Unit6HealthydietWritingKaridaLearningaimsLearnhowtowirtearestaurantreviewMastersomewritingstrategiesBeabletoapplywritingstrategiesinwritingEnhancetheawarenessofsavingfoodandmaintainingabalanceddietBrainstormthequestionbelow.Whatcanattractyoutogotothesamerestaurantagain?BrainstormingWhatcanattractyoutogotothesamerestaurantagain?itsfooditsserviceitsenvironment…Arestaurantreview

canhelppeopletohaveabetterchoice.Arestaurantreviewisaboutyourexperienceofeatingatarestaurant.

YoucanfindthiskindofreviewontheInterneteasily.

Howtowritearestaurantreview?Title?Opening?Introduction?Reviewofthefood?Reviewoftheservice?Recommendation（推薦）

Otherpossiblepoints:Location,atmosphere（氛圍）,price,cleanliness,parking（停車）,etc.ADorishaswrittenarestaurantreview.Readthereview.P92Readthereviewagainandanswerthequestions.WhichrestaurantdidDorisgotolastSaturdaynight?

TheCountryHouse.Whatkindoffooddoestherestaurantserve?

ItservestraditionalEnglishfood.Howmuchdidthefoodcostforeachperson?

About15to20poundseach.WhatfoodattractedDorismost?

Thefishpieandfishandchips.WhatdoesDoristhinkofthewaiters?

Theywerepolitebutalittleslow.WhatshouldpeopledoiftheywanttogotothisrestaurantaccordingtoDoris?Peopleshouldgetthereearlyandbepreparedtospendalotoftimewaitingforthefood.BWriteyourownrestaurantreview.UsetheexampleinAandthequestionsbelowtohelpyou.Whichrestaurantdidyoueatatandwhendidyoueatthere?Whatfooddoestherestaurantserve?Whatwasgoodaboutthefoodanditsservice,andwhatwasbad?Wouldyouliketorecommendthisrestauranttoothers?P92GreatdinnerintheGoldenHotelrestaurantMyfamilyspentawonderfuleveningintheGoldenHotelrestaurantlastSunday.TheGoldenHotelrestaurantisfamousinBeijing.ItservestraditionalChinesefood.Ienjoyedthismealverymuch.First,althoughitwasdifferentfrommyfavouritestylefood,itwasdelicious.Second,thefoodwasdisplayedbeautifully.Wewantedtohaveatryassoonaswesawit.Third,thehostesswasveryniceandwereceivedgoodservicethere.Everythingwasperfectexcepttheprice.Itwasabitexpensive.IwouldhighlyrecommendtheGoldenHotelrestaurantforitsdeliciousfoodandgoodservice!OnepossibleversionWritingpractice書面表達(dá)(共1小題；滿分15分)假如你負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)校的宣傳欄工作，近來你校出現(xiàn)學(xué)生不吃食堂，傾倒完好食物，并亂點(diǎn)外賣和吃垃圾食品導(dǎo)致生病等不良現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文向同學(xué)們倡導(dǎo)“SaveFoodandEatHealthily”的理念。1.不吃垃圾食品，少吃外賣;2.補(bǔ)充均衡膳食的2點(diǎn)建議；3.浪費(fèi)可恥，說明珍惜糧食的重要性;4.呼吁大眾節(jié)約糧食。(注意：詞數(shù)90左右，已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))參考詞匯：take-awayfood外賣BrainstormingWhatstepsdoweneedtotakebeforewriting?1.審人稱：時(shí)態(tài)：得分要點(diǎn)：第一、三人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)開頭+4大要點(diǎn)+結(jié)尾BeginningBody(正文)Ending2.列Makeanoutlinetomakesurewhatyouwanttosay!開篇點(diǎn)題，說明均衡膳食和節(jié)約糧食的重要性介紹保持均衡膳食和節(jié)約糧食的建議：1.stayawayfromjunkfood2.consumeinplentyofvegetablesandfruit3.don’tordertoomuchtake-awayfood4.don’twasteanyfood再次點(diǎn)題，呼吁人們要保持健康、節(jié)約糧食3.擴(kuò)1.吃太多垃圾食品和外賣對(duì)我們身體有害。Itisharmfultoourhealthtoeattoomuchjunkfoodandtake-awayfood,becausetheyincludetoomuchfatandoil.2.養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習(xí)慣,多吃蔬菜、水果，多喝水。Forminghealthyeatinghabitsisnecessary.Weshouldnotonlyhavemorevegetables,fruit,butalsodrinkmorewater.3.當(dāng)下許多人仍在挨餓，我們應(yīng)該珍惜糧食。Therearestillmanypeoplesufferingfromhungernow,whichmeansweshouldcherisheverysinglegrian.(It’sadj.forsb.todosth)（V-ing做主語notonly…butalso）（Therebe;從句）Formsentenceswithsuperiorphrases/pattern句式表達(dá)Tips:1.活用高級(jí)短語2.活用多種句式、從句3.活用連詞

4.連順序：firstofall;tobeginwith;moreover;what’smore;inaddition;mostimportantly;lastbutnotleast...邏輯：however;therefore;ononehand,ontheotherhand;notonly,butalso;tosumup;inconclusion...列舉：forexample;forinstance;suchas...Useconjunctiontomakeyourarticlemorelogical.審列擴(kuò)連查抄開頭結(jié)尾寫作步驟小結(jié)假如你負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)校的宣傳欄工作，近來你校出現(xiàn)學(xué)生不吃食堂，傾倒完好食物，并亂點(diǎn)外賣和吃垃圾食品導(dǎo)致生病等不良現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文向同學(xué)們倡導(dǎo)“SaveFoodandEatHealthily”的理念。1.不吃垃圾食品，少吃外賣;2.補(bǔ)充均衡膳食的2點(diǎn)建議；3.浪費(fèi)可恥，說明珍惜糧食的重要性;4.呼吁大眾節(jié)約糧食。(注意：詞數(shù)90左右，已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))參考詞匯：takeoutfood外賣

While-writing15mins首句：Recently,manystudentshavewastedfood,eatenjunkfoodandtakeoutfoodcarelessly,whichhasledtotheirgettingsick.Doyouwanttogethighmark???內(nèi)容

6分要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮5分1分準(zhǔn)確性

6分語法：人稱、語態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)等。詞匯：名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)、拼寫、字?jǐn)?shù)等機(jī)械性：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等。流暢性3分文章流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，有連接詞及復(fù)合句。中考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)15’=6’+6’+3’Showandcorrect!PossibleversionRecently,manystudentshavewastedfood,eatenjunkfoodandtakeoutfoodcarelessly,whichhasledtotheirgettingsick.

Obviously（顯而易見）,it’stimeforustosavefoodandeathealthily.Tobeginwith,itisharmfultoourhealthtoeattoomuchjunkfoodandtake-awayfood,becausetheyincludetoomuchfatandoil.Inaddition,

forming（培養(yǎng)）healthyeatinghabitsisnecessary.Sotokeepabalanceddiet,wearesupposedtohaveadifferentkindsofhealthyfood.Forinstance,weshouldnotonly

consumeinmorevegetables,butalsodrinkmorewaterinsteadofsoftdrinks.Atthesametime,whenweenjoyplentyofdeliciusfood,weshouldalso