讀后續(xù)寫微技巧之“動(dòng)作描寫”Part1·構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈條的句式一、A,BandC（連詞連接動(dòng)詞們）e.g.“她抱住兒子”抱住兒子=

沖向前

+

蹲下

+

一把抱住She

rushedforward,

bentdown

and

gathered

herson

into

herarms.“這個(gè)歌手唱歌”

歌手唱歌=

掃視觀眾+

深吸一口氣+開始演唱

Thesinger

glancedat

theaudience,

took

adeepbreathandbeganto

sing.二、使用非謂語(yǔ)（1）-ing現(xiàn)在分詞，凸顯主動(dòng)，同一對(duì)象同時(shí)發(fā)生不同的動(dòng)作?！袄先遂o坐”老人靜坐=坐在夕陽(yáng)下+

看報(bào)紙+

聽廣播Theoldmansatunderthesunset,

reading

thenewspaperand

listening

totheradio.（2）-ed過(guò)去分詞，凸顯被動(dòng)“孩子們哭了”感動(dòng)哭了=被感動(dòng)+哭了

Deeplymoved

bythestory,thechildrenbeganto

cry.Part2一、“笑”動(dòng)作描寫1.smile

v.&n.微笑smileatsb./sth.

對(duì)..笑；smilewithrelief寬慰地笑；smilesweetly嫣然一笑；smilefromeartoear笑得合不攏嘴giveacharmingsmile

迷人的微笑；crackabrightsmile

綻放明亮的笑容；forcea

smile強(qiáng)顏歡笑2.laugh

v.&n.大笑laugha

hearty

laugh開懷大笑；laugh

behindtheirhands

用手捂著嘴笑；explodewithlaughter=roarwithlaughter哄堂大笑；burstintolaughter=burstoutlaughing突然大笑起來(lái)；roarsoflaughter大笑3.grinv.&n.露齒而笑，咧著嘴笑grinwithdelight

高興的咧嘴而笑；grin

fromeartoear

笑得合不攏嘴4.giggle=chuckle

v.&n.

咯咯笑giggleatsb/sth傻笑...；afitof

thegiggles一陣笑聲5.mock

v.嘲笑mock=laughat=sneerat=makefunof二、“哭”動(dòng)作描寫weep-wept抽泣；sob-sobbed啜泣；cry大哭；wail哀嚎、慟哭；squallv.嚎啕大哭burstintotears=burstoutcrying突然哭起來(lái)fightbacktears抑制住淚水beclosetotears快要哭了tearsrolldown/streamdownone'scheeks淚水順著臉頰淌下來(lái)tearscloud/fill/wellup/brimone’seyes淚水模糊/溢出雙眼(Hisface/cheeks)beintears=befilledwithtears=bebrimmingwithtears=bewetwithtears

淚流滿面makesomebodycry讓某人哭sobone'sheartout

痛徹心扉地哭三、“說(shuō)”動(dòng)作描寫普通的說(shuō)：（1）告訴tellsbsth=tellsthtosb（2）talkwith/tosbaboutsth（3）say=utterShesatonthesofa,saying….（4）chatwithsb和sb聊天嘟囔，低語(yǔ)：whisper/murmur/mumble（含糊地說(shuō)）；whispersthtosbinalowvoice結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說(shuō)：stutter/stammer問(wèn)與答：ask詢問(wèn)/answer回答/replyto回復(fù)/respondto回復(fù)喊叫：call/shout/yell/cryout哭喊/scream尖叫/exclaim驚叫/howl嚎叫/roar咆哮呻吟：moan哽咽：choke嘆氣：sigh其他的說(shuō)：add補(bǔ)充說(shuō)道/continue繼續(xù)說(shuō)道/acknowledge承認(rèn)說(shuō)explain解釋說(shuō)/state陳述說(shuō)/mention提到說(shuō)/repeat重復(fù)說(shuō)protest抗議說(shuō)//insist堅(jiān)持說(shuō)/sob哭訴說(shuō)/complain抱怨說(shuō)agree同意地說(shuō)/comfort安慰說(shuō)/persuade勸說(shuō)announce/declare宣布說(shuō)promise/assure保證說(shuō)suggest/advice建議說(shuō)四、“看”動(dòng)作描寫看：lookatsb/sth；seesb/sthdoing看到sb/sth正在做盯：stareatsb/sth(withhiseyeswideopen)（瞪大眼睛）盯著glareatsb怒目而視瞥：glanceatsb/sth；glancearound匆匆環(huán)視四周glimpse一瞥；giveaglimpseofsb/sth注意：noticesb/sthdoing注意到sb/sth正在做觀察：observe；observecarefully/withattention發(fā)現(xiàn)：spot；sb/sthwasspotted.被發(fā)現(xiàn)看見：catchsightof；losesightof看不見sthcameintosight.sth進(jìn)入視野；sthisoutofsight/insight.sth看不見五、身體部位動(dòng)作描寫（一）頭部動(dòng)作描寫1.Hehung/dropped/lowered/bowedhisheadinshame.他羞愧地低下了頭。2.Theynoddedtheirheadsinagreement.

他們點(diǎn)頭同意。3.Sheshookherheadindisbelief.她懷疑地?fù)u搖頭。4.Hescratchedhisheadwithashysmile.他害羞的笑著撓了撓頭。5.Heput/heldhisheadinhishands,greatlyannoyed.他雙手抱頭，十分生氣。（二）臉部動(dòng)作描寫1.eyesHiseyesshone/sparkled/glimmered/glittered/twinkledwith+excitement/pride等表示感情色彩的名詞Hiseyeswerewide/grewwide/widenedwithhorror.他驚恐地瞪大了眼睛。2.face/cheeksHerfacelightedup/brightenedwithexcitement,when....當(dāng)...，他的臉上煥發(fā)出了興奮的光彩。Abrightsmileappearedon/spreadacross/crossedhisface.他的臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。Hisfaceflushed/burned/turnedredwithembarrassment.他窘得滿臉通紅。Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.他因?yàn)樾呃⒍械侥橆a發(fā)燒。Hefeltthebloodrushingtohisface.他感覺到血液上涌。Herfaceturnedpalewithfright.她嚇得臉都變白了。Hisfacesuddenlygrewserious.他的表情突然嚴(yán)肅起來(lái)。Hisfacelookedalittleconfused.他看起來(lái)有點(diǎn)因惑。Hehadaslightfrownonhisface.他愁眉不展。Hekissedheronbothcheeks.他親了親她的臉頰。（三）手部動(dòng)作描寫1.打：pound/punch猛擊；beat連續(xù)擊打；slap打耳光；tap/pat輕拍2.抓：seize；grasp；grab；catch/takeholdofHegraspedtheropewithbothhands.他雙手抓著繩子。3.夠reach伸手夠；Hereachedforherhandandheldittightly.

他伸手夠她的手并緊緊握住。Shesmiledandreachoutahandinwelcome.她笑著伸出一只手表示歡迎。Hereachedoutahandandcaughtholdof/grabbedherarm.他伸出一只手，抓住她的手臂。4.其他的動(dòng)作pull拉；push推；press按壓；roll搖；pickup撿；drag拽；pinch捏；wipe擦；rub揉；scratch撓hand-in-hand；holdhands手拉手spreadone’shand攤開手waveone’shandscrazily/madly/wildly拼命揮手clapone’shands拍手handsthtosb把某物遞給某人holdone’shand握住某人的手Hishandstrembledwithfear/excitement.他的手害怕地/激動(dòng)地顫抖。（四）臂部動(dòng)作描寫1.stretchone’sarms伸展雙臂welcomesb.withopenarms.張開雙臂歡迎你。Heopenedhisarmswithabroadsmile.他咧開嘴，張開雙臂。2.waveone’sarms.揮舞著手臂。3.fold/crossone’sarms雙手交叉Hestoodtherewithcrossedarms,lookingangry.他站在那里，雙手交叉抱在胸前，看上去很生氣。Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.她雙手交叉，盯著他看。4.arminarm手挽手Theywalkedalongarminarm.他們手挽手一起走。5.hug/hold/embracesbinone’sarms擁抱Heranuptoherandputhisarmsaroundher.他向她跑去，雙手抱著她。Hehuggedhissonintohisarmstightlyandkissedhim.他緊緊地抱住他的兒子并且吻了他。（五）心臟動(dòng)作描寫1.心跳加速M(fèi)yheartbeatquickly/violently/wildly.我心跳加速。Myheartraced.我心跳加速。Myheartbegantothumpwildly.我的心開始狂跳起來(lái)。Herheartwaspoundingwithexcitement.她的心激動(dòng)地砰砰直跳2.心碎Inside,hisheartwasslowlybreaking.在內(nèi)心，他的心在慢慢地碎裂。3.心融化Hiscoldheartbegantomeltslowly.他冰冷的心開始慢慢融化了。4.心跳停一拍Herheartseemedtomiss/skipabeat.

我的心跳仿佛停了一下。Thisstorymademyheartskipabeatandbroughttearstomyeyes.

故事讓我的心停跳一拍，然后讓我哭。5.心痛Herwordsstungmyheart.她的話刺痛了我的心。Withaheavy/sinking/brokenheart,shesaidgoodbyetohim.她和他告別，心很沉重/心碎了。MyheartachedwhenIthinkoftheirsorrow.

當(dāng)我想到他們的悲痛時(shí)，我的心很痛。6.其他Hesetoffwithalightheart.他出發(fā)了，心情很輕松。Justfollowyourheartandyou'llbehappy.聽從你的內(nèi)心，你才會(huì)快樂(lè)。Finally,hebrokedownintearsandpouredouthishearttoher.他忍不住痛哭，向她傾訴了他的心聲。（六）腿部動(dòng)作描寫1.走creep/sneakupthestairs躡手躡腳地上樓；creepupon...悄悄靠近...；slipinto/outof悄悄溜進(jìn)/溜出slip/sneakinto/outof...溜進(jìn)/出...skip