應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

【2024年高考真題】

1.（2024年新課標(biāo)I卷）

假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫(xiě)一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)

容包括：

（1）你完成的作品；

（2）你的感想。

注意：

（1）寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;

（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearChris,

I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearChris,

I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,I

decidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.

Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativity

butalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.Ifelladeepsenseofpeaceas

Ipainted.

Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。要求考生給Chris寫(xiě)一封信，分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

決定：decide—determine

整個(gè)的：entire—>whole

提供：offer—?provide

總之：inaword—>inshort

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercclorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark's

pond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.

拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofihesmall

bridgeoverthepark'spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型l]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost,（that引導(dǎo)扉定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.（as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2024年新課標(biāo)I卷?浙江）

請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHeaUh”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開(kāi)展的運(yùn)動(dòng)，內(nèi)

容包括：

1.介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；

2.說(shuō)明推薦理由。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答：

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

【答案】

StandUpandExercise,Everybody!

Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyour

dailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe"StandUpandStretch^^exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingup

fromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It'saquickandeasywaytoget

yourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.

First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchashackpainandstiffness.Second,it

canimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthy

andactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.

So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It'sasmallchangethat

canmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHeallh”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)

們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開(kāi)展的運(yùn)動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

厭倦：betiredof^bcfedupwith

首先：first—>aboveall

減輕：combat一relieve

提高：improve—?enhance

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakinga

fewdeepbreaths.

拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,and

takingafewdeepbreaths.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型I]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.

（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,and

takingafewdeepbreaths.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）

[高分句型2]It'sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

【2023年高考真題】

1.（2023年新高考I卷）

假定你是李華，你校Ryan外教準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)II語(yǔ)，你對(duì)這樣分組有

意見(jiàn)，請(qǐng)給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

I.說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；

2.提出建議。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置.作答。

【答案】

DearRyan,

I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Iwouldliketoexpressmyconcernsregardingyourplantorandomlydivide

studentsintopairsforpost-classoralpractice.

Tobeginwith,I'minfavorofyourdecisiontostartaspokenEnglishseminar,whichwillsurelybenefitus.

However,I'mafraidit'dbelesscffcctivc,fbrtheycouldn'tcooperatewell,iftwostudentsarcrandomlychosen.I

thinkasetpairwouldbefineinthelongrun,fortheycoulddevelopacloserelationshipduringthepractice.Inthe

lightoftheseconcerns,Isuggestallowingstudentstoformteamsvoluntarilyaccordingtotheirinterests.learning

goalsorlanguageabilities.Besides,wccoulddividestudentsintodifferentlevelsorcategoriesbasedontheiroral

proficiencyorotherrelevantcriteriawhichwouldbettercatertoeachstudent'sneeds.

I'dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教寫(xiě)郵件說(shuō)明學(xué)生分組練習(xí)口語(yǔ)存在的問(wèn)題并提出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

關(guān)于：about—>regarding

贊成：agree—>infavorof

2.句式拓展

原句：Ithinkasetpairwouldbefine.

拓展句：Ithinkasetpairwouldhefineinthelongrun,fortheycaniddevelopacloserelntinnshipduringthe

practice.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型】Inthelightoftheseconcerns,Isuggestallowingstudentstoformteamsvoluntarily

accordingtotheirinterestslearninggoalsorlanguageabilities.（本句雖然是簡(jiǎn)單句，但是句中使用較多高級(jí)短

語(yǔ)，如in（helightof鑒于，考慮到；suggestdoingslh;accordinglo按照等。）

2.（2023年新高考II卷）

假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在

問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件、內(nèi)容包括；

1.說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；

2.提出建議。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit'snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglish

trainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.This

canhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroom

fortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwith

buiiicuiicwliutheydun,lgelulungwithoihavedifficultyuoiiiiiiuiiiualingwith.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“綠色北京''為主題，寫(xiě)一封建議信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

開(kāi)心：washappy—?wasthrilled

關(guān)于：about—>themed

提供：give—>provide

事業(yè)：job—*cause

在我看來(lái)：inmyopinion—>personally

【點(diǎn)睛】

在我看來(lái)：personally

至于活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容：Asforthecontentoftheactivity

此外：besides

【高分句式】

Itwouldbeagreatopportunitytoraiseawarenessaboutenvironmentalissuesandengagemorepeopleinthecause.

（本句運(yùn)用并列句新高級(jí)詞匯及短語(yǔ)raiseawareness,engage,inthecause等。）

4.（2023年天津卷）

你作為交換生去英國(guó)學(xué)校，學(xué)校要辦一個(gè)名為Chineseworkshop的促進(jìn)中英文化交流的活動(dòng)，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容

包括中國(guó)美食手工藝品和書(shū)法，并且活動(dòng)有一項(xiàng)是教別人做中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的東西。

請(qǐng)描述這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的意義，并申請(qǐng)參加此次活動(dòng)，闡述參加內(nèi)容及想法。

【答案】

DearSir/Madam,

IamwritingtoapplyfortheChineseworkshopactivitythatisbeingorganizedbytheschoolaspartof

promotingculturalexchangebetweenChinaandtheUK.IamcurrentlyanexchangestudentatyourschoolandI

believethisactivitywouldbeagreatopportunityfbrmetocontributeandlearn.

IwouldliketoparticipateintheworkshopbyshowcasingChinesecuisine.handicrafts.andcalligraphy.

Additionally,!wouldlovetoteachotherstudentshowtomaketraditionalChineseitems.Thisactivityholdsgreat

significanceasitnotonlyfostersculturalunderstandingbutalsoallowsmetosharemyowncultureandlearnfrom

others.Iamexceedinglyexcitedabout(hisopportunityandIbelieveitwillgreatlyenrichmyexperienceasan

exchangestudent.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemeintoconsideration.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于?應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“促進(jìn)中英文化交流的活動(dòng)”為主題，寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

現(xiàn)在：now—currently

重要：importance—>significance

非常：very—>exceedingly

【點(diǎn)睛】

想要：wouldliketo

不僅…而且…：notonly...butalso

此外：additionally

【高分句式1]Thisactivityholdsgreatsignificanceasitnotonlyfostersculturalunderstandingbutalsoallowsme

tosharemyowncultureandlearnfromothers.(句中使用連詞as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，且從句中運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞not

only...butalso...。)

[高分句式2]Iwouldappreciatei(ifyoucouldtakemeintoconsideration4本句使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，il作為形式賓

語(yǔ)，if引導(dǎo)真正的賓語(yǔ)從句。）

5.（2023年浙江卷1月）

上周末你參加了校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的“認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括:

1.活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

2.收獲與感想。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如卜格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

【答案】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents*

Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsanduses

ofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.

Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedabout

plants（haiareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterfbranimals.Ialsogaineda

greaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.

Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)篇報(bào)道，介紹上周末校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的“認(rèn)識(shí)我們

身邊的植物”活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參與：participatein—>attend

開(kāi)始：begin—>start

觀察，調(diào)查：observe—?survey

震驚：strike—?astonish/surprise

3.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyour

Students5Union.

拓展句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyour

Students'Union,whichbenefitedmealot.

[高分句型1]Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferent

characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2】Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldand

learnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterloranimals.

（運(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和定語(yǔ)從句）

[2022年高考真題】

1.（2022年新高考I卷）

假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目"TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫(xiě)郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.節(jié)目介紹;

2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如卜格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearCaroline.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【滿分作文】

DearCaroline,

［表達(dá)寫(xiě)信目的］Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendourprogram“TalkandTalk”inourschoolbroadcasting

stationat7:00p.m.nextFriday.［節(jié)目話題介紹］Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturediffcrcnccs^^isintendedto

arousestudents'interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.

［邀請(qǐng)參力口的目的］Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youropinionwillbeofimportance.［參力口

活動(dòng)的意義］【ntheprogram,youcancommunicatewithourschoolstudents,whichnotonlyprovidesaplatform

forstudentstorelievetheirpressureandaddspicetotheirdullroutine,butalsoinspirestheirinterestinwestern

culture.

［再次邀請(qǐng)］I'dappreciateitifyoucouldspareyourtimetojoinus.Anearlyreplyaboutyourfinaldecision

willbehighlyappreciated.

Yours,

LiHua

2.（2022年新高考II卷）

假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目"TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫(xiě)郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。

內(nèi)容包括：

I.節(jié)目介紹；

2.訪詼的時(shí)間和話題。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearCaroline,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【滿分作文】

DearCaroline,

ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalk

andTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,when

havingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguished

foreignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,Itogetherwiththewhole

TalkandTalkstaffamwailingforyourcoming.Tdappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.

Yours,

LiHua

3.（2022年北京卷）

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你打算邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)好友Jim為你們班做一次關(guān)于英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的線上經(jīng)驗(yàn)

交流。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.建議交流的具體內(nèi)容及其原因；

2.交流時(shí)間和其他相關(guān)事項(xiàng)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

LiHua

【滿分作文】

DearJim,

How'severything?

I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakin

organisation.Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howiodevelopa

paragraph,andhowtostructureanessay?

ThetalkwillIasiaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadaleatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhich

platformyou'lluse.itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutcquestionandanswersessionattheendofyour

talk.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

4.(2022年天津卷)

假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)社的成員李津。為招募新成員，口語(yǔ)社請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為社團(tuán)納新活動(dòng)錄制?

段短視頻.請(qǐng)按照以下提示，撰寫(xiě)視頻的文字稿：

(1)向同學(xué)們發(fā)出入社邀請(qǐng)；

(2)介紹口語(yǔ)社的主要活動(dòng)(如英語(yǔ)演講比賽、觀看英語(yǔ)電影等活動(dòng))；

(3)分享本人入社以來(lái)的收獲。

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;

(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。

【答案】

Hello,everyone!I'mLiJin,amemberoftheSpokenEnglishClubofourschool.I'mheretoinviteyoutojoin

us.ThiswillbeagoodchanceforallEnglishlovers.

Thecluboffersvariousinterestingactivities.WecanparticipateinEnglishspeechcontests,watchclassic

Englishmovies,singEnglishsongsandattendinspiringlectures.Allofthemhelptostimulateourinterestin

learningEnglishandmakeourschoollifemuchmoreenjoyable.

Theclubactivitieshavebenefitedmealot.IhavenotonlyimprovedmyspokenEnglish,butalsomadealot

offriends.

Now,it'syourturntojoinus.V/earelookingforwardtohavingyouintheclub!

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)社的納新視頻寫(xiě)?段文字稿，向同學(xué)們發(fā)出邀請(qǐng),

并介紹口語(yǔ)社的主要活動(dòng)，分享入社以來(lái)的收獲。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

機(jī)會(huì)：chance—?opportunity

參加：participatein—*takepartin—>joinin

愉快的：enjoyable-*joyful

激發(fā)：stimulate—^motivate—>activate

2.句式拓展

徇單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theclubactivitieshavebenefitedmealot.

拓展句：TheclubactivitieswhichIhavejoinedinhavebenefitedmealot.

［點(diǎn)睛］【高分句型1】Wearelookingforwardtohavingyouinthechib!（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）

［高分句型2］IhavenotonlyimprovedmyspokenEnglish,butalsomadealotoffriends.

（運(yùn)用了notonly...butalso…連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)）

[2021年高考真題】

1.(2021年新高考I卷)

你校英文報(bào)七〃加正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括:

1.讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛(ài)的欄目；3.期望和祝福。

注意：

I.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為8()左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式寫(xiě)字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

YouthandMe

【答案】

YouthandMe

Ithasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmy

wholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotof

imaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,Ievensubmittedmyown

fictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobea

writer.

IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，向?？稹颖磉_(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福。

【詳解】I.詞匯積累

建立：found—*establish

沮喪的：upset—?depressed

得到：receive—>obtain

賞析：enjoy—>apprcciatc

2.句式拓展

同義句改寫(xiě)

原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.

拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.

【點(diǎn)睛）［高分句型I］Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotof

imaginativeslories.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

［高分句型2］RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.

（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

2.(2021年新高考n卷)

你校英文報(bào)匕〃〃力正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括:

1.讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛(ài)的欄目；3.期望和祝福。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為8()左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式寫(xiě)字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

YouthandMe

【答案】

YouthandMe

Ithasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmy

wholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotof

imaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,Ievensubmittedmyown

fictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobea

wri:er.

IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，向?？颉ā?，表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建立：found—?establish

沮喪的：upset-depressed

得到：receive—>obtain

賞析：enjoy—>appreciate

2.句式拓展

同義句改寫(xiě)

原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.

拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.

［點(diǎn)睛)［高分句型I］Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotof

imaginativestories.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

［高分句型21RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.

(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

3.(2021年天津卷)

假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵件

祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)表示感謝并問(wèn)候；

(2)計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；

(3)你決定選擇哪個(gè)專(zhuān)業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專(zhuān)業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。

注意：

(I)詞數(shù)不少于100；

(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫：

(3)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾巳給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearNancy,

Yours,

LiJin

【答案】

DearNancy,

IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.Iamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcarecfmeduring

mystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.

NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIarcgoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoingtoTian

'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoythe

elegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterfbrthecomputermajor.With（herapid

developmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopleto

jointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,consultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsfor

consultation.Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.

Yours,

LiJin

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris

家，他母親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵作祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)

你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：表示感謝并問(wèn)候；計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；你決定選擇哪個(gè)專(zhuān)業(yè)，為學(xué)好該

專(zhuān)業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

照顧：takecareof—>lookafter

另夕卜,此外:inaddition—*besides—>what,smore

雇傭：employ—>hire

既然：nowthat—>sincc

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmore

andmorepeople