高三復(fù)習(xí),writing,高考書面表達的評分原則:,按評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五個檔次,第五檔：2125分 第四檔：1620分 第三檔：1115分 第二檔：610分 第一檔：15分 0分,24-25 21-23,19-20 16-18,14-15 11-13,9-10 6-8,4-5 1-3,第一檔 ( 4-5分） 大部分句子可讀性差，只能通詞匯 勉強傳遞少部分信息，詞匯明顯有限，基本 沒有句子能力。 （1-3分）只能提到零星內(nèi)容要點，寫了一些 無關(guān)內(nèi)容， 無法傳遞所需信息,Remember: 不要照抄試卷上閱讀或其他的篇章內(nèi)容！,第一 杜絕 0 分,第三檔 （14-15）允許遺漏一個主要內(nèi)容要點，但不影 響預(yù)期的寫作目的。句子雖然有一些錯誤， 但基本可讀。至少有2-3個基本正確的句子并都與不同的主要內(nèi)容要點有關(guān)。基本完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。,第二 保證15分,第五檔 24-25 1) 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點 2）句式靈活，能合理使用復(fù)合句，非謂語 動詞，倒裝句，省略句等語法結(jié)構(gòu) 3）銜接合理，過度自然，句子流暢，層次 分明，詞匯豐富地道，語氣自然得體。 完全達到預(yù)期的寫作目的。允許有個別 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的小錯誤（因盡力 使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，高級詞匯所致） 21-23 要求同上,允許有2-4個不影響理解的小錯誤,第三 突破20分,書面表達六步法,2014年高考海南卷英語書面表達題 一家英語報社向?qū)W生征文，主題是“十年后的我”, 請根 據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想，完成短文。 1 家庭 2 工作 3 業(yè)余生活 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3.開頭語已為你寫好 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,一、審題,文體，人稱，時態(tài),1 文體：充滿想象的記敘文 2 人稱：I ( we ) 3 時態(tài)：將來時,二、抓要點,確定要點齊全，寫出和要點 相關(guān)的單詞或短語,要點一 家庭 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： marry , husband , wife , child, house 要點二 工作 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯: teacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives 要點三 業(yè)余生活 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV , read, dance, sing,三、擴展成句,把與要點相關(guān)的詞匯擴展成 句。為了保證句子正確，最好 寫簡單句。,要點一 家庭 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： marry , husband , wife , child, house Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Ill have a handsome husband. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house.,要點二 工作 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： teacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. .,要點三 業(yè)余生活 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV ,read, dance. sing I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time. Ill go travelling with my family.,四、連句成文,適當(dāng)使用連接詞把寫出的句 子連成篇章,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time.,五、查錯改錯,1.注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)等是否正確 2.是否有破句（缺成分） 3.詞數(shù)是否符合要求 4.是否需要合適的開頭與結(jié)尾,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time.,In ten years, Ill be 28 years old.,who is very gentle and loves me very much.,with a swimming pool.,Ill be a teacher teaching English in a high school.,My English is so excellent that I am popular with the students.,In a word, my life in the future will be colorful.,，,and,六、謄寫,修改無誤后，認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫在規(guī)定的地方。 卷面一定要工整!,美文欣賞：2014年高考書面表達,23分,Practice,2013年高考遼寧卷,一個英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿。請你寫一篇英文稿件， 介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個節(jié)日里的主要活動。寫作要點： 1、它是中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一； 2、家人團聚； 3、賞月、吃月餅、 4、還有旅游、訪友等其他活動。 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使用文連貫； 3.開頭語已您寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： 中秋節(jié): the Mid-Autumn Festival 農(nóng)歷: lunar calendar 賞月: enjoy the full moon 月餅: moon cake,一、審題,1 說明文，介紹中秋節(jié) 2 人稱： it, we 3 時態(tài)： 現(xiàn)在時,二、抓要點,中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： traditional, festival, China 2 回家和家人團聚 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： come home, get together, family 3 吃月餅，賞月 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon 4,旅游，訪友 travel, visit friends and relatives,三、擴展成句,中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： traditional, festival, China 2 回家和家人團聚 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： go back home, get together, family 3 吃月餅，賞月 與要點相關(guān)的詞匯： eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon 4,旅游，訪友 travel, visit friends and relatives,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China.,We usually come home to get together with our family.,We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon.,We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,四、連句成文,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We usually Come back home to get together with our family. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,五、查錯改錯,注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)等是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求,是否有破句（缺成分）等。,The Mid-Autumn Festival i