第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Thistime,Mirawasn’taskingtheAItopolishheressays.Instead,shetypedaquestionthathadbeenpressingonherheartforweeks:“Whywon’tGrandmaeatproperly?”ItwasearlyJanuary.Afterfinishingherexams,Mirahadreturnedtoherhometowntospendsomequietdayswithhergrandmother.Theoldwomanhadoncebeenalegend—she’dworkedasatailor（裁縫）,madedressesforhalfthevillageandsavedenoughtoopenherownshop.Timehadtakenitstoll.Nowhereyesighthaddimmed,herfingerstrembled,butshewasstillthatlegendarywomanwholivedonherownterms.Wheneversomeoneladled（用勺子舀）soupintoherbowl,shewouldpushitaway,murmuring,“Idon’tneedit.Saveitforyourselves.”Everymealplayedoutthesameway.ItbrokeMira’sheart.Actually,thefamilywasdoingwell.Therewasplentyoffood,plentyoflove.Sowhydideating—asimple,everydayact—seemlikeaburdentoher?Shetriedreasoningwithher,butthemoreshetalked,themoreGrandmaresisted.Untiloneday,inamomentoffrustration,sheblurtedout,“Grandma,youmakemesosadwhenyouactlikethis.”Theoldwomanfroze,thensighed.“I’moverseventy.Iwon’tbearoundmuchlonger.Itdoesn’tmatterhowIeat.”Thewordscutdeep.Mirathoughtabouttakinghertoapsychologist（心理醫(yī)生）butknewshe’drefuse.Sosheturnedtoanoldpanion,theAI.Theresponsecamequickly.Grandmawasrefusingfoodbecauseshefeltlikeshenolongerhadaplaceinthefamily.TheAIofferedsuggestions:Helpherfeelsecureandneeded.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para1:WithAI’sassistance,Mirabeganherplan.Para2：Asmealsbecamelessofabattle,Miradecidedtorelightthesparkleingrandmother’seyes.plan.InsteadAI’sassistance,Mirabeganherplan.Insteadofurginghergrandmothertoeatasbefore,shechoseagentlerwayandstartedaskingforhelp.Onequietafternoon,sheplacedsomevegetablesonthetableandsaidsoftly,“Grandma,couldyouteachmehowtocutthemthewayyouusedto?”Theoldwomanhesitated,herfingerstremblingslightlyabovetheknife,asifunsurewhethershewasstillcapable.Afterashortpause,shefinallynodded.AssheguidedMira’shandspatiently,Miranoticedhergrandmotherslowlypickupthespoonandtakeasmallsipofsoupherself.Thoughhesitantatfirst,shedidn’tpushitawaythistime.Mealbymeal,resistancefaded.Thetightlinesonherfacesoftened,andthesilencearoundthetablewasreplacedbygentleconversationandaquietwarmth.Para2：Asmealsbecamelessofabattle,Miradecidedtorelightthesparkleinhergrandmother’seyes.Oneevening,shebroughtoutaboxofoldfabricsandneedlesandaskedhertoteachherhowtosewproperly.Grandma’seyeslitupinstantly,andforamoment,sheseemedyounger.Sittingbythewindow,sheexplainedeverystitchwithsteadypatience,justlikesheoncedidinherlittleshopyearsago.Asmemoriesflowed,laughterreplacedsilence,andconfidenceslowlyreplaceddoubt.Almostwithoutnoticing,shefinishedhermealbesidehersewingtools.Forthefirsttimeinweeks,shedidsowithoutbeingreminded.Watchingthis,somethingglistenedinthecornersofhereyes.Shefinallyrealizedthatwhathergrandmothertrulyneededwasnotfooditself,butthefeelingofbeingneeded,respected,andvalued.Paragraph1WithAI’sassistance,Mirabeganherplan.Insteadofurginghergrandmothertoeatasbefore,shechoseagentlerwayandstartedaskingforhelp.她不再像以前那樣催促奶奶吃飯，而是選擇了一種更溫和的方式，開始尋求幫助。Onequietafternoon,sheplacedsomevegetablesonthetableandsaidsoftly,“Grandma,couldyouteachmehowtocutthemthewayyouusedto?”一個安靜的下午，她把一些蔬菜放在桌上，輕聲說道：“奶奶，您能教我怎么像您以前那樣切菜嗎？”Theoldwomanhesitated,herfingerstremblingslightlyabovetheknife,asifunsurewhethershewasstillcapable.老人遲疑了，手指在刀上方微微顫抖，仿佛不確定自己是否還有這個能力。Afterashortpause,shefinallynodded.片刻停頓后，她終于點了點頭。AssheguidedMira’shandspatiently,Miranoticedhergrandmotherslowlypickupthespoonandtakeasmallsipofsoupherself.當她耐心地指導米拉的手法時，米拉注意到奶奶慢慢拿起了勺子，自己喝了一小口湯。Thoughhesitantatfirst,shedidn’tpushitawaythistime.雖然起初有些猶豫，但這次她沒有把湯推開。Mealbymeal,resistancefaded.一頓飯接一頓飯，（奶奶的）抵觸情緒逐漸消退了。Thetightlinesonherfacesoftened,andthesilencearoundthetablewasreplacedbygentleconversationandaquietwarmth.她臉上緊繃的線條柔和了下來，餐桌旁的沉默被溫柔的交談和靜謐的溫情所取代。Paragraph2Asmealsbecamelessofabattle,Miradecidedtorelightthesparkleinhergrandmother’seyes.Oneevening,shebroughtoutaboxofoldfabricsandneedlesandaskedhertoteachherhowtosewproperly.一天晚上，她拿出一盒舊布料和針線，請奶奶教她如何正確地縫紉。Grandma’seyeslitupinstantly,andforamoment,sheseemedyounger.奶奶的眼睛瞬間亮了起來，在那一刻，她仿佛變年輕了。Sittingbythewindow,sheexplainedeverystitchwithsteadypatience,justlikesheoncedidinherlittleshopyearsago.坐在窗邊，她以平穩(wěn)的耐心解釋著每一針每一線，就像多年前在她的小店里做的那樣。Asmemoriesflowed,laughterreplacedsilence,andconfidenceslowlyreplaceddoubt.隨著回憶涌現(xiàn)，笑聲取代了沉默，自信慢慢取代了自我懷疑。Almostwithoutnoticing,shefinishedhermealbesidehersewingtools.幾乎沒有察覺地，她在縫紉工具旁吃完了飯。Forthefirsttimeinweeks,shedidsowithoutbeingreminded.幾周來第一次，她在沒有人提醒的情況下做到了這一點。Watchingthis,somethingglistenedinthecornersofhereyes.看著這一幕，她的眼角閃爍著晶瑩的淚光。Shefinallyrealizedthatwhathergrandmothertrulyneededwasnotfooditself,butthefeelingofbeingneeded,respected,andvalued.她終于明白，奶奶真正需要的不是食物本身，而是被需要、被尊重和被重視的感覺。一、范文深度分析這篇文章之所以好，是因為它做到了“三個轉變”：策略轉變:從Para1的“逼迫進食”(urging)轉變?yōu)椤笆救跚笾?askingforhelp)。urging...way...furging...,shechoseagentlerway..."動作轉變:從“手抖”(trembling)到“平穩(wěn)”(steady)。分析:這是一個非常高級的對照描寫。手抖代表不自信、衰老；手穩(wěn)代表找回了專業(yè)技能和自我價值。氛圍轉變:從“沉默對抗”到“歡聲笑語”。分析:環(huán)境描寫不僅烘托了氣氛，也象征著人物關系的和解。二、重點表達拓展與替換為了豐富寫作詞匯，我按功能分類，提供一些可以在類似語境下使用的高級替換表達：1.描寫“消除隔閡/氣氛緩和”原文:Mealbymeal,resistancefaded.(抵觸情緒逐漸消退)拓展替換:Theinvisiblewallbetweenthembegantocrumble.(她們之間那道無形的墻開始崩塌。)Thetensionintheairmeltedaway.(空氣中的緊張氣氛消融了。)Herdefensesfinallydropped.(她的心理防線終于放下了。)2.描寫“眼睛有光/重獲新生”(RegainingVitality)instantly...seyeslitupinstantly...sheseemedyounger.拓展替換:Alonglostsparkreturnedtohereyes.(久違的光芒回到了她的眼中。)Herfaceglowedwithanewfoundenergy.(她的臉上煥發(fā)出新生的活力。)Lifeseemedtoflowbackintoherwearybody.(生命力似乎回到了她疲憊的身體里。)3.描寫“感動/流淚”(EmotionalTears)原文:Somethingglistenedinthecornersofhereyes.拓展替換:Tearswelledupinhereyesandblurredhervision.(淚水涌上眼眶，模糊了視線。)Sheblinkedbacktearsofgratitude.(她眨眼忍住感激的淚水。)Overwhelmedwithemotion,shecouldbarelyspeak.(被情緒淹沒，她幾乎說不出話來。)三、系統(tǒng)整理豐富表達一、Paragraph1｜方式改變→情緒松動1.“不再催促，而是換方式”的表達①Insteadofpushinghertoeat,Miratriedasofterapproach.她沒有再強迫奶奶吃飯，而是嘗試了一種更溫和的方式。②Ratherthanforcingtheissue,shechosepatienceoverpressure.她沒有繼續(xù)強行解決問題，而是選擇了耐心而非施壓。③（升級）Shegaveupconstanturgingandturnedtoagentler,morethoughtfulapproach.她放棄了反復催促，轉而采取了一種更溫和、更體貼的方式。④（抽象總結型）Sherealizedthatpersuasionwaslesspowerfulthanrespect.她意識到，說服遠不如尊重更有力量。2.“猶豫+顫抖”的動作鏈表達①Shepaused,herhandhoveringovertheknife,fingersshaking.她停頓了一下，手懸在刀上方，手指微微發(fā)抖。②Abriefhesitationcrossedherfaceashertremblingfingersfrozeinmidair.短暫的猶豫掠過她的臉龐，顫抖的手指停在半空中。③Shelingeredforamoment,uncertaintywritteninhershakinghands.她遲疑了片刻，不安寫滿了她顫抖的雙手。非謂語+身體細節(jié)=情緒外化“開始吃飯”的隱性情緒表達（Show,nottell）①Sheliftedthespooncautiouslyandtastedthesoupforthefirsttime.她小心翼翼地拿起勺子，第一次嘗了一口湯。②Withahesitantmotion,shebroughtthespoontoherlips.她帶著猶豫的動作，把勺子送到嘴邊。③Afteralongpause,shefinallytookacarefulsip.長時間的停頓后，她終于小心地喝了一口。Paragraph1結尾氛圍句（高頻可遷移）①Warmthquietlyreturnedtotheoncesilenttable.溫情悄然回到了曾經沉默的餐桌旁。②Theheavysilencegavewaytosoftvoicesandsharedsmiles.沉重的沉默被輕聲交談和會心的微笑所取代。③Asenseofpeaceslowlysettledoverthetable.一種平靜的氛圍慢慢籠罩了餐桌。二、Paragraph2｜價值重建→情感升華1.“眼睛亮了”的多樣表達（必背）①Grandma’seyeslitupinstantly.奶奶的眼睛瞬間亮了起來。②（升級）Asuddenlightflickeredinhereyes.一道光芒在她的眼中閃現(xiàn)。③（高分）Afamiliarbrightnessreturnedtohergaze.一種熟悉的光彩重新回到了她的目光中。“回憶涌現(xiàn)”的畫面表達①Memoriescamefloodingback,fillingtheroomwithlaughter.回憶如潮水般涌來，笑聲充滿了整個房間。②Asthepastunfolded,theroomgrewlighterandwarmer.隨著往事被慢慢講述，房間變得愈發(fā)輕松溫暖。③Witheachmemoryshared,herconfidencequietlyreturned.隨著每一段回憶的分享，她的自信悄然回歸。3.“無提醒吃完飯”＝問題真正解決①Shefinishedhermealnaturally,withoutasinglereminder.她很自然地吃完了飯，沒有任何人提醒。②Foronce,eatingnolongerfeltlikeatask.這一次，吃飯不再像一項任務。③Thestruggleovermealsfinallycametoanend.圍繞吃飯的掙扎終于畫上了句號。四、結尾升華句｜萬能價值感主題原句結構（必背）WhatsbtrulyneededwasnotA,butB.某人真正需要的不是A，而是B?？芍苯舆w移的高分表達①穩(wěn)定型Whatsheneededwasnotfood,butasenseofpurpose.她需要的不是食物，而是一種存在的意義。②情感型Beingneededgavehermore