UNIT4寫作能力提升練

《青春校園》校報正在征稿，題目是“HowI’veChanged!”，請你根據(jù)下面的要點提示寫一篇英語短文介紹你的變化。要點:1.從外貌、性格、愛好三個方面描述你的變化；2.介紹你的一個重要變化、變化過程及原因。［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。［遣詞造句］1.我過去羞澀并且安靜。Iusedto______________________.2.我愛交際并且喜歡交朋友。I’moutgoingand_______________________.3.我已經(jīng)愛上了讀書。Ihave______________________reading.就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點完成句子。beshyandquietliketomakefriendsfalleninlovewith4.在我的人生中最重要的變化就是我對讀書產(chǎn)生了興趣。ThemostimportantchangeinmylifeisthatI________________________________________.5.讀書給我很多知識并且讓我很快樂。Readinggivesmealotofknowledgeand__________________________.becomeinterestedinreadingmakesmeveryhappyHowI’veChanged!Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeshort,butnowI’moneofthetalleststudentsinmyclass.Iusedtobeshyandquiet,butnowI’moutgoingandIliketomakefriends.Iusedtohatereading,butnowIhavefalleninlovewithit.ThemostimportantchangeinmylifeisthatIbecomeinterestedinreading.Lastsummermybestfriendgavemeaninterestingbooktoread.IenjoyeditsomuchthatIstartedtoreadotherbooks.Itisthemostimportantchangeformebecausereadinggivesmealotofknowledgeandmakesmeveryhappy.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Booksaretheladderofhumanprogress.”［連句成篇］1.思路清晰，本文采用了“總-分”結(jié)構(gòu)。2.連接詞運用恰當(dāng)，尤其是but,because的運用為作文增彩。3.正確運用一些短語，比如：inthelastfewyears,usedto,makefriends,oneof...,fallinlovewith等使文章更為豐富精彩。4.最高級以及諺語等的運用成為文章的加分點。高分點評：上周你們班召開了一次“告別陋習(xí)，走向文明”的主題班會，會上老師讓你們談?wù)勆磉呁瑢W(xué)的變化。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容，寫一篇有關(guān)王明同學(xué)的短文。要求:詞數(shù)80左右。過去的表現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)經(jīng)常和同學(xué)打架與同學(xué)相處融洽 花很多時間玩電腦游戲積極參加各項活動經(jīng)常吃垃圾食品 健康的生活習(xí)慣 在課堂上吃東西、睡覺認真聽講，按時完成作業(yè)考試不及格各門學(xué)科學(xué)得很好________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WangMingismyclassmate.Hehasmadegreatprogressthisterm.Inthepast,思路分析：1.開篇點題引出同學(xué)的巨大進步。2.第二段具體介紹其過去。3.最后寫其現(xiàn)在的變化。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WangMingismyclassmate.Hehasmadegreatprogressthisterm.Inthepast,heoftenfoughtwithothers.Heusedtospendalotoftimeplayingcomputergames.Andheoftenatejunkfood.Inclass,heeitherateorslept,sohecouldneverpassanyexams.Butnow,hehaschangedalot.Hecangetonwellwiththeotherstudents.Henotonlytakesanactivepartinallkindsofactivities,butalso