高三英語書面表達(dá)（二）

Aletterofgivingadvice

長沙市岳麓實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)高三英語組執(zhí)教老師朱鋮高三英語書面表達(dá)（二）長沙市岳麓實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)高三英語組執(zhí)教老寫作要點(diǎn)：1.建議信：作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。2.對象：1）寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；2）寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。寫作要點(diǎn)：3.基本框架：開頭（beginning）----開門見山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結(jié)尾(ending)----呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion.)3.基本框架：4.注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)?？蓮恼?、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議。3）符合英文信件的基本格式4.注意事項(xiàng)：A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1、I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterforaskingmehowto/askingformyadviceon

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Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.6.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou7.Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingaction.A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…B.表達(dá)建議（body）C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.Iamlookingforwardtodoingsth/sth

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C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式1.IbelieveyouwD.常見落款（complimentaryclosing）

開頭字母要大寫，末尾用逗號。結(jié)束語也稱敬語，使用時(shí)也應(yīng)因人而異，取決于發(fā)信人與收信人之間的關(guān)系或熟悉程度。1.家人親戚:Yourlovingmother/son/brother;Yourslovingly,Withlove,Allmyloveetc.2.長輩或一般朋友：Yoursrespectfully/sincerely,Yourstrulyetc.3.機(jī)關(guān)、團(tuán)體、學(xué)校等：Yoursfaithfully/sincerely,Yourstrulyetc.D.常見落款（complimentaryclosing）寫作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(問題)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建議內(nèi)容).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour____(祝愿).Yourssincerely,LiMing寫作模板模板一：模板二：Dear_____(對象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問題).Firstandforthemost_______(建議一);inaddition_____(建議二);what’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1Listtheke注意銜接詞使用:表先后次序：First,second,third….FinallyFirstly,secondly，…eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；Lastbutnotleast注意銜接詞使用:如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

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小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading假如你叫李華，你的英國朋友Jack來信說下學(xué)期要到你校學(xué)習(xí)，向你尋求建議。請你給Jack寫回信，在下面幾個(gè)方面給出建議，并希望他在你們學(xué)校過的愉快。1、與同學(xué)見面要主動(dòng)向同學(xué)問好，并做自我介紹（姓名、國籍等）；2、多與別人交流，并友好相處；3、如果方便的話幫助同學(xué)學(xué)英語；4、積極參加一些學(xué)?；顒?dòng)，比如藝術(shù)節(jié)、運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)等；5、其他建議。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Homework假如你叫李華，你的英國朋友Jack來信說下學(xué)期要到你校學(xué)習(xí)，DearJack,Iamgladtoknowyou’llcometoourschoolnextterm.

DearJack,IamgladtoDearJack,I'mgladtoknowyou'llcometoourschoolnextterm.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,pleasesayhellotoyourclassmatesandintroduceyourselfaboutyournameandnationality.Secondly,communicatewithothersfrequentlyandgetonwellwiththem.Thirdly,helpothersstudyEnglishifitisconvenienttoyou.Besides,youcantakeanactivepartintheschoolactivitiessuchasasportsmeetingoranartcelebration.Lastbutnotleast,ifyoufeelpuzzledtoadapttothelifeinChina,youcancomeandtalkwithme.