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高中英語讀后續(xù)寫片段描寫限時(shí)練05

一、緊張緩解類(動(dòng)作+心理)

?緊張表現(xiàn):Sb/shands+動(dòng)作(shook/fumblcd)+assb.+具體行為(reachedfor/unfolded)

+物品,throatgoingdry

,緩解轉(zhuǎn)折：Until+觸發(fā)事件(sb.spoke/asoundcame)+,andawaveof+舒緩情緒

(calm/relief)+動(dòng)作(washed/settled)+oversb.

1.原句：.throatgoingdryatthethought

ofhowmuchthistestmattered.

翻譯：她伸手去拿試卷時(shí)，雙手在發(fā)抖；一想到這場(chǎng)考試有多重要，她的喉嚨就發(fā)緊。

2.原句：Untilherdeskmatewhispered"You'vegotthisM>and

翻譯：直到同桌輕聲說“你可以的"，一股平靜的感覺涌上心頭，讓她穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地握住了筆。

答案：

1.Herhandsshookasshereachedfortheexampaper

2.awaveofcalmwashedDverher,helpinghergripherpensteadily.

段落一(緊張表現(xiàn)+緩解轉(zhuǎn)折)

Lunastoodbackstage,herfingerstwistingtheedgeofherdancecostume.Tonightwasher

firstsoloperformance,andeverytimeshethoughtaboutsteppingontothestage,herheartraced.

Herhandsshookasshereachedforthewaterbottleonthetable,(1)

(一想到成百上千雙眼睛盯著自己，她的喉嚨就發(fā)緊).She

tookatinysip,butherhandsstilltrembled-whatifsheforgotthesteps?(2)

(直到舞蹈老師走過來，把溫暖的手放在她肩上)，

andsaid,veseenyoupracticeahundredtimes-you'reready."(3)

(一股平靜的感覺涌上心頭，讓她穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地握住了水

瓶).Shetookadeepbreath,feelingthetensioninhershouldersmeltawayasthestagelights

flickeredtosignalherturn.

答案：

(1)throatgoingdryatthethoughtofhundredsofeyeswatchingher

(2)Untilherdanceteacherwalkedover,placingawarmhandonhershoulder

(3)Awaveofcalmwashedoverher,helpinghergripthebottlesteadily

段落二(緊張表現(xiàn)+緩解轉(zhuǎn)折)

Tomsatinthewaitingroomofthemusiccompetition,hisguitarcaserestingonhislap.He'd

practicedthemelodyformonths,butnowthathisnamewasabouttobecalled,hismindwent

blank.Hishandsshookasheunfoldedthesheetmusiche'dbroughtforalast-ininute

review/1)(-*想到要在評(píng)委面前演奏，他的

喉嚨就發(fā)緊).Hestaredatthenotes,buttheyjustlookedlikemessylines一hadhereally

memorizedallofthem?(2)(宜到坐在旁邊的小女孩

遞給他一根棒棒糖)，saying,“Mymomsayscandymakesnervesgoaway.”(3)

__________________________________________(一-股平靜的感覺涌上心頭,讓他穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地握住

T樂譜)Hesmiled,takingthelollipop,andsuddenlythenotesstartedtomakesenseagain-he

knewthissong,andhecouldplayit.

答案：

(1)throatgoingdryatthethoughtofplayinginfrontofthejudges

(2)Untilalittlegirlsittingnexttohimhandedhimalollipop

(3)Awaveofcalmwashedoverhim,helpinghimgripthesheetmusicsteadily.

二、溫暖傳遞類(動(dòng)作+環(huán)境)

?傳遞動(dòng)作:Sb.+輕柔動(dòng)作(handed/wrapped)+物品(ablanket/acup)+tosb.else,

saying+簡(jiǎn)短話語

?環(huán)境烘托:With+環(huán)境細(xì)節(jié)(thefirecrackling/thesunshining)+,thewarmthof+物

品/行為+動(dòng)作(spread/seeped)+intosb/sbones

1.原句：.saying"Don'tstayout

luolong—yourhandsarcfirczing.M

翻譯：媽媽把一條厚毯子裹在她肩上，說“別在外面待太久，你的手都凍僵了”。

2.原句：Withthefirecracklinginthefireplace,.

chasingawaythewinterchill.

翻譯：壁爐里的火除啪作響，毯子的暖意滲進(jìn)她的骨子里，驅(qū)散了冬日的寒冷。

答案：

1.Momwrappedathickblanketaroundhershoulders

2.thewarmthoftheblanketseepedintoherbones

段落一(傳遞動(dòng)作+環(huán)境烘托)

Lilyhuddledbythewindow,watchingthesnowfalloutside—herfingerswereredfrom

pressingagainstthecoldglass,andshe'dforgottentograbasweaterbeforecomingdownstairs.

Justthen,hergrandmawalkedover,holdingaknittedscarfinherhands.(1)

(奶奶把圍巾繞在莉莉脖子上),tuckingtheendsgentlyunderherchin,

saying“Thiswasyourmom'swhenshewasyourage-il'IIkeepyouextrawarm."With(he

snowflakesdancingoutsideandthehotcocoagrandmahadsetonthewindowsillsteaming,

(2)(圍巾的暖意滲進(jìn)莉莉的骨子里),chasingawaythe

coldthathadclungtohershoulders.Lilyleanedagainsthergrandma*sside,smilingasshe

breathedinthescarf'ssoft,woollyscent.

答案：

(I)GrandmawrappedthescarfaroundLily'sneck

(2)(hewarmthofthescarfseepedintoherbones

段落二(傳遞動(dòng)作+環(huán)境烘托)

Afterwaitingforthebusinthewindfor20minutes,Tom'shandsweresocoldhecould

barelyflexhisfingers.Herubbedthemtogether,(1)

(往掌心哈著熱氣)，whentheoldladynexttohimpulledapairofthickgloves

fromherbag.(2)(她把手套

遞給湯姆，輕輕拍了拍他的胳膊),sayinguTakethese—myhandsdon'tgetcoldeasily,andyou

looklikeyouneed(hemmore."Withthebusfinallyroundingthecomerand(heafternoonsun

peekingthroughtheclouds,⑶(手套的暖意滲進(jìn)湯姆

的骨子里)，makinghisfingerstingleasfeelingcameback.Hethankedtheladyrepeatedly,and

wiicnhepulonthegloves,heIcllnotjustphysicalwannlh,(4)

(還有一份溫柔的善意，讓這段寒冷的等待也變得值得)

答案：

(1)blowingwarmaironhispalms

(2)Shehandedthegloves(oTom,pattinghisarmlightly

(3)thewarmthoftheglovesspreadintoTom'sbones

(4)butasoftkindnessthatmadethecoldwaitfeelworthit.

三、失落振作類(心理+動(dòng)作)

?失落狀態(tài):Sb.+消極動(dòng)作(slumped/sat)+,staringat+觸發(fā)物(thebrokentoy/theempty

seat)+,eyescloudedwith+情緒(sadness/disappointment)

?振作契機(jī)：Then+觸發(fā)事件(sb.appeared/somethingcaughtsb.'seye)+，andaspark

of+積極情緒(determination/hope)+動(dòng)作(lit/sprung)+insb/schest

I.原句：Heslumpedonthebench,____________________________________________________

—he'dpracticedsohardforthegame.

翻譯：他癱坐在長椅上，盯著壞掉的籃球框，眼里滿是失望一一為了這場(chǎng)比賽，他已經(jīng)練了

好久。

2.原句：Thenhiscoachwalkedoverwithanewball,and

翻譯：這時(shí)教練拿著一個(gè)新球走過來，他心中燃起一絲決心，站起身準(zhǔn)備再試一次。

答案：

1.staringatthebrokenbasketballhoop,eyescloudedwithdisappointment

2.asparkofdetenninationlitinhischest,makinghimstanduptotryagain.

段落一(失落狀態(tài)+振作契機(jī))

Lilysatonthestepsoftheartstudio,hercrumpledpaintinginhand.Thecontestjudgesnad

saidherworkulackedheart,nandshe'drunoutbeforehearingtherest.(1)

(她盯著那幅畫得模糊的家鄉(xiāng)湖泊水彩畫，眼里

滿是悲傷)一she'dwokenupat5a.m.everyweekendforamonth(opaintthatscene,tryingto

capturethewaythesunriseturnedthewaterpink.Hershouldersdrooped,andshewasaboutto

crumplethepaintingfurtherwhen(2)(身后傳來一個(gè)

溫柔的聲音)."ThatskylooksjustliketheoneIsawlastsummerinyourtown,“saidMs.Hale,

herartIcachcr,bundingdowntolook,althepaper.ThenMs.Halepoiiiludtoasmalldulail—an

olddockLilyhadadded-and(3)(她心

中燃起一絲決心，身子一下子坐直了),suddenlyeagertofixthepaintinginsteadofgivingup.

答案：

(1)Shestaredat(hesmudgedwatercolorofherhometown'slake,eyescloudedwithsadness

(2)asoftvoicespokebehindher

(3)asparkotdeterminationlitinherchest,makinghersitupstraight

段落二(失落狀態(tài)+振作契機(jī))

Tomslumpedagainstthebookstorewall,hishandsempty.He'dsavedupforweekstobuy

thelatestsciencefictionnovel,(1)(結(jié)果發(fā)

現(xiàn)最后一本在他到店前十分鐘就賣完了).Hestaredattheemptyshelfwherethebookshould

havebeen,(2)(眼里滿是失望)一he，dplannedtoread

itover(heweekend,sharinghisfavoritepartswithhislittlesisterlater.Hekickedasmallstoneon

theground,(3)(覺得所有的等待都白費(fèi)了).

Thenthebookstoreclerkwalkedout,holdingawrappedbookandwavingtohim."Acustomer

reservedthisbutjustcalledtocancel—saidakidwho'sbeenwaitingdeservesitmore,"theclerk

said,handingittoTom.(4)(他

心中燃起一絲希望，咧嘴笑了起來，把書緊緊抱在胸前)，alreadyimagininghowexcitedhis

sisterwouldbe.

答案：

(I)onlytofindthelastcopyhadbeensoldtenminutesbeforehearrived

(2)eyescloudedwithdisappointment

(3)feelinglikeallhiswaitinghadbeenfornothing

(4)Asparkofhopesprunginhischest,makinghimgrinwidelyasheclutchedthebooktohis

chest

四、陌生熟悉類(感官+心理)

,陌生感:Sb.+觀察動(dòng)作(lookedaround/staredat)+the陌生場(chǎng)景(newclassroom/strange

street)+,feelinglike+比喻(anoutsider/alostbird)

,熟悉觸發(fā):Until+感官刺激(ascenthitsb/snose/avoicereachedsb.Jsears)+,and

arushof+情緒(recognition/comfort)+動(dòng)作(flooded/washed)+oversb.

1.原句：Shelookedarouiidthenewschooluafcleiia,

翻譯：她環(huán)顧新學(xué)校的食堂，看著其他人都和朋友聊天，感覺自己像個(gè)局外人。

2.原句：Untilthescentofvanillacookieshithernose-justlikehermombaked-and

翻譯：直到香草餅干的香吠飄進(jìn)她的鼻子一一和媽媽烤的味道一模一樣一一一股安心的感覺

涌上心頭，讓她稍微放松了些。

答案：

I.feelinglikeanoutsideraseveiyoneelsechattedwiththeirfriends.

2.arushofcomfortwashedoverher,makingherrelaxalittle.

段落一(陌生感+熟悉觸發(fā))

Lunadraggedhersuitcasealongthenarrowstreetofthesmalltown,hereyesdartingfrom

oneunfamiliarstorefronttothenext.She'dmovedherewiihherfamilyjustlastweek,and

everythingstillfeltforeign-fromthewaylocalsgreetedeachotherwithslowsmilestothe

old-fashionedlamppostsliningtheroad.Shelookedaroundihequietsquare,

(1)(感覺自己像一只迷路的小鳥)asgroupsofkids

laughedandchasedeachothernearthefountain,noneoftheirfacesrecognizable.Hershoulders

droopedalittle,andshekickedasmallstone,wishingshecouldfindevenonethingthatfeltlike

home.(2)(直至l|口琴聲傳入耳中)一playingthesame

folksonghergrandpausedtohumeverynightbeforebed-and(3)

(一股安心的感覺涌上心頭)Forasecond,thestrange

towndidn'tfeelsoscaryanymore.

答案：

(1)feelinglikealostbird

(2)Untilthesoundofaharmonicareachedhercars

(3)arushofcomfortwashedoverher,ma