1、Styles of Living orThe Advantages and Disadvantages of Living with Parents作文錯(cuò)誤示例 Whether living with parents or not. whether 引導(dǎo)從句，可做賓語(yǔ)、主語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)、同位語(yǔ)，可引導(dǎo)帶to的不定式 They dont want to let them worry them. I think we should independent and adapt the development social. Now, many young people who work at outsid

2、e. Parents mind is out and some fresh things which they dont understand. Despite there will be some problems, we love each other, can overcome everything. Despite the parents is good mind for us, we listen them talk more we will feel bored. Their habits are different from parents so that live togeth

3、er will have fights. I think live with parents is grateful. As the time going by, my parents will be older and older. So many many problems will appear. So I want to live with them so that I can help them solving any problems. Morning, when you wake up, your mother has prepared the breakfast. And at

4、 the evening when you come home from home your company, our parent keeping the kettle warm for a long time. The advantage of living with parents has a lot. It make family more warmer and happier. In my opinion, Every coin has two sides. If more communication between parents and children and more exp

5、erience to each other, living with parents must be a best way of life. They dont lonely. Living with parents is harm more than good. We should independent living when we are adult. When people living with parents They may be lost the ability of independent. Children always living with their parents.

6、 Living with parents have advantage also have disadvantage. Parents can control your time, it can lead you to crazy. Parents needed us stay at their side. So if you dont have special situation, we should live with our parents. As we all known With the development of economics We will not adapt to so

7、cial. If we live alone, we may feel more freedom. They born us To our young people For the youngs/youngers What you like, what you do.幾類(lèi)作文常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤幾類(lèi)作文常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤 從句連接詞缺失，最主要的是從句連接詞缺失，最主要的是THERE BE句型句型： There is a saying goes . 應(yīng)為T(mén)here is a saying which goes . There are many people think that. 應(yīng)為T(mén)here are man

8、y people who think that.或者直接說(shuō)Many people think that. Its the major thing affects peoples friendship. 少了一個(gè)that 語(yǔ)義重復(fù)語(yǔ)義重復(fù)In my opinion, I agree with the view that. agree一詞本身就表示說(shuō)話人的觀點(diǎn)，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that. is right Run-on Sentence（串句）（串句） 特點(diǎn)：串句是指誤將兩個(gè)串在一起的句子當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子, 有的用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi),有的什么標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)都沒(méi)有

9、使用。 Children should stand on their own feet, it is good for their future. 斷句方面的錯(cuò)誤斷句方面的錯(cuò)誤一句句子沒(méi)有結(jié)束，又開(kāi)始新的一句，結(jié)果造成句子結(jié)構(gòu)不全，這就成為斷句。例句：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it. 動(dòng)詞的不定式，分詞，動(dòng)名詞的邏輯主語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的不定式，分詞，動(dòng)名詞的邏輯主語(yǔ)不一致：不一致： 例例1: When living with parents, they may contro

10、l our life. 修改后：修改后：When we live with parents, they may control our life. 修飾語(yǔ)錯(cuò)位修飾語(yǔ)錯(cuò)位I believe I can do it well and I will better knowthe world outside the campus. 句子不完整句子不完整 There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ，radio ，newspaper and so on 。 本句后半部分“for example by TV，radio ，newsp

11、aper and so on 。”不是一個(gè)完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語(yǔ)，不能獨(dú)立成句。 中式英語(yǔ)：中式英語(yǔ)： Today， Money to everybody is very importance， ours eat， cloth， live， go etc. This is the society give the students first lesson. 搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤搭配方面的錯(cuò)誤 In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. 句義嚴(yán)重反復(fù)，缺乏變化句

12、義嚴(yán)重反復(fù)，缺乏變化Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. 詞性的錯(cuò)誤詞性的錯(cuò)誤affect/effectsuccess/succeedeconomic/economy Styles of Livi

13、ng 生活方式生活方式 1有些人愿意和父母居住在一起 2有些人想自己獨(dú)立居住 3我的看法 Some people enjoy living together with their parents after they have grown up. They hold the opinion because, living with parents , they can take better care of their parents and vice versa. Meanwhile, they can turn to their parents for help if they get i

14、nto trouble or have some difficulties. To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable than that in a small family. Others, however, prefer to live separately. They cherish the idea to be independent of their parents, seek more freedom and wish to have a place of their own, in which they ca

15、n do what they like. Besides, they dont want to be overprotected by their parents but long for chance to face the society by themselves. As to me, I like an independent life style in spite of the fact I love my parents. Different generations have different life styles and values. What one generation likes may no