1、創(chuàng)新：小學(xué)英語寫作教學(xué)的啟示廈門實(shí)驗(yàn)小學(xué) 傅黎芬小學(xué)生學(xué)英語只要會(huì)說說、唱唱、玩玩就夠了嗎？答案是否定的。新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求教師要“重視對(duì)學(xué)生實(shí)際語言運(yùn)用能力的培養(yǎng)的傾向，發(fā)展學(xué)生的綜合語言運(yùn)用的能力形成自主學(xué)習(xí)的能力?！?要具備這些能力，教師就要引導(dǎo)學(xué)生經(jīng)常進(jìn)行真正意義上的語言實(shí)踐，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生用英語表達(dá)內(nèi)心真實(shí)感受的習(xí)慣，這種有意義的、創(chuàng)造性的活動(dòng)，有助于學(xué)生更快地朝目標(biāo)邁進(jìn)，我們?yōu)槭裁床唤o孩子們搭建展示這種實(shí)踐能力的舞臺(tái)呢？由于語言環(huán)境有限，有相當(dāng)一部分孩子沒有很多口頭交流的機(jī)會(huì)，然而書面表達(dá)卻不僅有著廣闊的空間，又是口頭表達(dá)的深化，同時(shí)又會(huì)促進(jìn)口頭表達(dá)能力的提高，所以引導(dǎo)孩子們嘗試英語小練筆是

2、實(shí)現(xiàn)教學(xué)目標(biāo)的有效途徑之一。同時(shí)，這一舉措也是創(chuàng)新理念在教學(xué)中的體現(xiàn)。一、學(xué)生們創(chuàng)作英語小練筆有著豐富的資源、巨大的潛力和現(xiàn)實(shí)意義首先，新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語這一教材為學(xué)生們進(jìn)行創(chuàng)作提供了強(qiáng)有力的保障。她所蘊(yùn)含的豐富的資源讓我可以用一種全新的理念、個(gè)性化的教學(xué)來引導(dǎo)學(xué)生們學(xué)習(xí)英語。信息量大、內(nèi)容豐富、生動(dòng)活潑、富時(shí)代氣息、充滿童真童趣是這一教材的主要特征，孩子們很喜愛這一套書，也樂于學(xué)習(xí)、模仿。四年級(jí)的學(xué)生接觸這套教材才一年多，就有相當(dāng)一部分的孩子不僅可以很好地掌握大綱要求的內(nèi)容，而且可以把課本上的內(nèi)容加以延伸和擴(kuò)展。模仿課文的主題，聯(lián)系實(shí)際生活寫小練筆，既可以充分發(fā)揮這一套教材的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，又可以滿足這一部分

3、學(xué)生的愿望。其次，開放式的教學(xué)要求教師不能低估了這些學(xué)生的能力。他們朝氣蓬勃，活潑聰明，易于接受新事物，具有很大的潛力和可塑性。人們常喜歡用定性思維來評(píng)估孩子的能力，認(rèn)為有些事，大人都做不好，孩子根本做不了，而事實(shí)不然。英語寫作也是一樣，不要以為孩子一定要到了多大的年齡才會(huì)創(chuàng)作，要知道再小的孩子也有自己的思想，也有表達(dá)自己的愿望。我們不要苛求孩子的英語表達(dá)要有多少的文采，語法結(jié)構(gòu)有多么的正確，只要他們用稚嫩的筆寫下五、六個(gè)句子，甚至一、兩句真實(shí)的感受，我們都應(yīng)該大聲喝彩，及時(shí)給予肯定和鼓勵(lì)。第三，學(xué)習(xí)英語的有效方法是：學(xué)中用，用中學(xué)，才會(huì)事倍功半。學(xué)生們答對(duì)了我們設(shè)計(jì)的練習(xí)題，不是學(xué)英語的最終

4、目標(biāo)。這些練習(xí)只是類似于文字的游戲，是為掌握應(yīng)試考試的各種解題技巧而設(shè)計(jì)的，是非完整意思的碎片，是機(jī)械的，所以我們不能讓孩子們只滿足于這種非真正意義上的書面語言運(yùn)用。學(xué)習(xí)的目的是能夠用這一門語言來表達(dá)自己的感受或與他人交流，我們應(yīng)圍繞這一目的給學(xué)生們創(chuàng)造條件。二、從模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語的某些篇章開始，學(xué)生們揭開了英語小練筆的序幕教過“海外來信”一課后，我鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生們試著給好朋友寫一封信，他們的出色表現(xiàn)讓我意識(shí)到，這套教材的作用不僅僅只是課堂上的教科書，還是進(jìn)行延伸性學(xué)習(xí)的有力后盾，學(xué)生的能力和潛力也有待我去盡情地開發(fā)。此后，學(xué)生們模仿課文描寫了許多發(fā)生在生活中的故事或闡述個(gè)人對(duì)某件事的看法，不但牢固地

5、掌握了課本的知識(shí)，而且擴(kuò)展了知識(shí)。以下兩篇小短文，就是從部分孩子的英語小練筆中，選出的具有代表性的作品，這些作品幾乎都可以從新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語的課文中找到影子。Dear Harry Potter（哈利波特）: How are you? Im very well. Im 10. And you? I like your story. Its a very nice book. Youre great! Oh! Im tired now. Im going to the bed now.From, Betty 四年級(jí)（5）班 朱心怡朱心怡非常可愛，她剛剛讀過了哈利波特故事，就情不自禁地給哈利寫了這封信。A

6、 LetterDear Tom:How are you? Im very well. My name is Kacey.Do you like eating hamburgers? I like them very much.Do you have a pet or like pets? I like pets, but I dont have a pet.I like watching TV. I like playing piano. I like doing Traditional dancing and I like playing chess. And what about you?

7、Do you like China? Where do you live? I want to visit America. Can I visit you?Good luck to you!From Kacey四年級(jí)（4）班 劉嘉佳以上兩封信是孩子們學(xué)習(xí)了新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module1, Unit1“海外來信”后，紛紛給自己的朋友用英文寫的信。Visiting ScheduleTonight, Im going to go to bed at 8 oclock, because my grandparents, my parents and I are going to visit Xian

8、gdian of Xiamen tomorrow (the Thirteenth of February, 2002lock, because my grandparents, my parents and I are going to visit Xiangdian of Xiamen tomorrow (the Thirteenth of February, 2002)There are some ancient houses. We are going there by van. The ancient houses are very old, tall and famous. Afte

9、r visiting the houses, we are going to have a picnic on the beach. First, we抣l go to buy some food, fruits and drinks. Then we are going to play volleyball and fly a kite. After that, we抣l cook the food. Finally, we are going to have lunch together on the beach. We抣l have a nice time tomorrow.四年級(jí)(5)

10、班 黃柯玨學(xué)習(xí)了用be going to 制定未來計(jì)劃，黃柯玨馬上給自己的一次出行制定了詳盡的計(jì)劃。四年級(jí)（3）班的林凌伊學(xué)習(xí)英語特別有悟性，他是一位多產(chǎn)小作家，由于篇幅有限，只選出他的部分英語日記：Day: Wednesday Date: April 29th, 2002 Weather: HotWe had a sports meeting today. Chen Shiqi ran 100 metres and 60 metres. He was the fifth and the fourth. Lin Han ran 100 meters and did long jump. He

11、was the winner. He won 2 prizesbooks. Weng Lanlan ran 100 metres. But she broke her leg.該篇主要模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4A Module4, Unit1 及4B課文的某些句子，能學(xué)以致用。Day: Saturday Date: May 4th, 2002 Weather: HotI went to my friend Chen Shiqis home. I rode on his bike. I bumped a car, and I fell off his bike. The car was broken. I

12、 felt sad. A woman asked me to pay some money for her car. She phoned my parents. My parents were very angry.該篇主要模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module5, Unit1，用夸張的手法敘述一樁事故，充滿了童真、童趣。Day: Sunday Date: May 5th, 2002 Weather: HotI went to a bookshop with my mother. I saw some books. I bought four books, one of which was nam

13、ed “ Cuo Bie Zi Da Wang Li Xian Ji”. These books are very interesting. They are fables. The moral of a fable is : Dont write wrong words.該篇主要模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module3, Unit2-3，他是個(gè)很善于學(xué)習(xí)的孩子！Saturday May 25th, 2002 hotMy father, my mother and I went to the countryside by car. My grandma was ill, and we visited

14、 her.I played with my cousin. We went to the field to catch foxes. I saw real pigs for the first time. They ran away when they saw us. Pig are very lovely, they are fat.林凌伊描寫一次在鄉(xiāng)下的經(jīng)歷，充滿好奇、新鮮感，很有意思。除了林凌伊之外，其他的同學(xué)也不甘示弱，請(qǐng)看以下幾位同學(xué)的佳作：May 9th, 2002 Thursday SunnyI love my English book because it is very gr

15、eat!Yesterday I read it, then I know paper was invented in China, it was invented by Cai Lun nearly two thousand years ago. And printing was invented in China, it was invented by Bi Sheng in 1043. Compass is a very famous Chinese invention. It was invented 900 years ago. And so was gunpowder.I feel

16、proud of my motherland. 四年級(jí)(3)班 史悅史悅學(xué)習(xí)了新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module6, Unit1的世界六大發(fā)明后，發(fā)出由衷的感嘆。May 10th, 2002 Friday Sunny AmericaAmerica is a very modern country. It is also called the USA. To its north is Canada. To its south is Mexico. The Atlantic Ocean is to its east. To its west is the Pacific Ocean. There are

17、 50 states. Alaska is the biggest state. And Rhode Island is the smallest. The capital of America is Washington D. C. New York is the largest city. The Mississippi is the longest river. And Mount Mckinley is the highest mountain. My favourite American things are hamburgers and cowboys. 四年級(jí)(3)班 史悅史悅很

18、善于復(fù)述從課本上學(xué)到的知識(shí)，本段小練筆，是根據(jù)新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module10, Unit1的知識(shí)，對(duì)美國作一番介紹。* English Proverbs *No pain, no gain.一分耕耘，一分收獲。Pride comes before a fall.驕兵必?cái)　omething well begun is half done.好的開始是成功的一半。Easier said than done.說來容易做來難。Rome wasnt built in a day.羅馬不是一天造成的。How time flies.光陰似箭。四年級(jí)(3)班 史悅收集英語錦言妙句，既可告誡自己，又可以擴(kuò)大見

19、識(shí)。Yesterday I went to the mall with my parents. I saw lots of clothes. Umm baby clothes, dresses, hats, T-shirts. I also saw pans, cups, toothbrushes, bowls, spoons and so on. Look, books, lots of books. Oh, English Olympic Competition, Fables, Old Man and the Sea. I bought an Old Man and the Sea. M

20、y parents bought some clothes. Finally, we ate Chinese food, it was very delicious!四年級(jí)(5)班 柯晨璐該篇主要模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module3, Unit3, 描寫一次逛商場的經(jīng)過。Today I went home after school. I was very hungry. Then I ate an ice cream. Then I ate chocolates and I also ate crisps. After that, Ive got a stomachache. So I dran

21、k lots of water. Mum asked:” Lulu, why drink lots of water?” “Because Ive got a stomachache.”“Why?”“Umm. Because I ate an ice cream, chocolates and crisps.” “Oh! That is not healthy!”四年級(jí)(5)班 柯晨璐該篇主要模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module5, Unit2，非常真實(shí)、生動(dòng)。The World CupThe FIFA World Cup which held once very four years was o

22、pen on May 31st.All over the world, people feel very exciting. There was a splendid opening speech. Then came the first competition with France VS Senegal. At the beginning, France showed some fierce attack. Then, they approximately kicked a goal. Twenty minutes passed, the No.11 player of Senegal f

23、orced the ball into the restricted area, he passed the ball to their No. 19 player, unluckily, the ball was snatched by a France player on its halfway. The France player gave a kick, the ball hit on the gate keeper抯 arm. Then the No. 19 of Senegal kick a goal.Finally, Senegal defeated France with a

24、score of 1:0.All the France football fans were no longer happy and felt hopeless. The France who had be thought to win lost the game against Senegal.四年級(jí)(3)班 林曉航林曉航通過一年多的學(xué)習(xí)后，基礎(chǔ)很扎實(shí)，他很善于描述身邊發(fā)生的事，碰到不懂的單詞，善于查詢或請(qǐng)教，以上是他對(duì)世界杯的一場球賽進(jìn)行了生動(dòng)的實(shí)況記錄。Today Im going to eat instant noodles.First, put some water into a p

25、an. Then light the cooker. When the water is boiling, add noodles to the pan. After that, I need to wait until the water is boiling. Then I add eggs and vegetables when the water is boiling.Finally, I can eat noodles.These noodles are very delicious, I love noodles, do you?四年級(jí)(5)班 黃達(dá)該篇主要模仿新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4A Mo

26、dule10, Unit2，描寫一次煮面的過程。My FamilyHi! Im Yang Zixun. I am ten years old. I lives in Tianlu Building near the school. I go to school every day. In my family there are three people. My father, my mother and I. My father is a doctor. He is kind and friendly. He has a lot of friends. He likes computer ve

27、ry much.My mother is a business woman. She likes watching TV very much. She does housework every day. I love my family.四年級(jí)(4)班 楊子勛楊子勛具有很強(qiáng)的創(chuàng)作欲望和積極性，他綜合所學(xué)知識(shí)，向我們介紹他的家庭情況。Spring PrincessThe spring is coming,The spring is coming.She is a pretty princessWho brings us a wonderful new world.The peach blosso

28、m are beautiful,The grass is green,The butterfly is hopping,The bees start working.Thanks to the Spring Princess,I love you the wonderful new world.by Kacey四年級(jí)(4)班 劉嘉佳劉嘉佳很擅長寫詩，她把自己的特長與英文結(jié)合起來，創(chuàng)作了以上優(yōu)美的詩歌。Last week my father and I went to the park. On the bus my father told me not to talk to the driver

29、. In the park I walked on the grass. My father told me not to walk on the grass. We saw two pandas. My father told me not to feed the pandas. So I knew a lot of things. We were very happy.四年級(jí)（4）班 洪揚(yáng)該篇主要運(yùn)用新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)英語4B Module7, Unit1的知識(shí)。孩子們一篇篇稚嫩的小創(chuàng)作，構(gòu)成了一簇簇絢麗多彩的萬花筒，他們象小精靈一樣，向我們描繪了一個(gè)個(gè)精彩斑斕的、充滿童話的世界，令人感嘆不已。 學(xué)生們的英語小創(chuàng)作越來越多，通過創(chuàng)作英語小練筆，學(xué)生們的口、筆頭能力均有了顯著