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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwassittinginthelivingroomwithmypetdogToby,whentherewereurgentknocksonthefrontdoor.Whocouldthatbe?Iwondered.Itwaslate,andtherewasaheavydownpouroutside.Iopenedthedoor.Therestoodamaninauniform.“Youneedtoevacuate!”heinsisted.“Thewholeareaisflooding.”Iwasgiven20minutestopackbeforeTobyandIweredriventoanearbychurchbeingusedasarefuge,wherehundredsofotherlocalshadgathered.Mymindwenttomyson,Sunil.He’dmovedinwithmeafewyearsearlier.Tragically,hewasdiagnosedwithbonecancer.HewasinhospitalinLismoreatthatmoment,withonlyweekstolive.Andthebadnewsdidn’tstopthere...“Yourdoghastogotoarescuecentre,”avolunteersaid.“Petsweren’tallowedinthetemporaryaccommodation.”Tobyhadbeenmybestfriendfor13years,sosayinggoodbyetohimbrokemyheart.Afterfourdays,thewaterfellenoughformetoinspectmyhouse.Mudlinedthewallswherethewaterhadrisentotheceilinganddestroyedallmybelongings.Itseemedthatmyhousewasbeyondrepair.IfeltsosadasIstruggledthroughthemess.Fortunately,threedayslater,theroadsoutofourareawerereopened,andIcouldvisitSunil.IstayedbySunil’ssidethatwholeweekuntilhesadlybreathedhislastbreath.Ilostmyhouse,dog,andonlychildwithintwoweeks,leavingmyworldindarkness.Amonthlater,Iwassittingaloneatthecommunityhubwhenoneofthevolunteers,Lynne,approachedme,accompaniedbyayounggentleman.“ThisisMyles,”Lynnesaid.“Hemightbeabletohelpyourepairyourhouse.”Hearingthis,Iwasreallytooexcitedtosayanything.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Soonafter,Mylesbroughtmanytoolstomybackyard,wherehesettowork.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,Ifinallycamehome.____________________________________________________________________________________________房屋修復(fù)故事續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)(兩段)?第一段:?Myles工作細(xì)節(jié):細(xì)致描述Myles帶著工具來(lái)到后院時(shí)的情景,如工具種類繁多,擺放整齊,他熟練地挑選出當(dāng)天所需工具,眼神專注,“Soonafter,Mylesarrivedatmybackyardwithalargetruckfilledwithanarrayoftools.Hammers,saws,anddrillswereneatlyarranged.Heskillfullyselectedthetoolsheneededfortheday,hiseyesfixedonthetaskahead.”。?專業(yè)專注體現(xiàn):深入刻畫(huà)他工作時(shí)的狀態(tài),每拆除一塊損壞的木板,都仔細(xì)檢查,不放過(guò)任何細(xì)節(jié),遇到結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的部分,會(huì)停下手中動(dòng)作,認(rèn)真思考,拿出圖紙比劃,“Everyday,heworkedwithgreatconcentration.Whenremovingadamagedwoodenplank,heexamineditclosely,ensuringnohiddenproblemswereoverlooked.Whenfacingacomplexstructuralpart,hewouldpause,takeouttheblueprints,andmakecarefulcomparisons,tryingtofigureoutthebestsolution.”。?與“我”互動(dòng)情節(jié):全面展現(xiàn)他與“我”交流的場(chǎng)景,耐心解答“我”對(duì)修復(fù)過(guò)程的疑問(wèn),分享一些修復(fù)技巧,還會(huì)根據(jù)“我”的回憶和想法,對(duì)房屋設(shè)計(jì)提出合理建議,“Hewouldpatientlyanswerallmyquestionsabouttherepairprocess,sharingsomeusefulrepairtips.Healsolistenedattentivelytomymemoriesandideasaboutthehouse,andthenofferedreasonablesuggestionsonthehousedesign,makingmefeelinvolvedintheprocess.”。?第二段:?回家初印象:生動(dòng)描繪“我”回家時(shí)看到房屋嶄新模樣的第一反應(yīng),眼睛瞪大,嘴巴微微張開(kāi),臉上露出難以置信的表情,緩緩走進(jìn)屋內(nèi),輕輕撫摸著新的墻壁,“InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,whenIfinallycamehome,myeyeswidenedindisbelief.Thehouselookedcompletelynew,farbeyondmyexpectations.Iwalkedinslowly,myhandgentlycaressingthenewwalls,feelingasenseofunfamiliarityandexcitement.”。?回憶情感交織:具體描述“我”回憶過(guò)去時(shí)的內(nèi)心活動(dòng),想起和Sunil、Toby在一起的快樂(lè)時(shí)光,淚水在眼眶中打轉(zhuǎn),又想到他們的離去,心中一陣刺痛,但看到修復(fù)好的房屋,又涌起一股溫暖和力量,“Memoriesofthepast,boththehappytimeswithSunilandTobyandthepainfulmomentsoftheirloss,floodedmymind.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIrememberedthelaughterweshared.Thepainoftheirabsencestilllingered,butthesightoftherepairedhousegavemeawarmfeelingandanewsenseofstrength.”。?未來(lái)展望表達(dá):深入闡述“我”對(duì)未來(lái)生活的期待,計(jì)劃在院子里種上Sunil喜歡的花,重新布置房間,邀請(qǐng)朋友來(lái)家中聚會(huì),開(kāi)啟新的生活篇章,“Ilookedforwardtothefuturewithanticipation.IplannedtoplantSunil'sfavoriteflowersintheyardandredecoratetherooms.Ialsointendedtoinvitefriendsoverforgatherings,readytostartanewchapterinthisrebuilthome.”。?情感線(150字)?Myles開(kāi)始修復(fù)房屋前,“我”沉浸在失去房屋、兒子和寵物的巨大悲痛中,世界一片灰暗。Myles到來(lái)后,他的專業(yè)和耐心讓“我”逐漸感受到溫暖,燃起一絲希望,在修復(fù)過(guò)程中,希望不斷增長(zhǎng)。房屋修復(fù)完成回家時(shí),“我”被房屋的嶄新模樣震撼,回憶往昔,痛苦與喜悅交織,最終在對(duì)未來(lái)的期待中,“我”獲得了重新面對(duì)生活的勇氣,情感從絕望逐漸走向積極樂(lè)觀。?故事線(6條)?暴雨來(lái)襲,洪水泛濫,“我”被要求撤離,寵物狗Toby被送往救援中心,“我”前往臨時(shí)避難所。?“我”的房屋被洪水嚴(yán)重破壞,所有物品被毀,幾乎無(wú)法修復(fù)。?兒子Sunil因骨癌在醫(yī)院治療,最終離世,“我”在短時(shí)間內(nèi)遭受多重打擊。志愿者Lynne帶著Myles出現(xiàn),Myles表示能幫助修復(fù)房屋。?Myles帶著工具來(lái)到后院,開(kāi)始認(rèn)真專業(yè)地修復(fù)房屋,過(guò)程中與“我”積極交流。?六個(gè)月后,房屋修復(fù)完成,“我”回到家中,回憶過(guò)去,展望未來(lái),決定以積極態(tài)度開(kāi)啟新生活。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thisheart-rendingstoryvividlydemonstratesthateveninthefaceofthemostdevastatinglosses,thekindnessandhelpfromotherscanbeaglimmerofhope,guidingusoutofthedarknessandtowardsanewbeginning.?這個(gè)令人心碎的故事生動(dòng)地表明,即使面對(duì)最具毀滅性的損失,他人的善良和幫助也能成為一絲希望,引領(lǐng)我們走出黑暗,邁向新的開(kāi)始。?Throughtheprocessofthehousebeingrepairedandtheprotagonist'semotionaltransformation,weareremindedthatlifeisfullofunexpectedchallenges,butwithresilienceandthesupportofthecommunity,wecanovercomehardshipsandfindthestrengthtomoveforward.?通過(guò)房屋修復(fù)的過(guò)程和主人公的情感轉(zhuǎn)變,我們被提醒,生活充滿了意想不到的挑戰(zhàn),但憑借韌性和社區(qū)的支持,我們可以克服困難,找到前進(jìn)的力量。?Thejourneyfromthedespairoflosingeverythingtothehopeofarebuilthomeshowcasesthepowerofhumanconnectionandtheabilitytobouncebackfromadversity,teachingusthatthereisalwayslightattheendofthetunnel.?從失去一切的絕望到重建家園的希望之旅,展示了人際關(guān)系的力量和從逆境中恢復(fù)的能力,教導(dǎo)我們?cè)谒淼赖谋M頭總有光明。?Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthateverysetbackisanopportunityforgrowth,andthekindnessshownbyMylesnotonlyrebuiltahousebutalsomendedabrokenheart,highlightingtheprofoundimpactofcompassionindifficulttimes.?這個(gè)故事有力地提醒我們,每一次挫折都是成長(zhǎng)的機(jī)會(huì),Myles所展現(xiàn)的善良不僅重建了一所房子,還修復(fù)了一顆破碎的心,凸顯了在困難時(shí)期同情的深遠(yuǎn)影響。?Fromthedepthsofgrieftotheembraceofanewbeginning,weseethatlifeisacycleoflossesandgains,anditisourabilitytoadaptandfindmeaninginthemidstofchaosthattrulydefinesus.?從悲痛的深處到新開(kāi)始的擁抱,我們看到生活是一個(gè)得失循環(huán),正是我們?cè)诨靵y中適應(yīng)并找到意義的能力真正定義了我們。?寫(xiě)作示范一?Soonafter,Mylesbroughtmanytoolstomybackyard,wherehesettowork.Hewaslikeaskilledartist,carefullycraftingthenewstructure.Everyday,hearrivedwithadeterminedlookonhisface.Hewouldspendhoursremovingthemud-cakeddebris,hishandsdirtybuthisspiritunwavering.Whenheencounteredatrickypart,hewouldfrowninconcentration,thenbreakintoasmileashefoundasolution.Healwaystookthetimetoexplaintomethestepsoftherepair,makingmefeellikeIwaspartoftheprocess.Hishardworkandpatiencewerearayofsunshineinmyotherwisegloomydays.?InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,Ifinallycamehome.AsIopenedthefrontdoor,Iwasgreetedbyabeautiful,new-lookinghouse.Thesmelloffreshpaintfilledtheair.MemoriesofSunilandTobyfloodedmymind,butthistime,therewasasenseofpeace.Iwalkedaroundthehouse,touchingthenewwallsandfurniture.Iknewtheyweregone,butthehousewasasymbolofhope.Idecidedtoplantasmallgardeninthebackyard,dedicatedtoSunil.Iwasreadytomoveforward,toembracelifeagain,andtocherishthenewbeginningthishouserepresented.?寫(xiě)作示范二?Soonafter,Mylesbroughtmanytoolstomybackyard,wherehesettowork.Hewasextremelyprofessional,measuringandcuttingthewoodwithprecision.Everymorning,hewouldshowupearly,histoolboxinhand.Hewouldstartbycarefullyinspectingthedamagedareas,makingamentalnoteofwhatneededtobefixed.Whenhefacedadifficultrepair,hewouldconsulthiscolleaguesandthencomeupwithaplan.Hewouldalsoaskmeformyopinionsonthedesign,makingthehousenotjustarebuiltstructurebutaplacefilledwithmymemories.Hiseffortsmademebelievethattherewasalightattheendofthetunnel.?InJulythisyear,aftersixmonths,Ifinallycamehome.AsIsteppedinside,Iwasamazedathowbeautifulthehouselooked.ItwasbetterthanIhadimagined.IrememberedthedayswhenSunilandTobywerewithme,andthoughtherewasatwingeofsadness,therewasalsoafeelingofstrength.Iwalkedthrougheachroom,imaginingthefuture.Iplannedtoinvitemyfriendsoverforahousewarmingparty.Iknewthatlifewouldneverbethesame,butIwasreadytocre
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