1、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),滿分為15分，分5個(gè)等級(jí)，即14、11分、8分、5分、和2分，閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即8分）；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，即可加一分（即9分）或減一分，不得加或減半分。具體評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為： A 14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本無語言錯(cuò)誤。 B 11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。 C 8分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文字上連貫，但語言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 D 5分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字連貫性差，有較嚴(yán)重的語言錯(cuò)誤。 E 2分：條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分

2、句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)有嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 F 交白卷者，或作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只寫幾個(gè)單詞，則以零分計(jì)算。 評(píng)分中對(duì)字?jǐn)?shù)有要求，最多可扣5分。,漫畫作文,范文一 The Importance of Learning Basic Skills We can see that in this picture, a teacher is teaching her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions, but some of them think that learning these mathematical skills is useless. They a

3、rgue that by the time they are in the job market, these skills will be outdated. As to whether it is important to learn basic skills, people hold different views. As far as I know, it is very important for one student to acquire basic skills. At first, mastering basic skills well can lay a solid fou

4、ndation for learning advanced skills. Basic skills are a floor, not a ceiling. Students must learn them first so that they can move on to various advanced skills. Whats more, learning basic skills helps to improve confidence and enhance self-esteem. Individuals with basic skills are likely to be mor

5、e confident and active. All in all, if we want to keep progressing, it is important to learn basic skills well. By mastering basic skills and learning new things, we will have a bright future!,范文二 The Importance of Learning Basic Skills What we can see from the cartoon is that the teacher is instruc

6、ting the students some basic mathematic skills. However, some students are wondering that if it will be outdated in the future. The picture implicitly（含蓄地）raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills us students learn in our classes. It is worth mentioning that those seemingly bas

7、ic and elementary skills we learned in school actually play a significantly indispensable role in our future works. The pervasive（普遍的） undervaluation on elementary skills that we find among current students and even some teachers can largely be attributed to their lack of vision of future and thorou

8、gh understanding on the knowledge. After all, its an obvious truth that we could not build a magnificent mansion without solid foundations; we could not enjoy a long travel unless we make a solid start at first. Those basic skills may look simple to learn, but without them it will not be simple at a

9、ll to achieve further goals.,To sum up, we should think highly of the importance of basic and fundamental skills that guarantee our wonderful and brilliant future. Furthermore, we should make full use of those elementary skills, consciously applying them in our works and life. Basic skill will never

10、 be outdated.,父親和男孩子的對(duì)話，孩子說“ Dad，I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon. （爸爸，我有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心清除核武器這個(gè)問題）”，父親則回答“ If you can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉，你就能做好任何事情)” ，說話間，手指著垃圾桶。,The Importance of Doing Small Things Just as is revealed in the picture above, the young, nowaday

11、s, just like the boy in the drawing, are prone to reach for what is beyond their grasp, but ignore the significance of doing something trivial and simple before accomplishing great feats. There is no doubt that the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed in the picture should be given deep consideration. A

12、s we all know, a man who does not sweep a room, doesnt mention to sweep the world. In other words, the foundations of a building must be strong, or else the whole structure will fall down someday. Therefore, when it comes to the key to success, the most important thing lies in doing every tiny thing

13、 well around you. As the saying goes, “the highest eminence is to be gained step by step.” To achieve the goal, not merely do we need ambition; we also need to realize the importance of dealing with triviality from the beginning. Only in this way can we get on the way tosuccess down to earth.,The Im

14、portance of Reading Literature Literature is acknowledged as the most precious product of human civilization and wisdom, especially by our teachers. So they always ask their students to read as many as literary works. Just as the drawing shown above, a teacher gives a literary work to her student, s

15、aying: “Just think of it as if youre reading a long text-message.” It is of great significance for us to appreciate literature due to the following reasons. Firstly, a good literature can get you to know a life experience through the eyes of someone other than yourself. The more experience you gain,

16、 the more knowledgeable you are. Secondly, a good literature allows you to learn about history in a personalized way. The stories told in the works can act as mirrors and help you adjust your own behaviors. Lastly, a good literature is an effective way for relaxation. The beautiful and moving scenes

17、 shown in the literature are helpful for ones mental health. In short, literature is indispensable in our life. We, students, should catch our time to read more literatures.,Step 1 審題弄清漫畫的寓意 Step 2 安排段落結(jié)構(gòu) 標(biāo)題（很重要?。?第一段：簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫內(nèi)容并指出漫畫寓意 第二段：表達(dá)考生對(duì)漫畫寓意的看法并進(jìn)行論證 第三段：指出漫畫對(duì)大學(xué)生的教育意義或提出解決 問題的建議。,寫作步驟,第一段：描述漫畫指

18、出寓意,1. 描述漫畫句: From the cartoon / picture/drawing/ illustration, we can see that_. We can see from the cartoon that_. As is (vividly) shown/indicated / described / depicted / portrayed in the cartoon, _. What we can see from the cartoon is that_. As can be seen from the picture/ cartoon above, _,2. 引

19、出暗含主題句 We can deduce from the vivid drawing that_. What has been described in the cartoon carries great meanings/implications for _. What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society, and it expresses/conveys the symbolic meaning of_. The purpose of this picture is to show (indicate) that

20、_. It can be seen/concluded from the picture that_.,第二段：發(fā)表看法并論證（論證方法）,漫畫作文的第二段要表達(dá)考生對(duì)漫畫寓意的看法，這是文章的核心段落，也是作文字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到要求的關(guān)鍵。因此，考生在這一段要濃墨重彩，寫深、寫透。在寫這一段時(shí)，考生要盡量擺事實(shí)、講道理，避免空泛的議論。針對(duì)這一核心段落，在此推薦以下三種展開議論的常用方法。 1.條分縷析在寫作第二段時(shí)，考生可以從23個(gè)方面對(duì)觀點(diǎn)展開論述，這種寫法可使文章顯得層次清楚、條理清晰。例如，本次四級(jí)作文第一道題目的第二段需要闡述閱讀文學(xué)作品的重要性，考生就可以從以下兩個(gè)方面展開：第一，相對(duì)于電

21、子媒體，文學(xué)閱讀更能培養(yǎng)人的想象力；第二，閱讀文學(xué)作品能夠幫助我們更好地了解社會(huì)。請(qǐng)參考下面的范文。,There was a time when children could relish（品味，欣賞） literature. But children today can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading？” some ask. The reason is obvious： It enriches our imagination. When we read a piece

22、 of literature， we are living the life of Robin Hood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition， literature is the mirror of society， whether it be poetry， drama or fiction. We know the society better through literature.,2.舉例論證如果漫畫所傳達(dá)的是抽象的人生哲理，那么考生在論述時(shí)最好能舉出具體的事例，盡量避免空洞的說教。比如，就本次四級(jí)作文第二道題目而

23、言，考生可以在第二段中舉出一些成功人士如何從小事做起的例子。筆者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈蘭桑德斯上校從一個(gè)小吃店做起，最后締造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝國(guó)的例子，用以證明只有從小事做起，才能成就大事。請(qǐng)看下面的范文。Everything is small before it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders began serving food to his service station（加油站） customers in Corbin， a city in Kentucky. He fried ch

24、icken in his own kitchen and perfected his secret recipe（秘方） there. From the small roadside eatery（餐館）， he went on to build an empire of fast food.,3.類比論證如果漫畫中的寓意不容易通過具體的事例來證明，那么考生還可以使用類比論證的方法，即通過打比方來論證一個(gè)抽象的道理。比如，對(duì)于本次四級(jí)作文的第三道題目，考生可以在第二段中用學(xué)習(xí)打籃球的過程來打比方。學(xué)習(xí)打籃球時(shí)，只有先學(xué)會(huì)了投球、運(yùn)球、傳球這些基本技能，才能進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)高難度的技能。以此類推，無論

25、做任何事情，只有掌握了基本的技能，才可能取得更大的成功。此外，考生還可以舉出統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字，用具體的研究結(jié)果來證明論點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)看下面的范文。Simple as they may seem， basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. This is analogous to（類似于） learning to play basketball. If shooting（投籃）， dribbling（運(yùn)球） and passing（傳球） are not mastered， learning advanced skills wil

26、l become difficult, if not impossible. A growing body of research has also documented(記錄) that such basic skills as reading, writing and computing are highly correlated(有相互關(guān)系的） with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs of Fortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of t

27、heir success to the basic skills they learned in primary school.,第三段：重申觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度，進(jìn)一步展望結(jié)果或提出解決建議,句型： In conclusion / In short/ To my understanding, _（再次表明觀點(diǎn)或態(tài)度）. We should _（進(jìn)一步說明個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn) We can safely draw the conclusion that _（結(jié)論）. Therefore, _（進(jìn)一步談?wù)摳鄠€(gè)人想法）. To achieve the goal, not merely do we need_(建議一）

28、; we also need to _（建議二）. Only in this way can we get on the way tosuccess down to earth.,Its time to Practice!,The picture symbolically depicts/ demonstrates how three sons and a daughter treat their old and helpless father. They each stand in a different corner of a football field. The eldest son

29、kicks out the father while the other children are prepared to ward him off. It is sad to see none of them is willing to receive and support their father. What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society: many grown-up children refuse to support their aging parents. While young people enj

30、oy a comfortable life, their parents are neglected and left in utter poverty.,I think these children have gone against their own conscience and therefore may be put under strong attacks of words and contempt by us. According to Chinese culture, to respect the old and love the young are the tradition

31、al virtue. We owe so much to our parents, because they not only gave us life but have done much in bringing us up. It is against nature for us to escape from our responsibility of taking care of our parents when they are old. On the contrary, we have the duty to pay back their love by making their l

32、ater years enjoyable and happy. With love and respect for the old, our society will be full of sunshine; without love and respect for the old, our society will be dark through.,The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say“hello”when they h

33、appen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says，“I moved here 5 years ago， but Ive never met you before. Could I ask your name please？”The other says，“I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you？” It seems very ridiculous that people living so near dont know each other for such a

34、long time. However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. It is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world. In the modern world, most people live in apartments. They close their doors and never go out as soon as they get home from work. If they live alone，they will

35、 kill their time by watching TV or reading magazines. They dont have any connections even,with their closest neighbors，who seem no different from people they meet everyday in the street. They become more and more indifferent. This phenomenon is no good to us，nor to our society. People will feel lone

36、ly more and more. The world becomes so indifferent. Interpersonal relationships are not harmonious. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says，“If everybody gives a little love to each other， the world will become t