標(biāo)題和開頭已給出不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。HowtoBecomeanInventor?Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,inventionshaveplayedanimportantroleinthesocietyandevenchangedourworld.Asastudentinmiddleschool,IwanttobeaninventorlikeEdison.ButhowcanIletmydreamcometrue?Inmyopinion,【答案】HowtoBecomeanInventor?Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,inventionshaveplayedanimportantroleinthesocietyandevenchangedourworld.Asastudentinmiddleschool,IwanttobeaninventorlikeEdison.ButhowcanIletmydreamcometrue?Inmyopinion,First,studyinghardisthebasicmethod.Itisclearthatonlywhenwestudyhardtoacquiretheknowledgeaboutthescienceandtechnologycanwefulfilltheneedofinnovation.Second,interestingisthebestteacher.HardlycanweimagineachildwithoutpassionofexploringwillgetprogressininnovationThird,weneedthespiritofcreativitywhichprovidesusdifferentthoughtstosolvetheproblem.What'smoreimportant,Nevergiveup.Keepourbelief.That'sthekeytosuccessforallscientists,suchasMadameCurieandDarwin.WhatIhavelistaboveismyanswertohowtobecomeaninventor,andthatiswhatI'llpersistdoinginthefuturewithmywholepassion.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“HowtoBecomeanInventor”為題，寫一篇短文?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Iwanttobe……，studyinghardis……，weneed……，That's……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要成為一個(gè)發(fā)明家；接下來介紹為了成為一個(gè)發(fā)明家，應(yīng)該如何做；最后指出為了成為一個(gè)發(fā)明家，我要堅(jiān)持做下去。此處playanimportantrolein,cometrue,giveup,suchas等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．（·四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Haveyougotanythingthatisbrandedonyourmemory,makingyoufeelhappy,satisfied,proudorjustfeelsad,terrible,andregretful?Maybeyoudidit,experiencedit,readit,sawitoronlyheardofit.Pleasewriteacompositionwiththetitle“The________thingthatIhaveever________”toshareyourstory.Thefollowinginformationshouldbeincluded:1.Howdidyougetthestory?2.Whenandwheredidithappen?3.Whathappenedexactly?4.Whyisitbrandedonyourmemory?Pleaselistatleasttworeasons.【答案】請(qǐng)參考范文：ThehappythingthatIhaveeverexperiencedThisisastoryofmyownexperience,fromthisthing,Ireallyfeltmyfather'sloveforme,warmanddeeplove.Iwasborninapoorfamily,Myparentsliveasimplelife.WhenIwas8yearsold,IwasinGrade3ofprimaryschool.Ilikedwatchingothersplaythepiano.Infact,Ilikedthebeautifulpictureofplayingthepiano.Suddenlyoneday,myfathertookmetoaniceplace.Later,Ilearnedthatitwasapianotrainingcenter,learningpianowasveryexpensive,butmyfatherhelpedmefindapianoteacher.SoIlearnedthepianofrommyteacherthere.Threemonthslater,Iplayedthepianotomyfather,butIdidnotplaywell.TheteachertoldmyfatherthatmaybeIhadnogiftforit.Headvisedmyfathertogiveup.ButmyfathersaidthatifIwouldliketoplaythepiano,hedidn'tgiveup.Iwasmovedbymyfather'sencourgement.【解析】【詳解】本文是關(guān)于自己經(jīng)歷或看到的故事為話題的材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:1.書寫規(guī)范；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫；3.寫完后要認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫要點(diǎn),有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型：Thisisastoryofmyownexperience,fromthisthing,Ireallyfeltmyfather'sloveforme,warmanddeeplove.這是一個(gè)關(guān)于我自己經(jīng)歷的故事，從這件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸對(duì)我的愛，溫暖而深沉的愛。Suddenlyoneday,myfathersaidtotakemetoaniceplace.突然有一天，爸爸說帶我去一個(gè)好地方。ButmyfathersaidaslongasIamhappyontheline,itdoesn'tmatter.但是我爸爸說只要我高興就行，沒關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】注意寫作過程中，將要點(diǎn)展開并表達(dá)清楚，注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達(dá)。8．（·靖江市靖城中學(xué)中考模擬）九年寒窗苦，六月備考忙。對(duì)于即將到來的中考，同學(xué)們既有期盼也有壓力。為了讓同學(xué)們學(xué)得開心，學(xué)有信心，我校英文報(bào)刊將開展“HowtoFaceSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExamination”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，用英語簡要描述并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學(xué)生壓力較大。更注重學(xué)生的語言能力，學(xué)生難得高分，因此有些學(xué)生可能灰心。同學(xué)建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法。應(yīng)該認(rèn)真計(jì)劃好時(shí)間，以便在學(xué)業(yè)和愛好間取得平衡。你的建議……（1-2點(diǎn)，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意事項(xiàng)：1.征文須包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)。要求語句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtoFaceSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExaminationTheSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExaminationiscoming.Areyoureadyforit?Althoughwehavedreams,wemayfeelworriedfromtimetotime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoFaceSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExaminationTheSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExaminationiscoming.Areyoureadyforit?Althoughwehavedreams,wemayfeelworriedfromtimetotime.Recently,becauseoftheheavyschoolwork,manystudentsarestressed.Moreover,moreattentionispaidtostudents’languageability,soitisdifficultforstudentstogethighmarks.Asaresult,somestudentsarelikelytoloseheart.Astotheproblems,myclassmatesofferthefollowingsuggestions.First,weshouldnotonlyworkhardbutalsoimproveourlearningmethods.Second,weshouldplanourtimecarefullysothatwecanachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Inmyopinion,weshoulddevelopahealthybodybyeatinghealthilyandexercisingmore.Furthermore,we’dbettersharetheworrieswithourteachersandfriends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“HowtoFaceSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExamination”為題，用英語簡要描述如何面對(duì)中考，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：manystudentsare…...，soitisdifficultforstudentsto……，weshould……，we’dbetter……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們面對(duì)中考會(huì)感到擔(dān)心，接下來介紹學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學(xué)們給出的建議，最后表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)。此處fromtimetotime,payattentionto,loseheart,sothat,inone’sopinion,share..with…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（·北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely,trouble,offer,proud，society提示問題:Whatdoyouthinkofshowingkindnesstoothers?Howdoyouhelpthemkindlyinyourdailylife?Whatdoyoudreamaboutbeingkindtothem?It'sourdutytoshowkindnesstoothersaroundus._________________________________________________【答案】It’sourdutytoshowkindnesstoothersaroundus.Ithinkeveryoneshouldbekindtoeachother.Whensomeoneisintrouble,we’llgiveahandpolitely.Inourcommunity,Itrymybesttohelptheneighborsandtakecareoftheoldpeopleatweekendsasavolunteer.Atschool,Igetonwellwithmyclassmatesandhelpthemwiththeirlessons.Ialsosendmybooksandclothestothechildrenwholiveinpoorareas.I’mveryproudIhavemademanyfriendsbyhelpingothersinneed.Ibelieveoursocietywillbecomebetterandbetterifeveryoneshowskindnesstoeachother.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bekindto,eachother,beintrouble,giveahand,tryone’sbesttodo,takecareof,getonwellwith,helpsbwith等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（·山東中考模擬）“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請(qǐng)給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧！要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。100詞左右。【答案】I'mgoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Asyoursenior,Ihavesomesuggestionstotheyoung.Asoldsayinggoes,"allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy."Tobeginwith,youshouldarrangebothyourstudyandlifeproperly.Moreover,youshouldgetalongwellwithothers.Tohavemorefriends,notenemies.Lastbutnotleast,youcouldbeactiveinschoolteamwork.Abilityisasimportantasyourstudy,youcanalsoenjoyyourcolorfulschoollifeaswellIhopethesesuggestionscouldmakeyourjuniorschool-lifemorewonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如begoingto，graduatefrom，tobeginwith，both…and，getalongwellwithothers，beactivein，asimportantas，aswell等。而Tobeginwith,/Moreover,/Lastbutnotleast,等短語的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（·內(nèi)蒙古根河市阿龍山中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)，你們班開張了一次主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。常識(shí)歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少一點(diǎn)）偶像梅西，有足球天賦夢(mèng)想考生自擬（至少一點(diǎn)）注意：1。詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2。短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西MessiDearclassmates,I’mveryexcitedtohearthatChinawillbuild20,000football-themedschoolsby2020.____________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourattention.【答案】Dearclassmates,I’mveryexcitedtohearthatChinawillbuild20,000football-themedschoolsby2020.Footballhasaverylonghistory.Itislikedbypeopleallovertheworld.TheWorldCuptakesplaceeveryfouryears.Playingfootballhaslotsofadvantages.First,bothboysandgirlscantakepartinit.Second,ithelpsdevelopteamspirit.What’smore,playingfootballisgoodforourhealth.I’mafootballfan.Messiismyhero.Hehasagiftforplayingfootball.MydreamistobecomeafamousfootballplayerlikeMessi.IhopeChinawillholdtheWorldCupsomeday.Thankyouforyourattention.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’mveryexcitedtohearthat……；Itislikedby……；ithelps……，I’m……，Mydreamis……，Ihope…....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了關(guān)于足球的常識(shí)，接下來介紹踢足球的好處以及我的偶像，最后介紹我的夢(mèng)想。此處haveaverylonghistory,allovertheworld,takeplace,takepartin,what’smore,begoodfor,haveagiftfor等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。12．（·重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力，這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正開辟專欄討論中學(xué)生如何減壓。假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面，用英語寫出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。1.與他人交流；2.參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；3.參加娛樂活動(dòng)；4.其它減壓方式。參考詞匯：stressedadj.有壓力的注意：1.詞數(shù)80-120左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名及學(xué)校名；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Deareditor,Therearemanywaysforushighschoolstudentstorelaxourselves.Yours,LiHua【答案】Deareditor,Therearemanywaysforushighschoolstudentstorelaxourselves.Asforme.whenIfeelstressed,Iusuallycommunicatewithmyfriends,parentsorteachers.SometimesIwilldosportswithmyclassmates,suchasridingbikes,goingswimmingandsoon.Igotothemoviesorlistentolightmusicinmysparetime,too.What'smore,goingonatripinholidayisanotherwaytomakemerelaxed.Ibelievethemorerelaxedweare,thehappierwelive.Wewillbehealthyandlearnbetter.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。13．（·江蘇中考模擬）假如你叫Sandy，你收到了你的英文筆友Lucy的來信。請(qǐng)你用英文給她寫一封回信，針對(duì)她的問題，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給出可行的建議。DearSandy,Iamverygladtoentermyschool.Ienjoythelifehereexceptfortheschoollunch.Ipreferhamburgers,icecreamsandpotatochips,butwearenotallowedtoorderthemaccordingtotheschoolrules.IusuallyhavelittleforlunchandIoftenfeeltiredandcan'tfollowtheteachersintheafternoonclasses.WhatshouldIdo?Doyouhaveanygoodideas?Pleasewritetomeassoonaspossible.Yourssincerely,Lucy注意事項(xiàng):1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearLucy,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter.Yours,Sandy【答案】DearLucy,Iamgladtoreceiveyourletter.IcanunderstandyourfeelingandI'mworriedaboutyourhealthandyourstudy.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,hamburgers,icecreamsandpotatochipsarebadforyourhealth,soyouhadbettergiveupthethoughtthatyouwanttoeatthematschool.Second,trytoeatasmuchschoollunchaspossibleinordertohaveenoughenergy.Tryyourbestandeverythingwillbeallrightsoon.Finally,ifthereisreallysomethingwrongwiththeschoollunch,youcantalktoyourteachersandhelpimproveit.It'snotonlyforyourself,butalsoforthewholeschool.Goodluck.Yours,Sandy【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這封信使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如；beworriedabout；bebadfoas···aspossible;Tryone’sbest；inorderto；notonly···butalso···等；First；Second,Finally,等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。14．（·江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據(jù)報(bào)道114個(gè)美國孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季節(jié)我們應(yīng)該如何保持健康呢？易患病人群老人和孩子原因1.免疫系統(tǒng)弱；2.流感知識(shí)缺乏：流感病毒引起流感；口、鼻、手傳播；公共場(chǎng)所人與人近距離傳播；3.……（至少1點(diǎn)）預(yù)防措施1.多鍛煉；2.注意保暖；3.……（至少1點(diǎn)）要求:1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。參考詞匯：weakerimmunesystems（較弱的免疫系統(tǒng)）；influenzavirus（流感病毒）Theflu（流感）seasonrunsfromOctobertoMarcheveryyear.Thisyearithasbeenespeciallybad.Itisreportedthat114childrenintheUSdiedinFebruary.____________________________________________________________________【答案】Theflu（流感）seasonrunsfromOctobertoMarcheveryyear.Thisyearithasbeenespeciallybad.Itisreportedthat114childrenintheUSdiedinFebruary.Thefluhitschildrenandelderlypeoplethehardest.Thisisbecausetheyhaveweakerimmunesystem.Itiseasyforthemtogettheflu.Infact,mostpeopledon’tknowmuchabouttheflu.Theinfluenzaviruscausestheflu.Theviruscangetonyourhands.Ifyoutouchyournoseormouth,youcangettheflu.Becausesomepatientspaynoattentiontotheflu,itstartsverysuddenlyandspreadsfrompersontopersoncloselyinpublic.Howdowekeepthefluaway?Weshouldgetlotsofrestandexercise.Putonenoughclothestokeepwarm.Takeashowereverydayandwashhandsoften.Rememberifanyonearoundushastheflu,takeitseriouslyandmakesuretheygotothehospitalassoonaspossible.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如fromto，everyyear，gettheflu，infact，geton，paynoattentionto，spreadfrom，persontoperson，inpublic，keepaway，lotsof，puton，takeashower，makesure，gotothehospital，assoonaspossible等。而Itisreportedthat114childrenintheUSdiedinFebruary./Ifyoutouchyournoseormouth,youcangettheflu./Becausesomepatientspaynoattentiontotheflu,itstartsverysuddenlyandspreadsfrompersontopersoncloselyinpublic.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。15．（·湖南省岳陽開發(fā)區(qū)長嶺中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)?，F(xiàn)在提倡全民閱讀，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以”reading”為題的英語征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文，向該網(wǎng)站投稿。提示：1.讀書有哪些好處？2.中學(xué)生可以讀哪些書？3.你的讀書計(jì)劃是什么？要求：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Reading______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Readingplaysanimportantroleinourlife.It’sagoodwaytorelax.Atthesametime,itcanalsohelpusopenourminds.Soasmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldreadmore.Inmyopinion,textbooks,newspapersandmagazinesareallgoodreadingmaterials.Asforme,Iplantoreadonebookeverymonth.WheneverIhavefreetime,I’llread.Asthesayinggoes,readingmakesafullman.Let’sstartreadingnow.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要按照要求以“閱讀”為主題寫作，要寫出讀書的好處、中學(xué)生可以讀的書、你的讀書計(jì)劃。按照要求逐條描述即可，但要注意增添相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)使得文章連貫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：總起要對(duì)reading做一個(gè)概括，用到了“playsanimportantrole”（扮演重要的角色）這一搭配，關(guān)于讀書的好處提到了：openourminds（開闊思維），relax（放松）。關(guān)于可以讀的書，介紹了幾種文本（textbooks,newspapersandmagazine），關(guān)于介紹讀書計(jì)劃，描述了自己讀書的頻率，最后，有引用諺語，也是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。16．（·南通市通州區(qū)金北學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)陽光中學(xué)為了豐富學(xué)生的課余生活，每學(xué)期都會(huì)舉辦各種各樣的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，為校報(bào)寫一篇有關(guān)的報(bào)道。活動(dòng)內(nèi)容籃球比賽強(qiáng)身健體,團(tuán)隊(duì)精神航模制作了解科學(xué),培養(yǎng)興趣英語演講練習(xí)口語,提高能力…………你的觀點(diǎn)……（請(qǐng)自擬至少兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）注意：1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn),省略號(hào)部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯；2.詞數(shù)90左右,開頭已寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolourful,thereareallkindsofactivitiesforustochoosefromeveryterm.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertomakeourschoollifemorecolourful,thereareallkindsofactivitiesforustochoosefromeveryterm.Ifyouareasportsfan,youcanjoininthebasketballgames.Itcannotonlymakeyoustrongandhealthybutalsohelpyoulearnteamwork.Forthose