英語(yǔ)作文教學(xué)覽．我對(duì)語(yǔ)作看

Jan14,2019鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生使用好點(diǎn)，淡化錯(cuò)誤。在文章詞數(shù)固定的情況下，好點(diǎn)多了，相應(yīng)的，錯(cuò)誤會(huì)逐漸減少?；谶@樣的認(rèn)識(shí)，我教英語(yǔ)寫作，主要關(guān)注好點(diǎn)，淡化錯(cuò)誤，到高三才爭(zhēng)取消滅錯(cuò)誤。二對(duì)作要

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詞數(shù)：寧多勿少?！?20詞。好點(diǎn)：好詞，好句，銜接詞。至少個(gè)好點(diǎn)。修改：修改草稿時(shí)，列數(shù)好點(diǎn)，不夠個(gè)的，補(bǔ)足，超出更好。抄寫：用最好的書寫水平抄寫。三如批作

Jan7,作文得分算式：底數(shù)（）+好）-錯(cuò)）-書）=作文得分（）說(shuō)明：底數(shù)給分分。書法如果得5，不減分；如果得4分，1分此類推。根據(jù)2015年月底的五校聯(lián)考的作文給分情況，我體會(huì)出3個(gè)數(shù)分值。高檔：分中檔：分低檔：分說(shuō)明：高檔作文，好點(diǎn)多，錯(cuò)誤少，完全可以給10為底數(shù)。中檔作文，好點(diǎn)相對(duì)少，有一定錯(cuò)誤，給12數(shù)較合適。低檔作文，好點(diǎn)少，錯(cuò)誤多，給14底數(shù)能說(shuō)得過(guò)去。四學(xué)推的文用詞

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（一）句1）強(qiáng)句Itwasnotwhattheydidbutthespirittheyshowedthatmattered.2）倒句1.Tiredastheywere,theywerequitehappy.2.Handsomeas/thoughheis,heisnothard-working.3.Hardlyhadwetouchedthepillowwhenwegottosleep.4.SowelldoeshelearntheEnglishlanguagethathecanspeakitfluently.5.Bynomeansshouldwebreakschoolrules.6.OnlywhenIlefthomedidIrealizehowIlovedmyfamily.7.Hardlyhadtheygottherewhentheybegantodothingsfortheelderly.Nosooner…than…8.SuchisthepowerofTVthatitcanmakeapersonfamousovernight.9.Notuntilyouunderstanditcanyouuseitproperly.10.Notonlydoesshestudywell,butalsoshesingswell.11.Tiredandhungry,Iwalkedhomeslowly.3）復(fù)句：1.Heisagoodboy,aboywhooftenhelpsothers.2.Wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldtellushowtogetthere.3.It’sgenerally/commonlybelieved4.Thereisnodenyingthathonestyisthebestpolicy.5.It’sofgreatimportancethatyoushouldhaveconfidenceinyourself.6.Thereisnochance/possibilitythatonecansucceedwithoutefforts.7.AsfarasIamconcerned,everyoneshouldsparenoefforttostoppollutio8.Themoment/ImmediatelyImethim,Irecognizedhim.9.Youcanturntoyourteacherifnecessary.10.Ithappenedthatnobodynoticedhimwhenhewascheatingintheexam.11.Ittakessomebodythetimetowritetheletter.Youshouldreadthelette

12.Itseemsthatitisgettingcolderandcolder.13.Dowhatyouthinkisright.14.It’snowonderthatthestudentsaresoexcitedtoday.15.Thereasonwhytheyareexcitedisthattheydon’tgetuptomorrow.16.Thereisagoodchancethatwewillhaveagoodsleeptomorrowmorning.17.AistoBwhatCistoD.18.Whatmademesadwasthattimewasnotenoughformetofinishmywork.19.It’sstrangethatsheshouldlovesuchanoldman.20.Sb.beabouttodo…whenwhen…21.Idon’tcarewhatotherpeoplethink.22.It’sobviousthat…23.Inspiteofthefactthat…24.makeitclearthat…25.…onconditionthat…26.Justasthesayinggoes,…4）虛語(yǔ)氣：1.It’shigh2.ShouldI…,Iwould…5）非語(yǔ)：1.Seenfromthewindow,thesceneisbeautiful.2.Hesatthere,cryingsadly.3.Gettingupearlyisagoodhabit.4.With結(jié)構(gòu).…doing/done,sb…6）其：1.Thedetails/suggestionsareasfollows.2.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.3.Opinionsaredivided.4.Somepeoplebelievethat…Othersarguethat…

5.It’sworthdoingsth.6.Itbenefitsusquitealot.7.Soitiswithsb.8.Ipreferto…ratherthan…9.Knowledgeispower.10.Thereisnoneedtodosomething.11.Itisnouse/uselessdoingsth.12.Iwouldratherstayathomethangoshopping.13.Howtimeflies.14.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingmind.15.Thereseemednopointindoing…Hopingforanearlyreply.（二）好詞1.advancedscienceandbefacedwithnewopportunities3.beengagedinbedoing5.extremely6.havetroubleintakeof9.beshortseize12.withthepurposeof13.on14.15.16.haveaccess使用17.contribute18.beresponsiblefor19.participatebeabsentletsb.使望）22.makeupone’s痛的24.reflect25.發(fā)，利用，剝削26.sparenoeffort//makeeveryeffort27.可接觸的28.9.makethemostof30.難置信31.holdthebeliefthat…33.beparticularmakeabigdifference35.make/leaveanimpressionahugeinfluenceonsb.37.無(wú)知n.38.frequent39.0.eagertodo41.tendto…42.獲得的

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May8,2011第一，述事物幾個(gè)方：.//Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally…OntheonetheotherForonething,·Inthefirstplace,…IntheLastbutnotleast,第二，一步闡觀點(diǎn)：”“In“Moreover,···.”“Tomakethingsworse,···.”from···.”Moreimportantly,第三,引出相觀點(diǎn)：“Onthecontrary,···.”然而）//（而是）//Onthecontrary,第三，示因果系：“Asaresult,to·第四，出個(gè)人點(diǎn)：Inmyopinion,Asfarmypointofview,第五，括全文“Ina“Inbrief,···”“Onthewhole,···”speaking,···”“Franklyspeaking,···”“Briefly,···.”Insummary,//Ingeneral,//Toputitbriefly,