1、2008年高考(廣東卷)英語(yǔ)讀寫任務(wù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀佛山市南海區(qū)石門中學(xué)獅山校區(qū) 謝期繁資料來(lái)源：廣東教育高中雜志2008年第9期廣東卷高考英語(yǔ)讀寫任務(wù)主要考查考生的篇章概括和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，滿分25分。今年讀寫任務(wù)的抽樣平均分為11.32，比去年略高。下面是2008年高考廣東卷讀寫任務(wù)的考場(chǎng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。一、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)在評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1. 按照評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，實(shí)行分析綜合法評(píng)分；2. Mike的發(fā)言概括部分必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：(1)Some basic life skills are necessary for a freshman to adjust himself to the college

2、 life.(2)Mike loved college, which offers students good facilities and rich activities.(3)To Mike, the important thing is to get himself active in things. 3. 寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括：(1)對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受，考生可以泛泛而談，也可以談具體的某一方面；(2)想象中的大學(xué)生活，內(nèi)容可以包括理想的大學(xué)、進(jìn)大學(xué)的心情（如：興奮、擔(dān)心等）、理想的大學(xué)生活（包括校園環(huán)境、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境、師生關(guān)系、社團(tuán)活動(dòng)等）等；(3)概況中學(xué)生活與大學(xué)生活之間的差異，比如：大學(xué)生

3、活更豐富、更自由，或大學(xué)生活更富有挑戰(zhàn)性、更需要獨(dú)立性等等。(4)給分時(shí)在通篇把握的基礎(chǔ)上，考慮要點(diǎn)是否完整，語(yǔ)法是否規(guī)范，句型是否多樣，詞匯是否豐富。各檔次的給分范圍和要求：項(xiàng)目分值評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)概括5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，沒(méi)有增加與原文無(wú)關(guān)的信息，沒(méi)有照抄原文的句子。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，沒(méi)有增加與原文無(wú)關(guān)的信息，沒(méi)有照抄原文的句子。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相關(guān)的信息，有個(gè)別句子抄自原文。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文比較規(guī)范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含較多不相關(guān)的信息，有較多的抄襲。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不

4、夠準(zhǔn)確，行文不夠規(guī)范。0-1沒(méi)有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相關(guān)的信息，大多數(shù)句子都抄自原文。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不準(zhǔn)確，行文不規(guī)范。寫作18-20包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒(méi)有（或極少）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。14-17包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。11-13包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤較好地運(yùn)用了合適

5、的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。7-10包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性一般。4-6只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。文章有些地方照抄源文。詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。大多數(shù)的句子出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。1-3只包含與題目所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。詞匯極其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒(méi)有正確的句子。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)零亂。0以下幾種情況，給0分：(1)完全抄襲原文（或其它文章）(2)文不對(duì)題(3)只寫一些零散的單詞

6、，完全沒(méi)有表達(dá)完整的內(nèi)容二、解讀標(biāo)準(zhǔn)下面以15篇專家評(píng)分的考場(chǎng)作文為例，解讀今年的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。示例1At first Mike didnt adjust himself well to the college life because of the lack of basic life skills and homesick. However, he got himself active in things and gradually enjoyed his new life. It is obvious that high school life is quite different from

7、 college life. We generally study the basic knowledge and seldom work out a project by ourselves. Additionally, most of us live with our parents and we arent independent enough to live alone. High school life is simpler than college life. However, college life is more challenges, Students not only s

8、tudying their own majors but also learn how to realize their dreams. They meet more new friends and gradually go into the real society. I enjoy my high school life a lot, which provides me with lots of useful skills and valuable experience. But I discover that I still lack some important life skills

9、, which requires me to improve myself. In order to adjust myself to the coming college life, I decide to gain more knowledge about the society and life skills. I will try my best to become an independent and mature college student.All in all, I am looking forward to the new college life. I will prep

10、are myself well and make improvement bit by bit.專家給分：420。 評(píng)析：該篇作文屬于第一檔。其概括部分能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文基本規(guī)范。寫作部分包含題目所給全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富，詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且極少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。雖然寫作部分有些許語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（其中homesick應(yīng)該用名詞形式，即homesickness；college life is more challenges應(yīng)為challenging），但其篇章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)格按照寫作內(nèi)容分段寫，較為直觀，受到專家的青睞，

11、給了20分的滿分。示例2According to what is mentioned that Mike shares his experience in his years of college. After the hard adjustment, he started to enjoy all the interesting activities in the college life.Actually, college life is quite different from high school life indeed. It reminds me of some unforget

12、table experience that having P.E. lesson together, going home together, copying others homework and so on.As beautiful the high school life is, I prefer to look forward for my college life. In my opinion, I will gain more freedom including playing and studying in college. I am eager to making practi

13、ce to what I most interested in . All in all, what I love most is college life.Moreover, I realize some effective measures should be taken by myself to adjust to the new life because of the difference between college life and the high school life. Obviously, I should begin to study living alone whic

14、h I dont need to consider then I was a high school student. As difficult there will be, I ought to try my best to overcome what happen without any assistance. Furthermore, the most important thing is I should make a daily list to make me adjust to college life, even social life quite easier.In any c

15、ase, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that I am ready to have my own college life.專家給分：3+16評(píng)析：該篇作文的概括部分基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文比較規(guī)范。寫作部分包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。示例3After hearing Mikes speech, I know how different betwe

16、en high school life and college life. In college, we should do and handle everything by ourselves. However, we will have a better study condition and make more friends in college.In my opinion, my high school life is so comfortable but unfree. I can not but admit that parents prepare everything for

17、me makes me feel convenient. However, their carefulness sometimes let me drop in a sense of unfreedom and made me lack necessary life skills.As far as I concerned, college life is total different from my high school life. In college, I can do everything I like and gives us freedom, we would think ho

18、me seriously.My ideal college life is that I can take part in dance team and make certain amount of friends. I can plan my time well and study freely. I can go to library any time.College life is so different from high school life. However, like it or not , we should adjust it. we should ask teacher

19、s or roommates for help.專家給分：2+14評(píng)析：此篇考場(chǎng)作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含較多不相關(guān)的信息。沒(méi)有按要求概括Mike的發(fā)言要點(diǎn)，用錯(cuò)人稱。作文部分包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。運(yùn)用了一些合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有一些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。示例4The lecture belonged to Mike said that he couldnt adjust the life in college at first and he must do any do anything he never did

20、before. However, he adapt himself to the life in college gradually. Then, he also talk us about the colourful activities in college as well as the way of getting together with each other.As far as for me, the life in senior school was both happy and unhappy. I can learn a lot of knowledge in my seni

21、or school from my teachers as well as I have get along with my classmate to do amount of things. we were trying our best and studying hard to realize our dream.In my opinion, the life in college is different from senior school. It is full of freedom and colourful. And them, we should do anything in

22、fresh, is that right. So I feel the life in college is of great comfort. I think that we havent anybody take care of us and blame us strictly in college as senior school. We should uncomfortable as well adjustless. Otherwise, I believe that we must adjust it through our hard work.I think that I will

23、 practice do some housework and take care of myself to prepare myself for college life.專家給分：2+12評(píng)析：此篇考場(chǎng)作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含一些不相關(guān)的信息，語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不夠準(zhǔn)確，行文不夠規(guī)范。包含題目所給大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。有些合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，有一定的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。示例5In Mikes first year of college, he know some basic life skills, could joined intere

24、sting activities and made more friend, which is diffent from high school, he enjoy his college life.In my senior high school, I think that it is little bored and dull. Because I have a lot of work to do and even I have not time to relax myself sometimes. And some times I plastics from morning to aft

25、er, I faced the books all the time. It is so bored life!In my eyes, the colleges life should be full of rich and colourful. As a college student, we only have classes in morning. and we should have much time to know by ourselves and do our things. Such as we can go to libraried to read books . we wa

26、nt to, do some activites in varies club. And we should have many actives to make friend and learn some social skills.I think I will try my best my colleges life if college life has a great difference to my sinor life. I am confident to adult it.專家給分：2+10評(píng)析：此篇考場(chǎng)作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含較多不相關(guān)的信息，語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不夠

27、準(zhǔn)確，行文不夠規(guī)范。作文部分包包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。示例6Mike is very happy because he can join some pubs, easier to make friends and can know some basic life skills in college.In high school, we can make some friends and you can study andtive in a small place. I feel very happy

28、 in three years high school life. I have take part in many activety with classmate.I think I will study moor freedom in college, making some friends indeep and can take part in many interesting pubs and clubs. But I should live in school without my parents and have less time to care them.When I stud

29、y in college, I will study hard and more care about my parents.專家給分：2+6示例7Mike said that he love the colleges life, and he think it is usefull and happy. Even he must accept the new life, and be most do many he never do .Join in a common ground can make friend.I think my schools life is nevos. Becau

30、se I must no many homework, even I dont like to do it. But the classmates are very friendly. And the activity is happy.I image that my college life is wonderful. Because it have many thing that I have never do. And I think it is open.專家給分：2+5示例8Mike is good man who has good college. From he first co

31、llege to last college, he hard to finish it. His last college is become advancer and had a common ground.I though, my middle schools life is warmly. my parents usually treave with me until grade 3. I usually plays football with my father. I though it is my happy time.I will go to university. I thoug

32、h my college unerity is may make many friends. Do some works in common. Because a good team and have many good thing wait for me.I know, middle schools life and university life have difference. But, I feel. I sure I can and I will a good unerity student. I ready to my anything. I will have my colleg

33、e unverrity life.專家給分：1+4評(píng)析：沒(méi)有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相關(guān)的信息。語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)不準(zhǔn)確，行文不規(guī)范。寫作部分只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。大多數(shù)的句子出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。示例9Mike very love life in the school. Mike never thought of in the high school. The Student Union organizes various parties wvery more.I love the high school. My teacher get

34、 me every more.In my school much every biness.So student so high.have some firend.專家給分：1+1評(píng)析：沒(méi)有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相關(guān)的信息。只包含與題目所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞。主題不明確。詞匯極其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒(méi)有正確的句子。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)零亂。示例10But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book. laundry, and the things yo

35、u have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! The Students Union organizes various parties every week.This is published as The Good University Guide, which features over fifty tables ranking universities by degree subject. It also includes course charts, teaching and resear

36、ch ratings, and advice on choosing your course. If youve enjoyed reading this magazine and want to keep up with the latest UK student news and views, place your order now for issues 3 and 4.專家給分：0+0評(píng)析：完全照抄原文。三、備考建議1. 注重平時(shí)書寫的訓(xùn)練，保持卷面的整潔。由于評(píng)卷時(shí)間緊，評(píng)卷量大，評(píng)卷人員高度集中注意力。平均每人每天要評(píng)四百份試卷，基本上不到一分鐘的時(shí)間要閱完一份卷并給出一個(gè)合理的分

37、數(shù)。在這種情況下，如果考生卷面差，就會(huì)嚴(yán)重影響到考生的成績(jī)。所有考生的讀寫任務(wù)題都要進(jìn)行二評(píng)，有時(shí)兩位評(píng)卷老師的得分可能會(huì)相差10分之多（當(dāng)然這種情況要經(jīng)過(guò)第三位老師進(jìn)行三評(píng)）。究其原因，主要是因?yàn)榭忌臅鴮懥什?，卷面差。書寫?wèn)題非一日之功，一定要從高一開始就抓好，最好先臨摹英文字帖，一定要注意字跡的大小問(wèn)題，盡量做到不要太小，另外最好不要出現(xiàn)涂改現(xiàn)象，每次寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該先列提綱，想好了再寫。2. 寫好句子，夯實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。讀寫任務(wù)的話題一般都是貼近學(xué)生生活，為考生所熟悉，考生會(huì)“有話可說(shuō)”，在內(nèi)容上，大部分學(xué)生都可以按要求寫。但從評(píng)卷的情況來(lái)看，考生所寫的句子錯(cuò)誤較多。因此，重視句子寫作訓(xùn)練至關(guān)重要。

38、這是進(jìn)行讀寫任務(wù)訓(xùn)練前最基本也是最重要的一環(huán)。首先要求學(xué)生寫好簡(jiǎn)單句，抓住所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容的主干，即主語(yǔ)部分和謂語(yǔ)部分，然后添加一些成分，在寫好簡(jiǎn)單句的基礎(chǔ)上再進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展，例如并列句、復(fù)合句以及一些特殊句型的句子。在句子寫作時(shí)，特別注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的正確運(yùn)用，單復(fù)數(shù)、語(yǔ)序、人稱等問(wèn)題也需要關(guān)注。其次是熟練使用一些特殊的句式，例如強(qiáng)調(diào)句型、倒裝句型等。3. 加強(qiáng)針對(duì)性的訓(xùn)練。在對(duì)讀寫任務(wù)進(jìn)行題型訓(xùn)練時(shí)，要做到“要點(diǎn)完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，句型多樣，詞匯豐富”。首先，是寫摘要訓(xùn)練。在讀寫任務(wù)提供的讀的文章中找到每一段的主題句，然后找出關(guān)鍵詞。所寫的摘要圍繞這些關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行組織句子。以今年高考的讀寫任務(wù)為例，文章的

39、第一段的關(guān)鍵詞是adjustment和basic life skills, 第二段是love，第三段有 get active in, 評(píng)卷教師評(píng)分的依據(jù)主要在這幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞上。另外抓關(guān)鍵詞不一定就不用原文的詞，不一定就非得用另一個(gè)什么詞來(lái)代替原文的某個(gè)詞，這與題目要求不直接引用原文的句子是有區(qū)別的。其次，是對(duì)讀寫任務(wù)寫的訓(xùn)練。在高考的評(píng)卷中，考生作文的段落是否清晰很重要，評(píng)卷老師在較短的時(shí)間內(nèi)要給出一個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)，只能是抓住段落的要點(diǎn)了。因此，在訓(xùn)練寫120詞的論述或敘述時(shí)，一定要按照寫作要求的要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分段，每段為一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。扣緊要求，一步一步來(lái)寫；這就相當(dāng)于你按順序回答問(wèn)題。每段的內(nèi)容比例要適當(dāng)，動(dòng)筆

40、前為每一部分的內(nèi)容設(shè)定好寫幾句話。有的同學(xué)常常對(duì)有話可講的內(nèi)容盡情地隨意發(fā)揮，洋洋灑灑一大段，而把該寫的要點(diǎn)部分漏掉或沒(méi)有足夠充分的表達(dá)。4. 加強(qiáng)對(duì)高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用。在閱卷速度較快的情況下，要想引起評(píng)卷老師的注意，得高分，在保持卷面整潔、書寫漂亮的情況下，還必須使用高級(jí)詞匯、多樣的句式和合理的過(guò)渡。因?yàn)檫@牽涉到同一檔次的得分高低問(wèn)題，如同屬于1820檔次，若考生正確運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，就可以給到20分，否則就有可能只有18分。下面這篇是考場(chǎng)高分作文，評(píng)卷場(chǎng)老師評(píng)為滿分25分。 Mike said it was tough to accomplish the general

41、adjustment but he began to enjoy himself after that due to various activities. He advised freshmen to be active in order to make new friends.As far as I am concerned, Im preparing to enter a university and leaving the high school where Ive been studying for three years. I really had a great time in

42、this school where I grew from a nave kid to a grown-up. I think I will absolutely miss my life here and miss every single person that I met here. But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college. I sometimes daydream that maybe Ill bump into a handsome boy, have fire friendly

43、roommates and be taught by a group of fabulous teachers. It would be wonderful if this ideal daydream come into reality!However, life is like a box of chocolate and youll never know whats inside until you open it. Of course the college life will greatly differ from my previous life in high school. But Im an active girl and Ill do what Mike taught us totake part in various activities. Im sure Ill make a