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應試策略第1頁一、近幾年湖北省高考書面表示命題特點

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書信計劃到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人第2頁二、寫作要求內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點完整性詞匯利用準確性語言得體性上下文連貫性字數(shù)及書寫第3頁三、年湖北高考書面表示

假設你是某中學學生會主席李華，你校與當?shù)匾凰鶉H學校經(jīng)常舉行聯(lián)誼活動。你計劃在重陽節(jié)組織學生到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人，擬邀請國際學校學生參加。請依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點給國際學校學生會主席Tony寫一封信。

關(guān)鍵點：向老人贈予禮品（鮮花、自制賀卡……）；為老人提供服務（做清潔、陪老人聊天……）；為老人演出節(jié)目（唱歌、跳舞……）。

注意：1.詞數(shù)為100左右；

2.信開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）；

3.已給出信開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。第4頁年湖北高考書面表示評分實例

(Ⅰ)Wecangivetheoldmenandtheoldwomensomeflowersandcardsforcelebratebyourselves.Wecanhelptheoldmenandtheoldwomencleantheirroomsandtalkwiththem.Wecansinginganddancingtogivetheoldmenandtheoldwomentolook.Ithinktheywillveryhappy.

（5分）分析：

1.該答卷詞數(shù)為56，未到達要求詞數(shù)，影響信息內(nèi)容完整；

2.內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點雖都有包括，但有很多語法結(jié)構(gòu)方面錯誤，詞匯項目有限；

3.缺乏語句間基本連接成份，內(nèi)容不連貫。第5頁

分析：1.基本上表敘清楚了題目要求全部主要內(nèi)容；

2.時態(tài)利用恰當（普通未來時）；

3.采取了一些簡單連接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，如：also,ofcourse,As;4.語法、詞匯方面錯誤較前面大大降低，但從準確性角度考慮仍存在一些問題。

（15分）(Ⅱ)IthinkitisveryhelpfultousandtheoldmeninNursingHome.Wecanlearnmanythingsfromthose.

Wewillgivethemflowersandcardswhichmadebyourselves.Wealsocanhelpthemwithcleaningandwecanjointhemtochattogether.Ofcourse,wemaypreparesomeprograms,justlikesing-ing,dancingandsoon.Ithinktheoldmenwhoarealwaysalonewillbeveryhappyandwillfeelthattheyareathomes.Asstudents,don’tweoughttohelpothers?Pleasethinkaboutit.第6頁(24分)分析：1.語言錯誤較少；

2.行文流暢，應用了較豐富句子結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；

3.有效地采取了不一樣連接伎倆，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次清楚；

4.英文書寫工整漂亮，卷面整齊。

(Ⅲ)

Themainactivitiesareasfollows.Firstly,wewouldliketogivetheelderlyourpresents,suchasflowers,cardsmadebyourselves.Thiswillcreatagoodatmosphereforouractivity.Secondly,we’llservetheelderly,doingthecleaningandchattingwiththem.Atlast,severalprogrammes,whicharewellprepared,aregoingtobepresentedtothem.Theseincludesinginganddancing.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Itisameaningfulactivity,isn’tit?Theelderlyisinneedofourcare,andyoucanalsolearnmoreaboutourculture.Theelderlyhascontributedalottosociety,nowitistimethatwethankedthem.第7頁四、基本步驟審題抓關(guān)鍵點擴展成句連句成文檢驗謄寫第8頁1、語言準確性、得體性agoodmankind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warm-hearted,sympathetic,honorableEg:

Peterisagoodman.todietopassaway,toleaveus,one’shearthasstoppedbeatingEg:PremierZhoudied,andwefeltsorrowful.五、能力貯備第9頁2.正確使用相關(guān)連接詞

時間先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile

轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果關(guān)系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat讓步關(guān)系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat第10頁表列舉：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表總結(jié)：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated遞進關(guān)系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreononehand…ontheotherhand,

條件關(guān)系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…第11頁3、固定詞組和句型使用a.表“我認為”_____playingcomputergameisawasteoftime.Iholdthat…/Iaccepttheideathat…AsfarasI’mconcerned…/AsfarasIcansee…Itseemstomethat…/frommypointofview…b.表“一…就…”_____thechildsawhismother,hecried.assoonas,on/upondoing…themoment/instant/minute,immediately,hardly/scarcely…when,nosooner…than…第12頁4、注意語言表示多樣性Largecrowdsoftouriststothezoowillmake

trafficjams.Largecrowdsoftouriststothezoowillresultintrafficjams.Someofmyclassmatesarefortheopinion.Someofmyclassmatesareinfavoroftheopinion.第13頁5.適當使用較復雜句法結(jié)構(gòu)a.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.a.Theshipdidn’tsinkbecauseoftheeffortsofthecaptain.b.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.b.Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.第14頁六、實際操演

你所在班級將要舉行一次主題為“WhatCanWeDoforOurSchool?”英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下四方面中任選二個進行闡述，并舉例加以說明。

1.關(guān)心他人；2.美化校園；

3.愛護學校設施；4.營造良好學習氣氛注意：1.不要在書面表示中出現(xiàn)所在學校校名和本人姓名，不然本節(jié)判為零分

2.詞數(shù)：100左右；

3.參考詞匯：愛心—loveandcare;校園—campus;

設施—facilities;氣氛—environment；

4.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，且不計入詞數(shù)。

Hello,everyone.It’snicetospeakaboutwhatwecandoforourschool,andIthinkeachofuscandosomething.______________________Thankyouforlistening.第15頁

Hello,everyone.It’snicetospeakaboutwhatwecandoforourschool,andIthinkeachofuscandosomething.q

Thefirstthingwecandoistomakeourcampusmorebeautiful.Everyoneofusmayplantatreeintheschool,ororganizeathoroughcleaningonthecampus.Wecanalso

formagoodhabitofputtingtherubbishinthetrashcan.Besides,neverforgettoturnoffthelightorclosethedoor.Weshouldnotleavethetapwaterrunningorwasteanymaterialsinthelaboratoryclass.

Ifeveryonedoesonethingforourschool,Ibelievewewillturnourschoolintoabetterplacetostudyandlivein.(評論）

Thankyouforlistening.One

possibleversion第16頁七、總結(jié)建議

切中題意，不漏關(guān)鍵點,卷面整齊；語言得體、準確、連貫、多樣；積累“語言經(jīng)驗”,培養(yǎng)“語言意識”；觀察品味，模仿訓練；第17頁討論類書面表示模式P1:RecentlyourclasshashadadiscussionaboutwhetherseniorstudentsshouldsurftheInternet.

p2:Someofmyclassmatesareinfavorof…Theysay…Theyalsosay…what’smore…

P3:However，otherstudentsareagainsttheidea，sayingthat…so…Onetheotherhand，otherstudentsthink…Theysuggest，however，…P4:Inmyopinion,第18頁1.1.Therailwayownerswouldnottakeanychances,sotheyhiredmanyhunterstoforewildlyintothebisonalongthetracks.2.Thebisonwerelefttorotslowlywheretheyfell.3.Asaresult,theinsectswhichlivedontheseplantsalsodiedout.4.Thisinturnproducedlessfoodsupplyforbirds,theprairiedogandwolves.5.Thusthechangeinthenumberofbisonhadaneffectonthewholewildlifechainoftheplains.6.Afterbeinghuntedandkilledforalmost90years,thebisonwerefinallyleftalone.7.Theseeffortswerenotinvain.第19頁對比是經(jīng)過對兩種或兩種以上不一樣事物，或者同一個事物不一樣情況進行比較，從而得出結(jié)論。對比是說明和論證慣用方法?！窭脤Ρ葘懽鲿r要注意：明確對比目標，搞清楚經(jīng)過對比到底要說明什么?！癖硎緦Ρ葢T用語：表示相同點有：like;likewise;similarly;inthesameway;also;equally;too;as等等。表示不一樣點有：unlike;however;but;yet;while;though;although;eventhough;instead;onthecontrary;incontrastto;ononehand...,ontheotherhand等等。第20頁●對比慣用寫作方式：1.對兩種或各種事物異同之處逐點進行比較對照，格式為：A1,B1,C1,...;A2,B2,C2,...;A3,B3,C3,...;...（簡述為A+B+C+...模式）2.先分別列出兩種或各種事物異同之處，然后進行比較對照，格式為：A1,A2,A3,...;B1,B2,B3,...;C1,C2,C3,...;...（簡述為A/B/C/...模式）如：Somepeoplesaythatrailwaysaremoreimportantthanroads.Butinmyopinion,roadsaremoreimportantthanrailways.Railwaysdonottouchsmallplaces,whileroadscanbebuilttoreacheveryplace,evenvillagesinfarcornersofthecountry.Railwaysarebuiltonlyfortrains,butroadswillproveequallyusefulforbicycles,carriagesandotherkindsofvehicles.Thecostofbuildingaroadisalsolowerthanthatofbuildingarailway.第21頁；/紫外激光打標機dth93ewc孩子，待人實在太誠了?！庇值?，“她自有花兒庇佑，你理她則甚？”明秀只是抿嘴微笑。寶音借了幾本書走，老太太去看太守夫人新還愿給寺里織錦袈裟，并晚飯也在外頭食齋了，并不回來。云華要與明秀去福家看場戲事兒，告訴了嘉顏一聲，嘉顏更無阻攔道理，洛月自與樂韻侍侯寶音梳洗換裝，仍是雙髻，多插一對短蘇瓊釵