1、短文改錯 假定英語課上老師要求同桌中間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：把缺詞處叫個婁子符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I wa

2、s only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong an

3、d powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,短文改錯,解題步驟,1. 通讀全文，掌握大意 2.整句理解， 上下兼顧 3.復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗證,I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs

4、. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was str

5、ong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,我?guī)缀跤洸黄鹞业哪棠塘耍^去常常把我抱在她的膝蓋上并唱著古老的歌謠，她去世的時候我才四歲。此刻，對我來說，奶奶僅僅是一個遙遠的記憶，我很清楚地記得我的爺爺。他個子很高，有著寬闊的肩膀和隨著年齡漸長由黑變灰的胡子。他有著低沉的嗓音，這讓他在我們校長里脫穎而出，

6、他強壯有力。事實上，他甚至還會把那些來找我做功課或者玩耍的小伙伴嚇跑。然而，他是我所認識的最溫文爾雅的人。,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. 3. I was only four when she passes away. 4. She is just a distant memory for me now. 5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broa

7、d shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he wa

8、s the gentlest man I have never known.,I hardly remember my grandmother. 1.Hardly： 幾乎不，幾乎沒有（表否定，修飾名詞時，名詞前經(jīng)常加有any，修飾動詞時，動詞前經(jīng)常加有ever） Eg. There is hardly any tea left. It hardly ever snowed in Washington in the winter 用于can或could之后，主要動詞前，強調(diào)做某事很難 Eg. I could hardly believe it when I read the letter 剛剛，

9、才 Eg. We had hadly sat down to supper when the telephone rang. hardly 置于句首時要倒裝， 在hardly.when結(jié)構(gòu)中，hardly置于句首時，倒裝在主句 Eg. Hardly have I heard from him recently. Hardly had I reached the bus stop when the bus started.,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing

10、 old songs. 3. I was only four when she passes away. 4. She is just a distant memory for me now. 5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in o

11、ur small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold 1.注意區(qū)分used to do sth. be/get used to s

12、th/doing sth和be used to do 這三個搭配的用法 used to do sth. 過去常常做某事 be/get used to sth./doing sth. 習(xí)慣于某事/做某事 be used to do sth. 被用來做某事 句型區(qū)分： I used to get up early. I am used to getting up early. I used to travel by air. I am used to traveling by air. The robot can be used to do some dangerous work. The kni

13、fe is used to cut fruits.,2.holdheldheld 抱住，托住，拿著，抓住 Eg. The girl held her fathers hand tightly. 容納，包含 Eg. The plane holds about 300 passegers 懷有，持有（信念，意見） Eg. He holds strange views on education. 舉行，召開 Eg. Hold a meeting Hold on 等著，停住 Eg.Hold on! This isnt the right road. 3.Knee 膝蓋 bring sb. to the

14、ir knees（尤指戰(zhàn)爭中）打敗某人，使某人屈膝投降 bring sth.to its knees 摧毀某物，使（組織等）癱瘓或崩潰,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold 3. I was only four when she passes away. 4. She is just a distant memory for me now. 5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6.

15、He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with

16、 me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,I was only four when she passes away. passed 1.Pass away 去世 終止，結(jié)束 Eg. All this trouble will pass away 2.Pass the time =kill the time 消磨時間 Eg. We killed the time playing cards,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding m

17、e on her knees and sing old songs. hold 3. I was only four when she passes away. passed 4. She is just a distant memory for me now. 5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which

18、 set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,She is just a distant memory for me now. 1.A distant memory 一個遙遠

19、的記憶 Eg. The history was a distant memory for me. 2.In memory of 作為對某人的紀念 Eg. He founded the charity in memory of his late wife,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hold 3. I was only four when she passes away. passed 4. She is just a dist

20、ant memory for me now.（） 5. I remember my grandfather very much. 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared

21、my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,I remember my grandfather very much. well 1.考查副詞：此處需要修飾的是前面的動詞remember，所以要用副詞well,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing o

22、ld songs. hold 3. I was only four when she passes away. passed 4. She is just a distant memory for me now.（） 5. I remember my grandfather very much. well 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart

23、 from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shoulders from black towa

24、rd gray over the years. into/to 1.Shoulder 考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，shoulder意思是肩膀，一般作復(fù)數(shù)形式 承擔(dān)，擔(dān)負 Eg. To shoulder the responsibility for sth. 2.考查介詞，此處用to與前面的from構(gòu)成短語“from.to.”意為“從.到.” turn from .to/into為固定用法，意為從變?yōu)?,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. hol

25、d 3. I was only four when she passes away. passed 4. She is just a distant memory for me now.（） 5. I remember my grandfather very much. well 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shoulders from black toward gray over the years. to /into 7. He had a deep voice, which set himself

26、 apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in him our small to

27、wn, he was strong and powerful. and,1.考查人稱代詞，這句話為非限制性定語從句，主語是which指代a deep voice ,謂語動詞為set，賓語可直接用名詞的賓格，并且voice不予set構(gòu)成人稱上的反身關(guān)系，不能用反身代詞himself。 或者固定搭配：set sb. apart from.使某人脫穎而出 Eg.His accent sets him apart. 2.考查并列連詞,1. I hardly remember my grandmother. （） 2. She used to holding me on her knees and si

28、ng old songs. hold 3. I was only four when she passes away. passed 4. She is just a distant memory for me now.（） 5. I remember my grandfather very much. well 6. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shoulders from black toward gray over the years. to /into 7. He had a deep voice,

29、which set himself apart from others in him our small town, he was strong and powerful. and 8. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. 9. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during

30、 they came over to play or do homework with me.,1.考查固定搭配，in fact為“事實上，實際上” 2.考查從屬連詞，during為“在.期間”，when為“在時候” 3.Sacare sb. away 把嚇跑 Eg. They managed to scared the bears away.,However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.,考查副詞，never“從不”，ever“曾經(jīng)，在任何時候”,I hardly remember my grandmother. She used

31、to holding me on her hold knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is passed just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from well shoulders black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set to/into himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and and powerful. In a fact he even scared my cla