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填表格2讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展列大綱

兩段12句法3寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)45寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)

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填表格1OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocamp（野營(yíng)）byalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewaytothelake,theystartedtoquarrelbecauseofsomedifferentopinions.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I'mgoingtofindabetterspot（地點(diǎn)）forustocamp”，andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforalongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshe

waslost.“Tom！”she

cried.“Help！”Noreply.Ifonlyshehadn’tlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Jane

keptmoving,asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,Janestartedtomissherhusband,Tom.Shewantedtotellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.2016年浙江卷真題原文Janerose(起身)atthebreakofday（黎明）,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoariver.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes（漿果叢林）.Shedrankandateafewberries.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongtheriverandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Fortunately，Jane

heardahelicopter（直升飛機(jī)）.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse（襯衫）,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandraised（舉起）themifthehelicopterscamebackagain.n.特點(diǎn)

（adj./v./短語(yǔ)）（主要）角色1wife（主要）角色2Tomhusband背景事件JaneandTomquarrelledwhencamping.微情節(jié)(v.)(adj.)TheyquarreledandJaneleftalone.(p1)Janewaslost.(p2)Janewalkedalongtheriver.(p4)Janefoundahelicopter.(p5)

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填表格Jane12讀P1P2首句

定情節(jié)發(fā)展Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain._______________________________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._______________________________________________________2Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.P1大意P1角色續(xù)寫(xiě)思路

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定情節(jié)發(fā)展Janestayedintheforestalonethewholenight.Jane2①HowdidJanefeel?②Whatdidshethink?③Wheredidshesleep?P2大意P2角色JaneTom續(xù)寫(xiě)思路

動(dòng)作(v.)

情緒(adj.)

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定情節(jié)發(fā)展HowdidJanegotrescued?2①WhatdidJanedobeforethehelicopterarrive?

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Jane;helicopter;

Tom

②WhatdidJanedowhenthehelicopterarrive?③whatdidTomdo?列大綱：兩段12句法3

列大綱：兩段12句法

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2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句話中，有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容？

3Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

結(jié)局/升華主旨續(xù)寫(xiě)首段首句續(xù)寫(xiě)二段首句承接首段首句3Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

列大綱：兩段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Janewastiredandfrightened.Shebegantowalk.Shefellasleep.Sheregreted.

ShethoughtwhereTomwas.Butshewassafe.Thehelicopterfoundher.Shewasrescued.ShemetTom.3Theymadeup.Shemetsomedangers.Sheappealedtothehelicopter.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.

范文賞析5寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)4Step4.寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:1）

Lyingbesidetheriver,shefellasleepverysoon.2）

Sheatesomeberriesandthenwalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.招式1：

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常用句式：①...,doing②Doing...,.....③Havingdone...,...

寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:3）TomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushedtowardsJane.4）Theyhuggedeachothertightlyandburstintotears.

招式2：

動(dòng)作鏈（V1,V2andV3）（V1andV2）

將籠統(tǒng)的大動(dòng)作拆解成具體的小動(dòng)作，畫(huà)面感十足

4

寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:5）Suddenly,sheheardtheshoutsoftigers,whichmadeherscaredtodeath.招式3：

定語(yǔ)從句“先行詞n.+關(guān)系代詞/關(guān)系副詞+定語(yǔ)從句”

4

寫(xiě)句式

招招升級(jí)

e.g.:6）Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.招式4：

形容詞作狀語(yǔ)，表示情緒感受

常用句式：①Adj.+adj.,...②...,adj.+adj.4

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范文賞析5Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janewassotired,hungry,andextremelyfrightened.Shethoughttoherself,“IfonlyIhadnotquarrelledwithTom.WhereisTom?Hemusthavemadetheemergencycall.WhatIneedisenoughcourage.IfIcontinuemyspiritstomorrow,Iwillbelikelytoguidethehelicopter.”Lyingbesidetheriver,shefellasleepverysoon.Suddenly,sheheardtheshoutsoftigers,whichmadeherscaredtodeath.Aftersheheldherbreathforafewminutes,everythingwasquietagain.Intheterribledarkness,shesleptagai