UNIT7寫作能力提升練假如你叫李華，最近你和你的父母就“周末學(xué)生該不該與同學(xué)外出活動(dòng)”進(jìn)行了討論。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以“Shouldteenagersgooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends?”為話題，參照表內(nèi)所提供的信息，寫一篇80~100詞的英語短文。［審題指導(dǎo)］1.體裁:議論文2.人稱:第一人稱，第三人稱3.時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主［思路點(diǎn)撥］RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends.Myparentsthinkthatteenagersshouldstayathometogoovertheirlessons.Andtheyshouldhaveenoughtimetohaveagoodsleep.Meanwhile,theyshouldhelptheirparentsdosomehouseworkiftheyarefree.［精彩范文］Inmyopinion,weteenagersshouldbeallowedtogooutwithourfriendsforfunsothatwecanrelaxourselves.Andwecanalsotakesomeexercisetogethertokeepfit.What’smore,wecanalsoshareideaswitheachotherandopenupourmind.Allinall,Ithinkweshouldbeallowedtogooutwithourfriendsonweekends.1.本文思路清晰，采用了“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu)，即開篇引出話題、介紹父母與自己各自的觀點(diǎn)、總結(jié)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.連接詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，尤其是and,meanwhile,inmyopinion,what’smore,allinall等的運(yùn)用為作文增彩。3.正確運(yùn)用一些短語，比如：haveadiscussionwith,keepfit,share...witheachother,openupourmind等使文章更為豐富精彩。4.文中if條件狀語從句、sothat目的狀語從句，賓語從句以及被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)的使用等成為文章的加分點(diǎn)。高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：下面句子均有1、2處錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)找出并改正。1.Idon’tthink17-year-oldsshouldallowtodrive.__________________________________________________2.I’mworryaboutyoursafety._________________________________________________Idon'tthink17-year-oldsshouldbeallowedtodrive.I'mworriedaboutyoursafety.3.They’reoldenoughmaketheirowndecisions._________________________________________________4.Iunderstandthis,butIseriousaboutrunning._________________________________________________5.Heshouldstopwearthosesillyearring._________________________________________________They'reoldenoughtomaketheirowndecisions.Iunderstandthis,butI'mseriousaboutrunning.Heshouldstopwearingthosesillyearrings.目前，隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的家庭有了汽車，于是很多中學(xué)生想開車。盡管法律、父母不允許，可他們依然我行我素。請(qǐng)你以“Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsbeallowedtodrive?”為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容包括:1.喜歡開車的理由：很酷；炫耀；出行方便；2.不能開車的理由：太危險(xiǎn)；不能很好地控制自己；沒有駕照。要求:80~100詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsbeallowedtodrive?【思路分析】首段點(diǎn)題——(越來越多的家庭有汽車)引起下文。第二段具體說明一些中學(xué)生想要開車的理由(很酷；炫耀；出行方便)。第三段說明中學(xué)生不能開車的理由(太危險(xiǎn)；不能很好地控制自己；沒有駕照)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsbeallowedtodrive?Nowmoreandmorefamilieshavecars.Shouldmiddleschoolstudentsbeallowedtodrive?Somestudentsthinktheyshouldbeallowedtodrive.First,theythinkit'sverycooltodriveacar.Second,theywanttoshowoff.Third,theythinkit'sconvenienttodrivewhentheygosightseeingorvisitfriends.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ButIdon'tthinkmiddleschoolstudentsshouldbeallowedtodrive.First,it'svery