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撒謊讀后續(xù)寫好句積累Eight-year-oldLilywasacuriouslittlegirlwholovedexploringtheworldaroundher.Oneday,Lily'smotheraskedhertogotothestoretobuysomegroceries.Excitedbythethoughtofbeingresponsible,Lilyhappilywalkedalongthestreets,hersmallstepsfilledwithpurposeandenthusiasm.Thesunwasshining,andtheairwasfilledwiththescent(香味)offreshlybakedbreadfromthenearbybakery,addingtoherexcitement.AsLilywalkedintothestore,shenoticedabeautifulcontainerofpinkcandiesonthecashier'sdesk.Thecandieswerewrappedinsparklingwrappers,andtheyseemedtocallouttoher.Shereallywantedtobuythem.However,therewasoneproblem—shedidn'thaveenoughmoneytopay.Then,Lilycameupwithanidea.Shetoldherselfitwasjustalittlewhitelieandthatnoonewouldeverknow.Itseemedlikeasimplesolutiontoherdilemma(困境).Shequicklyputthecandiesintohershoppingbagandpaidforthegroceries,hopingthathersecretwouldbesafe.Thatevening,Lilycouldn'thelpbutfeelregretfulinherheart.Theexcitementofthedayhadfaded,replacedbyaheavyfeelingofguilt.Sheknewthatwhatshehaddonewasn'tright.Herconscience(良知)waseatingawayather,causinghertolosesleepandfeelrestless.

Thecandies,onceasourceofjoy,nowsatheavilyinherstomach,areminderofheractions.Thenextmorning,Lily'smothernoticedherdaughter'stroubledexpressionandaskedherwhatwaswrong.Lilyhesitatedforamoment,theweightofhersecretalmosttoomuchtobear.Butthen,thetruthpouredoutofhermouthlikeawaterfall."Mom,Ihavesomethingtotellyou,"Lilysaid,tearswellingupinhereyes."Itooksomecandiesfromthestorewithoutpayingforthem.I'mreallysorry."Hervoicewassmall,butthesincerityinherwordswasclear.Hermother'sfacesoftened,andshepulledLilyintoawarmhug."Lily,Iamproudofyoufortellingmethetruth,"hermothersaidgently."Butit'simportanttounderstandthatlying,evenaboutsomethingsmall,canhurtothersandourselves.Let'sgobacktothestoreandmakethingsright."句式歸納1.Excitedbythethoughtofbeingresponsible,Lilyhappilywalkedalongthestreets,hersmallstepsfilledwithpurposeandenthusiasm.2.Thesunwasshining,andtheairwasfilledwiththescent(香味)offreshlybakedbreadfromthenearbybakery,addingtoherexcitement.3.Thatevening,Lilycouldn'thelpbutfeelregretfulinherheart.Theexcitementofthedayhadfaded,replacedbyaheavyfeelingofguilt.4.Herconscience(良知)waseatingawayather,causinghertolosesleepandfeelrestless.5.Thecandies,onceasourceofjoy,nowsatheavilyinherstomach,areminderofheractions.6.Hervoicewassmall,butthesincerityinherwordswasclear.1.情緒誘因+動作描寫+伴隨狀語(動作特征+情緒)2.環(huán)境描寫+感官細(xì)節(jié)+情緒烘托3.時間過渡+情緒對比4.擬人(情緒折磨)+結(jié)果狀語(生理/心理反應(yīng))5.物品+今昔情感對比+象征意義6.聲音特征+轉(zhuǎn)折+情感特質(zhì)仿寫練習(xí)1.情緒誘因+動作描寫+伴隨狀語(動作特征+情緒)校園競賽語境:想到能贏得比賽,湯姆興奮不已,沿著跑道快速奔跑,步伐里滿是堅(jiān)定與急切。Excitedbythethoughtofwinningtherace,Tomquicklyranalongthetrack,hisfaststepsfilledwithdeterminationandeagerness.親情離別語境:想到要離開奶奶,露西滿心難過,沿著小巷(lane)慢慢走著,步伐里滿是不舍與悲傷。Saddenedbythethoughtofleavinggrandma,Lucyslowlywalkedalongthelane,herslowstepsfilledwithreluctanceandsorrow.2.環(huán)境描寫+感官細(xì)節(jié)+情緒烘托校園競賽語境:體育場燈亮著,空氣中滿是看臺(stand)上的歡呼聲,更添了他的緊張。戶外冒險語境:雨停了,空氣中滿是山間小路濕泥土的氣味,更添了他們的放松。Thestadiumlightswereon,andtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofcheersfromthestands,addingtohisnervousness.Therainstopped,andtheairwasfilledwiththesmellofwetearthfromthemountainpath,addingtotheirrelief.3.時間過渡+情緒對比校園考試語境:那天晚上,湯姆心里滿是焦慮。白天的自信早已消散,取而代之的是沉重的擔(dān)憂。友情誤解語境:那個周末,杰克心里滿是孤獨(dú)。吵架時的驕傲早已消散,取而代之的是空洞的(hollow)難過。Thatnight,Tomcouldn'thelpbutfeelanxiousinhisheart.Theconfidenceofthedayhadfaded,replacedbyaheavyfeelingofworry.Thatweekend,Jackcouldn'thelpbutfeellonelyinhisheart.Theprideofthefighthadfaded,replacedbyahollowfeelingofsadness.4.擬人(情緒折磨)+結(jié)果狀語(生理/心理反應(yīng))校園作弊語境:作弊被抓的恐懼折磨著他,讓他盯著試卷發(fā)呆,心神不寧。親情隱瞞語境:對爸爸撒謊的愧疚折磨著她,讓她回避眼神交流,坐立不安。Thefearofbeingcaughtwaseatingawayathim,causinghimtostareatthepaperandfeeldistracted.TheguiltoflyingtoDadwaseatingawayather,causinghertoavoideyecontactandfeeluneasy.5.物品+今昔情感對比+象征意義友情和解語境:那本相冊,曾是歡笑的源泉,如今沉重地捧在她手里,提醒著她逝去的友情。戶外冒險語境:那張地圖,曾是希望的源泉,如今沉重地攤在潮濕的巖石上,提醒著他們出發(fā)前未查看天氣預(yù)報的失誤。Thephotoalbum,onceasourceoflaughter,nowrestedheavilyinherhands,areminderoftheirlostfriendship.Themap,onceasourceofhope,nowlayheavilyonthedamprock,areminderoftheirfailuretochecktheweatherforecastbeforesettingoff.6.聲音特征+轉(zhuǎn)折+情感特質(zhì)親情告白語境:她的聲音很輕柔,但話語里的愛意卻十分真切。友情和解語境:他的聲音沙啞(hoarse),但話語里的歉意卻一目了然。Hervoicewassoft,buttheloveinherwordswasclear.Hisvoicewashoarse,buttheapologyinhiswordswasclear.plotlineandemotionlineplotline:beginning:媽媽讓8歲的Lily去商店買一些食品雜貨,她歡快地去了;development:Lily在買食品雜貨的時候,偷偷拿了柜臺上誘人的糖果→到了晚上,Lily開始后悔,內(nèi)心開始備受良知的折磨;climax:第二天早上,Lily把真相告訴了媽媽,媽媽表揚(yáng)了她的誠實(shí),并鼓勵她去商店糾正自己的錯誤;ending:Lily和媽媽很快來到了那家商店……→從那天起,Lily明白了誠實(shí)的重要性……emotionline:興奮的(excited)→不誠實(shí)的(alittlewhitelie)→后悔、內(nèi)疚、坐立不安(regretful,aheavyfeelingofguilt,restless)→抱歉(tears,sorry)→?續(xù)寫Shortly,Lilyandhermotherwereatthestore.Fromthatdayon,Lilyunderstoodtheimportanceoftellingthetruth.ApologyandforgivenessWhatisimportance?Whatwillshedointhefuture?Whatdidshelearn?Shortly,Lilyandhermotherwereatthestore.Lily’sheartwaspounding,buthermothergaveherthecouragesheneeded.Theyapproachedthecashierdesk,andwithatremblingvoice,Lilyexplainedwhatshehaddoneandadmittedhermistake.Thestoreowner,surprisedbythelittlegirl’shonesty,smiledkindlyandpraisedherforherintegrity.Heevengaveherabagofcandiesasarewardforherbraveryandhonesty.Lily’sfacelitupwithreliefandgratitudeasshehandedoverthemoney,feelingaheavyweightliftoffhershoulders.范文賞析+句式改寫RewritethesentencesofthearticlebasedonthesentencepatternsShortly,Lilyandhermotherwereatthestore.Lily’sheartwaspounding,buthermothergaveherthecouragesheneeded.Theyapproachedthecashierdesk,andwithatremblingvoice,Lilyexplainedwhatshehaddoneandadmittedhermistake.Thestoreowner,surprisedbythelittlegirl’shonesty,smiledkindlyandpraisedherforherintegrity.Heevengaveherabagofcandiesasarewardforherbraveryandhonesty.Lily’sfacelitupwithreliefandgratitudeasshehandedoverthemoney,feelingaheavyweightliftoffhershoulders.Frightenedbythethoughtofbeingcriticized,Lilyslowlyandhesitantlyapproachedthecashierdesk,eachstepstepfilledwithunease.Lily’sfacelitup,andasshehandedoverthemoney,thesenseofguiltlingeringinhermindallnighthadfaded.,replacedbyalight,warmfeelingofreliefandgratitude.由于害怕受到批評,莉莉小心翼翼、戰(zhàn)戰(zhàn)兢兢地走向收銀臺,每一步都充滿了不安。莉莉的臉上露出了笑容,當(dāng)她把錢遞出去時,整晚縈繞在她心頭的內(nèi)疚感已經(jīng)消散了,取而代之的是一種輕松、溫暖的解脫感和感激之情。Shortly,Lilyandhermotherwereatthestore.Frightenedbythethoughtofbeingcriticized,Lilyslowlyandhesitantlyapproachedthecashierdesk,eachstepstepfilledwithunease.Lily’sheartwaspoundingquickly,buthermothergaveherthecourageandencouragedhertofixwhatshehaddone.Takingadeepbreath,Lilygatheredupallhercourage,explainedeverythingandadmittedhermistake,withatremblingvoice.Thestoreowner,surprisedbythelittlegirl’shonesty,smiledkindlyandpraisedherforherintegrity.Heevengaveherabagofcandiesasarewardforherbraveryandhonesty.Lily’sfacelitupandasshehandedoverthemoney,thesenseofguiltlingeringinhermindallnighthadfaded.,replacedbyalight,warmfeelingofreliefandgratitude.Fromthatdayon,Lilyunderstoodtheimportanceoftellingthetruth.Theexperiencetaughtherthathonesty,evenwhenit'sdifficult,isalwaysthebestpolicy.Shelearnedthatwhilemistakesarepartoflife,it'showwecorrectthemthatbuildsupourcharacter.Lily'smother'ssupportandthestoreowner'sunderstandingleftalastingimpressiononher.Shepromisednevertolet"alittlewhitelie"cloudherjudgmentagain.Thepinkcandiesincidentremainedapreciousmemory,andareminderofthepowerofthetruthandthewarmthofamother'sloveinguidingherthroughlife'slessons.Itwasnottoeasetheguiltweighingonourhearts,buttoliveuptoothers'trustandensurethateveryrelationshipwasbuiltonasolidfoundationoftruth.這并非是為了減輕我們心頭的愧疚感,而是為了不辜負(fù)他人的信任,并確保每一段關(guān)系都能建立在真實(shí)可靠的基礎(chǔ)之上。每當(dāng)她必須在隱瞞真相與坦誠相告之間做出選擇時,粉色糖果的回憶以及那個不眠之夜的場景便會立刻浮現(xiàn)在腦海中,引導(dǎo)她做出

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