1、English writing,附作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（供參考） A (1315分): 包含內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語言基本無誤; 行文連貫，能使用修飾詞或表示順序、邏輯關(guān)系的連接詞，表達(dá)清楚。 B（ 1012分）：基本內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，遺漏少量次要點(diǎn)；語言有少量錯(cuò)誤;行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。 C（ 79分）：包含部分要點(diǎn)；語言雖有較多錯(cuò)誤，尚能答意。 D（ 36分）：語言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)；錯(cuò)誤百出，不知所云 E（ 02分）：白卷或文不對(duì)題；只抄寫了提示詞。,巧用精準(zhǔn)的高級(jí)詞匯,句型、詞組優(yōu)先 善用關(guān)聯(lián)詞 活用多種句型,避免使用過分簡單的句子,長短句結(jié)合（長句為主，但不能太長） 妙用格言，諺語（proverbs)等

2、,得高分的一些技巧,Liu Xiang is 21. He comes from Shanghai. He is a running star.,Liu Xiang, a 21-year-old running star, comes from Shanghai.,My father is good. My mother is good, too.,My father is hard-working and my mother is kind.,Which is better?,1. 我們應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)來取得好成績。,A. We should work hard to get good grad

3、es. B. Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.,2. 我們應(yīng)多花時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)。 A. We have to concentrate more on study. B. We have to study more and play less.,句型、詞組優(yōu)先,3. 我們不能玩電腦游戲。,A . We cant play computer games. B . We need to stay away from computer games.,1）He ran very quickly.,He ran as quickly as he

4、could.,2）I will learn English well.,I will try my best to learn English well.,3）I cant learn English well.,I find it (its) difficult for me to learn English well.,句型、詞組優(yōu)先,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, bothand, whats more, not onlybut also, besides, 2. 順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second (ly), next,

5、 later, then, finally, in the end, at last 3. 選擇: or, eitheror 4. 轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, althoughthough, 5. 因果: because, so, therefore, since, for, as a result 6. 條件: if , unless 7. 對(duì)比: instead, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 8. 解釋: for example, for instance, such as/like 9. 強(qiáng)調(diào):

6、 also, especially, actually, in fact 10. 結(jié)論: all in all, in a word, in general,2.關(guān)聯(lián)詞(linking words),People used to do farm work . They felt tired. They got little money.,Now there are many factories here. People can find different jobs in factories.,以家鄉(xiāng)的變化為例：,they worked hard and felt tired, they go

7、t little money.,Although,They felt tired. They got little money.,Now there are many factories here. People can find different jobs in factories.,Now there are many factories here, people can find different jobs easily.,because,The water is dirty, people cant swim or fish in it.,We could see fish. Th

8、ey were swimming in the water.,We cant see anything in the water now.,We could see fish. They were swimming in the water.,We could see fish swimming in the clear water.,The water is dirty for people swim or fish in.,too to,so that,The water is dirty, people cant swim or fish in it.,The water is dirt

9、y people cant swim or fish in it.,Giving advice,He could/ should/shouldnt v. He is supposed to v. Hed better v. Its better/best for him to v . Why not v? /Why doesnt he v? What/How about v-ing.? v.-ing.is good/necessary/helpful for him.,3. 活用多種句型：,我們應(yīng)該多學(xué)多練。,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfec

10、t.”（熟能生巧） So we should spend more time learning and practicing.,4. 妙用格言，諺語（proverbs)等,以下文為例,The ways to stay healthy Health is the most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge. Firstly, we should pay attention to the diet. Its best to eat lots of fruit and ve

11、getables.“ An apple a day keeps the doctor away,” so fruit is good for health. Besides, we are not supposed to have a lot of junk food. Secondly, exercise is necessary. On the one hand, we are not easy to get fat. On the other hand, we can be stronger. Finally, wed better have good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Whats more, we must stay away from cigarettes. In general,