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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Dionwashavingarunningrace.Thisracewouldstretchinsixstagesoversevendaysandcoveralmost155

miles.Gobi,alittleshedoghappenedtojoinhim.Itwastheirthirdday.

Theskywasclear,theweatherwaswarm:thegroundwasfirmbeneathGobi'sfeet.Fromtimetotime,Dionwouldlookoveratherandsmile.Thewarmthofthatsmilewasevenbrighterthanthesunbeatingdownonthem,butinagoodway.ItfilledGobiup.

Astheyprogressed,abroadriverpoppedintotheirsight,lyingrightinfront.Dionhadnoideahowdeepitwas,buttheracemarkersledrightacross,sohehadtoassumehe'dbeabletomakeitacrossaswell.Itwassurprisinglycoldconsideringhowwarmthedaywas,andhesankdownuptohiswaist,butthatwasit.Atleasttheriverbedseemedsolid.Hecouldmakehiswayacross;hejusthadtogoslowly.Onewrongstepandhe'dgetpletelywet.Plus,hecouldhurthimselfsincehecouldn'tseewherehewasputtinghisfeet.Thiswasgoingtotakeawhile.

Gobiwatchedasthemanjumpedintothewater.Shewaggedhertail,buthedidn'tlookherway.Hewasclearlybusyconcentrating.Shesatdownjustbeforethewaterandwatched.Surely,hewouldturnaroundandnoticethatshewasn'twithhim.Butseveralminutespassed,andhegotfartherandfartheraway.Finally,Gobicouldn'ttakeitanylonger.Shebegananxiouslyrunningupanddowntheriverbank.Wasthemangoingtoleaveher?Paragraph6:

Atthesoundofherbark,Dionstopped.Healwaysmadeapointoffacingforward,alwaysforward,duringarace.Butthistimehedidglanceback.Gobiwassittingattheriver'sedge,barkingfiercely.Therewasnowaythelittledogcouldcrossthatonherown.Thesedays,he'dfedher,givenherwater,andnamedher.Hehadtoadmitthathelikedhavingherwithhim.Sheliftedhisspirits.注意:1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.Paragraph2:ThisbecametougherforDiontocrossthebroadriver.

故事大意:長跑選手迪昂在一場長跑比賽中遇到了小狗,由于不敢過河,一直猶豫不敢過去。而小狗一直陪伴在身邊,與此同時,小狗害怕迪昂不要他了,看起來很可憐。因此漸漸地迪昂把小狗戈比當做了非常好的伙伴,倆個伙伴一起完成了這次長跑比賽。原文語言支架:語言協(xié)同無靈主語:Thewarmthofthatsmilewasevenbrighterthanthesun

beatingdownon

them,butinagoodway.ItfilledGobiup.非謂語:Takingadeepbreath,hetookacarefulstepintothewater.三聯(lián)動:Thesedays,he’dfedher,givenherwater,andnamedher.并列句:Onewrongstep

andhe’dgetpletelywet.從句:(部分)Plus,hecouldhurthimselfsincehecouldn'tseewherehewasputtinghisfeet.段落首句情節(jié)預(yù)判Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.(核心是共情,返回帶上小狗)游回岸上(Dion心理+動作;Gobi心理+動作)——帶上小狗(她的行動;Dion的語言+動作)——準備就緒繼續(xù)下河(基于二段首句toughertocrossthebroadriver可得出過渡句是下河準備)ThisbecametougherforDiontocrossthebroadriver.(核心是如何渡河,和過河后的描寫)在河中(Dion的動作;小狗Gobi動作)——上岸(Dion的動作,Gobi的動作)——故事收尾(基于原文信息支架)下水文:Paragraph1:Rightnow,listeningtoGobi'sdesperatebarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokeDion’sheart.

TheheartwrenchingbarkingtoreDion’sheartapart,hequicklyturnedback,andsoonmadehiswaybacktotheriver’sedge,whereGobianxiouslyawaitedhisreturn.Asheapproached,Gobi'seyesbrightenedwithhope,hertailwaggingvigorously.Dionscoopedherupintohisarms,showeringherwithaffectionatewords.Withnewfoundstrength,Dionsetofftowardstheriveronceagain,determinedtofindawayforbothofthemtooveretheobstacletogether.Paragraph2:CrossingthebroadriverbecameaneventougherchallengewithGobiinhisarms.

Dioncarefullysteppedintothecoldwater,strugglingtomaintainhisbalanceasGobinestledherselfinhisarms,acutelyawareofthedangerthatsurroundedthem.Slowlyandcautiously,Dionnavigatedtheunpredictableriverbed,ensuringeachstepwassolid.Together,theymovedahead,stepbystep.Finally,theyreachedtheoppositebank.Gentlyplacedontheground,GobiboundedaroundDion,wagginghertailincelebration.Helaughedandscoopedherupagain,plantingakissonherfurryhead.官方范文Onepossibleversion:Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.

“Oh,fine!”

Diondeclaredatlast.Turningcarefully,hestartedtomakehiswayback.Thesecondshesawhimturn

around,Gobiwasonherfeet,tailwaggingfuriously,herwhimperschangingtohappybarks.Whenhewascloseenough,DionreachedoutonelongarmandscoopedGobiupofftheground.Thenhehuggedhertohischest.Thelittledogliftedherheadandlickedhischeek,whichtickled.Dionlaughed.“Yeah,yeah,you’rewele,”

hetoldher.ThisbecametougherforDiontocrossthebroadriver.

Before,Dionhadkepthisarmsoutforbalance.NowoneofthemwasholdingGobiinstead.Thatmeanthehadonlyonearmfree.Hehadtogoevenmoreslowlyandmorecarefully.Throughitall,Gobiwasamazinglygood.Shedidn'tstruggle.Shedidn'tbark.Shedidn'twhimper.Shejustsnuggledupagainsthischestandwatchedastheyslowlyinchedtheirwayacrosstheriver.Oncetheyreachedtheotherside,Dionsetherdown.Shequicklycircledhim,barkingandwagginghertail.

默寫版:Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.

“Oh,fine!”

Diondeclaredatlast._______________________________________他小心翼翼地轉(zhuǎn)過身,開始往回走.Thesecondshesawhimturn

around,Gobiwasonherfeet,tailwaggingfuriously,herwhimperschangingtohappybarks._______________________________________________________________________________________________當他夠近的時候,迪昂伸出一只長臂,把戈壁從地上鏟了起來.Thenhehuggedhertohischest._______________________

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