#關(guān)于狗的神態(tài)描寫(xiě)Howtomakethedoginyourwritingvividandeye-catching?l.Uponhismaster'sarrival,thedogleapttohisfeet,snortedhappilyandboundedforward?（高興狗狗）2.Thedogcurledintoawetlumpandlayshiveringontheground.（可憐狗狗）3.Awareoftheimmensedanger,thecrippleddogwasdoingimpressionofacorpse?（膽怯狗狗）4.Hestretched,shookhimselfandcircledseveraltimesbeforedroppingtotheground.（伸個(gè)懶腰抖抖身，保證有個(gè)好睡眠）5.Withprickedears,hewatchedforamomentandthenyawned?（警覺(jué)狗狗）6.Lyingontheground,thedogkepthiseyeswideopen,earsflat,avibratinggrowldeepinhischest.（別惹我，后果自負(fù)）7.Thedogwanderedofftoresthernosesinherpaws.（我想靜靜，不想理你）8.Dogstakemuchpleasureinrollingandrubbingtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws?（調(diào)皮狗狗）9.Seeingthemeatinthemaster'shand,thelittledogwaggeditstailandwatchedwithhopefuleyes.（饞狗狗）10.Atthesightofastrangerapproachingthehouse,thedogwatchedhim,earsup,headslightlycocked.（高度戒備狗狗）11.Thedog,whenintentlywatchingandslowlyapproachingtheprey,keptoneofitsfore-legsdoubledupforalongtime,readyforthenextcautiousstep.（伺機(jī)一扌卜，成敗在此一舉）12.Littlepuppiesenjoyplayinggrowlingandbitingeachother'sfacesandlegs.（天真爛漫小可愛(ài)）13.Thedoggotworried,crawlinguparoundtheoldman'sfeetasiftoseekforsafetyandwarmth.（好怕怕，另H過(guò)來(lái)）2人與動(dòng)物的讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)集錦1AheroicdogLikemostdogswhosehomesaresituatedonlargeplotsofland,oneNewZealanddogregularlywentoffexploringthroughthefarmlandaroundhishomeforhoursatatime.ButasLouie,asheepdogrescuedfromashelterwhenhewasjustapuppy,gotolder,histripsgotshorterandshorter.NowthatLouieis12yearsold,hechoosestostayclosetohomeandhardlyevergoesouttoexploreanymore,whichiswhyhisfamilywassoworriedwhenherecentlydisappearedanddidn'treturnhomeasusual.“Mymotherwasalittleupsetashehadstoppedhiswandering，”saidMarolynDiver，whoseparentsownLouie.“Wewereveryconcernedthathemightforgetwherehishomewas.”Butthankfully，Louieturnedupatthehouseafewhourslater.“Helookedsotiredandhadbasicallyjustcollapsed崩潰），"Marolynsaid.“Wewereconcernedthatsomeonemighthavehurthim.ButthenwerealizedtherewasasmallnoteattachedtoLouie'scollar.Afterreadingthenote，Ifeltcompletereliefandrelaxed，andthenmyheartmelted."“Louieistheherooftheday，"readthenote，whichwaswrittenbyaneighboraboutamileaway.“HeledmetoMaddyindistressstuckunderapileofbranches．Cheers，Rob．"“AccordingtoRob，Louiewaswaitingforhimathishouseanddemandedtobefollowed.Robsaidthathewas100percentsurethatLouieknewwhathewasdoing，andleadinghimtoMaddywashispurefocus，"Marolynexplained.注意：1．所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4．續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1OnceRobfoundMaddyLouiehelpedhimdigherout.Paragraph2：“ThatnightwewereveryworriedaboutLouie，"Marolynsaid.【參考范文】OnceRobfoundMaddy，Louiehelpedhimdigherout.AccordingtoRob，Louiepulledatbranchesanddugheroutoftheground.RobsaidthatassoonasMaddywasfree，bothdogsrantoanearbypondandjumpedintoitandbegantodrinkwater.ThenhegaveLouieahugehandfulofdogbiscuitsasathank-you.HeknewthatLouiemightgetintroubleforbeinglateforhome，sohethoughthewouldwriteasmallnotetoexplainwhyLouiewasabsent.“ThatnightwewereveryworriedaboutLouie，"Marolynsaid.“Hecouldhardlywalkandlookedterrible.Wewereconcernedthathemightnotmakeitthroughthenight."Thankfully，LouiewasbacktonormalthenextmorningwhenRobcamebywithMaddyforavisit.Marolynsaid，“IthaschangedthewayIlookathim.AndIthinkmyparentsfeelthesameway.I'msoproudofhim."□|2閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Itwasoneofthehottestdaysofthedryseason.Wehadnotseenraininalmostamonth.Thecropsweredying.Cowshadstoppedgivingmilk.Thestreamswerelonggonebackintotheearth.Ifwedidn'tseesomerainsoonwewouldloseeverything.IwasinthekitchenmakinglunchforthefamilywhenIsawmysixyear-oldson，Billy，walkingtowardthewoods.Icouldonlyseehisback.Hewasn'twalkinginhisusualway.Hewasobviouslywalkingwithagreateffor，ttryingtobeasstillaspossible.Minutesafterhedisappearedintothewood，shecamerunningoutagain，towardthehouse.Momentslater，however，hewasonceagainwalkinginthatslowandpurposefulsteptowardthewoods.Thisactivitywentonforoveranhour：walkingcautiouslytothewoods，thenrunningbacktothehouse.Finally，mycuriositygotthebestofme.Icreptoutofthehouseandfollowedhimonhisjourney.Hewascuppingbothhandsinfrontofhimashewalked；beingverycarefulnottospillthewaterhecarried.Branchesandthornsslapped拍打）hislittlefacebuthedidnottrytoavoidthem.Hehadamuchgreaterpurpose.AsIleanedagainstatreetospyonhim，Isawthemostamazingsite.Severallargedeersappearedthreateninginfrontofhim.ButBillywalkedrightuptothem.Ialmostscreamedforhimtogetaway.AndIsawababydeerlayingonthegroun，dobviouslysufferingfromheavylossofwaterandheatexhaustion，liftitsheadwithgreatefforttolap（舔飲）upthewaterinmybeautifulboy'shand.Paragraph1：Whenthewaterwasgone，Billyjumpeduptorunbacktothehouse.Paragraph2：AndlaterIknewwhatwasgoingon.【參考范文】Whenthewaterwasgone，Billyjumpeduptorunbacktothehouse.Mycuriosityonceagaindrovemetofollowhimback.Afterhereachedthekitchen，heturnedonthetap.Ashewastryinghardtocupbothhandstoreceivethewater，itwasstillrunningawaythroughhisfingers.Andhealsohadgreatdifficultyturningoffthetapwithhandsoccupied.Heseemedtobesosorryandselfcondemnedforhiswastingofwater.Wearinganoteofupsetonhisface，hecarrieditcarefullytowardthewoods.AndlaterIknewwhatwasgoingon.Itbegantomakesensetomewhyhewasn'twalkinginhisusualway.Istoodontheedgeofthewoodswatchingthemostbeautifulheartworkingsohardtosavealife.Asmytearsbegantohittheground，theyweresuddenlyjoinedbyotherdrops...andmoredrops.Itwasasifthenatureitselfwasmovedbythegreateffortmadebymysonandbegantoweepwithpride.3閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Littlesnowhadfallenthiswinter.ForReuventhefrier（皮衣制作工）itwasabadyear,andafterlonghesitationhedecidedtosellZlatehtheoldgoat.Thetownbutcherhadofferedeightsilvercoinsforthegoat.Reuventoldhisoldestboy,Aaron,totakethegoattotown.Aaronunderstoodwhatitmeant,buthehadtoobeyhisfather.Hissisterscriedloudly.Aarontookalongtwoslicesofbreadtoeatontheroad.Heneededtodeliverthegoatbyeveningandreturnthenextdaywiththemoney.Whilethefamilysaidgoodbye,Zlatchstoodaspatientlyasever.Zlatehtrustedhumanbeings.ThesunwasshiningwhenAaronleft.Suddenlytheweatherchanged,andafterawhileitbegantosnow.SoontheirpathwascompletelycoveredandAarongotlost.BeneaththesnowAaron'sbootstouchedthesoftnessofaplowedfield.Herealizedthathewasnolongerontheroad.Zlatehbleated哀（鳴）asifaskingtobetakenhome.Aaronlookedaroundhopingtofindafarmerdrivingasleigh（雪橇）alongtheway.Buthecouldseenothing.Aaronknewthatiftheydidnotfindshelter,theywouldfreezetodeath.Suddenlyhemadeouttheshapeofahill.Whenhecamenearit,herealizedthatitwasalargehaystack（大干草堆）coveredbysnow.Aaronknewthattheyweresaved.Whenhereachedthehay,heduganestforhimselfandthegoat.Itwasalwayswarminthehay.AndhaywasfoodforZlateh.Zlateh,satdownandseemedtohaveregainedherconfidenceinman.Aaronatehisbread,butafterthedifficultjourneyhewasstillhungry.HelookedatZlatehandrealizedthathewouldnotbestarvedtodeath.Goat'smilkwassweet.Zlatehatefrequentlyandherbodygaveforthananimalwarmth,andAaronhuggedhertightly.Thesnowfellfor3daysandthewindquieteddown.Paragraph1:.Onthemorningofthefourthday,Aaronheardtheringingofsleighbells.Paragraph2:ThenewsthatAaronandZlatehwerecominguptheroadwasagreatjoyinthefamily.【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇記敘文。通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，文章講述了父親Reuven為了度過(guò)艱難冬季，決定賣(mài)掉家里最老的山羊一Zlateh,長(zhǎng)子Aaron負(fù)責(zé)將Zlateh送到屠戶那里換錢(qián)，在途中，他們?cè)庥隽孙L(fēng)雪天氣，Aaron尋得了大堆干草堆，又餓又冷的情況之下，Zlateh的羊奶給與了Aaron溫飽。歷經(jīng)三天的風(fēng)雪天氣終于停了下來(lái)，在一位過(guò)路農(nóng)民的幫助之下，他和羊一起回家與家人團(tuán)聚。續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，第一段開(kāi)頭是：Onthemorningofthefourthday,Aaronheardtheringingofsleighbells.（第四天早上，Aaron聽(tīng)到了雪橇的鈴聲。）所以應(yīng)該寫(xiě)Aaron從干草堆里出來(lái)后發(fā)生的事情，由首句的“Aaronheardtheringingifsleighbells"，可知，要描述的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是Aaron和羊如何獲得雪橇主人的救助，比如大聲呼喊；同時(shí)，由于前文提供的線索“Goat'smilkwassweet.Zlatehatefrequentlyandherbodygaveforthananimalwarmth,andAaronhuggedhertightly.（羊奶是甜的。Zlateh頻繁地吃干草，她的身體發(fā)出動(dòng)物般的溫暖，Aaron緊緊地?fù)肀е＃┛芍?，本段還應(yīng)該描寫(xiě)Aaron在與羊建立了深刻感情之后的不忍分離等；第二段開(kāi)頭是ThenewsthatAaronandZlatehwerecominguptheroadwasagreatjoyinthefamily.（AaronsZlateh在回家路上的消息，使全家人都非常高興。）本段應(yīng)該描寫(xiě)家人的反應(yīng)，情節(jié)和細(xì)節(jié)上要回應(yīng)上文，尤其突出描寫(xiě)父親的反應(yīng)和變化，比如父親改變的對(duì)羊的態(tài)度，不再賣(mài)掉或給與羊獎(jiǎng)賞等，文末要進(jìn)行主題升華。還要注意所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右，按要求完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文描寫(xiě)詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。如：1.高級(jí)詞匯：getoutof;makeupone'smind;pointout;rushout;intears;thinkof2.復(fù)合句式:Aaronshoutedloudlytothepeasantwhodrovethesleighforhelp.（who弓丨導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）AarontoldthemintearshowhehadfoundthehaystackandhowZlatehhadfedhimwithhermilkinthepastfewdays.（how弓丨導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）NobodyeveragainthoughtofsellingZlateh,whohadbeenanimportfamilymembertothem.（who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）4閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。AtDana'syardsale,Timchoseabaseballfromthetoysspreadonthecardtableandaskedabouttheprice.DanatoldhimeverythingwasaquarterexceptNezumi,acottontoyrat.Itwasgraywithsomecottonstickingoutfromtheholewhereanearhadbeentornoff."Nezumiisextraspecial,sohehastendollars.Heneedsasafenewhome,"Danasighed.Timlaughedsayinghedidn'thavetendollars.Danalaughed,tooandgaveNezumitoTimasafreegiftbecausehewasherfriend.WhenTimwhispereditwassortofold,Danasaidoldtoyswerethebest,ShetheninvitedTimtoherbirthdaypartythenextevening,addingthatherparentsweregivingherarealratforherbirthday.Timwasamazedandaskedifitwasaliverat."Ofcourse,”Danasaid.Athome,Tim'smothershowedhimthegiftshehadboughtforDana.Itwasaknittingspool（編織線軸）shapedlikeamushroom.MomsaidDanacouldknitascarfforherdoll.TimsighedthatDanawasn'taknittingkindofpersonbutaratkindofperson.Momlaughedafterknowingwhathadhappened.Togethertheydrovetothepetstore,whereTimsearchedandsearchedandselectedaclearplasticball,oneinwhichtheratcouldrunaroundonthefloorsafefromcatsanddogs.TimthoughtofNezumi'searanddecidedDana'snewratwouldneedthisball.Thenextday,Danabroughtcupcakestoclass.WhenshehandedacupcaketoTOC\o"1-5"\h\zTim,sheaskedifTimbroughtNezumitoschoolasNezumilikedtorideinbackpacks.TimwasatalossbecauseNezumiwasathomeonhisbed.ThenDanaaskedwhatgifthewasgivingher.Timreplieditwasasurprise.InsilencetheysatforawhilebeforeheheardDanasayherparentsweregivingheranewbikeforherbirthdayinsteadofaliveratbecausetheythoughtratswouldbitethings.注意：Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,TimstaredattheplasticratballParagraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea.【參考范文】Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.WonderingabouttheuseoftheclearplasticballifDanahadnorat,hestartedwalkingupanddowntheroomwithafrownonhisface.Momwassurprisedandaskedhimwhatwashappening.TimtoldherDanawasn'tgettingaliveratfromherparentsbutabike.Astheywererackingtheirbrainstocomeupwithanappropriategift,TimturnedaroundandsawNezumionhisbed.Allofasudden,hehadanide.a“WhataboutbuyingaliveratforDanaasshelikesratssomuch?”Timasked.Momsmiledandgavehimathumbs-up.Againtheydrovetothepetstore,whereTimfoundsomelovelysmallrats,eachinitsowncagerunningaroundfullofenergy.CarefullyheexaminedthemonebyoneandfinallychoseagrayonelookingquitelikeNezumi.“Thiscertainlyisasurpriseyetthebest!”Timbeamedatit.如何轉(zhuǎn)換高級(jí)詞匯詞匯選取四大原則在正式進(jìn)入換詞大法的學(xué)習(xí)之前，我們先來(lái)了解一下書(shū)面表達(dá)詞匯選取應(yīng)遵循的四大原則：難詞優(yōu)先only>merelyenough>adequate短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先join>takepartinuse>makegooduseof3.具體詞優(yōu)先agoodteacher-->akind,patientandknowledgeableteacherlearn>pickup（偶然學(xué)會(huì)）/master（掌握）amgoodatEnglish.>IwonthesecondprizeintheEnglishspeechcompetition.大綱詞匯衍生詞優(yōu)先Hemustbeadoctor.>Heisundoubtedlyadoctor.Heisverytall.>Heissurprisinglytall.2經(jīng)典換詞大法老師已經(jīng)分類(lèi)整理出五大專(zhuān)題，評(píng)價(jià)事件／描述個(gè)人／行為動(dòng)作／邏輯關(guān)系／語(yǔ)法關(guān)系通通都有。Tips:標(biāo)黑色的最為常用，需要優(yōu)先、重點(diǎn)記憶專(zhuān)題一：評(píng)價(jià)一件事1.好的good優(yōu)秀的outstanding，perfect，brilliant，remarkable，distinguished，excellent教育性的，啟發(fā)性的instructive，educational，enlightening建設(shè)性的，有益的constructive，helpful，valuable，useful有意義的meaningful2.極好的，驚人的great，surprising難以置信的，驚人的，令人震驚的fantastic，incredible，unusual，unbelievable，exceptional，extraordinary，marvelous，notable，noteworthy，striking，amazing，shocking，astonishing壞的bad糟糕的terrible不理想的undesirable不令人滿意的unsatisfactory無(wú)趣味的，無(wú)聊的uninteresting令人厭倦的boring，dull，annoying難于理解的difficulttounderstand抽象的，深?yuàn)W的abstract復(fù)雜的complicated，complex費(fèi)解的mysterious，incomprehensible，unintelligible混雜的，不清楚的，迷惑的confused，bewildered，perplexed好處goodside=好處，優(yōu)點(diǎn)advantage，merit，benefit壞處badside=壞處，缺點(diǎn)disadvantage,defect,drawback,deficiency必要的necessary=必要的，不可缺少的indispensable，essential很大verybig=巨大的tremendous,immense,huge,gigantic,giant,enormous很多皿玄厲丫二不計(jì)其數(shù)的countless,endless，unlimited,innumerable，immeasurable，incalculable,numberless,numerous增長(zhǎng)grow=提高improve，increase，enhance，raise，越來(lái)越（多）1）moreandmore+n.fstudentsingrowingnumbers2）moreandmore+adjfincreasinglyimportant很難difficult=有挑戰(zhàn)性的challenging很重要important=至關(guān)重要的vital，significantadj.=of+n.importantfofgreatimportancedifferentfofgreatdifferencebeautiful—ofamazingbeautywise—ofoutstandingwisdomuseful—ofgreatuse特殊的，特別的special=具體的，明確的concrete,specific,particular,definite和……有關(guān)berelatedto=與……相聯(lián)系beconnectedwith，belinkedto，berelevantto,havesomethingtodowith注定itisdecidedthat...=注定bedoomedto,bedestinedto樂(lè)趣fun=娛樂(lè)，樂(lè)趣entertainment，amusement專(zhuān)題二：描述一個(gè)人20.朋友friend熟人acquaintance伙伴associate,companion密友,知己intimate,confidant勤奮的hardworking=勤奮的，勤勉的diligent，studious,industrious堅(jiān)決的decidedadj=堅(jiān)持不懈的perseverant，persistent，relentless不屈服的unyielding堅(jiān)持的insistent有決心的determined,resolute,resolved堅(jiān)決的firm聰明的clever=聰明的，有才智的intelligent,bright,wise，brilliant誠(chéng)實(shí)的honest真誠(chéng)的，誠(chéng)實(shí)的，正直的sincere，truthful，genuine，upright美麗的beautiful,pretty迷人的,吸引人的enchanting,charming,appealing,fascinating,attractive累的tired=精疲力盡的exhausted,worn-out開(kāi)心的Happy—joyful/delighted不開(kāi)心的sad=S喪的，失意的frustrated,discouraged,depressed,downhearted,disheartened,low-spirited擔(dān)心的be/feelworried=憂慮的，不安的anxious,uneasy,troubled,concerned,restless失業(yè)的outofwork=失業(yè)的unemployed,jobless進(jìn)步progress=進(jìn)步,成就,成績(jī)advancement,achievement,accomplishment,fulfilment遇到（事）meet=碰到,遇到comeacross,meetwith,confrontwe=WehighschoolstudentsWeteenagersWeChineseWeChineseyounggeneration專(zhuān)題三：描述各種行為34.使用use=makegooduseof學(xué)習(xí)learn=pickup（偶然或輕松學(xué)到）master（掌握）適應(yīng)beusedto=適應(yīng)beadaptedto,beaccustomedto,beadjustedto參加join,enter=參與participatein,attend,takepartin,goinfor注意payone'sattentionto=集中精力于focuson,centeron,concentrateon專(zhuān)心于setone'smindon考慮thinkaboutsth/considersth=takeintoaccount+sthtakeintoconsideration+sth【例】takeintoconsiderationotherpeople'sopinion.做do=開(kāi)展,實(shí)施,做practice,carryout,perform利用好時(shí)間精力去做makegooduseofyourtimeandefforttodo完全有理由去做haveeveryreasontodo忍不住做can'thelpdoing能夠做candosth=willdosthbeabletodosthbecapableofdoingsth完成finish=實(shí)現(xiàn),完成achieve,accomplish,fulfill,complete花時(shí)間做spendtimedoingsth=抽出時(shí)間做setasidetimetodosth,putasidetimetodosth,sparetimetodosth盡力做tryto,workhard=努力做,盡力做attemptto,makeeffortsto,end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