PAGE1專題07書(shū)面表達(dá)1．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西贛州·期中）轉(zhuǎn)眼間，你已經(jīng)是一名九年級(jí)的學(xué)生了，你還記得剛升入初中時(shí)的樣子嗎？這幾年在你身上發(fā)生了哪些變化？你是怎樣改變的？請(qǐng)以“HowIhavechanged”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)小短文描述你發(fā)生的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要求完成這篇短文。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.Appearance(外貌)；2.Personality(性格)；

3.Hobby；4.Englishlearning。要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，用上usedto結(jié)構(gòu)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名；3.詞數(shù)80—120。HowIhavechanged________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowIHaveChangedAsaninth-gradestudent,lookingbackatmypastyearsinjuniorhighschool,IrealizethatIhavechangedalot.Intermsofappearance,Iusedtobeshortandthin,butnowIamtallerandstronger.Myfacehasalsochanged,andIhavegrownsomefacialhair.Asforthepersonality,Iusedtobeshyandquiet,butnowIammoreoutgoingandconfident.IamnotafraidtospeakinfrontofothersandIenjoymakingfriends.Myhobbieshavealsochanged.Iusedtoloveplayingvideogames,butnowIammoreinterestedinsports,suchasbasketballandfootball.Ialsoenjoyreadingbooksandlearningnewthings.IntermsofEnglishlearning,IusedtofinditdifficultandIdidn’tlikeitverymuch.ButnowIrealizetheimportanceofEnglishandIhavebeenworkinghardtoimprovemyEnglishskills.IreadEnglishbooks,watchEnglishmovies,andpracticespeakingEnglishwithmyclassmates.ThesechangeshavemademeabetterpersonandIamgratefulforthem.IbelievethatIwillcontinuetogrowandchangeinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，按題目要求填入短文標(biāo)題“HowIHaveChanged”。第二步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容描述這幾年在外貌，性格，愛(ài)好，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面發(fā)生的改變。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①intermsof在……方面②suchas例如③continuetodo繼續(xù)去做某事[高分句型]①Asaninth-gradestudent,lookingbackatmypastyearsinjuniorhighschool,IrealizethatIhavechangedalot.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）②IbelievethatIwillcontinuetogrowandchangeinthefuture.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）2．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西九江·期中）假如你是李軍，你英語(yǔ)學(xué)得很好。請(qǐng)以“MywaysoflearningEnglish”為題,并根據(jù)要點(diǎn)與要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，與大家分享你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法，用于下周的學(xué)校英語(yǔ)演講比賽。1.要點(diǎn):1）你是如何提高聽(tīng)力水平的;2）你是如何提高口語(yǔ)水平的;3）你是如何提高語(yǔ)法水平的;4）你是如何提高寫(xiě)作水平的。2.要求:1）文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名;2）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MywaysoflearningEnglishHello,everyone.It’smygreatpleasuretosharemywaysoflearningEnglishwithyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopethesewayscanhelpyoutolearnEnglishwell,too.【答案】例文：MywaysoflearningEnglishHello,everyone.It’smygreatpleasuretosharemywaysoflearningEnglishwithyou.First,Ireadaftertapestogetmypronunciationrighteveryday.IusuallywatchEnglishvideosafterclass.Second,ItrytopracticespeakingEnglishinandoutofclass.Everyweekend,IgototheEnglishCornertocommunicatewithothersinEnglish.Third,Ilistentotheteacherandtakenotescarefullyinclass.IalsoreadEnglishstorybooksinmyfreetime.Last,IhavekeptonwritingEnglishdiariesforthreeyears.IhopethesewayscanhelpyoutolearnEnglishwell,too.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，作者要介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法；第二步，具體闡述作者是怎么學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，希望這些方法會(huì)有幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①trytodo盡力做某事②communicatewithsb與某人交流③keepondoing繼續(xù)做某事[高分句型]①I(mǎi)t’smygreatpleasuretosharemywaysoflearningEnglishwithyou.(it作形式主語(yǔ)，不定式作真正的主語(yǔ))②IhopethesewayscanhelpyoutolearnEnglishwell,too.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)3．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西九江·期中）為促進(jìn)全民閱讀，某校對(duì)全體學(xué)生的課外閱讀情況做了個(gè)問(wèn)卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)和相關(guān)文字提示，以“Let’sReadMore!”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，說(shuō)明課外閱讀的現(xiàn)狀和意義，并就中學(xué)生如何更好地開(kāi)展課外閱讀活動(dòng)提出你的建議。內(nèi)容1.學(xué)生每天的課外閱讀時(shí)間56%lessthanonehour33%onetotwohours11%morethanthreehours2.讀書(shū)的好處3.你的建議注意：1.詞數(shù)80~120，短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得提及有關(guān)個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等；3.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Let’sReadMore!TogowiththeCivilReading,ourschoolhasdoneasurveyandfoundthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Let’sReadMore!TogowiththeCivilReading,ourschoolhasdoneasurveyandfoundthat56%ofthestudentsspendlessthanonehourreadingafterclasseachday,while33%readfor1to2hours,andonly11%readformorethan3hours.Thisisnotsatisfying.Asweallknow,readingmakesafullman.Readingnotonlyincreasesourknowledge,improvesourabilitytosolveproblems,butalsohelpsusformagoodhabitandmakesourlifecolorful.Asstudents,it’stimeforustoreadmore.Let’sstartreadingclubs,setclassroombookshelvesandorganizereadingcompetitions,sothatwecandobetterinourstudy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)表格提示寫(xiě)作，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，描述圖表內(nèi)容；第二步，論述閱讀的意義；第三步，提出建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lessthan少于②satisfying令人滿意的③colorful豐富多彩的[高分句型]①Readingnotonlyincreasesourknowledge,improvesourabilitytosolveproblems,butalsohelpsusformagoodhabitandmakesourlifecolorful.（notonly…butalso…連接句子）②Let’sstartreadingclubs,setclassroombookshelvesandorganizereadingcompetitions,sothatwecandobetterinourstudy.（狀語(yǔ)從句）4.（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西景德鎮(zhèn)·期中）假如你是班長(zhǎng)，學(xué)期結(jié)束時(shí)你要給同學(xué)作簡(jiǎn)短的評(píng)價(jià)。你班的李華這個(gè)學(xué)期變化很大，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)評(píng)。過(guò)去：上學(xué)經(jīng)常遲到，從不按時(shí)完成作業(yè)，常與同學(xué)爭(zhēng)吵，課桌總是一團(tuán)糟……現(xiàn)在：從老師和他溝通后，有了很大變化，上課認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，樂(lè)于幫助同學(xué)……結(jié)果：父母、老師對(duì)他滿意多了。要求：1.除提示內(nèi)容外，還需就李華過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)各補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述；2.詞數(shù)不少于80，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Thisterm,LiHuahasimprovedalot.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

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Thisterm,LiHuahasimprovedalot.Inthepast,hewasoftenlateforschool.Henevercompletedhishomeworkontimeanddidn’tdowellinhissubjects.Heoftenquarreledwithhisclassmates.Rubbishwasspreadalloverthefloorbyhim.Hisdeskwasalwaysinamess.Hehaschangedalotsincetheteacherhadcommunicationwithhim.Nowhelistenscarefullyduringclassesandworkshardathislessons.Heiswillingtohelphisclassmates.Heoftensweepsthefloor.Hisparentsandteachersaresatisfiedwithhim.Ihopehewillgetgoodgradesinthecomingexam.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹李華過(guò)去的情況；第二步，介紹李華現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)；第三步，介紹結(jié)果并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inthepast在過(guò)去②dowellin…在……方面做得好③quarrelwith…和……爭(zhēng)吵④bewillingto愿意⑤besatisfiedwith滿意[高分句型]Ihopehewillgetgoodgradesinthecomingexam.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)5.（24-25九年級(jí)上·江西南昌·期中）假如你是李華，你的朋友Jane來(lái)信說(shuō)她最近在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面有些困難。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合所給表格提示，給她回一封郵件，分享一些英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法。興趣方面Englishsongs/movies...習(xí)慣方面preview...takenotes...review…其他...要求：1)語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)句通順，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4)詞數(shù)100左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：preview預(yù)習(xí)；review復(fù)習(xí)DearJane,IamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglishrecently._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearJane,IamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglishrecently.Herearesomemethodsforyou.First,youcanlistentoEnglishsongsorwatchEnglishmoviestoimproveyourinterest.Second,youshoulddevelopgoodstudyhabits.Youshouldpreviewthenewlessonsbeforeclassandreviewwhatyouhavelearnedafterclass.Youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyinclassandtrytomakenotes.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldfindsomegoodlearningmethods.It’shelpfulforyoutousedifferentwaystoimproveyourmemory.Forexample,youcanimagineapictureinyourmindifyouwanttoremembersomething.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfulforyou!Bestregards,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)是“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作所給提示進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，注意字母大小寫(xiě)以及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步、承接已給的開(kāi)頭，引出話題；第二步、根據(jù)所給提示，介紹一些英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法；第三步、表示希望自己的建議有所幫助并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①I(mǎi)amsorrytohearthat…聽(tīng)到……我很難過(guò)②trytodosth.盡力做某事③lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是④behelpfulfor有助于[高分句型]Herearesomemethodsforyou.(倒裝句)6.（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西南昌·期中）為了豐富學(xué)校大課間活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，學(xué)校校刊英語(yǔ)專欄以“最美大課間，強(qiáng)健青少年”為主題面向?qū)W生進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，向?qū)谕陡?。?xiě)作要求:1)介紹學(xué)校目前30分鐘大課間（the30-minutebreak）的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?)你對(duì)大課間活動(dòng)內(nèi)容有什么更好的建議，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)出理由；3)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4)詞數(shù)100左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：shuttlecockexercises毽子操；badminton羽毛球；ropeskipping跳繩_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Thecolorfulactivitiesduringthe30-minutebreakhelpmaketeenagershealthierandstronger.Inourschool,weusuallydorunningduringthe30-minutebreak.Whenthebellrings,studentswalkoutoftheclassroomtotheplayground.Thenwearelinedupandruntogether.Ithinkitisquiteboring.Inmyopinion,weneeddifferentkindsofactivitiesatbreak,suchasshuttlecockexercises,ropeskippingandsoon.Throughtheseactivities,wecanreallyrelaxourselvesandexperiencethejoyofsports.Also,wewillbemoreenergeticinclass.Differentkindsofactivitiesatbreaktimewillsurelybenefitusalot.Ireallyhopeourschoolcanorganizemoreofthemtoensuretheoveralldevelopmentofusstudents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹30分鐘大課間的好處；第二步，介紹30分鐘大課間的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，談?wù)勛约旱母惺?；第三步，你?duì)大課間活動(dòng)內(nèi)容有什么更好的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inmyopinion在我看來(lái)②differentkindsof不同種類(lèi)的③suchas例如[高分句型]Whenthebellrings,studentswalkoutoftheclassroomtotheplayground.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）7.（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西九江·期中）由于父母的工作變動(dòng)，英國(guó)的Dave兩年前隨父母來(lái)到了中國(guó)北京，他想給祖父母寫(xiě)一封信，敘述他來(lái)到中國(guó)后的各種變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格內(nèi)容提示，代替Dave完成這封信。InEngland(usedto)InChina(now)Freetimetalkwithyou,happyhavenobodytotalkwith,parentsarebusyBreakfastlikebreadandmilk,deliciousbeusedtonoodlesandeggs,makemestrongerSportsnotplayballgames,boring...beinterestedin,playbasketball,fun...要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)80—120，短文開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Deargrandparents,Howisitgoing?Ihopeyouarebothhealthy.Ihaven’tseenyoufortwoyears,andImissyouverymuch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallIwanttotellyou.Wishyouhappyandhealthy.Yours,Dave【答案】例文：Deargrandparents,Howisitgoing?Ihopeyouarebothhealthy.Ihaven’tseenyoufortwoyears,andImissyouverymuch.IrememberIusedtotalkwithyouwhenIwasfree.Ifeltveryhappy.ButnowIhavenobodytotalkwithbecausemyparentsareverybusyeveryday.Andmyeatinghabitshavechanged,too.IusedtoliketohavebreadandmilkforbreakfastinEngland.Ithoughttheyweredelicious.ButnowIamusedtoeatingnoodlesandeggs.Theymakemestrongerthanbefore.Asforsports,Ididn’tusetoplayballgames,becauseIthoughtitwasveryboring.ButnowIaminterestedinplayingbasketball.It’sfuntoplaywithfriendsafterschool.That’sallIwanttotellyou.Wishyouhappyandhealthy.Yours,Dave【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表達(dá)自己對(duì)祖父母的思念（開(kāi)頭已給出）；第二步，分別從空閑時(shí)間、早餐及運(yùn)動(dòng)三方面介紹來(lái)到中國(guó)后的變化；第二步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)祝福。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkwith和……聊天②beusedtodoingsth.習(xí)慣于做某事[高分句型]①I(mǎi)rememberIusedtotalkwithyouwhenIwasfree.(賓語(yǔ)從句)②ButnowIhavenobodytotalkwithbecausemyparentsareverybusyeveryday.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)8.（23-24九年級(jí)上·江西南昌·期中）假如你叫張濤，你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Tony，打算到中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)并生活一年，同時(shí)希望你向他推薦一個(gè)體驗(yàn)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的活動(dòng)及理由，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件告知他。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.WhatisyourbiggestchangeoflearningEnglish?...2.Whatactivitydoyourecommend(推薦)?

（when；where；whattodo；why）參考詞匯：usedtodo/besuggest/advisethesymbolof...show...要求：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名，校名；2.不少于80詞，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTony,I’msogladthatyouwillcometoChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangTao【答案】例文DearTony,I’msogladthatyouwillcometoChina.SinceIenterjuniorhighschool,mybiggestchangeinlearningEnglishhasbeenmyconfidence.IusedtobeshyandafraidtospeakEnglish,butnowI’vebecomemoreconfidentandI’mnotafraidtomakemistakes.OneactivityIwouldrecommendforyoutoexperienceistoattendatraditionalChineseteaceremonyonvacation.ItisthesymboloftheChineseculture.IadviseyougotoateahouseinascenicspotliketheWestLakeinHangzhou,whereyoucanenjoythebeautifulsurroundingswhilelearningabouttheculturalsignificanceoftea.ThisisagreatwaytoshowthesignificanceofteainChineseculture,aswellastheimportanceofhospitalityandetiquette.IhopethisrecommendationhelpsyouhaveadeeperunderstandingofChineseculture.Yours,ZhangTao【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；

③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，介紹學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)最大的變化是什么；

第二步，提出建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①u(mài)sedto過(guò)去常常

②makemistakes犯錯(cuò)誤

③aswellas和，同[高分句型]

①I(mǎi)adviseyougotoateahouseinascenicspotliketheWestLakeinHangzhou,whereyoucanenjoythebeautifulsurroundingswhilelearningabouttheculturalsignificanceoftea.（定語(yǔ)從句）

②IhopethisrecommendationhelpsyouhaveadeeperunderstandingofChineseculture.（賓語(yǔ)從句）9.（23-24九年級(jí)上·景德鎮(zhèn)樂(lè)平·期中）假如你是班長(zhǎng)，學(xué)期結(jié)束時(shí)你要給同學(xué)作簡(jiǎn)短的評(píng)價(jià)。你班的李華這個(gè)學(xué)期變化很大，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)評(píng)。過(guò)去功課不好，常與同學(xué)爭(zhēng)吵，垃圾被他撒的滿地都是，課桌總是一團(tuán)糟?，F(xiàn)在自從老師和他溝通后，有了很大變化。（學(xué)習(xí)、與同學(xué)相處、生活……）結(jié)果父母、老師對(duì)他滿意多了。希望……要求：1.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.括號(hào)部分須用3、4句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.語(yǔ)氣通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。5.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。Thisterm,LiHuahaschangedalot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Thisterm,LiHuahaschangedalot.Inthepasthedidn’tdowellinhissubjects.Heoftenquarreledwithhisclassmates.Rubbishwasspreadalloverthefloorbyhim.Hisdeskwasalwaysinamess.Hehaschangedalotsincetheteacherhadcommunicationwithhim.Nowheworkshardathislessons.Hegetsalongwellwithhisclassmates.Heoftensweepsthefloor.Hisparentsandteachersaresatisfiedwithhim.Ihopehewillgetgoodgradesinthecomingexam.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“這學(xué)期，李華改變了很多”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，分別從過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在兩方面去敘述；第三步，表明自己的希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①quarreledwith和……爭(zhēng)吵②inamess亂七八糟[高分句型]①I(mǎi)hopehewillgetgoodgradesinthecomingexam.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）10.（24-25九年級(jí)上·江西贛州·期中）電腦在我們的工作、生活中作用越來(lái)越大，你知道它的起源與發(fā)展嗎？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示談?wù)勊陌l(fā)展變化，并說(shuō)明我們應(yīng)如何正確地運(yùn)用電腦。要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；3.不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ProductcomputerAdvantages(優(yōu)點(diǎn))1.Beusedtocount(計(jì)算)，now.…When19462.Openoureyes...，knowabout...WhoJohnandJ.Eckert3.Listento...Bemadeof...Disadvantages(缺點(diǎn))1.playcomputergamesSizeUsedtobebig,now...2....Computersarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Doyouknowthehistoryandthechangesofcomputers?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PossibleVersionOne:Computersarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Doyouknowthehistoryandthechangesofcomputers?ThecomputerwasinventedbyJohnW.MauchlyandJ.PresperEckertin1946.Anditwasmadeofdifferentkindsofmaterials,suchasplastic,metalandsoon.Atthattime,thecomputerusedtobeveryhugeanditwasaslargeasabigroom.Butnow,itismuchsmaller,justlikeabook.Thecomputerisaveryusefultoolinourlife.Itwasonlyusedtocountinthepast,butnowitcanbeusedtohelpusworkandstudy.Ithasmanyotherfunctions.Forexample,itcanbroadenourhorizonsandletusknowmore.Besides,wecanalsolistentomusicorplaygamesonit.Thatmakesusrelax.However,someyoungpeoplespendtoomuchtimeinplayinggames.Itisverybadforeyesandstudy.Everycoinhastwosides.Inmyopinion,weshouldusecomputerscorrectly.AndIbelievethecomputerisgoingtochangeourlifecompletelyinthenearfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中電腦的發(fā)展變化及正確運(yùn)用方式的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“歷史、變化、優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)”等幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹電腦的發(fā)展變化及正確運(yùn)用方式；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。總結(jié)電腦的重要性，并提出正確運(yùn)用電腦的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①moreandmoreimportant越來(lái)越重要②differentkindsof不同種類(lèi)的③beusedtodo被用來(lái)做……④inthe