英語(yǔ)短文寫作句子改錯(cuò)練習(xí)-高級(jí)綜合英語(yǔ)含答案一、練習(xí)題目以下是一篇英文短文，其中包含了一些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤、用詞不當(dāng)、邏輯錯(cuò)誤等問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求，找出錯(cuò)誤并進(jìn)行修改。Thesunroseearlythatmorning,castingagoldenglowovertheentirevillage.Itwasabeautifulday,perfectforapicnic.Wehadpackedavarietyofdeliciousfoods,includingsandwiches,fruits,anddrinks.Theweatherwassunnyandwarm,withagentlebreezeblowing.Wedecidedtogotothepark,wheretherewasalargegrassyareaforustositandenjoyourlunch.Aswearrivedatthepark,wefoundthatitwasalreadycrowdedwithpeople.Manyofthemwereplayingsports,suchassoccerandbasketball.Othersweresimplyrelaxing,readingbooksorchattingwithfriends.Wequicklyfoundaspotunderatreeandbegantosetupourpicnic.Wetookoutourfoodanddrinks,andeveryonestartedtoeatanddrink.Suddenly,agroupofchildrenranuptous.Theyweresmilingandwavingtheirhands."Hello!Canwejoinyou?"oneofthemasked.Wewerehappytoinvitethemtojoinus.Wesharedourfoodanddrinkswiththem,andtheyseemedtoenjoyitverymuch.Aswewereeating,wealsotalkedandlaughedwitheachother.Afterwefinishedourlunch,wedecidedtoplaysomegames.Weplayedtag,hideandseek,andcatch.Thechildrenwereveryexcitedandplayedwithgreatenthusiasm.Weallhadalotoffunandlaughedalot.Itwasaperfectdayforustospendwithourfriendsandfamily.Asthesunbegantoset,weknewitwastimetoleave.Wesaidgoodbyetoournewfriendsandpackedupourthings.Wehadawonderfultimeatthepark,andwewilldefinitelycomebackagain.Thiswasadaywewillneverforget.二、答案及解析1.Thesunroseearlythatmorning,castingagoldenglowovertheentirevillage.修改：Thesunroseearlythatmorning,castingagoldenglowovertheentirevillage.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。2.Itwasabeautifulday,perfectforapicnic.修改：Itwasabeautifulday,perfectforapicnic.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。3.Wehadpackedavarietyofdeliciousfoods,includingsandwiches,fruits,anddrinks.修改：Wehadpackedavarietyofdeliciousfoods,includingsandwiches,fruits,anddrinks.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。4.Theweatherwassunnyandwarm,withagentlebreezeblowing.修改：Theweatherwassunnyandwarm,withagentlebreezeblowing.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。5.Wedecidedtogotothepark,wheretherewasalargegrassyareaforustositandenjoyourlunch.修改：Wedecidedtogotothepark,wheretherewasalargegrassyareaforustositandenjoyourlunch.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。6.Aswearrivedatthepark,wefoundthatitwasalreadycrowdedwithpeople.修改：Aswearrivedatthepark,wefoundthatitwasalreadycrowdedwithpeople.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。7.Manyofthemwereplayingsports,suchassoccerandbasketball.Othersweresimplyrelaxing,readingbooksorchattingwithfriends.修改：Manyofthemwereplayingsports,suchassoccerandbasketball.Othersweresimplyrelaxing,readingbooksorchattingwithfriends.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。8.Wequicklyfoundaspotunderatreeandbegantosetupourpicnic.修改：Wequicklyfoundaspotunderatreeandbegantosetupourpicnic.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。9.Wetookoutourfoodanddrinks,andeveryonestartedtoeatanddrink.修改：Wetookoutourfoodanddrinks,andeveryonestartedtoeatanddrink.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。10.Suddenly,agroupofchildrenranuptous.Theyweresmilingandwavingtheirhands.修改：Suddenly,agroupofchildrenranuptous.Theyweresmilingandwavingtheirhands.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。11."Hello!Canwejoinyou?"oneofthemasked.修改："Hello!Canwejoinyou?"oneofthemasked.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。12.Wewerehappytoinvitethemtojoinus.修改：Wewerehappytoinvitethemtojoinus.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。13.Wesharedourfoodanddrinkswiththem,andtheyseemedtoenjoyitverymuch.修改：Wesharedourfoodanddrinkswiththem,andtheyseemedtoenjoyitverymuch.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。14.Aswewereeating,wealsotalkedandlaughedwitheachother.修改：Aswewereeating,wealsotalkedandlaughedwitheachother.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。15.Afterwefinishedourlunch,wedecidedtoplaysomegames.修改：Afterwefinishedourlunch,wedecidedtoplaysomegames.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。16.Weplayedtag,hideandseek,andcatch.Thechildrenwereveryexcitedandplayedwithgreatenthusiasm.修改：Weplayedtag,hideandseek,andcatch.Thechildrenwereveryexcitedandplayedwithgreatenthusiasm.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。17.Weallhadalotoffunandlaughedalot.修改：Weallhadalotoffunandlaughedalot.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。18.Itwasaperfectdayforustospendwithourfriendsandfamily.修改：Itwasaperfectdayforustospendwithourfriendsandfamily.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。19.Asthesunbegantoset,weknewitwastimetoleave.修改：Asthesunbegantoset,weknewitwastimetoleave.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。20.Wesaidgoodbyetoournewfriendsandpackedupourthings.修改：Wesaidgoodbyetoournewfriendsandpackedupourthings.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。21.Wehadawonderfultimeatthepark,andwewilldefinitelycomebackagain.修改：Wehadawonderfultimeatthepark,andwewilldefinitelycomebackagain.解析：此處無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。22.Thiswasadaywewillneverfo