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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Martahadbeenahomemakerfor27years.Lookingafterthefamilyhasalwaysbeenherjob.Sinceherdaughtersweremarriedandherhusbandretired,shedecidedtogetajobtoexperienceanewlife.Shenoticedtheicecreamshopinherneighborhoodandappliedthere.

Duetoalaborshortage,theowners,amiddleagedcouple,weredelightedtohireher.Threemonthslater,Martalovedherjob.Onemorning,Carol,thewomanowner,explainedthatherhusbandDavidhadtheflu.CarolworriedaboutrunningoutoficecreambutsaidmakingmorewasimpossiblebecauseitwasDavid'sjobandhewasprotectiveofhismachines.Theicecreamroomwaslocked,andDavidrefusedtosharethekeylocationbecausehewasworriedthatCarolwouldn'tknowhowtodoitatall.

MartaencouragedCaroltocallDavid,butheinsistedoningintomaketheicecreamhimself.Carolonlypersuadedhimtostayinbedbypromisingnottoattemptmakingicecream.MartafeltsorryforCarolandurgedhertoprovehercapability.DespiteherworryofnotmatchingDavid'sskill,Carolagreedtotry.

WhileCarolservedthecustomers,Martabeganherownsearch.Shestartedfromtheobviousplacesdrawersandapron

(圍裙)

pocketsbutfoundnothing.Shecheckedinsidethefridgesandthedishwasher.Nothing.

Thenhereyesfellonalargehorseshoemagnet

(磁鐵)

lyingonashelfinthestoreroom.Itwasjustwhatsheneeded!Sheranitoverthesidesofboxesofcups.Thenthroughpilesofkitchentowelsandstacksofpapernapkins.Noplacewasruledout.

Whenshetookthemagnettothebagofsugar,shealmostmissedthefaintstirringofthetinycrystals

(晶體).Sherealizedthatsomethingotherthanthatsugarwasinthebag.

Martamovedthemagnetaroundslowlyuntil,eventually,akeyjumpedoutandstucktoit.MartahandedthekeyovertoCarol."NowI'llservethecustomerswhileyougoanddothemagic,"sheencouragedCarol.注意:

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:

Carolresolvedtosucceed,followingtherecipescarefully.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

Suddenly,Davidarrived,surprisedtoseethescene.

____________________________________________文本分析角色:_____________________________________________________視角:第______人稱時空線:fromtheneighborhoodicecreamshop(Marta’swork)______________theshopstoreroom(Martasearchingforthekey)4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。WhatwasMarta’spreviousidentityandwhydidshegetajob?:_________________________________________________________________WhyweretheownersdelightedtohireMarta?:_________________________________________________________________WhathappenedtoDavid?:_________________________________________________________________Whycouldn’tCarolmakeicecreamatfirst?:_________________________________________________________________HowdidMartahelpCarolfindthekey?:_________________________________________________________________WhatwasDavid’sattitudetowardshisicecreammakingjob?:_________________________________________________________________WhatproblemwereCarolandtheshopfacing?:_________________________________________________________________WhatkindofpersonwasMarta?:_________________________________________________________________5.情節(jié)線:當了27年家庭主婦的Marta在女兒們成家、丈夫退休后,入職了小區(qū)的冰淇淋店并熱愛這份工作?!鷂_____________________→Marta鼓勵Carol嘗試,自己則通過馬蹄形磁鐵在糖袋里找到了鑰匙并交給Carol。→(續(xù)寫)Carol決心成功,認真按照食譜操作?!ɡm(xù)寫)突然,David來了,看到眼前的景象很驚訝。6.情感線:Marta:enthusiastic→_____________________→____________________→(續(xù)寫)→(續(xù)寫)Carol:worried→______________→_____________________→(續(xù)寫)→(續(xù)寫)David:protective→______________________→______________________→(續(xù)寫)→(續(xù)寫)7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式:賓語從句;非謂語;感嘆句;同位語;完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與自我、人與自然、人與家庭:_________________________________________________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Carolresolvedtosucceed,followingtherecipescarefully.銜接句1———對前面的"makingicecream"提問“Carol制作冰淇淋的過程是否順利?遇到了什么問題?如何解決的?”:HowwasCarol'sprocessofmakingicecream?Didsheencounteranyproblemsandhowdidshesolvethem?過渡句推演:銜接1→?←銜接2銜接句2———對"icecreamresult"提問“冰淇淋最終制作成功了嗎?顧客的反應如何?”:Didtheicecreamsucceedintheendandwhatwasthecustomers'reaction?第二段提示句:Suddenly,Davidarrived,surprisedtoseethescene.銜接3———對"David'sreaction"提問“David看到什么場景感到驚訝?他的態(tài)度發(fā)生了怎樣的變化?”:WhatscenesurprisedDavidandhowdidhisattitudechange?過渡句推演:銜接3→?←主題主題:_________________________________段落構(gòu)思第一段:Carolresolvedtosucceed,followingtherecipescarefully.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:Suddenly,Davidarrived,surprisedtoseethescene.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析角色:Marta(27年家庭主婦,后入職冰淇淋店)、Carol(冰淇淋店女店主)、David(Carol的丈夫,冰淇淋店男店主,負責制作冰淇淋)視角:第三人稱時空線:fromtheneighborhoodicecreamshop(Marta’swork)theshopkitchen/storagearea(Carolworryingabouticecreamsupply)theshopstoreroom(Martasearchingforthekey)請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。WhatwasMarta’spreviousidentityandwhydidshegetajob?:Shewasahomemakerfor27years.Shegotajobtoexperienceanewlifeafterherdaughtersmarriedandherhusbandretired.WhyweretheownersdelightedtohireMarta?:Becausetherewasalaborshortageintheshop.WhathappenedtoDavid?:Hehadthefluandcouldn’tetotheshoptomakeicecream.Whycouldn’tCarolmakeicecreamatfirst?:MakingicecreamwasDavid’sexclusivejob,hewasprotectiveofhismachines,refusedtosharethekeylocation,andCarolworriedshecouldn’tmatchhisskill.HowdidMartahelpCarolfindthekey?:Sheusedalargehorseshoemagnetfromthestoreroomandfoundthekeyhiddeninthebagofsugarbymovingthemagnetaround.WhatwasDavid’sattitudetowardshisicecreammakingjob?:Hewasveryprotectiveofit,nottrustingotherstooperatehismachinesormakeicecream.WhatproblemwereCarolandtheshopfacing?:Davidwasillandcouldn’tmakeicecream,theshopwasatriskofrunningoutoficecream,andCarolcouldn’tmakeitwithoutthekeyandDavid’strust.WhatkindofpersonwasMarta?:Shewasenthusiastic,helpful,resourceful,andencouraging.情節(jié)線:當了27年家庭主婦的Marta在女兒們成家、丈夫退休后,入職了小區(qū)的冰淇淋店并熱愛這份工作。→男店主David感冒,而制作冰淇淋是他的專屬工作,他不愿分享鑰匙且擔心Carol不會操作機器。→Marta鼓勵Carol嘗試,自己則通過馬蹄形磁鐵在糖袋里找到了鑰匙并交給Carol?!ɡm(xù)寫)Carol決心成功,認真按照食譜操作?!ɡm(xù)寫)突然,David來了,看到眼前的景象很驚訝。情感線:Marta:enthusiastic→concerned→resourceful→proud(續(xù)寫)→satisfied(續(xù)寫)Carol:worried→hesitant→determined→relieved(續(xù)寫)→joyful(續(xù)寫)David:protective→stubborn→surprised→impressed(續(xù)寫)→relieved(續(xù)寫)綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:當了27年家庭主婦的Marta在生活變故后入職小區(qū)冰淇淋店,且十分熱愛這份工作。男店主David感冒無法制作冰淇淋,而這是他的專屬工作,他不愿分享鑰匙也不相信妻子Carol能做好。Marta鼓勵Carol并利用磁鐵找到藏在糖袋里的鑰匙,助力Carol嘗試制作冰淇淋。英文:Marta,a27yearhomemaker,gotajobataneighborhoodicecreamshoptoexperienceanewlifeafterherdaughtersmarriedandherhusbandretired.ThemaleownerDavidhadthefluandcouldn’tmakeicecream,whichwashisexclusivejob—herefusedtosharethekeyanddidn’tbelievehiswifeCarolcoulddoit.MartaencouragedCarolandfoundthekeyhiddeninasugarbagwithamagnet,helpingCarolattempttomakeicecream.句式:賓語從句;非謂語;感嘆句;同位語;完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張賓語從句:Carolworriedthattheshopwouldrunoutoficecreamifshecouldn’tmakemore./Davidinsistedthathewouldetomakeicecreamhimselfdespitehisillness.非謂語:Followingtherecipescarefully,Carolstartedtomakeicecreamwithdetermination./Havingsearchedallobviousplaces,Martaturnedtothehorseshoemagnetforhelp.感嘆句:Whatacleverideaitwastouseamagnettofindthehiddenkey!同位語:Marta,aformerhomemakerwith27yearsofexperience,showedgreatresourcefulnessintheshop.完全倒裝:Onthestoreroomshelflayalargehorseshoemagnetthatbecamethekeytosolvingtheproblem.比喻:ThehiddenkeywaslikearayofhopeforCarolandtheicecreamshop.夸張:David’sprotectionofhisicecreammakingjobwassostrongthatheevenrefusedtosharethekeywithhiswife.9.本文屬于人與自我、人與自然、人與家庭:信任與鼓勵能激發(fā)潛能,互助與嘗試讓生活煥發(fā)新可能情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Carolresolvedtosucceed,followingtherecipescarefully.銜接句1———對前面的"makingicecream"提問“Carol制作冰淇淋的過程是否順利?遇到了什么問題?如何解決的?”:HowwasCarol'sprocessofmakingicecream?Didsheencounteranyproblemsandhowdidshesolvethem?Carol’sfirstattemptatadjustingthemachinewasabitawkward,asshewasnotfamiliarwithitsoperation.Whentheicecreammixturewastoothick,shecalmlycheckedtherecipeagainandadjustedthetemperatureslightly,withMartaoccasionallyofferingencouragingwordsfromthecustomerarea.過渡句推演:銜接1→?←銜接2銜接句2———對"icecreamresult"提問“冰淇淋最終制作成功了嗎?顧客的反應如何?”:Didtheicecreamsucceedintheendandwhatwasthecustomers'reaction?Aftersomeefforts,thesmoothandcreamyicecreamwasfinallymade.Customerspraiseditstaste,sayingitwasasdeliciousasDavid’sversion,andtheshopwasfilledwithhappychatter.第二段提示句:Suddenly,Davidarrived,surprisedtoseethescene.銜接3———對"David'sreaction"提問“David看到什么場景感到驚訝?他的態(tài)度發(fā)生了怎樣的變化?”:WhatscenesurprisedDavidandhowdidhisattitudechange?DavidsawCarolservingthefreshlymadeicecreamtocustomers,withemptybowlspilinguponthecounter.Hetastedaspoonfuloftheicecreamandwasamazedbyitsquality.Henolongerinsistedonhisexclusiverighttomakeicecream,andinsteadapologizedtoCarolfornottrustingherability.過渡句推演:銜接3→?←主題主題:信任與鼓勵能打破局限,勇敢嘗試與互助協(xié)作能化解困境,讓彼此都收獲成長段落構(gòu)思第一段:Carolresolvedtosucceed,followingth

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