2025年考研英語一寫作專項訓(xùn)練沖刺試卷（含答案）考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______PartAYouhavewonafreetriptoEuropeorganizedbyyourcompany.Writealettertoyoursupervisor,Mr.David,outliningyourtravelplansandexpressingyourappreciationforthisopportunity.PartBDirections:Studythefollowingsetofpicturescarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast160words.Inthefirstpicture,anelderlymanisreadinganewspaperpeacefullyinaparkbench.However,hisexpressionlooksworried.Inthesecondpicture,severalyearslater,thesameelderlymanissittingaloneontheparkbench,lookingmucholderandsadder.Heisholdingablanknewspaper,nolongerabletoread.Aroundhim,theparkisbustlingwithactivity,butheseemsisolatedandforgotten.Writeyouressaybasedontheabovepictures.Inyouressay,*describethepictures,*interpretthepossiblemeaningofthepictures,and*giveyourowncomment.試卷答案PartADearMr.David,Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudefortheopportunitytoparticipateinthecompany'sfreetriptoEurope.Ifeelincrediblyfortunatetohavewonthisprize,whichIbelievewillbeanunforgettableandenrichingexperience.Regardingmytravelplans,Ihavebeencontemplatingtheitineraryforsometime.IamparticularlyinterestedinvisitinghistoricallandmarksincitiessuchasParis,Rome,andLondon.Paris,withitsiconicEiffelTowerandworld-classmuseums,hasalwaysfascinatedme.IwouldalsolovetoexploretheancientruinsandartisticheritageinRome.Additionally,London,beingaglobalhubofcultureandhistory,offersadiverserangeofattractionsthatIameagertosee.Iplantoallocateasignificantportionofmytimetoculturalsightseeingandmuseums,asIamkeenonimmersingmyselfinthelocaltraditionsandhistory.Ofcourse,Iwillalsofindtimetorelaxandenjoythelocalcuisineandscenery.Iamtrulyexcitedaboutthisupcomingjourneyandamconfidentthatitwillprovidemewithavaluableandmemorableexperience.Thankyouonceagainforthisgenerousopportunity.Iameagertoreturnandsharemyexperienceswiththeteam.Sincerely,[YourName]解析思路PartA*審題：本題要求寫一封感謝信給上司David先生，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于獲得公司組織的免費(fèi)歐洲之旅的機(jī)會，并需概述旅行計劃。屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的感謝信。*結(jié)構(gòu)：1.開頭：表達(dá)感謝，點明事由（獲得歐洲之旅機(jī)會）。2.主體：分述旅行計劃。首先表達(dá)對獲得機(jī)會的激動和感激；然后具體說明想去的國家和城市（巴黎、羅馬、倫敦），并簡述訪問這些地方的原因（歷史地標(biāo)、文化、藝術(shù)、歷史）；最后說明計劃在旅途中的主要活動（文化觀光、博物館、放松、品嘗美食）。3.結(jié)尾：再次表達(dá)興奮之情，感謝公司，并提及回來后會分享經(jīng)歷。*語言：使用禮貌、正式的語言。恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用表達(dá)感激的詞匯（gratitude,sinceregratitude,appreciate,generousopportunity）；使用表示計劃的詞匯（contemplating,allocate,eagertosee,immersemyself,eagertoreturn）；句式多樣，包含從句和較長的復(fù)合句。*要點：涵蓋了感謝、表達(dá)興奮、概述旅行計劃（目的地、活動）等關(guān)鍵要素。PartBEssay:Theprovidedpicturesdepictapoignantnarrativeaboutthecontrastbetweenpastvitalityandpresentisolationexperiencedbyanelderlymaninapark.Inthefirstpicture,weseeanelderlymanseatedonaparkbench,engrossedinreadinganewspaper.Hisposturesuggestsamomentofquietengagementwiththeworld,yethisexpressionrevealsanunderlyinglayerofworry,hintingperhapsatconcernsrelatedtohishealth,finances,orthefuture.Theparkaroundhimappearsvibrant,withotherpeopleandactivitiesinthebackground,symbolizingtheactivelifeheoncemayhavebeenapartof.Fastforwardtothesecondpicture,severalyearslater,thesceneisdrasticallydifferent.Thesameelderlymansitsaloneonthesameparkbench,buthisappearancehasnoticeablyaged,andhisexpressionisheavywithsadnessandloneliness.Heholdsanewspaper,yetitisblank,signifyingalossoftheabilitytoread—aprofoundandsymboliclossofconnectiontotheworldandhispastself.Theparkremainsbustling,yetheiscompletelyisolated,visuallydetachedfromthesurroundingliveliness,representinghisgradualmarginalizationandbeingforgottenbysociety.Thesepicturespowerfullyconveyasombermessageaboutthepotentiallonelinessandisolationthatcanaccompanyaging.Theyhighlightthepoignantcontrastbetweenactiveparticipationinlifeandbeingleftbehind,forgotten.Theinabilitytoreadthenewspaperisapowerfulmetaphorforthelossofautonomyandconnectionthatcanoccurwithage.Itservesasasocialcommentary,urgingustoreflectonourinteractionswiththeelderlyandtheimportanceofmaintainingasupportivenetworkthatensurestheydonotfeelisolatedorinvisible.Thesequenceofimagesunderscoresthesignificanceofhumanconnectionandtheneedforsocietytovalueandincludeitsoldermembers,preventingthemfrombecomingmereobserversinaworldthatmovesonwithoutthem.解析思路PartB*審題：本題要求根據(jù)兩幅連續(xù)的圖片寫一篇議論文。需要描述圖片內(nèi)容，解釋圖片可能蘊(yùn)含的意義，并給出自己的評論。屬于圖畫/圖表作文。*結(jié)構(gòu)：1.開頭：描述第一幅圖片的場景和人物狀態(tài)，點出人物表情背后可能的暗示（如憂慮）。描述環(huán)境（充滿活力的公園），并稍作引申（象征性的過去生活）。2.主體（對比與深入分析）：描述第二幅圖片的場景和人物狀態(tài)，強(qiáng)調(diào)其變化（外貌、表情、孤獨(dú)感）。重點分析“空報紙”的象征意義（失去閱讀能力、失去與世界和過去的連接）。對比兩幅圖片，突出“公園的活力”與“人物的孤立”之間的強(qiáng)烈反差，點明其“被遺忘”的主題。深入挖掘圖片寓意（老齡化帶來的孤獨(dú)、社會邊緣化、失去自主權(quán)、社會對老人的忽視）。3.結(jié)尾：總結(jié)圖片傳遞的沉重信息（對衰老、孤獨(dú)、被遺忘的思考），提出社會反思的呼吁（關(guān)注老人、維護(hù)連接、社會包容），強(qiáng)調(diào)人類連接的重要性。*語言：使用描述性語言描繪圖片細(xì)節(jié)和人物情感（engrossed,vibrant,drasticallydifferent,heavywithsadness,isolated,detached,poignant,so