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A

Thismorningmyparentstookmysisterandmetothezoo.Atthenoonwehada

picniconthegrass.Ieattoomuch,soIcouldn'tfinishmysandwich.AsIdidn*tknow

whattodowithit,Iaskedmysisterforadvices.Shepointedatthenotice,thatsaid,

*'Nolitter.**Andsheaskedmethrowthesandwichintothelitter-basket.JustthenI

sawanelephantcomingslowtowardsus.Suddenlyanideacameintohermind.I

couldfeedtheelephantbymysandwichandIdidsointheend.Seenthis,mysister

smiledandsaid,MVVhatcleveryouare!”

B

Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewith

hiswork.VVithlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtill

night.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.nHehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworried

abouthim.**Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,Ipaidvisitto

Mr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalm

myselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeof

thepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswe

missedhim.

C

Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Somepeople

likedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdon*tlikeit,becauseonlineshoppingislessreliable

thanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerchantofferconsumerstofalse

informationonline.Secondly,consumerscan*tfeeltheitemsthatisusuallypresented

bymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromwhich

consumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsatourown

expense.Thirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.Inword,online

shoppingisn'treliableatall.

D

MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglast

month.ltisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelby

publictransport.

Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefree

high-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.Ialso

sharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwith

reasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.

ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingto

Beijing.

E

TodaywehasthehonorofinviteProfessorSmithtogiveusanEnglishlesson.Allof

usweredeeplyimpressingbythisunforgettableEnglishlesson.Theprofessorbeganthe

classinanamusingEnglishstory,whichattractedourattentionsatonce.Hespokeslowly

andclearlysothatwecouldfollowhimwell.Greatinspired,mostofustookanactive

partinclassroomactivities.Afterclass,manystudentsbeinginterviewedspokehighlyof

him.Theysaidneverbeforehavetheyexperiencedsuchinterestingaclass.Fromhis

lesson,vvecametoconclusionthatitisnotsodifficulttolearnEnglishwhetherwefinda

goodway.

LiHua

H

Lastweekend,IhelpedmygrandparentstheirtriptoDalian.OnSaturdaymorning,

togetherwithmygrandparents,IsearchtheInternetforthetrainschedule,theweatherin

Dalian,andsomehotelinformations.Intheafternoon,wewenttothetrainstationand

managedtobuytwoticketsformygrandparentsalthoughtherehadalongqueue.After

thedinner,Ipackedthethingsthesuitcase,whatmygrandparentswouldneed,suchas

clothes,glasses,anumbrella,andamap.Thenextmorning,Iwenttothestationtoshow

themoff.Wavinggoodbyetothemontheplatform,Ifelthappilyforthemandwished

themsafejourney.

答案

A

1.第二句刪掉第一個the

2.第三句eat改為ate

3.第四句advices改為advice

4.第五句that改為which

5.第六句由row前加to

6.第七句slow改為slowly

7.第八句her改為my

8.第九句by改為with/on

9.第十句Seen改為Seeing

10.第十句What改為How

B

11.第二句with改為on

12.第三句刪掉so

13.第四句have改為has

14.第五句healthy改為health

15.第六句which改為what

16.第七句paid后加a

17.笫八句her改為his

18.第十句step改為stepped

19.第~1—句picture改為pictures

20.第十二句asmanyas中的many改為much

C

21.increasing改為increasingly

22.1iked改為like

23.And改為But

24.mcrchant改為merchants

25.去掉to

26.is改為are

27.delivering改為delivered

28.which改為what

29.our改為their

30.word前加a

D

31.visit改為visited

32.but改為so/and

33.gotoanywhere…刪掉to

34.comfortably改為comfortable

35.1likedbestwere中的were改為was

36.sharedfor中的for改為with

37.taking改為taken

38.dish改為dishes

39.such后力口a

4O.friendofme中的me改為mine

E

4Linvite改為inviting

42.impressing改為impressed

43.class后的in改為with

44.attentions改為attention

45.Great改為Greatly

46.being去掉

47.before后的have改為had

48.such改為so

49.conclusion前加a

5O.whether改為if

F

51.are改為is

52.to后going改為go

53.or改為and或者but

54.eighteen改為eighteenth

55.ai改為for

56.an改為a

57.drink前加to

58.know后how改為that或者when

59.it改為they

60.去掉home前的to

G

61.pleasing改為pleased

62.good前加a

63.began改為begins

64刪掉to

65.conveniently改為con