1、看圖作文開頭：一般過去時(常以天氣開頭)u it was a sunny/rainy/cloudy day!u what a bad weather! it was raining heavily.u it was fine weatehr, wasnt it? one day 結(jié)尾：一般現(xiàn)在時，表揚(yáng)好人好事，從中學(xué)到什么？u what a good/ kind/ good/clever/ smart/ brave/ warm-hearted boy/girl!u tom is , we should learn from him.u from the story, we know/learn

2、 that 正文：u 認(rèn)真審題看圖，看人物的動作表情，搞清事情的來龍去脈。u 一般過去時為主，兼有過去進(jìn)行時和過去將來時。u 為人物編上名字，利于描述。u 用23句話描述每一幅圖片（找短語，連詞組句）u 人物的話語最好以間接引語出現(xiàn)u 合理運(yùn)用連詞：first, then, next, finally, at last / and, so, because, although, as a result, but, however, alsoit was a sunny day. mr. and mrs. zhang brought their daughter lily to the park

3、. when they passed the grassland, they saw a boy playing with his pet dog happily. lily also liked dogs, so she wanted to keep a dog as her pet, too. but people were not allowed to keep pets in their apartment and her parents didnt agree. lily was so sad and she cried loudly. then, her father got a

4、good idea. he bought a toy dog in the toy shop and sent lily as a gift. when lily opened the gift, she was excited to see her “pet dog”. the family were all happy at last.this day, the students got the paper after the mid-term exam. tom did well in the exam. he got the full mark. and he showed his p

5、aper to mike proudly. at the same time, mike was very sad because he didnt pass the exam and he even cried. however, mike didnt give up and decided to catch up with others. he asked his teacher for help. after class, while mike was studying hard ,tom left school early. when tom was watching tv at ho

6、me, mike was studying for the next test. at last, mike got full mark in the end-of-year exam but tom failed. it was tom who cried this time. what a bad weather! it was raining hard all the time! a boy was on his way to school when he met an old man walking alone without umbrellas in the rain. the bo

7、y wanted to help the old man and ran up to him quickly. he borrowed the old mans stick and tied it with his own umbrella. so he could share the umbrella with the old man. they walked together and were both quite happy. i think we should learn from the boy. because helping others can make us happy. i

8、t was a sunny day during last summer vacation. ming practiced speaking english the whole morning. in the afternoon, he went to take piano lessons. then his father took him to the art school to learn painting. ming didnt have a rest until the evening. unfortunately, he was so stressed out that he felt terrible. his parents sent him to hospital. and the doctor said ming had a bad fever and should lie down and rest. now parents always try to fit as mu