意+跑題Thepictureshowsateacherusestwowrongcharactersdeceivestudentsbecauseheforgothowtowritethecorrectone.Thisphotorevealsaphenomenonthatoursociety,especialyschools,aboundswithpeoplewhomisleadotherpeopleforcoveringtheirignorant.沒把握好節(jié)奏Aswecanseefromthepicture,ateacherisverypanicforforgettinghowtospellawordwhilehavingalanguageclass.Nowadays,peoplearegettingrustieraboutwritingliketheteacher1inthepicture.Theoveruseofdigitalproductshas esomethingweshouldgivemorethoughtto.首段展示Thisisanironicpicture:ateachermisspellsinhisclassawordzhaoshi,orcausingtroublesliketrafficaccidents.Onthesurface,theteacherispoorlypreparedfortheclass,buttotakeacloserexamination,Ithinkthecartoonisttriestodrawattentiontoadisturbingsituationseeneverywhereinournationthedecliningabilitytowrite.中間段落統(tǒng)一性不夠Whatisthecauseofthisphenomenon?Thisphenomenonismainlycausedbytherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.Firstofall,peopleusuallyusesmartphonesandcomputerstotypetorecordtext,usingakeyboardinsteadofapen.Secondly,teachersinschoolsallusemultimediacoursewaretoteach.Teachers‘writingbehaviorhasbeenreducedandtheirwritingskillshavebeenweakened.Althoughelectronicproductshavebroughtusconveniencweshouldnotrelytoomuchonthem.中間段落案例的有效性WiththeadventofInternetera,thereareever-growingnumber onworkingwiththeircomputers,anditisexactlytheconvenient texertenormousimpactonourwords-writingability.Furthermore,we Ourreadingtimeeveryday,letalonewritingtime,is everyother inthisdevelocountryhasn’tread eSouthKoreannabbedawaytheapplicationofDragonBoatD anceofourownculture.中間段展示SofarasI’mconcerned,th endarecomplex.Forthepastseveraldecades,wehavebeena eyboards;inrecentyears,youngpeopleinparticulartend oice-to-characterappsthatsavetroubleofmovingfingers. ,thevolumeofinformationdeliveredbywritingonpaper usandthofallthatcommunicated.convenientalterna lbreakthroughshavemadeuswritemuchlessthaninthepas teachers,aremorelikelythanevertomakespelling2尾段優(yōu)秀段落展示ItishightimewetakeeffectivemeasurestosaveChinsescharacter.Fortunay,oursocietyhasalreadyrealizedthisurgentsituation.Theofficialmediaholdsvariesofprogramsaboutspelling,whichhelpscreateanatmosphereforlearning.Schools,especiallyprimaryschools,alsopaymoreattentiontoteaching.Forusstudents,wecantrytowritelettertoourfriendseveryweektopracticewriting.Ifthingsgoonlikethis,charactercanbebrilliantagaincertainly.尾段優(yōu)秀段落展示Inmyalview,wordisoneofthemostsignificanttraditionalculturesforus.Itisnotsufficienttoknowhowtoreadorunderstandmeaningsbehindthesewords.Butweshouldwritingthemonpaperthatwecouldfeelthebeautyandmagicofourtraditionalcultures.Measuresmustbeapplied.Primarystudentsshouldbeaskedtowritetheironpaperratherthanonephoneorcomputer.Meanwhile,calligraphyshouldbeincludedasanauxiliarycourseinschool.Ifirmlybelieveourproudtraditionalculturescaninheritingenerationsinthese英語二首段描述不夠客觀Thebarchartcomparesthechangeofsalesamountbetweentraditionalautosandnewenergyvehiclesin .Baseduponthedataofthechart，onecanseethatthesalestrendinbothtraditionalandnewenergyvehicleshaswitnessedarise.Buttraditionalautosbentdownsignificantlyin2014infaceoftheadventofpowerfulcompetitor—newenergy3vehicles.Sincethat,newenergyvehiclesgainedmuchpopularityasthesalevolumesurged首段較為優(yōu)秀段落Thebarchartclearlyshowsthechangesinsalesoftraditionalandnewenergyvehiclesinbetween2012and2016.Ingeneral,thesaleoftraditionalcarhasexperiencedamarkedincrease,fromalmost19millionin2012tomorethan25millionin2016,althoughtherewasaslightdecreaseduring2013~2014.Thefigurefornewenergyautoincreasedtoabout5millionoverthesameperiod.首段展示Thebarchartcomparesthesalesofconventionalcarswiththoseofnewenergycarsinbetween2012and2016.In2012,around19millionconventionalcarsweresold,whilethesalesofthelatterareinsignificant.Duringthisperiod,conventionalcarshada40%growth,whilenewenergycarsanexponentialincrease,enteringalmost5millionfamilies.中間段較優(yōu)秀段落展示Thereisawhopgapofthesalesvolumebetweenconventionalcarsandnewenergyvehicles.Twomainreasonscanaccountforthissituation.Ontheonehand,newenergyvehiclesarenewinventionswhichcouldn’tbeputintomassproductionatpresent.Ontheanotherhand,requiringhigherleveloftechnology,thecostofnewenergyvehiclesismoreexpensivethanconventionalcars,soonlyafewpeoplecanaffordthem.中間段較優(yōu)秀段落展示Itseemsthatthetraditionalcarsstilldominate,butrowthhasbeenflagging.Bycontrast,newenergyvehiclesaregainingmoment.Therearethreereasonscanexinit.Firstly,ernmentstronglyadvocatenewenergyvehiclesandgiveslotsofsubsidies.Secondly,environmentalprotectionisrootedinpeople,moreandmorebuyersvoluntarychoosesnewenergyvehicles.Finally,astheprogressinscienceandtechnology,newenergyvehiclesaregettingbetter,eveninsomeaspects,theyarenotinferiortotraditionalcars.尾段弄錯大方向Timesareadvancing,andsoarethestandardofliving.Carshave eanindispensabletoolinpeople'slife,butI