1、2017 高考英語作文：你是中學的，你校學生會即將組織一次徒步活動，已在校園網(wǎng)發(fā)布方案，征求師生的修改意見。你需要寫一封郵件，包含以下兩點：1. 提出你覺得需要改進的地方；2. 需要改進的原因。主題發(fā)現(xiàn)上海時間5月1日（周日）下午3點路線從人民廣場經(jīng)過南京路到外灘（the bund），全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民廣場。dear sir/madam,im really excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the bund on the labor day holiday. however, there

2、 may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on the campus website, as id like to point out.first of all, the hike needs to be planned in more detail as the informationreleased online appears to be too general. as participants, we need to know how long the hike will last. also, we are will

3、ing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. after all, the scheme should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the student

4、s. whats more, i suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “discover shanghai” through additional activities. upon arrival at the bund, ipropose an introduction of the architecture on both sides of the huangpu river. by appreciating different artistic styles of the buildings, we can gain a deeper

5、 insight into the authentic shanghai culturemixed with exotic flavor. thus, the experience may well be unforgettable one, because it not only makes us move, but also enables us to discover the scenic beauty of shanghai, which will well achieve the purpose of organizing the activity.all in all, if th

6、e hike is organized in more detail and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed. i hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.yours sincerelywang lei2016 高考英語作文：假設(shè)你是中華中學學生姚平，最近參與了一項研究性學習調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調(diào)研你校學生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）。根據(jù)圖

7、表寫一份報告，在報告中，你必須：1.描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2.分析可能導致這一結(jié)果的原因。recently ihave conducted a survey about“whether parents are proud of their children” in my school. the result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion.according to the survey,we can conclude that t

8、he number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children.there seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference.first,conservative chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children.this tendency to c

9、onceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. second,the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance,thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. this b

10、ias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports,which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods,a kid would never end up with a positi

11、ve grown-up.2015 高考英語作文： 學校即將舉辦“讀書節(jié)”，目前正廣泛征集“讀書節(jié)”宣傳冊圖片。假設(shè)你是該校學生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括以下內(nèi)容：1. 簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；2. 闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳“讀書節(jié)”的理由。dear sir/madam,on hearing the news that the annual campus reading festival is to be held and an advertising picture for the brochure is open to be recom

12、mended, i cant wait to write to you, offering my humble opinion. the picture that i want to recommend features three students sitting around a table, reading and discussing pleasantly. from the big smile on their faces, we can tell that they are having great fun.in the first place, the picture will

13、catch the readers eye. any student who sees the picture will wonder what the three students are discussing about passionately. whats more, the picture demonstrates what the festival is about. the festival aims to create a platform where students can enjoy the pleasure of sharing opinions about what

14、they have read with peers, which will further their understanding. the value of reading lies not only in enriching our individuals knowledgebut also in inspiring the minds of the youth to share their innermost feelings. just as the saying goes, “two heads are better than one”, i believe group readin

15、g or discussing is beneficial.to sum up, the picture will surely remind the students of the pleasure of reading arouse their passion for reading. i sincerely hope that this picture will soon appear in the brochure, spreading the idea to my peer schoolmates during the reading festival.yours sincerely

16、pan yang2014 高考英語作文：學校英語報正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個欄目（健康，娛樂，文化）中去除一個，并從三個備選欄目（時尚，職業(yè)規(guī)劃，讀者反饋）中挑選一個納入該報。假設(shè)你是該校學生程飛，給校報編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達你的觀點。郵件必須包括以下內(nèi)容。你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。dear editor,im writing to express some of my opinions towards our schools english newspaper.in my point of view, among health, entertainmen

17、t and culture, i would choose “entertainment” to be the one to be eliminated. although its a necessity for students to get some relaxation, im worried that the main news that the entertainment column offers will eventually turn into celebrity gossip, which is neither helpful to the growth of student

18、s nor to the development of our school. we are already living in a world that is crammed with useless information, and theres no need to add some more. the main focus of the newspaper is supposed to be placed on the studentsnot brad pitts new movie.as for the column to be added, i highly recommend t

19、he “career planning”. i know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so its quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are req

20、uired for different jobs. this may help students gain a better understanding of their strengths and weakness and thus figure out their goals. to me, its much more meaningful than “fashion” or “readers feedback”.all mentioned above can be turned into reality with your appreciation and permission. im

21、looking forward to your favorable reply and a better school newspaper.yours sincerely cheng fei2013上海高考英語作文：上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：1. 簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇；2. 說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進行對比）dear sir/madam,ive heard recently that you planned to hold an exh

22、ibit for famous paintings in the coming future. im really excited about it in that it provides a precious opportunity for ordinary citizens to appreciate these wonderful works of art. i write this letter to tell you my opinion on where to hold it.as far as i am concerned, compared with community lib

23、rary, the museum may be a better choice for such a professional exhibition. to begin with, while i admit that the library may be more convenient since we can go there easily, museum is sure to improve the level of exhibition. with its better condition and the history atmosphere it provides, well enj

24、oy a more comfortable environment and have a further understanding of those paintings. whats more, for the sake of protection, the museum can protect those fragile works from being damaged.from my point of view, it is the museum that has a magic power to persuade us to behave ourselves, while the li

25、brary instead cannot do that.in spite of its convenience, i believe that it is worthwhile to go to the museum to appreciate these paintings. thanks for taking time to read my letter. i will appreciate it if you will take my suggestion into consideration.yours faithfully,wang min2012上海高考英語作文：上周一，你在一所

26、小學觀摩了小女孩amy所在班級的兩堂繪畫課（如圖所示），回家后你用英語寫了一篇日記，內(nèi)容包括：對兩堂繪畫課的具體描述；你從中獲得的啟發(fā)。june 2nd, 2012 sunny today, i paid a visit to a primary school where a girl named amy studies to observe 2 art lessons. in the first class, the teacher presented everyone with a large piece of paper and required them to paint whatev

27、er they liked on it. so excited was amy that she applied the colors to her feet, using them as paint brushes.on the contrary, in the other class, the teacher just instructed them to copy the model painting. despite the fact that amy also painted her pictures earnestly, i discovered that she wasnt in

28、volved in the painting as passionately.i maintain it was the creativity and imagination that made the striking difference between the 2 classes.firstly, what impressed me most was amys sweet smile in the first class. it goes without saying thatthe happiness from ones creation and imagination will al

29、low him to receive the real sense of achievement and satisfaction from his work. only when we feel pleased with our works can we create something brilliant.simultaneously, equipped with innovation spirit, we will be more likely todevelop our potential abilities. given that every one of us say the sa

30、me words or do the same things, our country will be destined to become less dynamic and prosperous. however, it is a fair bet thatmore amazing contributions will be achieved with our initiative.as what has been discussed above, i firmly hold the belief thatcreativity and imagination are two invaluab

31、le qualitieswhich success feeds on. therefore, i will go to any length to cultivate my creativity and imagination to make greater contributions to my country.2011上海高考英語作文：假如你是明啟中學的李明，想申請一個扶貧工程，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。根據(jù)以下啟示，寫一封申請信。啟示國際兒童基金會將資助中學生開展扶貧工程，以幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。申請成功者將獲得工程經(jīng)費2000元。有意者請來信告知:1.你個人基本情況2.你對申請工程具體設(shè)想3.

32、工程經(jīng)費使用計劃聯(lián)系方式：20112011年6月7日dear sir/madam,word came that the international children funds association intends to aid middle school students financially in launching programs aiming to help children in underdeveloped areas. now, i would like to apply for one. im li ming, a student from shanghai mingqi middle school. im always keen on doing voluntary work and only too willing to do my part for the needy. young as i am, ive already organized scores of activities which aim at helpi