高一英語寫作訓(xùn)練（一）講評

高考筆試部分試卷結(jié)構(gòu)和題型題序題型題量賦分時間/分I語言知識及運(yùn)用第一節(jié)：完形填空153025第二節(jié)：語法填空101510II閱讀第一節(jié)：閱讀理解204040第二節(jié)：信息匹配5105III總計52135120寫作第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫作第二節(jié)：讀寫任務(wù)1151012530寫作要求：要求考生根題示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)?？忌鷳?yīng)能：1)清楚，連貫地傳遞信息，表達(dá)意思2)有效運(yùn)用所學(xué)語言知識第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫作命題規(guī)律：形式采用中文提綱/表格?？紤?yīng)用和說明文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完全給出：只能使用五個句子：三條評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：沒有設(shè)開放性要點(diǎn)，考生不可隨意發(fā)表個人意見或觀點(diǎn)。盡量用到并列句，復(fù)合句，非謂語動詞短語、介詞短語等來幫助表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確信息內(nèi)容完整篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫一、書寫潦草，卷面涂改。二、自由發(fā)揮自己的觀點(diǎn)，字?jǐn)?shù)超出太多。三、審題不仔細(xì)，信息內(nèi)容不完整，缺少要點(diǎn)。Problemsinyourwriting一、

句式錯誤。二、

單詞拼寫錯誤。Errorsinyourwriting四、詞性使用錯誤三、動詞形式錯誤五、主謂不一致六、代詞使用錯誤七、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)八、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號與大小寫一、句式錯誤Idisagreewithyourthink.Friendsinourlifeaplayanimportantrole.Nomatterthedistance,wearewillingtowithourfriendssharejoys.youdisagreewithsb

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Friendsplayanimportantroleinourlife.Nomatterhowfarthedistanceis,wearewillingtosharejoyswithourfriends.一、句式錯誤Whenweencounterdifficultiesorfrustrated,ourfriendshelp.Youshouldtreatyourfriendslikeyouaretreatedbyyourfriends.Don’tbelievepersonwhoeasytoleaveyou.Don’tbelieveinthepersonwholeavesyoueasily.Whenweareintroubleorfeelfrustrated,ourfriendwillhelpus.inthewaywanttobetreated1.Friendisveryimportantinyourlift.

2.Whenwefeelsadorhavesomedifferences,....3.Don’tbeliveinpeoplewholeaveyoueasily,...

4.Thanyoushouldtreatfriendsthewayyouwanttobetreated.5.Theturefriendis…

lifedifficulties二、單詞拼寫錯誤。believeThentrue1.Welikesharehappinesswithourfriends.

2.Iamdisagreewithyou.3.Friendsarealwayshelpus.

4.Althoughmakefriendsisverydifficult,...5.Whenweupsetorbeintrouble,…

making三、動詞形式錯誤helpingaretoshare1.Wearewillingtosharehappyorsadwithourfriends.

2.Whenwemeetdifficult,…3.Don’tbelieveinthosewholeaveyoueasy.

happiness四、詞性錯誤sadnessdifficultieseasily1.Friendsisimportantinourlife.

2.Don’tbelievethepersonwholeaveyou.3.Ithinkfriendsplaysanimportantroleinourlife.

areleaves五、主謂不一致1.Nomatterhowfaryouandhim/herarefromeachother,...

2.Friendscanhelpour.3.IthinkIdon’tagreewithyour.4.Youfriendsalso…

us六、代詞錯誤he/sheyouYour1.Whenyouareintroubles,...

2.Youdon’twanttomakefriend.

troublefriends七、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)八、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號與大小寫1.I’mgladtohearfromyou.ButIdisagreewithyou.2.Don’tbelieveinpeoplewholeaveyou.Becauseafriendinneedisafriendinneed.

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“A”1.Friendsplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.（黃奕東）2.Whenwemetdifficultiesorfeltsad,itisfriendwhohelpus.

（何松濤）3.Moreimportantly,whenwemeetdifficultiesandfeelupset,itisfriendsthathelpus.(曾森源）4.Youshouldtreatyourfriendsasyouwanttobetreated.(許文浩）5.Lastbutnotleast,you’dbetternottobelievethosewholeaveyoueasily.(紀(jì)株棋）6.Althoughourfriendsarefarfromus,westillwanttoshareourhappinessandsadnesswiththem.（羅曉宜）7.Youmustlearntotreatyourfriendsthewayyouwantyourfriendstotreatyou.(謝柯潼）寫作亮點(diǎn)meetfeelhelps

DearHenry，I’mgladtohearfromyou,butI’mafraidIdisagreewithyou.AsfarasI’mconcerned,friendsplayanimportantpart/roleinourdailylife.Whenweareintroubleorfeelupset,itisourfriendswholendusahand.Wearewillingtoshareoursorrowsaswellasourjoysnomatterhowfarawaywearefromeachother.Pleasetreatyourfriendsthewayyouwanttobetreated.Besides,don’tbelieveinthosewholeaveyoueasilybecause“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Bestwishes.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,XiaoWeidongonepossibleversion:Practicemakesperfect!Studyhardeverydayandimproveyourwritingstepbystep:加強(qiáng)基礎(chǔ)詞匯和基本句子結(jié)構(gòu)學(xué)習(xí)提高綜合運(yùn)用復(fù)合句的能力注意句子間的過渡與銜接仿寫、背誦、熟讀話題范文H