Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.Period6(Writing--changes)LearningobjectivesBytheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto：writeacompositionaboutyourchanges.talkaboutchangesinappearances,personalitiesandhobbies.Iusedto

，butnow

.文化意識：Lead-inTalkaboutthechangesinappearance.AppearanceInthepastNowshorttallbeshortI‘mtall

Lead-inAppearanceTalkaboutthechangesinappearance.Iusedto

，butnow

.InthepastNow

fatbefatI‘mthinthin

Lead-inAppearanceTalkaboutthechangesinappearance.Iusedto

,butnow

.InthepastNowshorthairlonghairhaveshorthairIhavelonghair

Lead-inAppearanceTalkaboutthechangesinappearance.I

，butnow

.InthepastNownotwearglasseswearglassesdidn’tusetowearglassesIwearglasses

Lead-inTalkaboutthechangesinpersonality.PersonalityIusedto

，butnow

.InthepastNow

shyoutgoingbeshyI’moutgoingPersonality

Lead-inTalkaboutthechangesinpersonality.Iusedto

，butnow

.InthepastNow

seriousfunnybeseriousI’mfunnyPersonality

Lead-inTalkaboutthechangesinpersonality.Iusedto

，butnow

.InthepastNow

lazybelazyI’mhard-workinghard-workingplayingsportsplayingthepianopaintingpicturesswimmingdancingplayinghide-and-seekIusedtolike

,butnowI

.Ididn’tusetolike

,butnowI

.Lead-inTalkaboutthechangesinhobbies.ListeningtomusicLead-inTalkaboutchangesinstudy.Iusedtobepoor/goodat

,butnowI

.Ididn’tusetolike

class,butnowI

.ChinesemathEnglishphysicschemistrygeographybiologypoliticshistorymusicartLead-inHowcanwedescribeourchangesinotheraspects？PersonalityAppearanceHobbiesStudyMydaughter’schanges

學(xué)習(xí)能力：

Pre-writingHowmydaughter

haschanged!Mydaughter'slifehaschangedalotinthelasttwoyears.Sheusedtobe

,butnowsheis

.

Sheusedtobe

,

butnowsheis

.shortandthintall

veryshyandquietoutgoingandconfidentBesides,sheusedtolike

athomeallthetime,butnowsheisinterestedin

.playingtoysdancing

Thebiggestchangeinherlifeisthatshedoesn'tfeellonelyanymore.Inthepast,shealwaysstaysalone.Dancing

hadagreatinfluenceonher.Themesentence主旨句appearanceandpersonalityhobbythebiggestchangeMeaningofthechangesHowdidithappen?Doasurvey

語言能力：

Pre-writingInthepastNowAppearancePersonalityHobbies3aWritenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance,personalityandhobbies.Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges.Pre-writing中考模擬訓(xùn)練初中生活中,同學(xué)們都發(fā)生了很大的改變,你有些什么改變？最大的變化是什么？

你是怎樣改變的？請以“HowI‘ve

Changed”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，描述你的變化。（滿分15分）寫作內(nèi)容可以包括興趣愛好、行為習(xí)慣、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等方面。參考以下信息：

HowIhavechanged!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto

.

.

NowI'm

.

Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas

.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause

.

.

whatwhathowInthepastNowAppearance矮，胖高，瘦Personality害羞、安靜外向Hobbies討厭體育課，喜歡畫畫喜歡交朋友，運(yùn)動(dòng)3b

寫作指導(dǎo)第一步：審題：人稱___________

時(shí)態(tài)____________________________

Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?Whichchangeisthemostimportantone,andwhy?Trytowritetwoparagraphs.Paragraph1Paragraph2GeneralintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlifeThemostimportantchangeandhowithappened

第一人稱一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)HowI’vechanged!（Title）Beginning(topic)Body(changes)Ending(sum-upandcallup)Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Generalchanges(appearence,personality,hobbies...)Themostimportantchange，howithappenedIhopeIwill…Iwillstudymuchharder…HowIhavechanged!一般過去時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第二步：列框架寫作指導(dǎo)【注意】1.把握好時(shí)態(tài)，正確使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。2.使用一些對比句型(如：…usedto…,butnow…;…inthepast,butnow…;once…等)。3.同時(shí)，也可以恰當(dāng)使用比較級，以便能更形象地展示在不同時(shí)期的變化。寫作指導(dǎo)第三步：寫作While-writing中考模擬訓(xùn)練初中生活中,同學(xué)們都發(fā)生了很大的改變,你有些什么改變？最大的變化是什么？你是怎樣改變的？請以“HowI‘ve

Changed”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，描述你的變化。（滿分15分）寫作內(nèi)容可以包括興趣愛好、行為習(xí)慣、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等方面。參考以下信息：

HowI‘v

changed!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto

.

.

NowI'm

.

Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas

.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause

.

.

whatwhathowInthepastNowAppearance矮，胖高，瘦Personality害羞、安靜外向Hobbies討厭體育課，喜歡畫畫喜歡交朋友，運(yùn)動(dòng)思維品質(zhì)：Post-writingAssesment評價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)學(xué)生互評教師評價(jià)1.Haveatopic，acompletemainpartandagoodending.有主題句,完整的內(nèi)容和精彩的結(jié)束語(4,3,2,1)2.Spellwordsandusecapitallettersinthesentencecorrectly.能正確拼寫單詞和使用字母的大小(4,3,2,1)3.Usegrammarp