四級(jí)寫作沖刺班主講教師：石雷鵬第1頁第1頁新浪微博：石雷鵬老師V新浪博客：/neworientalsjz第2頁第2頁課程簡(jiǎn)介第一章、四級(jí)寫作概況第二章、沖刺提分策略第三章、沖刺話題預(yù)測(cè)第四章、翻譯沖刺攻略第3頁第3頁第一章、四級(jí)寫作概況1.1試題形式12月Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofLimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛地使用2.造成問題3.限制使用意義第4頁第4頁審題注意三個(gè)事項(xiàng)：1.英文指令：體裁+話題2.漢語提綱：英漢結(jié)合猜想生詞3.字?jǐn)?shù)：140-160詞第5頁第5頁1.2寫作話題-06:OnlineShopping-12:

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?-06:

DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling-12:

CreatingaGreenCampus-06:

FreeAdmissiontoMuseums第6頁第6頁-12:LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags-06:RecreationalActivities-12:WhatElectivestoChoose

-06:WelcometoOurClub-12:OnSpringFestivalGala第7頁第7頁四級(jí)寫作話題總結(jié)：1.非最熱點(diǎn)話題2.四級(jí)必考話題：社會(huì)話題和大學(xué)生（教育）話題網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物、博物館、塑料袋、春晚家長(zhǎng)溺愛、單詞拼寫、綠色校園、選修課、大學(xué)生俱樂部第8頁第8頁1.3作文類型論說文：9次應(yīng)用文：1次圖表作文：0次第9頁第9頁1.4寫作測(cè)試特殊性以TOEFL為例：環(huán)境類話題a.在你家周圍建一個(gè)工廠，你是否同意？b.你認(rèn)為科學(xué)家對(duì)人類奉獻(xiàn)大還是藝術(shù)家對(duì)人類奉獻(xiàn)大？第10頁第10頁c.你職業(yè)夢(mèng)想是什么？d.假如讓你創(chuàng)造同樣機(jī)器，你會(huì)選擇什么？e.假如你有一筆錢，你會(huì)用它來做什么？第11頁第11頁再以四級(jí)考試為例：題目：OnEnglishLearning提綱：1.英語學(xué)習(xí)很主要2.英語者所面臨困難3.如何學(xué)好英語第12頁第12頁Incontemporaryworld,Englishlearninghasgainedgreatpopularityanditisofgreatsignificance.(主題句)Firstly,basedonasurvey,amajorityoftouristsacknowledgethattheyprefertospeakEnglishwhentravelingaroundtheworld.(調(diào)查法表述)Secondly,comparedwiththepoorEnglishspeakers,goodEnglish-speakersaresuperiorinmanyways.(比較模板句式)第13頁第13頁However,Englishlearnersmayhaveavarietyofdifficultiesortroublesintheirlearning.(主題句)Forexample,itcanbenoticedthat

alargenumberofstudentshavedifficultymemorizingwords.Sometimes,itisdifficultforthemtounderstandtherulesofgrammar.Inaddition,thoughsomearegoodatreadingorwriting,theycannotexpressthemselvesfreelyinEnglish.第14頁第14頁Then,howtogetagoodcommandof(學(xué)好)thislanguage?Iamconvincedthatpracticemakesperfect.Onlypracticecanenableonetospeakandwritefluently.Anditisalsothroughpracticethat

onecanmastertherulesofgrammarandrememberwords,andthereisnootherway.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句式）第15頁第15頁以上范文靈活改編能夠?qū)懴铝凶魑?992-6

：HowIOvercamemyDifficultiesinLearningEnglish1.你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中有哪些困難?2.你是如何克服這些困難?第16頁第16頁1993-61.我最愛慕電視(或無線電)節(jié)目是…...2.這類節(jié)目的內(nèi)容和特點(diǎn)3.我喜歡它原因第17頁第17頁1994-61.人們對(duì)職業(yè)各有不同理想2.我理想職業(yè)是什么3.我怎樣為我理想職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備第18頁第18頁1997-11.如何理解“熟能生巧”?2.比如：在英語學(xué)習(xí)中…3.又如…第19頁第19頁-1

：HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation1.上大學(xué)費(fèi)用(tuitionandfees)能夠通過各種路徑處理2.哪種路徑適合于我(闡明理由)第20頁第20頁-6：IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary1.很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是…2.也有些人持不同意見...3.我看法和打算第21頁第21頁.6：1.簡(jiǎn)樸敘述一下這位同窗生病(或受傷)情況2.同窗、老師和我是如何幫助他/她3.人與人之間這種互相關(guān)愛給我感受是……第22頁第22頁.121.提議報(bào)考專業(yè)及理由2.報(bào)考該專業(yè)基本條件3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考第23頁第23頁.11.你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、興趣等)能夠勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作2.假如當(dāng)選,你將為本校同窗做些什么第24頁第24頁6月1.向老師致以節(jié)日祝賀。2.從一件難忘事回想老師教導(dǎo)和無私奉獻(xiàn)。3.我如何回報(bào)老師關(guān)愛第25頁第25頁-061.校學(xué)生會(huì)將組織一次暑期志愿者活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)招募志愿者。2.本次志愿者活動(dòng)目的，內(nèi)容、安排等。3.報(bào)名條件及聯(lián)系方式第26頁第26頁6月：歡迎辭，Welcometoourclub1.

表示你歡迎；2.

對(duì)你們俱樂部作一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)明簡(jiǎn)介第27頁第27頁12月1.各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣選修課2.學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同選修課3.以你自己為例…第28頁第28頁6月：DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不注重拼寫。2.出現(xiàn)這種情況原因。3.如何避免這一問題第29頁第29頁請(qǐng)記住內(nèi)容上：熟悉什么就寫什么第30頁第30頁神馬內(nèi)容你最熟悉？第31頁第31頁贈(zèng)言：盡最大努力（Tryyourutmost）

得最大成功（Achievegreatersuccess）第32頁第32頁沖刺總體策略：背寫：?jiǎn)卧~標(biāo)點(diǎn)一個(gè)都不錯(cuò)。第33頁第33頁第二章、沖刺提分策略2.1功效段落寫作法概論沖刺階段，背誦模板不是最有效方法，因?yàn)槟０鍖懽魉季w是固定，然而很多時(shí)候試題命題思緒可能與所背模板思緒不同。不過，不論四級(jí)寫作話題怎樣改變，普通都對(duì)應(yīng)三個(gè)或兩個(gè)漢語提綱。只要按提綱要求去寫對(duì)應(yīng)內(nèi)容段落，就做到了緊緊圍繞主題。歷年寫作提綱能夠總結(jié)為六種功效段落。是以，提出“功效段落寫作法”沖刺提分策略。因此，掌握好六種功效段落，也就掌握了全部作文寫作。第34頁第34頁2.2功效段落破解寫作-06Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一個(gè)潮流2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有諸多好處，但也有不少問題3．我提議第35頁第35頁-12Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.當(dāng)前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)當(dāng)……

第36頁第36頁-06Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofDueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不注重拼寫

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況原因

3.為了改變這種情況，我認(rèn)為…

第37頁第37頁-12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建設(shè)綠色校園很主要2.綠色校園不但指綠色環(huán)境……3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)……第38頁第38頁-06Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofFreeAdmissiontoMuseums.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1. 越來越多博物館免費(fèi)對(duì)外開放目的是什么？2. 也會(huì)帶來一些問題3. 你見解？第39頁第39頁-12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags.

Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.一次性塑料袋使用2.使用一次性塑料袋帶來問題3.限制一次性塑料袋意義第40頁第40頁-06

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofRecreationalActivities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.娛樂活動(dòng)各種多樣，2.娛樂也許使人們受益，也也許有危害性，3.作為大學(xué)生，我見解。第41頁第41頁六種功效段落總結(jié)提議觀點(diǎn)（利弊）意義（利）現(xiàn)象危害（弊）原因第42頁第42頁篇章層面：六種功效段落排列組合1.問題處理型：年6月、年12月2.觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型（利弊分析）：206月3.現(xiàn)象闡述型：12月第43頁第43頁2.3觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型作文必背段落構(gòu)成：現(xiàn)象+利弊+提議-06:OnlineShopping1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一個(gè)潮流2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有諸多好處，但也有不少問題3．我提議第44頁第44頁1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一個(gè)潮流現(xiàn)象描述段：思緒：引出話題+詳細(xì)描述Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforindividualstopurchasevariousgoodsfromtheInternet.Inthemeanwhile,anincreasingnumberofpeoplefinditconvenientandinexpensivetodoso.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyshoppingwebsites:Taobao,DangdangandAmazon.第45頁第45頁2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有諸多好處，但也有不少問題（利）Anumberofpeoplefavoronlineshopping.Intheireyes,withoutit,itisimpossibleforthemtostayathomeandgettheirfavoriteclothes,booksandsoon.Inaddition,theyarguethatshoppingonlinecanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofshoppingchoicesandenrichtheirlife.(下頁續(xù))第46頁第46頁（接上頁）(弊)

Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatonlineshoppingcarriessomerisks.Firstly,itcallsfortime,energyandmoneytoshoponline;however,thequalityofgoodsisnotalwaysassatisfactoryasexpected.Besides,whatworriesmanyshoppersisthattheirprivateinformationmaybestolenandmisused.第47頁第47頁3．我提議（主題句）Asacustomer,Iamconvincedthattherearevariouswaysinwhichwecanenhanceonlineshopping.（提議1）First,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedtoregulatetheonlinetransactions.（提議2）Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmates,andacquaintancestobealertwhenshoppingonline.（展望未來）Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofshoppingonlinewillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.第48頁第48頁完美寫作沖刺法：第一步：背寫：思緒+表示第二步：翻譯：英譯漢漢譯英對(duì)比第三步：限時(shí)訓(xùn)練：寫改對(duì)比第49頁第49頁2.4問題處理型必背范文Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.當(dāng)前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)當(dāng)……

第50頁第50頁兩個(gè)提綱三個(gè)提綱三個(gè)功效段落1.當(dāng)前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2.該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生原因

3.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)當(dāng)……第51頁第51頁首段現(xiàn)象描述：1.當(dāng)前不少父母為孩子包辦一切(主題句)Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrend

formanyparentstodoeverythingfortheirkids:food,clothes,tuition,andevenmarriage.(事實(shí)描述)Inthemeanwhile,anincreasingnumberofchildrenfinditdifficultortroublesometoliveontheirownwithoutparents.(舉例描述)Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyparentsandchildrenlikethis.

第52頁第52頁現(xiàn)象、原因、提議、危害、利弊分析邏:一個(gè)中心，四個(gè)基本點(diǎn)：以孩子（學(xué)生、事件）為中心，以家長(zhǎng)（老師、相關(guān)人員）、家庭（學(xué)校、管理機(jī)構(gòu)）、社會(huì)、法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）為基本點(diǎn)第53頁第53頁孩子家長(zhǎng)社會(huì)法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）家庭第54頁第54頁學(xué)生老師社會(huì)法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）學(xué)校第55頁第55頁網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物買方:用戶社會(huì)法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）賣方第56頁第56頁2.該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生原因(主題句)Itisevidentthatthecausesofthisphenomenonisdiverse.(原因1：家庭)Tobeginwith,thechangeoffamilystructureistherootcause.(原因1表達(dá))Atypicalexampleofthisisthatinmostfamilies,thereisonlyonechildwhoislovedbynotonlyparents,butalsograndparents.(原因2)Inaddition,theincorrectsenseof

parents‘loveconstitutesanothermajorcause.(原因2表達(dá))Tobespecific,asparents,theyareconvincedthatlovingmeansgivingchildrenalltheywant.第57頁第57頁萬能原因補(bǔ)充：1.Inaddition,socialprejudice/ignorance/emphasis/concernplaysacriticalroleinthismatter/issue.2.Furthermore,therelatedpolicybeingcarriedoutinChina(doesnot)enables____toattachimportanceto_____.第58頁第58頁3.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)當(dāng)……(主題句)Therearevariouswaysinwhichparentscanhelptheirteenagerstobeindependent.(提議1)First,itissuggestedthatparentsshouldstrengthentheawarenessoflovingchildrenappropriately.(提議2)Then,theyshouldeducate,advocateandencouragetheirkidstodealwiththeirownproblemsindependentlyinlifeandstudy.(展望未來)Ifallparentscantrytheirutmosttodoso,thefutureofournextgenerationwillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.第59頁第59頁2.5現(xiàn)象闡述型范文(參考)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建設(shè)綠色校園很主要（意義段：利）2.綠色校園不但指綠色環(huán)境…（現(xiàn)象段：描述）3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)…（提議段）第60頁第60頁CreatingaGreenCampus1.建設(shè)綠色校園很主要（意義段：利）Theideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople,anditisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.Withoutgreenenvironment,itisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyablelifeintheIvoryTower.Inaddition,greencampusmaybroaden/consolidatestudents’awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.第61頁第61頁2.綠色校園不但指綠色環(huán)境…（現(xiàn)象段：描述）主題句：Inadditiontothegreenenvironment,greencampusesalsorefertostudents’behaviorsorethics.However,(舉例)takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyexamplesofinappropriatebehaviors：(下頁續(xù))第62頁第62頁（接上頁）(排比)somediscardlitterseverywhere;somestudentscheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.

Infact,ithasbecomeatrendformanystudentstoturnablindeyetotheirownbadacts.

第63頁第63頁3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)…（提議段）(主題句)Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakemeasurestomaintaingreencampuses.(提議1法規(guī))First,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttobanthesenegativebehaviors.(提議2發(fā)動(dòng)群眾)Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestorefusealluncivilizedacts.(未來展望)

Ifwetryourbesttodoso,thefutureofourcollegelifewillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.第64頁第64頁2.6高分沖刺細(xì)節(jié)1.內(nèi)容相關(guān)（按照提綱要求、涵蓋要點(diǎn)信息）2.結(jié)構(gòu)清楚（新聞聯(lián)播三段論：主題句+拓展句）3.語言精彩（通順、連貫、句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變）第65頁第65頁2.7語言第一位通順、連貫、句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變2.7.1連貫：1)句子銜接：and,but,so;however,nonethelessTheideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople.Itisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.Theideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople,anditisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.第66頁第66頁2)邏輯銜接：起承轉(zhuǎn)合起：Incontemporarysociety,onmanycampuses,currently,first,tobeginwith,firstandforemost,firstofall承：Second,Third,Last,Next,Then,finally,meanwhile,inaddition,furthermore,besides,inthefirst/secondplace,foronething,foranother,lastbutnottheleast第67頁第67頁轉(zhuǎn)：However,but,onthecontrary,Ontheotherhand,yet,although,bycontrast,while,whereas,instead,nevertheless,otherwise合：（因此)Asaresult,Therefore,Thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,asconsequence,asaresult;(總之)：Inaword,Inshort,onthewhole,inconclusion,tosumup,inbrief,insummary,toconclude,tosummarize,

第68頁第68頁中英文文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：以漢語四六級(jí)閱讀為例天涯遠(yuǎn)不遠(yuǎn)？不遠(yuǎn)！人就在天涯，天涯怎么會(huì)遠(yuǎn)？明月是什么顏色？是藍(lán)，就像海同樣藍(lán)，同樣深，同樣憂郁。明月在那？就在他心，他心就是明月。題目：概括本段中心思想第69頁第69頁2.7.2遣詞廣度：avarietyof…1）同義詞2）同根詞3）范圍詞：上義詞下義詞相關(guān)詞4）代詞替換第70頁第70頁深度：棄用第一反應(yīng)詞academicexceedingly,extremely,intensely替換veryanarmyof/agreatmany/ahostof替換alotofAdvancement替換developmentpositive,favorable,promising(有希望),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替換goodgiveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替換cause.第71頁第71頁harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,替think(由于是書面語,因此要加that)beneficial,rewarding替換helpful,

bearinmindthat替換rememberenjoy,possess替換haveshopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替換customer第72頁第72頁2.7.2造句被動(dòng)句狀語從句定語從句名詞從句同位語：身份Itis句式設(shè)問強(qiáng)調(diào)句式排比V-ing狀語第73頁第73頁2.8考場(chǎng)寫作時(shí)間安排總計(jì)：30分鐘1.審題:辨認(rèn)提綱功效2-3分鐘2.以關(guān)鍵詞形式打草稿3-4分鐘3.正文寫作18-20分鐘4.檢查修正2-3分鐘：?jiǎn)螐?fù)數(shù)、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、拼寫第74頁第74頁2.以關(guān)鍵詞形式打草稿3-4分鐘例題：OnTVShows1.時(shí)下電視真人秀（如超級(jí)女聲、達(dá)人秀）非常受歡迎2.有些人認(rèn)為這類節(jié)目較好，能夠呈現(xiàn)自己，分享閱歷，有些人反對(duì)3.我見解第75頁第75頁1.時(shí)下電視真人秀（如超級(jí)女聲、達(dá)人秀）非常受歡迎關(guān)鍵詞：trend,examplesTrendIncontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendformanyTVchannelstoholdavarietyofTVtalentshows.ExamplesTakingalookaround,wecanfindahostofexampleslikethis:SuperGirls,China'sGotTalentandsoon.

第76頁第76頁第三章、沖刺話題預(yù)測(cè)3.1志愿者活動(dòng)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnVolunteering.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.越來越多人從事志愿者工作2.志愿者工作對(duì)需要幫助人和社會(huì)都有好處，對(duì)志愿者本身也有好處3.我見解。第77頁第77頁首段現(xiàn)象描述：Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforChinesepeople,especiallytheyoungsters,totakepartinvariousvoluntaryactivities.Taking/Turningalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyvoluntaryactions:voluntaryteachers,OlympicGamesvolunteersandsoon.第78頁第78頁志愿者活動(dòng)意義：Apparentlyenough,itisofgreatimportance/significance/value/benefitsforyoungpeopletogetinvolvedinsocialvoluntaryservices.First,theseactivitieswilldefinitelyenhancetheover-alldevelopmentoftheharmonioussociety.Second,volunteerscanenrichtheirsocialexperienceandbroadentheirvision/horizoninthisprocess.Last,withoutvolunteers,itisimpossibleforpeoplewhoareinneedtogetaid/assistancetimely.Infact,peopleinmountingnumbershavecometorealizethesignificanceofvolunteers.

第79頁第79頁

我見解：Asacollegestudent,Iamfirmlyconvincedthat

allpeopleareadvisabletoparticipateinvoluntaryactivities.Firstly,itisessentialthatlaws/regulations/rulesshouldbemade/workedouttosupportvolunteers.Secondly,weshouldadvocate,educateandencourageourfriends,classmates,andacquaintancestooffervoluntaryservicestosociety.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoursocietywillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.第80頁第80頁3.2電視選秀Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnTVShows.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.時(shí)下電視真人秀（如超級(jí)女聲、達(dá)人秀）非常受歡迎2.有些人認(rèn)為這類節(jié)目較好，能夠呈現(xiàn)自己，分享閱歷，有些人反對(duì)3.我見解第81頁第81頁首段：描述現(xiàn)象Incontemporarysociety,TVtalentshowshavegainedwidepopularityamongaudience,anditishasbecomeatrendformanyTVchannelstoholdsuchprograms.Typicalexamplesinclude:SuperGirls,China’sGotTalentandtheforth.Thousandsofpeopleareattractedtoparticipateinsuchshows.第82頁第82頁2.有些人認(rèn)為這類節(jié)目較好，能夠呈現(xiàn)自己，分享閱歷，有些人反對(duì)利弊分析二段：前半段（利）：(設(shè)問)Whyareagreatmanypeopleinterestedinsuchprograms?Supportersharborthisidea:(排比)theseshowsbroadentheiropportunitiestoenrichtheirlife,tosharetheirexperienceandtoshowtheirspecialty.第83頁第83頁后半段（弊）：Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatTVshowscarrysomedoubts.Theycriticizethem,arguingthattheseshowsmeanawasteoftime,moneyandenergy.Inaddition,whatworriesmanyparentsisthattheirchildren’studymaybedisturbedbytheseshows,sincekidsoftenpourmuchattentiononthem.第84頁第84頁3.我見解觀點(diǎn)：支持=利；反對(duì)=弊Byandlarge,theadvantagesderivedfromtheseshowsfaroutweighthedisadvantages.SincetheybringhappinesstothoseparticipantsandmostoftheTVaudience,theyareexpectedtobecontinued.第85頁第85頁3.我見解觀點(diǎn)：中立型Obviously,TV

shows,likeanythingelse,havemorethanoneside.Whiletheyareindispensableforsomeaudience,theyalsoresultinsomeproblems.Itisonlyhopedthatwe,whiletakingfulladvantageofTVshows,canfindsatisfactorysolutionstotheproblems.第86頁第86頁3.3扶不起社會(huì)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofToHelporNottoHelp?.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.幫助別人是一個(gè)美德2.但是幫助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻煩3.我見解第87頁第87頁1.幫助別人是種美德Incontemporarysociety,itshouldbeavirtueforindividuals

toofferhelptothosewhoareinneed.Withoutthismorality,itisimpossibleforthesocietytobenamed“Harmony”.Apparentlyenough,itisofgreatimportance/significance/value/benefitsforpeopletohelpeachother,especiallyindifficulties.第88頁第88頁2.有時(shí)幫助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻煩However,ahostofpeoplefindithardortroublesometoofferhelpstostrangers.Wehavebeenfrequentlyinformedthat（Atypicalexampleisthat）awarmheartedman--wholendsahandtoanoldlady—getshimselfintrouble.(Consequently,basedonarecentreport,aminorityofpeopleadmitthat

theyarenotwillingtoofferaidwhentheoldmanorwomanfallsdownonstreet.)第89頁第89頁Sincehelpingothersmaytriggertrouble,afewpeoplerefusetoofferhelptimely.Andifwelet/allowthissituationtocontinueasitisnow,wewouldnotknowwhere

civilizedsocietywillbeintheforthcomingfuture.

第90頁第90頁3.我見解(或提議)Ascollegestudents,weshouldbearinmindthisvirtue.However,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttosupportthisvirtue.Inaddition,itissuggestedthatweshouldofferaidtostrangersinasafeway,suchasdialing12oor110forhelp.(后續(xù))第91頁第91頁3.我見解(或提議)(接前)Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestobebothwarmheartedandalert.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoursociety/civilizationwillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.第92頁第92頁四級(jí)翻譯沖刺主講教師：石雷鵬第93頁第93頁四級(jí)翻譯沖刺1.命題形式特點(diǎn)2.評(píng)分細(xì)則展示3.快速破題攻略4.考點(diǎn)枚舉解析第94頁第94頁1.命題形式1.1命題形式時(shí)間5分鐘，5道題所有為漢譯英，占5%，共36分。在答題卡2上作答。句長(zhǎng)為15至30個(gè)詞，其中有部分英語詞匯給出,需添入部分也只有3到8個(gè)單詞，考生只需按照英文句子意思把漢語部分翻譯成英文。第95頁第95頁2.考題特點(diǎn)①考點(diǎn)生活化②考點(diǎn)重復(fù)性③考點(diǎn)陷阱性第96頁第96頁①考點(diǎn)生活化-06：89.Becauseoftheleginjury,theathlete ________________________(決定退出比賽).答案：decidedtoquitthematch第97頁第97頁-06:91.Theyrequestedthat____________(我借書還回圖書館)bynextFriday.答案：booksIborrowed(should)bereturnedtothelibraryI(should)returnthebookIborrowedtothelibrary

第98頁第98頁②考題重復(fù)性：考點(diǎn)直接重復(fù)-06：87.Havingspentsometimeinthecity,hehadnotrouble________(找到去歷史博物館路).答案：findingtheway/roadtotheHistoryMuseum.第99頁第99頁-06:87.Becauseofthenoiseoutside,Nancyhadgreatdifficulty__________________(集中注意力在試驗(yàn)上).

答案：(in)concentratingontheexperiment/

focusingherattentionontheexperiment.第100頁第100頁-06:87.Soonafterhetransferredtothenewschool,Alifoundthathehad

(很難跟上班里同窗)inmathandEnglish.答案：difficulty(in)catchingupwithhisclassmates第101頁第101頁②考題重復(fù)性：考點(diǎn)與題干重復(fù)07-12:89.Iamgoingtopursuethiscourse,

（無論我要作出什么樣犧牲）.-12:88.Despitethehardshipheencountered,Marknever______________(放棄對(duì)知識(shí)追求).-06:91.The16-year-oldgirldecidedtotravelabroadonherowndespite__________________(她父母強(qiáng)烈反對(duì)).第102頁第102頁③考點(diǎn)陷阱性-65.Pleasecomehereattentomorrowmorning_____________________(假如你以便話).ifyouareconvenientforyou(×)答案：ifitisconvenientforyou第103頁第103頁應(yīng)對(duì)策略：切忌逐字翻譯第104頁第104頁-0690.Georgecalledhisbossfromtheairportbutit__________________(接電話卻是他助手).答案：washisassistantwhoansweredthephone.

第105頁第105頁2.評(píng)分細(xì)則例1：Bycontrast,Americanmothersweremorelikely_______(把孩子成功歸因于)naturaltalent.第106頁第106頁1．整體內(nèi)容和語言均正確，滿分。2．結(jié)構(gòu)正確，但整體意思不確切、信息不全或用詞不妥，得二分之一分值。3．整體意思正確但語言有錯(cuò)誤，得二分之一分值。4．整體意思完全錯(cuò)誤，即使結(jié)構(gòu)正確也不得分。5．大小寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)忽略不計(jì)。第107頁第107頁該題目有兩個(gè)固定搭配考點(diǎn)：1)belikelytodosth;2)owe…to/attribute…to答案：toattribute/owetheirchildren’ssuccessto第108頁第108頁3.快速破題攻略第一步：瀏覽句子、鑒定考點(diǎn)第二步：鑒定動(dòng)詞、切塊翻譯第三步：結(jié)構(gòu)組合、檢查修正第109頁第109頁關(guān)注三方面：詞性、單復(fù)數(shù)、動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、語調(diào)）第110頁第110頁4.考點(diǎn)枚舉解析宏觀兩大考點(diǎn)：①關(guān)鍵語法②固定搭配（詞匯）第111頁第111頁①關(guān)鍵語法被動(dòng)、從句知識(shí)（名從、狀從、定從）、倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)、虛擬語調(diào)、比較結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)第112頁第112頁實(shí)例1：-690．Itissuggestedthattheairconditioner______________(要安裝在窗戶旁).第113頁第113頁【考點(diǎn)剖析】本題是典型語法題目。重點(diǎn)考察考生對(duì)虛擬語調(diào)和被動(dòng)掌握。(should)befixed/installedbythewindow第114頁第114頁例2：(大綱樣題)2.Notonly___________________________(他向我收費(fèi)過高),buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.didhechargemetoomuchdidheoverchargeme第115頁第115頁語法考點(diǎn)：1.被動(dòng)-0691.Thoughaskilledworker,

__________(他被公司解雇了)lastweekbecauseoftheeconomiccrisis.第116頁第116頁第一步：由Thoughaskilledworker,lastweekbecauseoftheeconomiccrisis.能夠推出，劃線處應(yīng)當(dāng)補(bǔ)全完整主句，時(shí)態(tài)由lastweek擬定為普通過去時(shí)態(tài)。第117頁第117頁第二步：1.切塊翻譯：“解雇”=befired(注意被動(dòng))；“他”=he；“公司”=company第118頁第118頁2.重新組合：

[正確答案]：hewasfiredbythecompanyfiredismiss第119頁第119頁-0687.Oureffortswillpayoffiftheresultsoftheresearch____________(能應(yīng)用于新技術(shù)開發(fā)).第120頁第120頁考點(diǎn)：固定搭配和被動(dòng)語態(tài)“applyto”canbeappliedtothedevelopmentofthenewtechnology

第121頁第121頁-1288.Themagnificentmuseum_______(聽說建成于)aboutahundredyearsago.【結(jié)構(gòu)分析】主語為thesignificantmuseum，謂語（聽說建成于）aboutahundredyearsago為時(shí)間狀語。

第122頁第122頁【考點(diǎn)】①被動(dòng)語態(tài):主語museum與動(dòng)詞build之間為被動(dòng)關(guān)系;且bulid這一動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過去。②聽說besaidto；besaidto+動(dòng)詞不定式完畢時(shí)，表示不定式表示動(dòng)作已經(jīng)完畢?！敬鸢浮浚篿ssaidtohavebeenbuilt

第123頁第123頁語法考點(diǎn)：2.定語從句定從翻譯環(huán)節(jié)：a.寫出正確簡(jiǎn)樸句，并擬定中心話題(名詞)b.中心話題后加入定從，關(guān)系詞：who/whose/which/where/when；若關(guān)系詞在從句中做賓語，可省略。第124頁第124頁-0688.ThepreventionandtreatmentofAIDSis______________(我們能夠合作領(lǐng)域).

第125頁第125頁第一步：瀏覽句子，鑒定考點(diǎn)：定語從句第二步：1.補(bǔ)充完畢主句，注意單復(fù)數(shù)….thefield,

2.

完畢定語從句寫作：鑒定動(dòng)詞,切塊翻譯第126頁第126頁答案：thefieldwherewecancooperate或者：thefieldinwhichwecancooperate

第127頁第127頁-1291.Theyrequestedthat__________(我借書還回圖書館)bynextFriday.books(thatIborrowed)shouldbereturnedtothelibrary第128頁第128頁語法考點(diǎn)：3.名詞性從句a.賓語從句b.主語從句c.表語從句d.同位語從句第129頁第129頁賓語從句-1291.ManyAmericansliveoncredit,

andtheirqualityoflife________（是用他們能夠借到多少來衡量），nothowmuchtheycanearn.第130頁第130頁衡量：measure錯(cuò)誤答案：ismeasuredbyhowmuchcanthey

borrow.正確答案ismeasuredbyhowmuchthey

can

borrow.第131頁第131頁b.主語從句-12：88.

(大多數(shù)父母所關(guān)懷)isprovidingthebesteducationpossiblefortheirchildren.第132頁第132頁所字結(jié)構(gòu)=what從句（what在從句中作賓語）Whatmostparentsareconcernedabout第133頁第133頁-0690.

(諸多人所沒故意識(shí)到)isthatSimonisaloverofsports.andfootballinparticular.第134頁第134頁90.Whatmanypeopledon’trealize第135頁第135頁使字結(jié)構(gòu)=what從句（what在從句中做主語）寫作慣用句式：Ithinkthat=whatconvincesmeisthat

第136頁第136頁-1290._____________________(給游客印象最深)wasthefriendlinessandwarmthofthelocalpeople.What

impressedtouriststhemost

第137頁第137頁語法考點(diǎn)：4.狀語從句狀語從句：讓步、時(shí)間、條件、目、原因、地點(diǎn)、結(jié)果、方式和比較第138頁第138頁小重點(diǎn)：讓步狀語從句a.nomatter+what/who/when/where/howwhat/who/when/where/how+ever第139頁第139頁區(qū)別：NomatterwhatVSwhatever

Nomatterwhat:只能充當(dāng)狀語Whatever:引導(dǎo)名詞性從句或狀語從句第140頁第140頁簡(jiǎn)樸辦法：有逗號(hào)=nomatterwhat

無逗號(hào)=whatever第141頁第141頁-1289.Iamgoingtopursuethiscourse,________________________（無論我要作出什么樣犧牲）.參考答案：nomatterwhatkindofsacrificeIhavetomake第142頁第142頁-689.Leavingone’sjob,__________(無論是什么工作),isadifficultchange,evenforthosewholookforwardtoretiring.第143頁第143頁89.Leavingone’sjob,__________(無論是什么工作),isadifficultchange,evenforthosewholookforwardtoretiring.【解析】第一步：待譯內(nèi)容是讓步狀語(從句)?！盁o論是什么”能夠譯作nomatterwhat或whatever。第144頁第144頁第二步：切塊（翻譯）組合：nomatterwhatjobitisnomatterwhatthejobiswhateverjobitis第145頁第145頁2．(無論誰在這抽煙)willbepunished.(主語從句)答案：Whoeversmokeshere（不能用nomatterwho）第146頁第146頁語法考點(diǎn)：5.倒裝在英語中,主語和謂語有兩種順序:一是主語在前,謂語在后,稱為自然語序(NaturalOrder).反之,假如謂語在主語前面,就是倒裝語序(InvertedOrder).第147頁第147頁倒裝原因：語法結(jié)構(gòu)需要；強(qiáng)調(diào)。倒裝語序所有倒裝部分倒裝FullInversionPartialInversion第148頁第148頁部分(半)倒裝:(普通疑問句語序)a.表否認(rèn)副詞或短語位于句首，主句半倒裝Iwillneveragree.

NeverwillIagree.

HardlycanIagree.第149頁第149頁notuntil,never,hardly,scarcely,seldom,neither,little,innocase(決不),另外：onnoaccount,bynomeans,rarely,undernocircumstances,undernocondition,innoway(決不),neither…(nor),nosooner…(than),hardly…(when),barely(僅僅，幾乎不),innocircumstances(決不),notabit,nowhere,notonly…butalso。第150頁第150頁(大綱樣題)Notonly_____________(他向我收費(fèi)過高),buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.正常語序：hechargedmetoomuch答案：didhechargemetoomuchdidheoverchargeme第151頁第151頁-0688.Themanagerneverlaughed;neither___________(她也從來沒有發(fā)過脾氣)didshelosehertemper.didshebecomeangry.第152頁第152頁語法考點(diǎn)：虛擬語調(diào)a.

(should)+動(dòng)詞原形情形b.

if或butfor等引導(dǎo)條件句c.

wish,ifonly使用辦法第153頁第153頁a1.

(should)+動(dòng)詞原形情形:表示“命令”、“提議”、“要求”名詞性從句：動(dòng)詞suggest,order,demand,propose,command,request,desire,insist,require,decide,promise,resolve,argue,maintain,determine,recommend,advise,advocate,persuade等。第154頁第154頁3.Theprofessorrequiredthat

_______(我們交研究匯