讀后續(xù)寫情感描寫語料積累（直接描寫+間接描寫）

在讀后續(xù)寫中，情緒描寫在展現(xiàn)人物性格，故事發(fā)展，價值觀方面有重要作用。大部分的讀后續(xù)寫故事，人物是從“負向negative”情緒，最終轉化到“正向positive”情緒的。通常可以使用兩種方法描寫情緒：一、直接描寫，即句中直接出現(xiàn)表示情緒的單詞或短語。如:Tohisdismay,hefailedtopassthetestforthesecondtime.二、間接描寫，即通過表情和肢體動作來體現(xiàn)人物的某種情緒。如：HeslammedthedoorbehindhimbeforeMoncouldsayaword.直接描寫·語料積累句型1:一陣......情感+來襲(來到某人身上)①

Aflush/flood/wave/ripple/surge/burst

of+

情感名詞

+sweepover/floodover/rush

through+sb.例句：Theaudienceapplaudingwildly,shefeltasurgeofpriderushingthroughher.觀眾們瘋狂地鼓掌，她感到一股自豪感涌上心頭。②

Sbexplodedinto/with+情緒名詞；sbglowedwith+情緒名詞例句：

Hearinghernamedannouncedasthewinner,sheexplodedintowildjoy.聽到她被宣布為獲勝者，她欣喜若狂。③情緒名詞+creepon/uponsb

某種情緒爬上心頭例句：AwaveofpaniccreptonMarryandshewasrootedtothespot.一陣恐慌向瑪麗襲來，她被嚇得站在原地不動。④情緒名詞+seize/possess/takeholdofsb

被某種情緒支配例句：

Pandorawasseizedbycuriosityandopenedthebox.潘多拉被好奇心抓住，打開了盒子。句型2:某人深感....../被某種感情強烈影響①Sb+beoverwhelmed/overcome

with/by

+

情緒名詞例句：Overcome

with

bitterdisappointment

athisfailingtowinaprize,helockedhimselfupinhisroom.

他對未能獲獎感到極度失望，于是把自己鎖在房間里。②

Sbbeoverflowingwith+情緒名詞例句：

Shewasoverflowingwithlovethemomentshegatheredherlittledaughterintoherarms.當她把小女兒擁入懷中的那一刻，她的心中充滿了愛。句型3:

某人是如此......以至于他/她感覺好像

Sbbeso+情緒形容詞thatsbfeltasif/asthough.....例句：shewassofuriousthatshefeltasthoughherlungsweretoexplode.她氣得肺都要炸了。間接描寫·

語料積累句型1:細化具體表情肢體動作

（以下為一般過去時）表達開心:

hisfacelitup;herlipscurved;hereyestwinkled/sparkled/glowed/shined；shegrinnedfromeartoear；jumpupanddown;表達傷心:

tears

streameddown

hercheeks;

shesobbed,buryingherfaceinherhands;

hestoodmotionless,

staringintospace;表達生氣:

herfaceturnedred;hebithislip

andclenchedhisfists;Istormed

outoftheroom,slammingthedoor

behindmefuriously;glaredatsbwithfuriouseyes;

表達內(nèi)疚/尷尬:

herfaceflushed/burned;

loweredone'shead;withone'sheaddrooping/duckingdownguiltily;

表達緊張:

pacebackandforth;palms/handsweresweating;

shewasbiting

hernailsandtappingherfoorimpatiently;

hervoice

wasshaking/trembling;

句型2:

豐富的比喻句或俚語比喻句：Sheshookallover,

feelinglike

sittingonpinsandneedles.Ifeellike

allmyinsideshavebeendrainedoutandIfeelemptyandletdown.Thesmileonherfaceshonelike

a

diamond.I

feellike

Iamfloatinginanoceanof

sadness.Frustratedandpanic-stricken,Iwasstuckinthethickforestjustlike

awanderingsheep.俚語：Whenhis

motherkissedhim

onthecheek,it

seemed

asif

thebaby

were

ontopoftheworld.

Whenshediscoveredshe'dgotthejobshewas

overthemoon.Withbutterfliesinhisstomach,

hewas

unabletoutteraword.Hebouncedintotheoffice,

fullofthejoysofspring.句型3:用環(huán)境襯托法表達情緒(有聲有色有味）（表達正向情緒）The

glistening

sunshine

waspouring

down

and

all

the

mountains

seemedto

glow.Bathedin

thegoldensunlight

andbreathing

thefreshair,shefeltlike

afreebird.Withgentlebreezekissingher

cheeks,

she

walkedintheforest

likea

jollyelf.Thesunset

castaglowover

village,

thebirdswere

tweetingmerrilyinthetrees,andthegrasswereswaying

happilyinthewind

asifsharingmyjoy.（表達悲傷、難過）Therewas

adeadlystillness

inthehouse.

Aheavysilence

blanketed

theroom.

Theskyisovercast,

darkenedwith

gloomyclouds,andthewholeworld

seemedasifitwereenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.The

never-endingdarkn