如何在寫(xiě)作中運(yùn)用長(zhǎng)難句Sheisabeauty

(name)QiWei,

wearsapurple

hairband,withdelicatemake-up,

(make)heracelebrityaroundtheworld

sheraisesan

(adore)daughter,Lucky,

fatherissohandsomeandgentle

hehasbecomeahit.namedwhomakingandadorablewhosethatTask1ObserveWhatmakesasentencecomplicatedintermsofcomponents（成分）？定語(yǔ)狀語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)同位語(yǔ)各類(lèi)從句make-up基本句型S+LV+PS+V+O動(dòng)詞分類(lèi)S+ViS+Vt+O賓語(yǔ)種類(lèi)S+Vt+IO+DOS+Vt+O+OC雙賓復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)

句子擴(kuò)展的五大核心技巧（1）添加形容詞或副詞功能：使名詞或動(dòng)詞更具體、生動(dòng)The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.The

innocent

girl

unwrapped

her

delicate

gift

box

excitedly。（2）使用介詞短語(yǔ)功能：補(bǔ)充時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、方式等細(xì)節(jié)The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.Without

any

hesitation,

the

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box

with

great

care。（3）運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞功能：表示伴隨動(dòng)作、原因或狀態(tài)The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.Screaming

with

excitement,

the

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box。（4）使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨(dú)立主格功能：描述動(dòng)作發(fā)生時(shí)的伴隨狀態(tài)The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.With

her

heart

beating

wildly,

the

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box。5）巧用從句功能：增加邏輯關(guān)系或背景信息The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box

which

she

had

been

looking

forward

to。The

girl

unwrapped

her

gift

box.With

her

heart

beating

wildly,

the

innocent

girl,

held

by

her

mom

and

screaming

with

excitement,

unwrapped

her

delicate

gift

box

which

she

had

been

looking

forward

to

without

any

hesitation.

核心技巧：形容詞/副詞、介詞短語(yǔ)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、with結(jié)構(gòu)/獨(dú)立主格、從句。The

children

swam

in

the

river.逐步擴(kuò)展：1.

加時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)：At

a

beautiful

dusk,

the

children

swam

in

the

river.2.

加定語(yǔ)：Led

by

the

local

people,

the

children

swam

in

the

river.3.加同位語(yǔ)…,

a

terrifying

place

where

nobody

dared

to

approach.4.

整合長(zhǎng)句：At

a

beautiful

dusk,

the

children,

led

by

the

local

people,

swam

in

the

Devil

River,

a

terrifying

place

where

nobody

dared

to

approach。He

saved

the

little

girl.1.

加時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句：After

he

ran

into

the

room,

he

saved

the

little

girl.2.

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞替換從句：Running

into

the

room,

he

saved

the

little

girl.3.

加過(guò)渡詞：To

our

surprise,

...4.

加工具（介詞短語(yǔ)）：with

the

help

of

a

firefighter,

...5.

加情緒：...,

feeling

nervous.To

our

surprise,

he,

with

the

help

of

a

firefighter,

saved

the

little

girl,

feeling

nervous.

The

twins

carried

the

breakfast

upstairs.1.

加情感（形容詞）：Overjoyed

and

thrilled,

the

twins

carried...2.

加道具：...

prepared

the

breakfast

tray,

adding

a

card

they

had

made,

...3.

加時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)：In

no

time,

...4.

加目的/方向：...

and

then

headed

for

their

parents'

bedroom.In

no

time,

overjoyed

and

thrilled,

the

twins

prepared

the

breakfast

tray,

adding

a

card

they

had

made,

and

then

headed

for

their

parents'

bedroom.

We

climbed

onto

the

helicopter.1.

加情緒（形容詞）：Thrilled

yet

relieved,

we

climbed...2.

加具體動(dòng)作：...

clutched

the

rope

and

climbed

onto

the

helicopter.3.

加結(jié)果：...

and

eventually

landed

safe

and

sound.Thrilled

yet

relieved,

we

clutched

the

rope

and

eventually

landed

on

the

helicopter

safe

and

sound.

The

boy

rushed

to

the

lake.1.

加連貫動(dòng)作：The

boy

rushed

to

the

lake,

took

off

his

clothes

and

jumped

into

the

water.2.

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞整合動(dòng)作：Having

taken

off

his

clothes,

the

boy

rushed

to

the

lake

and

jumped

into

the

water.

Having

taken

off

his

clothes,

the

boy

rushed

to

the

lake

and

jumped

into

the

water.

He

found

his

way

into

the

forest.1.

加非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（方式）：Carrying

the

best

sword,

he

found

his

way...2.

加時(shí)間/結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)：...

and

brought

the

princess

back.3.

加情緒：...,

exhausted

but

excited.Carrying

the

best

sword,

he

eventually

found

his

way

into

the

dense

forest

and

brought

the

princess

back,

exhausted

but

excited.

She

walked

into

the

room.1.

加副詞和地點(diǎn)：She

walked

slowly

into

the

dimly

lit

room

at

the

end

of

the

long

corridor.2.

加with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：...,

with

a

soft

sigh

escaping

her

lips.3.

加狀語(yǔ)從句：...

as

she

took

in

the

quiet

atmosphere.She

walked

slowly

into

the

dimly

lit

room

at

the

end

of

the

long

corridor,

with

a

soft

sigh

escaping

her

lips

as

she

took

in

the

quiet

atmosphere.

The

cat

sat

on

the

mat.1.

加副詞和形容詞：The

cat

sat

lazily

on

the

soft

mat.2.

加介詞短語(yǔ)：...

by

the

warm

fireplace.3.

加獨(dú)立成分描述：...,

its

tail

flicking

gently

from

side

to

side.The

cat

sat

lazily

on

the

soft

mat

by

the

warm

fireplace,

its

tail

flicking

gently

from

side

to

side.

She

is

a

teacher.1.

加定語(yǔ)從句：She

is

a

teacher

who

has

been

wo