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高中英語讀后續(xù)寫片段描寫限時練14

一、環(huán)境烘托類（渲染氛圍）

1.高分句式：With+環(huán)境特征（名詞+doing/d（mc）,主語+動作（場景融合）

2.高分句式：Themoment+時間觸發(fā)，感官細(xì)節(jié)（視覺所覺/嗅覺）+主角反應(yīng)

3.高分句式：Under+特定場景（地點/天氣），環(huán)境動態(tài)+主角狀態(tài)

?描寫練習(xí)1：暮色漫過小鎮(zhèn)的屋頂，路燈一盞盞亮起，奶奶坐在院子里的藤椅上，慢慢翻

著舊相冊。

?英文翻譯1：andstreetlights

turningononebyone,Grandmasatonthewickerchairintheyard,flippingthroughtheoldphoto

albumslowly.

?描寫練習(xí)2：第一滴雨落在傘面的瞬間，遠(yuǎn)處傳來熟悉的自行車鈴聲，女孩立刻踮起腳向

路口望去。

?英文翻譯2：,afamiliarbicyclebellrang

inthedistance,andthegirlimmediatelystoodonhertoestolooktowardstheintersection.

?描寫練習(xí)3：漫天飛雪的籠罩下，街道上的腳印很快被覆蓋，男孩裹緊羽絨服，朝著公交

站牌小跑過去。

?英文翻譯3：.footprintsonthestreetweresoon

covered.Theboywrappedhisdownjackettightlyandtrottedtowardsthebusstopsign.

答案：

1.Withduskspreadingoverthetown'srooftops

2.Themomentthefirstraindrophittheumbrella

3.Underthecoverofheavysnowfall

段落一

ItwasaquietFridayevening,andGrandmahadbeenwaitingforhergrandsontocomeback

fromschool.Shepreparedhisfavoriteosmanthuscakeandplaceditonthestonetableintheyard,

thenwentbackintothehousetofetchtheoldphotoalbumshekeptinthedrawer.

（I）（暮色漫過小鎮(zhèn)的屋頂）.andstreetlights

turningononebyone.Grandmasatonthewickerchairintheyard,flippingthroughtheoldphoto

albumslowly.(2)(每一頁都裝著孫子的童年回憶).

—hisfirstdayofprimaryschool,hisbirthdayparties,andthetimetheyplantedasmallosmanthus

treetogether.(3)(她翻到一張兩人在桂花樹下?lián)肀?/p>

的照片時)sheheardasoft"Grandma"fromthegate,andabigsmileappearedonherface.

答案：

(I)Withduskspreadingoverthetown'srooftops

(2)Eachpageheldmemoriesofhergrandson'schildhood

(3)Asshe(urned(oaphotoofthemhuggingunderthetree

段落二

Thegirlhadpromisedtomeethermomatthebusstopafterschool,butdarkcloudsgathered

quicklyintheskyhalfwaydiroughherwalk.Shetookoutherumbrellafromherschoolbagand

openeditjustasalightdrizzlestarted.(1)(第一》南雨

落在傘面的瞬間),afamiliarbicyclebellranginthedistance,andthegirlimmediatelystoodon

hertoes(olooktowards(heintersection.Itwashermom,ridingheroldbicyclethroughtherain,

⑵(車把上掛著一個塑料袋)一insidewerethegirl's

favoritestrawberrycandies.Soon,thedrizzleturnedintoheavysnow.

(3)(漫天飛雪的籠罩下)，footprintsonthestreetwere

sooncovered.Theboywrappedhisdownjackettightlyandtrottedtowardsthebusstopsign.He

wavedalthegirlandhermom,(4)(手里舉著剛買的熱

紅薯要分給她們),andthethreeofthemwalkedhometoge:her,laughingthrough(hesnow.

答案：

(1)Themomentthefirstraindrophittheumbrella

(2)withaplasticbaghangingonthehandlebar

(3)Underthecoverofheavysnowfall

(4)holdingupawarmsweetpotatohehadjustboughtforthem

二、動作連貫類(推進(jìn)情節(jié))

1.高分句式：主語+grabbed...,rushed...andthen+連貫動作(動作鏈)

2.高分句式：Hardlyhad主語+done...when+銜接動作(倒裝強(qiáng)調(diào))

3.高分句式：主語+bentdownto...,onlyto+意外動作(動作轉(zhuǎn)折)

?描寫練習(xí)1：男孩抓起書包里的雨傘，朝校門I」沖過去，然后在公交站旁停下，等著和妹

妹一起回家。

?英文翻譯1：to

waitforhissistertogohometogether.

?描寫練習(xí)2：女孩剛把最后一本圖書放回書架，就聽見管理員喊她的名字一一有人給她送

來了包裹。

,英文翻譯2：sheheardthe

librariancallhername—someonehadsentherapackage.

?描寫練習(xí)3：爺爺彎腰去撿掉在地上的報紙，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)報泯下藏著一只瑟瑟發(fā)抖的小流浪貓。

?英文翻譯3：Grandpabentdowntopickupthenewspaperthatfellontheground,

hidingunderthenewspaper.

答案：

I.Theboygrabbedtheumbrellainhisschoolbag.rushedtowardstheschoolgate,andthen

stoppedbythebusstop

2.Hardlyhadthegirlputthelastbookbackontheshelfwhen

3.onlytofindatremblinglittlestraycal

段落一

Itstartedrainingheavilyduringthelastclass,andTomrememberedhislittlesisterdidn't

bringanumbrella.Assoonasthebellrang,hepackedhisbooksintohisschoolbaginahurry,

makingsuretheumbrellawasinside.(1)(男

孩抓起書包里的雨傘，朝校門口沖過去，然后在公交站旁停下)iowaitforhissister(ogohome

together.Whilewaiting,hewatchedtherainhittheground,

(2)(數(shù)著過往的汽車打發(fā)時間).Tenminutes

latenhesawhissisterrunningoverwithherschoolbagheldoverherhead.(3)

____________________________________________(湯姆趕緊撐開傘，把兩人都罩在傘下)，

smilingastheywalkedtowardsthebusthatwasjustarriving.

答案：

(I)Theboygrabbedtheumbrellainhisschoolbag,rushedtowardstheschoolgate,andthen

stoppedbythebusstop

(2)countingthepassingcarstopassthetime

(3)lomquicklyopenedtheumbrellaandhelditoverbothofthem

段落二

LucyvolunteeredtohelpthelibrarianorganizebookseverySaturdayafternoon.Thisweek,

thereweremorebooksthanusual,andshespenttwohoursputtingthembackintherightplaces

onebyone.（1）（女孩剛把最后一本圖

書放回書架）sheheardthelibrariancallhername-someonehadsentherapackage.Lucywalked

overconfusedly,tookthesmallpackage,andopenedit.

（2）（里面是一封手寫信和一朵干花）fromher

penpalwholivedinanothercity.Shesmiledhappilyandwasabouttoputtheletterinherbag

whenshenoticedanoldmanlookingforabook.Grandpabentdowntopickupthenewspaper

thatfellontheground,（3）（卻發(fā)現(xiàn)-?只瑟瑟發(fā)抖的小

流浪貓）hidingunderthenewspaper.Lucyimmediatelywentovertohelp,andtogetherthey

foundaboxtomakeatemporaryhomeforthecat.

答案：

（I）Hardlyhadthegirlputthelastbookbackontheshelfwhen

（2）InsidewasahandwrittenletterandapressedHower

（3）onlytofindatremblinglittlestraycat

三、心理刻畫類（展現(xiàn)情緒）

1.高分句式：Asurgeof+情緒（名詞）+sweptover主語，makingsb.+生理反應(yīng)

2.高分句式：Itsuddenlyhit主語that+認(rèn)知,and主語+情緒/動作轉(zhuǎn)變（頓悟時刻）

3.高分句式：主語+triedtostay...butcouldn,thide+情緒流露（克制與暴露）

?描寫練習(xí)1：一陣喜悅涌上男孩心頭，他的嘴角忍不住向上揚起，雙手緊緊攥著剛拿到的

比賽獲獎證書。

,英文翻譯1：.makingthecornersofhismouthcurlup

iiivulunlarily.Helicldthenewlyreceiveduoiiipclilioiiawaidccilifiualcliglillyinhishands.

?描寫練習(xí)2：女孩突然意識到今天是爸爸的生日，她立刻放下手中的畫筆，跑去廚房想給

爸爸做一份禮物。

?英文翻譯2：.Sheimmediatelyput

downherpaintbrushandrantothekitchentomakeagiftforhim.

?描寫練習(xí)3：男孩努力裝作平靜，但泛紅的眼眶還是藏不住他對即將遠(yuǎn)行的朋友的不舍。

?英文足羽譯3：Theboytriedtostaycalm,______________________________________________

topartwithhisfriendwhowasabouttogofaraway.

答案：

1.Asurgeofjoysweptovertheboy

2.Itsuddenlyhitthegirlthattodaywasherdad'sbirthday

3.buthisredeyesstillcouldn'thidehisreluctance

段落一

Theboyhadpracticedfortheschoolpaintingcompetitionfbroveramonth,stayingafter

classeveryclaytorefinehiswork.Thismorning,theprincipalannouncedthewinnersonthe

playground,and(1)(他的名字因獲得一等獎被念

THl來).Whenhewalkeduptoreceivethecertificate,hishandswerestillalittleshaky.

(2)(一陣喜悅涌上男孩心頭),makingthecornersof

hismouthcurlupinvoluntarily.Heheldthenewlyreceivedcompetitionawardcertificatetightly

inhishands,(3)(他迫切地想跑

回家把證書拿給父母看)—hecouldalreadyimaginetheproudsmilesontheirfaces.Onhisway

back,heevensloppedtosharethegoodnewswithhisfavoritestreetvendor,whogavehimafree

lollipopasacelebration.

答案：

(1)hisnamewascalledforfirstplace

(2)Asurgeofjoysweptovertheboy

(3)eagertorunhomeandshowittohisparents

段落二

ThegirlspentthewholeSaturdaymorningdrawingapictureofherdad—shewantedtogive

ittohimasasurprise,but(1)(因為太專注于添

加細(xì)節(jié)而忘T時間).Aliiuon,sheheardherdadcomehomefromworkandlaughashetalkedlo

hermomabout"thebigdaytomorrow."(2)__________________________________________(女

孩突然意識到今天是爸爸的生日).Sheimmediatelyputdownherpaintbrushandranto(he

kitchentomakeagiftforhim.Sherummagedthrough(hecabinetforherdad'sfavoritetea.then

putitinahandmadeenvelopewithasmallnote.Whenshehandedittoherdad,hehuggedher

tightly.Later,whenhermommentionedthatthegirlhadbeenhidingthepictureallmorning,the

girltriedtostaycalm,(3)(但微微泛幻一

的臉頰還是藏不住讓爸爸開心的興奮勁兒）.

答案：

（1）gotsofocusedonaddingdetailsthatsheforgotthetime

（2）Itsuddenlyhitthegirlthattodaywasherdad'sbirthday

（3）butherslightlyflushedchecksstillcouldn'thideherexcitementatmakingherdadhappy

四、沖突轉(zhuǎn)折類（制造波瀾）

1.高分句式：Justas主語+wasaboutto...,sth.unexpected+打斷動作（計劃落空）

2.高分句式：主語+hadjustmanagedto...when+突發(fā)狀況（努力后意外）

3.高分句式：What主語+didn,texpectwasthat+意外結(jié)果（反轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)折）

?描寫練習(xí)1：就在媽媽要把剛做好的蛋糕放進(jìn)冰箱時，弟弟不小心撞翻了桌上的果醬，淋

在了蛋糕上。

?英文翻譯I：.her

youngerbrotheraccidentallyknockedover（hejamonthetable,spillingitonthecake.

?描寫練習(xí)2：女孩好不容易把陷在雪地里的自行車推出來，就發(fā)現(xiàn)車鏈掉了，根本沒法騎

行。

?英文翻譯2：stuckinthesnowout

whenshefoundthechainhadfallenoffandshecouldn1trideitatall.

?描寫練習(xí)3：男孩本以為沒人記得他的生日，沒想到仝班同學(xué)都拿著蛋糕和禮物，在教室

里等著他。

?英文翻譯3：hethoughtnoonerememberedhis

birthday,butthewholeclasswaswaitingforhimintheclassroomwithcakesandgifts.

答案：

1.JustasMomwasabouttoputthenewlymadecakeintotherefrigerator

2.Thegirlhadjustmanagedlupushherbicycle

3.Whattheboydidn'texpectwasthat

段落一

MomspentthewholeafternoonbakingastrawberrycakefbrDad,sbirthday.Shespreada

layerofcreamyfrostingontopanddecorateditwithfreshstrawberries,

（1）（讓蛋糕看起來又甜又誘人）.Shewipedherhands

onherapron,pickedupthecakecarefully,andwalkedtowardstherefrigeratortokeepit

fresh.⑵(就在媽媽要把剛做好的督糕

放進(jìn)冰箱時)，heryoungerbrotheraccidentallyknockedoverthejamonthetable,spillingiton

thecake.(3)(媽媽愣了一下，隨后笑了)—shegrabbed

aspoon,tastedalittlejam-covcrcdcake,andsaid,"h'sevenbetterwithjam!Let'scallita

isurprisejamcake'forDad.”

答案：

(I)makingthecakelooksv/eetanddelicious

(2)JustasMomwa