1、Common Mistakes in Integrated Writingdevilkin1模板使用問題正確：第2,3,4段首句是對全段的囊括錯誤：列舉lecture中的一個細(xì)節(jié)To begin with,the professor says that the temperature at that time is much higher than today. According to the reading passage, the cold winter made it hard for plants to live so that dinosaurs would have to mig

2、rate to find food. The professor argues that its a good grown condition at that time because the sun shines 24 hours make it warmer and there are lots of vegetable in the winter for dinosaurs to eat. There is no need for them to migrate.2正確：第2,3,4段中先寫passage中的觀點(diǎn)，然后再寫lecture不同意以及為什么不同意。錯誤：第2,3,4段先寫le

3、cture的觀點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)，然后寫passage中的觀點(diǎn)。Also, the professor says that the found of the skeletons doesnt mean it migrated. They might stay in groups to achieve extra protection from predators. The professor gives an example of a kind of animals to live in a herd to protect themselves. The reading opinion is that

4、edmontosaurs live in herds so the migrate to the south.3反駁中的方法IBT integrated writing 中一般涉及兩種反駁方法，ie. Professor 反駁passage時一般兩種方法：1. 駁論據(jù)本身 2. 駁論據(jù)到論點(diǎn)的推理特別需要注意的是在寫第二類反駁方法的時候，切忌寫成第一類4T-rex:PassagelectureFast runnernot a fast runner?立1. teeth marks on theeat everything when skeleton of small hungryeat dea

5、d dinosaursanimals2. Bone structure like tigersthin bone wall3. Relative K run fasthead much biggerthan Ks5Edmontosaur:PassagelectureMigratenot migrate1. diet: no food in winter nutritious dead plants from summer when 24 hour sunshine2. Live in herdherd cannot prove migration3. Can run long distance

6、juveniles cannot6Lastly, the professor rebuts the readings point that T-rex is close to another kind of dinansaur and that type run fast, by starting that that kind of dinosaur has small head that professor points out that T-rex has big head.Finally, the prof disproves the readings idea that the fac

7、t that T-rex and K and cousin and K ran fast can show that T-rex could also run fast. The prof points out that K has a relatively smaller head, while T-rexs head is much too big to support when running.7In the lecture, the speaker casts doubt on the reading passages idea that the edmontosaurs migrat

8、e to survive when winter comes.The speaker thinks that the reading passages idea is incorrect.To begin with, the speaker asserts that edmontosaurs diet cannot support the migration hypothesis. According to the reading passage, edmontosaurs eat plants. However, plants cannot grow during the cold wint

9、er, thus they have to migrate to find food. On the contrary, the speaker states that the temperature of arctic area is much warmer than todays and the 24-hour sunlight provide a really good conditon for plants growing. Also, in the winter, there is lots of nutrients in the dead plants, so edmontosau

10、rs dont have to move to another area.8Second, the speaker rebuts that living in herd doesnt mean that edmontosaurs migrate. In the lecture, the execavaion shows that edmontosaur lives in herd and it helps them migrate. The speaker says that animals might live in herd for other purpose. It can protec

11、t them from predators. There is another kind of animals which live in herd but do not migrate.Third, the speaker claims that not all the edmontosaurs have the phsical capability to run fast in long distances. According to the lecture, edmontosaurs can run fast, thus they can easily migrate to the warmer area. The speaker says that juvenile edmontosaurs cannot run as fast as the adult edmonto