高考英語開放式作文

用自己的語言對(duì)畫面進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)明、清楚敘述

緊承敘述，引出觀點(diǎn)（話題）（力求自然、準(zhǔn)確）聯(lián)系實(shí)際，擺事實(shí)，講道理（力求深度、力度）綜合上文，再申主旨（力求完整、有力）開放作文的四個(gè)步驟：起承轉(zhuǎn)合描圖----解圖----議圖----圓圖InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.Somepeoplelookconfident,butwhattheyactuallyhaveintheirheadisfarfromenough.一篇好的開放性作文什么樣的？

Asisshowninthepicture,ahalf-emptybottleisgoingtostickalabelof“full”onitsbody,feelingproudandconfident.Thepictureseemstobereflectingakindofsocialphenomenon.Wemightoftenmeetsomepeoplewholookconfident,tryingtoimpressotherswiththeir“rich”knowledge.However,justlikethebottleinthepicture,whattheyreallyknowisjustalittle.Whattheyactuallyhaveintheirheadisfarfromenough.Asanoldsayinggoes,emptybottlesmaketheloudestnoise.Therefore,it’swisetoenrichourselveswithknowledgeandtrytomakeourheadfull.起承轉(zhuǎn)合描圖（結(jié)合圖）議論如何“起”？1.Asisshowninthepicture,….2.Aswecanseefromthepicture,….4.Inthepicturewecanseethat….5.Fromthepicturewecanseethat….3.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,….6.Asthepictureindicates,thereis/aresb.doing….….描圖如何描圖？如何“承”？1.Thepictureseemsto….2.Thepicturetriesto….3.Thepictureconveysamessagethat….4.Itisacommonphenomenoninourdailylife.….5.Itisquiteacommonsceneinthesociety.….6.Suchasituationseemscommoninoursociety.….….圖中含義如何表達(dá)？如何“轉(zhuǎn)”？1.However,justlikethe…inthepicture,….2.If…,….注意:“轉(zhuǎn)”的方式非常靈活，難以有固定的模式，關(guān)鍵與前文邏輯一致。1、然而，真實(shí)的情況是….2、如果不這樣,會(huì)有啥結(jié)果高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）如何“合”？1.Therefore，….結(jié)論2.Thus，….3.So….4.Inconclusion，….5.Onlyinthiswaycan….高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）漫畫理解作文審圖立意三步驟一審細(xì)節(jié)（抓要點(diǎn)）二審角度（找可能性）三審優(yōu)選立意（拓展主題句）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）漫畫的畫面細(xì)節(jié)漫畫的夸張?jiān)⒁?/p>

(與現(xiàn)實(shí)的矛盾之處）細(xì)節(jié)夸張?jiān)⒁釪on’tcopyother’swayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.讀圖與立意細(xì)節(jié)高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）類型：現(xiàn)象型特點(diǎn)：有人有物要素：人，門，“拉”細(xì)節(jié)2：汗水代表什么？門呢？“拉”呢？細(xì)節(jié)1：臉朝外沒看標(biāo)示審圖高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）抓細(xì)節(jié)揭寓意要素：人，門，“拉”門---目標(biāo)、理想、工作、學(xué)習(xí)、困難，具體的某一件事等標(biāo)示“拉”---方法、建議、指令、措施、策略、規(guī)則等例：Inmyopinion,thedoorreferstoaproblemneededtobetackled,whilethesign“Pull”isjustlikethesuggestionswecangetinourdailylife.人細(xì)節(jié)：汗---努力、能力、經(jīng)驗(yàn)、態(tài)度等沒看見標(biāo)示---問題所在：“睜眼瞎”、“盲目行事”、“固執(zhí)蠻干”、“急于成事”等現(xiàn)象高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：文章是否扣題----描述與主題一致，自圓其說結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整----三部分內(nèi)容是否健康----樂觀向上邏輯是否清晰----議論要有邏輯性語言是否準(zhǔn)確----用詞恰當(dāng)，無語法錯(cuò)誤交際是否得體----情境，身份等高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）正確的立意：1、方法決定成功和失敗?！頢ometimes,itisthemethodyouapplythatdeterminesyoursuccessorfailure.☆I(lǐng)nmyopinion,thisconveysthemessagethatoneshouldalwaysmakeclearoftherightwaytoreachone’sgoalbeforedevotingoneselftoit,otherwise,youmightgointhecompletelywrongdirectionandwillnotsucceednomatterhowhardyoutryjustasthemandoes.☆Tomyunderstanding,whatholdsthemostsignificantkeytosuccessisthewaywedothings,ratherthanhowhardwethrowourselvesin.☆Fromwhatthepictureillustrates,wecouldrealizethatevenifwetryhardforourgoal,wemaystillfailifweneglectthewaytoworkonit.

☆A(yù)nditisfromthepicturethatweknowdoingsomethingwiththewrongmethodcanneverleadustosuccesswedesire,evenifweworkhard.高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）正確的立意：2、有能力沒方法無法成功?！?/p>

Althoughwepossessgreatabilities,ifwealwayssticktothewrongmethods,notonlywillitrestrictourthinkingbutitwillpreventourfurtherdevelopment.☆

Thepicturehasaprofoundsignificanceinourdailylife,whichindicatesthefactthatwesucceednotbecauseofourabilitybutourwaystosolvetheproblemsweencounter.高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）正確的立意：3、具體問題具體分析?！?/p>

Peoplesometimesdothingswithoutanyfurtherthinking.4、做事應(yīng)目標(biāo)明確方法正確。☆

Thepictureindicatesthatweshoulduseanappropriatewaytorealizeouraimandgoals.☆

Themessageconveyedisthatweshouldalwaysfindthecorrectapproachtothings.☆

Frommypointofview,whatthepictureconveystousisthatbeforegoingforsomethingorpursuingyourgoals,itisveryimportanttomakesurethatwhereyourdreamliesorifyouareontherightwaythatleadstoyourgoals.高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）正確的立意：5、遇事要學(xué)會(huì)變通，方法要應(yīng)時(shí)改變?！領(lǐng)nmyopinion,theyshouldnotalwaysfollowtheirpastexperience;theyshouldobservethesituationeachtimeandmakeproperreaction.6、不要急于求成，而應(yīng)冷靜反思?！?/p>

Inreality,wealsoneedtothinkoverbeforewedealwithaprobleminordertofindthebestsolution.7、勁要使在刀刃上?！頦ithpersistentendeavor/hardworkintherightdirection,weareboundtomakeasuccess.高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）正確的立意：8、不要盲目自大，要善于聽取建議?！?/p>

We,teenagers,shouldn’tmakelightofthesuggestionsgivenbyothersonthewaytosuccess.☆Whatthepicturetendstogetacrosstousisthatweshouldfollowsomeoneelse’ssuggestions.9、認(rèn)清形勢(shì)找到正確的方法。☆Thepicturevividlyconveysthemessagethatwheneverwedosomething,wearesupposedtobesensibleofthesituationfirstandthenselecttherightwaytofinishit.高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）高考英語漫畫類開放作文寫作指導(dǎo)（19張PPT）

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Asisshowninthepicture,thereisamanwhoistryingtoope