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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmybrother'sidea.Let'sgetMomapetdogforherbirthday.Itwouldmakeherhappy.Ithoughtitwasagoodidea,asMomhadalwayswantedtoownadog.Bythetimeourconversationended,Ihadmytask:findourmotheradog.Afteracarefulsearch,Ifinallyfoundanadfordogsinalocalnewspaper.Anearbyfamilyhadadogwhohadjustgivenbirthtofivemalepuppies(小狗)!Allhadhadtheirfirstvaccines(疫苗),andwouldbereadytoleavetheirmominafewweeks.Igavethemacall.Themanwhoansweredthephonelistenedpatientlytomystoryandsetadateforustomeetthedogs.Whenthedayarrived,Igotintomybrother'scar.Wepulledupinfrontofsomehousesthatsatalonganarrowstreet.Aswesteppedontothesidewalk,weweregreetedbynoisybarks(吠叫聲).Fourdogshadpositionedthemselvesonthebackofasofaandwerewatchingusthroughalargewindow.Weclimbedontotheporch(門廊)andrangthedoorbell.Atallmanwithgrayinghairandakindsmileopenedthedoor.AsIreachedtoshakehishand,Icouldseethepuppiesbehindhim,runningtogettous.Eachpuppyworeadifferentcolorstringaroundhisneck.Wemettheman'swife,whoworeasimilarfriendlysmileandweledustoherhome.Wemetthepuppies'parentsandthensetaboutthebusinessofselectingafriendforourmother.Therewerefourpuppiesandfourvisitors;themanhandedeachofusadog.Threeofthepuppieslookedupatuswithlarge,curiouseyes.Thefourthone,whoIwasholding,begantowiggleexcitedlyandkissmyface."Let'stakethisone!He'stheone!Lookhowlovelyheis!"Isaid.AsfarasIwasconcerned,itwasadonedeal.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150詞左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫選狗故事續(xù)寫分析第一段續(xù)寫分析故事線:哥哥提出花時間了解每只小狗,“我”雖不耐煩但同意。眾人與小狗互動,“我”懷中的小狗活潑且與“我”互動頻繁,而其他小狗表現(xiàn)各異。最終哥哥認可“我”選的小狗最適合媽媽。短語:takesometime(花些時間);gettoknow(了解);incontrast(相比之下);abitshy(有點害羞);interestedin(對……感興趣);exploringtheroom(探索房間);aspecialconnection(特殊聯(lián)系);noddedinagreement(點頭同意)主旨升華句:①Thisprocessofgettingtoknowthepuppiestaughtustheimportanceofpatienceinmakingtherightchoice.(這個了解小狗的過程教會我們在做正確選擇時耐心的重要性。)②Throughinteractingwiththepuppies,werealizedthatsometimesthebestconnectionisformedthroughgenuineandimmediateaffection.(通過與小狗們互動,我們意識到有時最好的聯(lián)系是通過真誠且即時的喜愛建立起來的。)③Theuniquecharmofeachpuppyremindedusthateverycreaturehasitsownspecialqualitieswaitingtobediscovered.(每只小狗獨特的魅力提醒我們,每個生物都有其等待被發(fā)現(xiàn)的特殊品質(zhì)。)④Intheend,ourcollectivedecisionmakingnotonlyfoundtheperfectpetbutalsostrengthenedthebondamongfamilymembers.(最終,我們共同的決策不僅找到了完美的寵物,還加強了家庭成員之間的聯(lián)系。)⑤Thisexperienceofchoosingapuppywasmorethanjustatask;itwasajourneyofunderstandingandunitywithinourfamily.(這次挑選小狗的經(jīng)歷不僅僅是一項任務,更是我們家庭中理解與團結(jié)的一次旅程。)第二段續(xù)寫分析故事線:兩周后,我們接回小狗并藏在媽媽客廳角落。媽媽開心拆完其他禮物后,我們帶她到角落,小狗沖向媽媽,媽媽驚喜落淚,認為這是最好的生日禮物,我們也因計劃成功而開心。短語:pickedup(接走,撿起);hid...aroundthecorner(藏在角落);openedherbirthdaygifts(打開她的生日禮物);exchangedexcitedglances(交換興奮的眼神);led...to(帶領(lǐng)……到);rushedtowards(沖向);burstintotearsofjoy(喜極而泣);scooped...up(抱起)主旨升華句:①ThismomentofMom'spurehappinessshowedusthatthegreatestgiftsinlifearethosethatefromtheheart.(媽媽這一刻純粹的快樂向我們表明,生命中最偉大的禮物是那些發(fā)自內(nèi)心的禮物。)②Thepuppy'swarmweleandMom'semotionalresponsewereabeautifulreminderofthepowerofloveandsurprise.(小狗熱情的迎接和媽媽激動的反應美好地提醒著我們愛與驚喜的力量。)③OurcarefullyplannedsurprisenotonlybroughtjoytoMombutalsocreatedapreciousmemorythatwouldbecherishedforalifetime.(我們精心策劃的驚喜不僅給媽媽帶來了快樂,還創(chuàng)造了一個將被珍藏一生的珍貴回憶。)④ThesightofMomandthepuppytogethersymbolizedthebeginningofanewchapterfilledwithloveandpanionshipinourfamily.(媽媽和小狗在一起的畫面象征著我們家庭中充滿愛與陪伴的新篇章的開始。)⑤Thisbirthdaygiftgivingexperiencetaughtusthatsmallgesturesoflovecanhaveaprofoundimpactonourlovedones'lives.(這次送生日禮物的經(jīng)歷教會我們,小小的愛的舉動可以對我們所愛的人的生活產(chǎn)生深遠的影響。)寫作示范一Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Reluctantly,Iputasidemyeagernessandjoinedin.Asweplayedwiththepuppies,InoticedthattheoneIheldearlierwasnotonlylivelybutalsoextremelyintelligent.ItquicklylearnedtofetchasmallballItossed,whichmademeevenmoreconvincedofmychoice.Mybrother,observingthepuppy'scleverness,alsohadtoadmititscharm.Afteraheartwarminginteraction,wewerecertainthiswastheoneforMom.Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.Momwasinhighspirits,enjoyingeverypresent.Whenallthegiftswereunwrapped,weguidedhertothesurprisespot.ThemomentthepuppysawMom,itleapedforward,waggingitstailvigorously.Momwasstunnedforasecondandthenabroadsmilespreadacrossherface.Shecroucheddownandembracedthepuppytightly,saying,"Youguysreallyknowhowtomakemehappy!"Thisspecialgiftnotonlybroughtanewmembertoourfamilybutalsoaddedmorewarmthtoourhome.寫作示范二Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Despitemyinitialimpatience,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Asweengagedwiththepuppies,theoneinmyarmsdisplayedanendearingprotectiveness.Whenanotherpuppygotabittooclosetome,itgentlynudgeditaway,asiftosay"Thishumanismine!".Thissweetbehaviormeltedmyheartevenmore.Afterseeingthis,mybrothersmiledandagreedthatitwastheperfectfitforMom.Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.Momwaschattingmerrilyassheunwrappedthepresents.Onceshewasdone,weledhertothehiddenpuppy.ThepuppyboundedtowardsMom,showeringherwithlicks.Momletoutadelightedscreamandthenheldthepuppyclosetoherchest."Thisisbeyondmywildestdreams!"shecried.Thisexperiencetaughtusthatthemostpreciousgiftsarethosethatbringunexpectedjoy,andweweregladtohavemadeMom'sbirthdaysomemorable.參考答案Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Wespentthenexthoursittingonthefloorplayingwithagroupofpuppies.Finally,wesettledonadifferentpuppyforourmom.Hewasthesmallestandweakestofthedo
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