1、Application Letter,求職信,你是李華，從社區(qū)布告欄上看到某公司招聘一名兼職健身教練的啟示。你根據(jù)啟示寫應(yīng)聘信說明你的簡歷，并請(qǐng)經(jīng)理考慮予以答復(fù)。 詞數(shù)：120詞左右 要點(diǎn)：,apply for the position of a part-time fitness instructor,表明寫信的目的及對(duì)這一職位的了解。 你申請(qǐng)的原因及優(yōu)勢。 你的期望,書面表達(dá)解題步驟：,1、審，即：審定體裁、題材、 人 稱、時(shí)態(tài)、結(jié)構(gòu)等； 2、編，即：編寫要點(diǎn)，按順序列出； 3、寫，即：連詞成句，連句成文； 4、查，即：查內(nèi)容，查格式， 查語法，查書寫等。,如何審題？,1、審定體裁、 題材

2、； 2、審定人稱； 3、審定時(shí)態(tài)； 4、審定要點(diǎn)； 5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)。,1、審定體裁、題材： 2、審定人稱： 3、審定時(shí)態(tài)： 4、審定要點(diǎn)： 5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)：,審題提示:,書信、求職 第一和第二人稱 現(xiàn)在時(shí) 原因，優(yōu)勢，期望 可分為三或四段,Sample Answer Dear Sir, My name is LiHua. I read with interest your advertisement which appeared on the notice board in our community and would like to take up the challenge as a par

3、t-time fitness instructor in your company. I am so pleased to know that your company is looking for a person to provide your staff with professional fitness training during weekends. I am eager to apply for this position not only because I need to earn some extra money to cover my living expenses bu

4、t also because I am currently living so close to your company.,I think I am qualified for this position. To begin with, I have been a swimming and Yoga instructor in a club for more than five years, and therefore have rich experience and professional competence. Besides, I am not working on weekends

5、, so I can easily fit into your timetable, which also means I am able to start working at any time as you wish. I hope that after reviewing my resume you will kindly give me an interview. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua.,Structure of the passage Para 1: Para 2: Para

6、3: Para 4:,introduction and purpose,reasons of applying for the job,advantages,expectation,Introduction,Main body,Closing,返回,How to enrich your sentences,I am very interested in your advertisement for I am writing to apply for I wish to apply for the position of I am writing to express my interest i

7、n I am very interested in the possibilities of working with your club as a teacher assistant.,Introduction,I read with interest your advertisement and would like to take up the challenge as ,To show your purpose,Main body,How to show your advantages,ability, good qualities, experience, personality,

8、motivation, etc.,I believe I have the qualifications and experience for the position. I think I am competent to meet your requirements. With good academic performance and sufficient practical experience, I feel I am the right person you are looking for.,1.I have a good command of 很好地掌握了2.I have an i

9、ntimate knowledge of 非常熟悉3.I am a very diligent student with a nice character and I am used to working as part of a team.4. I have two years experience as 5.I have more than years of practical experience.6.I obtained practical training in all aspects of7. I am outgoing and open-minded, which makes m

10、e.8.I am highly competent and self-motivated to work in 9. I have received quite a number of honours.,Closing,1.I should be glad to have a personal interview. 2.I am looking forward to your reply. 3.I will appreciate it if you give me an interview. 4.I should be grateful if I can get this opportunit

11、y. 5.I wonder if it is possible for you to 6.Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to meeting you in the near future.,To show your hope,假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華。你校擬選一些優(yōu)秀 學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語。你希望 參加此活動(dòng)。根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評(píng)選組寫一封申 請(qǐng)信： 對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)(如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處) 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等） 你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等

12、） 注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于100詞； 2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫； 3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學(xué): Chenxi Hope School,高考真題鏈接,2010年天津卷,Dear Sir or Madam, I am Lihua from Class One, Senior Two. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua,1、審定體裁、題材： 2、審定人稱： 3、審定時(shí)態(tài)： 4、審定要點(diǎn)： 5、審定結(jié)構(gòu)：,審題提示:,書信、申請(qǐng) 第一和第二人稱 現(xiàn)在時(shí)，將來時(shí) 認(rèn)識(shí)，優(yōu)勢，計(jì)劃 可分為三或四段,Dear Sir/Madam, Im

13、 lihua from class one,senior two. I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along well with the students and benefit the whole school. I am

14、kind, easy-going and always ready to help others. I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence. English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I am qualified for the position. I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need. Besides,Il