高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)走進(jìn)兒童收容所：心靈的觸動(dòng)之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Growingup,Iwantedtobejustlikemymom.Shewaskindandcaring,andalwaysmadepeoplecomfortableinherpresence.Foryearsshewasavolunteerinourcommunity.IlovegoingtothelocalnursinghometohelpwithherwhenIwasachild.However,onceIbecameateenager,Iwastoocaughtupinmyadolescentworldtoworryabouthelpingothers.OneparticularsummerdaywhenIwas12,Momcameintomyroomandtoldmetogetupandmeetheratthecar.ButIhadplannedtospendthedayatthelakewithfriends.Whydidshehavetoruineverything?Atlast,Imademywayoutsidewithmymother.Angryandannoyed,Iclimbedintothecarandshootthedoorloudly.Isatinsilence,tooupsettotalk.“Tasha,doyouknowwherewearegoing?”Momaskedcalmly.Iremainedsilent.“Sweetheart,we’regoingtothechildren’sshelter.IhavebeentherebeforeandIthinkitwouldbenefityou,”sheexplained.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Ifeelapainslowlyforminmystomach.HowwasIsupposedtohelpthere?Whenwereachedtheshelter,Iwasrathersurprised.Asweapproachedthefrontdoor,windbellsplayedacalmingtunewhiletreesandflowerswelcomedus.Maybethiswasn’tgoingtobeso.Momrangthedoorbell.Wewereledtothefrontroom,whereallofthechildrenwereplaying.Toyswerespreadoutacrossthefloor.Inoticedababywhosebodywasseriouslywounded.Mostofthechildrenhadnoticeablephysicalscarssuchascuts,burnsandscratches.Whataterriblelifetheymusthadhadbeforetheymovedhere!Myheartsank.AsIwaslookingaround,Ifeltagentlepullonmyshirt.5段首句Paragraph1：Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.Paragraph2：Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmumseveraltimes.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8文章講述了作者小時(shí)候常和媽媽去社區(qū)做志愿者，長(zhǎng)大后卻不再熱衷。12歲那年夏天，媽媽打斷作者和朋友去湖邊玩的計(jì)劃，帶她去兒童收容所。作者起初滿心不情愿，一路上沉默且生氣。到了收容所，作者被其溫馨的環(huán)境意外到。進(jìn)入收容所，看到孩子們玩耍，還有很多孩子身上有明顯的傷疤，作者心生憐憫。就在這時(shí)，一個(gè)小女孩拉住了她的衣角。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.我低頭一看，發(fā)現(xiàn)是一個(gè)有著棕色眼睛的小女孩正抬頭看著我。她的眼神中透著一絲膽怯，但又帶著些許好奇。她的手里緊緊握著一個(gè)破舊的玩具小熊，衣角還沾著一些灰塵。她小聲地問(wèn)我：“姐姐，你愿意和我一起玩嗎？”看著她那渴望的眼神，我心中的不快瞬間消散了。我笑著點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，和她一起坐在了地上。她開(kāi)心地向我展示她的玩具，還跟我講起了她在這里的生活。在交流中，我了解到她經(jīng)歷了很多困難，但依然保持著樂(lè)觀。和她相處的過(guò)程中，我也漸漸被她的快樂(lè)所感染。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmumseveraltimes.從那以后，我和媽媽又多次來(lái)到這個(gè)收容所。每次來(lái)，我都會(huì)和孩子們一起玩耍、學(xué)習(xí)。我教他們畫(huà)畫(huà)、唱歌，給他們講外面世界的故事。孩子們也會(huì)和我分享他們的小秘密，把我當(dāng)成最親近的人。在這個(gè)過(guò)程中，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己變得越來(lái)越有耐心，也更加懂得珍惜現(xiàn)在的生活。收容所的經(jīng)歷讓我明白，幫助他人能給自己帶來(lái)如此多的快樂(lè)和成長(zhǎng)。我不再抱怨媽媽的安排，而是期待著每一次和孩子們相聚的時(shí)光，希望能給他們帶來(lái)更多的溫暖和關(guān)愛(ài)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.Therewasahintofshynessinhereyes,yetalsoasparkofcuriosity.Shewasclutchingaworn-outteddybeartightlyinherhand,andthereweresomeduststainsonherclothes.Inasoftvoice,sheaskedme,"Sister,wouldyouliketoplaywithme?"Lookingintohereagereyes,myannoyancevanishedinstantly.Inoddedwithasmileandsatdownonthefloorwithher.Shehappilyshowedmehertoyandbegantotellmeaboutherlifehere.Duringourconversation,Ilearnedthatshehadgonethroughalotofhardships,butstillremainedoptimistic.AsIspenttimewithher,Iwasgraduallyinfluencedbyherhappiness.13范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthat,Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmymomseveraltimes.Eachtimewewentthere,Iwouldplayandstudywiththechildren.Itaughtthemhowtodrawandsing,andtoldthemstoriesabouttheoutsideworld.Thechildrenwouldalsosharetheirlittlesecretswithme,regardingmeastheirclosestfriend.Intheprocess,Ifoundmyselfbecomingmoreandmorepatient,andIalsolearnedtocherishmypresentlifebetter.Theexperienceatthesheltermademeunderstandthathelpingotherscouldbringsomuchhappinessandgrowthtomyself.Inolongercomplainedaboutmymom'sarrangement.Instead,IwaslookingforwardtoeverytimeIcouldmeetthechildren,hopingtobringthemmorewarmthandlove.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Ilookeddowntofindalittlegirlwithbrowneyeslookingupatme.Hereyes,inwhichatraceofshynesscouldbedetected,werealsofilledwithcuriosity.Clutchingashabbyteddybeartightlyinherhand,shehadsomeduststainsonherclothes."Sister,wouldyouliketoplaywithme?"sheaskedinasoftvoice.Meetinghereagereyes,myannoyancedisappearedinaninstant.Withasmile,Inoddedandseatedmyselfonthefloorbesideher.Shethenhappilypresentedhertoytomeandstartedtotalkaboutherlifeintheshelter.Fromourconversation,Ilearnedthatdespitehavingendurednumeroushardships,shestillstayedoptimistic.AsIaccompaniedher,Iwasgraduallyinfectedbyherhappiness.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthat,Ireturnedtotheshelterwithmymomonseveraloccasions.Everytimewearrived,Iwouldengageinplayandstudywiththechildren.Itaughtthemdrawingandsingingskillsandtoldthemtalesoftheoutsideworld.Thechildren,inturn,wouldsharetheirlittlesecretswithme,treatingmeastheirdearestfriend.Duringthisprocess,IfoundthatIwasbecomingincreasinglypatientandalsolearnedtotreasuremycurrentlifemore.Theexperienceatthesheltermadeitcleartomethathelpingotherscouldbringanabundanceofhappinessandpersonalgrowth.Nolo