浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫聰明出于勤奮，天才在于積累浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫聰明出于勤奮，天才在于積累1seemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.TheylookedreallycoolIntheafternooniaskedUnclepaulificouldtakeahorserideandhesaidyes,aslongasmydadentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandiputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.Don'tbelatedkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetdadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(hB'blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4續(xù)寫完成后請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵seemydadandUnclePaulridi2SuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseParagraph2WehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdarkSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpe3答案寫作提示根據(jù)續(xù)寫第一段所給的段首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.可知本段應(yīng)該主要描寫突然出現(xiàn)一只小兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出現(xiàn)的兔子一般會(huì)讓馬受驚。故本段應(yīng)該描寫馬受驚后發(fā)生的事。從第二段的段首句Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark可以看出,作者和父親迷路了。那么本段的故事主要根據(jù)迷路之后的情況展開。本段的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是從迷路到回家的故事寫作時(shí)一定要注意以下兩點(diǎn)第一,從本故事的發(fā)展來(lái)看,第一段是馬受驚后發(fā)生的事而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要注意人物心理和情感的描寫第二注意兩段的邏輯關(guān)系。要注意第一段的內(nèi)容,尤其是段尾的內(nèi)容和第二段段首句之間的銜接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情節(jié)設(shè)計(jì)答案4bleversionSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorseberiver,outofbreath,andsodidI.Atthatmoment,mydadalsocameup.SeeinasOK,hewasquiterelieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.Paragraph2:dark.Wedidntknwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinbleversion5suchadarksituation.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromdistance.ItmustbeUnclePaul,Isaid.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanamazingric精彩語(yǔ)句1精美詞匯Invain白費(fèi)力氣previousadi.之前的atthepointofdesperation將要絕望之際afaintvoice微弱的聲音2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)①frightenedasiwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff(部分倒裝)②Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句)suchadarksituation.Justas6Writing2(2017浙江11月)閱讀下面短文.根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenwaseleventellsalotaboutherMytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriendswhoknewifwedeverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtravWriting2(2017浙江11月)7eler'schecksmomhadforgottenDavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:"Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(wj)whileIgo,andI'llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:"Honey,lerearethekids?""What?Oh,Gosh-Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.Wewereeveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butwewerentabouttotakeanychaneOnthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidntwefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(Xh).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttowneler'schecksmomhadforgotte81所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好4續(xù)寫完成后.請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithusParagraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右9答案ParagraphIThenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsthereweresurpassinglybeautiful--thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater.Wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupurtent,hewasdisappointedtofindthatithadbeenleftinthehotel.Well,DadhadtogobacktofetchittocontinueourcampingWedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecarexcitedly,laughinganddancingaround.Togetherweenjoyedthemodernsightsinthebigcities,thehistoricalbuildingsinthesmalltownsandtheamazingsceneryinnature.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,Momwouldhugusandkissusonourfaces.Howsweetshewas!Absent-mindedndforgetfulasshewas,sheneverforgottoexpressherlovetous答案10Writing3(2017浙江6月)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(#ir)longalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.Man,that'sabigdog!"hethought.Butwhenhedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasntadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhimMac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMacsrelief,itfellback,shakWriting3(2017浙江6月)11浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件12浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件13浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件14浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件15浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件16浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件17浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件18浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件19浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件20浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件21浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件22浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件23浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件24浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件25浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件26浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件27浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件28浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件29浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件30浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件31浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件32浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件33浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件34浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件35浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件36浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件37浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件38浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件39浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件40浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件41浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件42浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件43浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件44浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件45浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件46浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件47浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件48浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件49浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件50浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件51浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件52浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件53浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件54浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件55浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件56浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件57浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件58浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件59浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件60浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件61浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件62浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件63浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件64浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫課件65浙江高考之讀后續(xù)寫