1、第第7感感 寫作寫作 教育成功教育成功話話題題 導(dǎo)導(dǎo)語語 教育是個永恒的話題，成功是每個人的期盼，近年教育是個永恒的話題，成功是每個人的期盼，近年“虎媽虎媽”“”“狼爸等一再引起人們熱議，教育成功是個狼爸等一再引起人們熱議，教育成功是個不容忽視的熱點。不容忽視的熱點。話話題題 必必備備必備詞匯：必備詞匯：bear heavy load/burden負(fù)擔(dān)很重負(fù)擔(dān)很重conquer hardships 戰(zhàn)勝困難戰(zhàn)勝困難further education 進修進修go abroad 出國出國achieve success 取得成功取得成功receive education 接受教育接受教育long

2、for 希望；期盼希望；期盼必備句型：必備句型：The more youve learned，the better prepared/equipped for the future youll be.你學(xué)得越多，為未來的準(zhǔn)備就越充分。你學(xué)得越多，為未來的準(zhǔn)備就越充分。What everyone longs for is success.所有人都期盼成功。所有人都期盼成功。Only by/through hard work can one achieve success.只有努力，才能成功。只有努力，才能成功。No pains，no gains.不勞無獲。不勞無獲。If you put your

3、 heart into it，nothing can be difficult.世上無難事，只要肯登攀。世上無難事，只要肯登攀。佳佳作作 賞賞析析(2019湖北卷湖北卷)請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。寫一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：注意：1.無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；2除詩歌外，文體不限；除詩歌外，文體不限；3文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；文中不得透露個人姓名和

4、學(xué)校名稱；4詞數(shù)為詞數(shù)為120左右。左右。_【滿分佳作】【滿分佳作】 Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere

5、in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells m

6、e that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 【名師點撥】【名師點撥】 根據(jù)提示根據(jù)提示You cannot choose what you are given，but you can choose how you make use of it.(你不能選擇別人給你不能選擇別人給你的，但是你可以選擇如何利用別人給你的。你的，但是你可以選擇如何利用別人給你的。)及題目要求，及題目要求，結(jié)合事例可知，本文可寫成記敘文，記敘對你有極大影響結(jié)合事例可知，本文可寫成記

7、敘文，記敘對你有極大影響的事，以及你的感想。文章可以寫成兩段或三段，采用第的事，以及你的感想。文章可以寫成兩段或三段，采用第一人稱，記敘事情時用過去時態(tài)，發(fā)表感想用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。一人稱，記敘事情時用過去時態(tài)，發(fā)表感想用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 本文使用了大量的高級句式，如：本文使用了大量的高級句式，如：Disappointed as I felt at.(as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)，I found the teachers patient and considerate.(find的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))，Whenever I had difficulties.(Whenever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)，.which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.(非非限制性定語從句限制性定語從句)，.it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.(強調(diào)句，強調(diào)句，而且使用了而且使用了not.but句式句式)，使得文章非常精彩。而高級詞，使得