高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)之創(chuàng)設(shè)微語(yǔ)境快速續(xù)寫(xiě)親情家庭主題類寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)+續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩語(yǔ)句Step1四肢動(dòng)作詞塊準(zhǔn)備1.betooweaktodothewholejob(was)不能做全部工作，太虛弱了2.couldn'tbeartolookatsth(could)不忍看某物3.bravelytakeresponsibility(took)承擔(dān)責(zé)任4.admityourmistake(admitted)承認(rèn)你的錯(cuò)誤5.haveaquickbreakfast(had)吃早餐6.wearabrightyellowdress(wore)穿一件亮黃色的連衣裙7.cleanthekitchen(cleaned)打掃廚房8.pickmeupatmyhouse(picked)到我家來(lái)接我9.Wedeeplyapologizeforouractions.(aplologized)道歉：我們?yōu)槲覀兊男袨樯畋怼?0.WewaitcarefullyforDad'sdecision.(waited)等待爸爸的決定11.squeezethebreathoutofhim(squeezed)呼吸不過(guò)氣來(lái)12.takeafewdeepbreaths(took)呼吸幾次13.takealongbreath(took)呼吸一口氣14.becomestrickenwithcancer(became)患癌癥15.aviodeachother(avoided)回避彼此16.avoiddoingsth(avoided)回避做某事17.pretendtopickupastone(pretended)假裝撿起一塊石頭18.explainhisproblemtosb(explained)解釋他的問(wèn)題19.starttocry(started)開(kāi)始哭泣20.leanagainsthismother'sshoulder(leaned)靠在他母親的肩膀上21.pullustohisside(pulled)拉到他身邊22.takemeaside(took)拉我一邊23.calmdownassoonaspossible(calmed)冷靜下來(lái)24.gothroughallthehardship(went)歷盡艱辛25.gentlytouchhishead/shoulder(touched)摸摸他的頭/肩膀26.patmeontheshoulder(patted)拍拍我的肩膀27.burstintoapplause(burst)拍掌聲28.holdhisbreath(held)屏住呼吸29.can'thelpdoing(could)情不自禁做某事30.gotothekitchentopreparedinner(went)去廚房準(zhǔn)備晚餐31.gohomeforlunch(went)去家吃午飯32.havemylunchreadyforme(had)讓我的午餐準(zhǔn)備好33.lietosb(lied)撒謊34.tellsbalie(told)撒謊35.getoutofcontrol(got)失去控制36.receiveawonderfulgift(received)收到一份精美的禮物37.countthemoneyinhispocket(counted)數(shù)一數(shù)他口袋里的錢(qián)38.slowlyliftmyhead(lifted)抬起我的頭39.remindsbofsth(reminded)提醒某人某事40.remindsbofhowmuchIlovedmyMom(reminded)提醒某人我有多愛(ài)我的媽媽。41.tellsbajokethat…(told)玩笑42.holdherhandtight(held)握緊她的手43.Myheartsinks(sank.)心往下一沉。44.learntodo(learned)學(xué)會(huì)做45.shakeourheads(shook)搖搖頭46.givemethebesthug(gave)擁抱47.runtoherandhughertightly(ran)擁抱入懷48.hismomsweephimintoherarmswithhereyeswet.(swept)擁抱入懷，淚流滿面49.Ireachoutandputmyarmsaroundher.(reached)擁抱入懷，伸手50.hughimmoretightly(hugged)擁抱他51.holdmeinatightembrace(held)擁抱我52.holdtheboyinherarms(held)擁抱在懷里53.havetheopportunitytodosth(had)有機(jī)會(huì)做某事54.havestharound(had)有某物在身邊55.befortunatetodosth(was)有幸做某事56.beincompanywith(was)與...為伴57.plantmyfeetresolutelyontheground(planted)站立天地58.standoutsidetheroom(stood)站在房間外面59.standbesidethemsmilingwidely(stood)站在他們旁邊微笑60.standinmyway(stood)站在我路上(擋路)61.findapeninmypocket(found)找到一支鋼筆62.besoabsorbedinhiswork(was)專心于他的工作63.turnback(turned)轉(zhuǎn)身64.turntosbforhelp(turned)轉(zhuǎn)向某人求助65.walkoutoftheroom(walked)走出房間66.preventsbfromdoing(prevented)阻止某人做(被阻止)67.sitdownstraightonhischair(sat)坐在他的椅子上68.sitbesideherontheplayground(sat)坐在她旁邊69.maketherightchoice(made)做出正確的選擇70.dosomethingwrong(did)做錯(cuò)事71.havesometroublewithsth(had)做某事上有點(diǎn)麻煩72.havesometrouble(indoingsth)做某事有困難73.doafull-timejob(did)做全職工作74.makedinner(made)做晚餐75.dosomanythingsforme(did)做這么多事情76.withhisheaddown()低著頭77.withourheadsdrooping()我們低垂著頭隨意描述某人做什么事（忌單一，喜歡系列內(nèi)容）

如；父親拍我的頭。

Myfathercameover,reachedoutandpattedmeonthehead.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step2心理感受和情緒詞塊準(zhǔn)備1.honestyandresponsibilityaregoodthings.(were)誠(chéng)實(shí)和責(zé)任是好東西。2.Somethinghavegonewrong.(had)出事了。3.withasincereheart()帶著一顆真誠(chéng)的心4.windiscolderthanIexpected.(was)風(fēng)比我想象的要冷。5.lookgoodinherreddress(looked)感到穿紅色連衣裙很好看6.getmoreconfidentwithherword(got)感到都更加自信7.Myfaceburnswithembarrassment.(burned)感到尷尬而臉紅。8.Shenowcoulddonothingbutfeeltheregretburninginherheart.(could)感到悔恨在心中燃燒，她現(xiàn)在什么也做不了。9.everyworddisappearsfrommyhead.(disappeared)感到每個(gè)字都從我的腦海中消失了。10.encounteredmymother'sencouragingeyesandadecisionwasmade.(encountered/was)感到母親鼓勵(lì)的目光，我做了一個(gè)決定。11.withherconstantencouragement()感到她的不斷鼓勵(lì)下12.understandthepressuresonher(understood)感到她所承受的壓力13.thereissomethingstronggrowinginmyheart.(was)感到心里有一種強(qiáng)烈的感覺(jué)。14.sheiswildwithjoy.(was)感到欣喜若狂。15.Icouldseethattheexcitementwasgone(could)感到興奮感已經(jīng)消失了16.senseherpain(sensed)感受她的痛苦17.sensemyunease(sensed)感受我的不安18.gatherhiscourage(gathered)鼓起他的勇氣19.ThereareonlyafewdaysleftuntilChristmas.(were)離圣誕節(jié)只有幾天了。20.Lin'smindraceswithfearandworry.(raced)林的心里充滿了恐懼和擔(dān)憂。21.thereisnoresponse.(was)沒(méi)有回應(yīng)。22.It'syourjobtoassuremeshegetsthereallright.(was)你的工作是向我保證她會(huì)平安到達(dá)。23.Youdowhatyouhavepromised.(did/had)你履行了你的承諾。24.thesituationismoreseriousthanhehavethought.(was)情況比他想象的更嚴(yán)重。25.harvestthefruitsoflabor(harvested)收獲勞動(dòng)果實(shí)26.heisinobviouspain.(was)他明顯很痛苦。27.holdbackthestrongemotions(held)抑制強(qiáng)烈的情緒28.thereisalwayssomethingmoreimportantthanmoney.(was)有比錢(qián)更重要的東西。29.there'snoneedtodosth.(was)有必要做某事。30.itwasthebestmealIhadevertasted.(was)這是我吃過(guò)的最好的一頓飯。31.bethebestmotherintheworld(was)做世界上最好的母親隨意描述某人感受（忌單一，喜歡系列內(nèi)容）。如；我感到很興奮。

Lookingaroundatthepictures,Ifeltlikejumpingaworldoffolktales,soexcitingandmysterious.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step3眼睛與所看相關(guān)詞塊準(zhǔn)備1.lookaround(looked)環(huán)顧四周2.seeusinlowspirits(saw)看到我們情緒低落3.can'tbelievemyears/eyes(could)難以置信4.Thenshecastsmeaveryseriouslook.(cast)然后她非常嚴(yán)肅地看了我一眼。5.Hecouldseeourrelief.(could)他能看到我們的解脫。6.Ihearmymother'swords.(heard)我聽(tīng)到媽媽的話。(聽(tīng)說(shuō))7.nooneisinsight.(was)一個(gè)人也看不見(jiàn)。8.afterhearingthereason聽(tīng)到原因后9.untillateintothenight直到深夜隨意描述某人所看（忌單一，喜歡系列內(nèi)容）。如；我看見(jiàn)母親。

Withmyeyeswet,IcaughtsightofmyMomworkinginthefieldandwalkedovertohughertightly.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step4心里所想相關(guān)詞塊準(zhǔn)備1.admitthatyouwereresponsible(admitted)承認(rèn)你有責(zé)任2.befilledwithsth(was)充滿…東西3.getanidea(got)得到一個(gè)想法4.decidetocomehome(decided)決定回家5.Thosearethehardestdaystogothrough.(were)那些日子是最難熬的。6.Idon'tknowwhyheishomeinsteadofMom.(did/was)我不知道為什么他在家而不是媽媽。7.Iwasatalosswhattodo.(was)我不知如何是好。8.ourtimetogetherislimited.(was)我們?cè)谝黄鸬臅r(shí)間有限。9.IknowwhatIneed.(knew/needed)我知道我需要什么。隨意描述某人想要做的事（忌單一，喜歡系列內(nèi)容）。如；我想要回家。

TwodayspassedbyandwhatIwantedmostwasjusttogohomeforthespecialfestival.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step5嘴與笑相關(guān)詞塊準(zhǔn)備1.wearherusualkindsmile(wore)帶著她慣常的親切微笑2.withasmile()帶著微笑3.havetearsinoureyesasweembraceeachother.(embraced)當(dāng)我們擁抱在一起的時(shí)候，我們的眼里充滿了淚水。(擁抱)4.wearabigsmileonherface(wore)臉上帶著燦爛的笑容5.manageaweaksmile(managed)勉強(qiáng)笑了笑6.Ithinktomyself.(thought)我心想。隨意描述某人笑或說(shuō)話（忌單一，喜歡系列內(nèi)容）。如；老師笑了。

Pattingmeonthehead,theteachersmiledandsaidtoinalowvoice,“Iknowyoucanmakeit.”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step6微語(yǔ)境續(xù)寫(xiě)根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)境和第二自然段提示句，快速展開(kāi)續(xù)寫(xiě)并巧妙結(jié)尾。語(yǔ)境1：父親患癌癥。

ThenthetimecamewhenIdecidedtocomehomebecausehewasgrowingsicker.

我目睹父親。父親強(qiáng)笑。升華所感難受；痛苦感性結(jié)尾：父愛(ài)如山所看母?jìng)模桓概P床，流淚消瘦，所想所做坐車(chē)，到家，擁抱，握手揮手，無(wú)力所說(shuō)強(qiáng)顏歡笑，強(qiáng)顏歡笑Then

the

time

came

when

I

decided

to

come

home

because

he

was

growing

sicker.

I

saw

my

father

lying

in

bed.

The

man

was

my

father?

He

was

so

thin,

pale

and

weak!

For

quite

a

long

time,

he

looked

at

me

and

then

waved

to

me.

During

the

rest

days,

we

held

each

other,

talking

and

laughing.

Years

later

when

I

sat

in

the

house,

I

was

still

wearing

a

big

smile

on

my

face,

as

I

could

remember

all

the

fun

and

love

of

my

father.

After

all,

nothing

in

the

world

is

warmer

than

my

father’s

love.

(86

words)語(yǔ)境2：母親節(jié)寫(xiě)信作為母親禮物。Aftertheplay,ItookhometheletterIhadplacedinthepocket.

送出禮物。媽媽感動(dòng)。升華所感忐忑：是否會(huì)喜歡我的禮物?！?/p>

興奮激動(dòng)總結(jié)概括：母愛(ài)家所看流淚所想所做鞠躬，遞出信，擁抱所說(shuō)母親快樂(lè)最好的禮物After

the

play,

I

took

home

the

letter

I

had

placed

in

the

pocket.

My

Mom

would

like

the

Christmas

gift?

Deep

into

my

heart

was

flooding

a

strongly

nervous

sense.

“Happy

Mother’s

Day,

Mom!

I

love

you.”

I

said,

with

a

slight

bow

to

her.

When

reading,

slowly

tears

came

to

her

eyes.

She

put

her

arms

around

me,

saying

in

low

voice,

“Thank

you!

It’s

the

best

gift

in

the

world!”

I

felt

like

jumping

into

a

world

of

honey,

so

happy

and

sweet.

In

mind,

I

was

only

too

aware

that

my

mother

was

the

home

to

me

and

that

nothing

was

more

important

than

the

home.

（96

words）語(yǔ)境3：經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退影響一家的生活，母親從零開(kāi)始學(xué)打字.Mothertookanotherjobearninghalf,buttheeveningpracticesessionsontheoldgreentypewritercontinued.媽媽工作努力。我遞水升華所感放松，輕松借物抒情：燈光，光線所看看著，直視，目睹母親努力所想所做忙碌工作；埋頭；拍頭；抬頭遞水，開(kāi)門(mén)所說(shuō)微笑一切會(huì)好Mother

took

another

job

earning

half,

but

the

evening

practice

sessions

on

the

old

green

typewriter

continued.

With

her

head

down,

she

was

absorbed

in

her

work

so

that

nothing

could

stop

her.

“Everything

would

go

well!”,

I

thought

to

myself,

feeling

a

strong

sense

of

relief

and

relaxation.

Opening

the

door,

I

handed

a

glass

of

water

to

her.

She

reached

out

and

patted

me

on

the

head.

I

found

that

she

was

so

beautiful

in

the

light,

her

beautiful

smile

driving

all

the

darkness

in

my

heart

and

giving

us

confidence

to

move

on.

After

all,

tomorrow

would

be

fine!

（85

words）語(yǔ)境4：十歲時(shí)，和哥哥收到了一份網(wǎng)球和網(wǎng)球拍的禮物，把學(xué)校的窗戶打碎了。ThefollowingmorningmybrotherandIwenttotheheadmaster’soffice.我們：向校長(zhǎng)道歉校長(zhǎng)：很高興，表?yè)P(yáng)我們升華所感不知面對(duì)什么，迷茫高興概括總結(jié)誠(chéng)信、責(zé)任所看所想所做低頭，鞠躬，回家直視，拍肩，所說(shuō)對(duì)不起，賠償你們能承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤。不用賠The

following

morning

my

brother

and

I

went

to

the

headmaster’s

office.

We

were

at

a

loss

what

to

face.

Both

of

us

made

a

slight

bow

and

said

in

a

low

voice,

“I’m

sorry,

sir.”

We

explained

what

happened

and

promised

that

we

would

pay

for

the

window.

He

looked

directly

at

us

for

a

while

and

patted

us

on

the

shoulder,

saying

in

a

happy

voice,

“That’s

OK.

I

am

glad

that

you

can

admit

your

mistake.”

He

also

told

us

that

we

didn’t

need

to

pay

for

the

window.

Walking

back

home,

we

were

only

too

aware

that

nothing

was

important

than

honesty

and

responsibility.

(96

words)語(yǔ)境5：和妹妹Sara吃完早飯以后送妹妹去上幼兒園，遇到一只大狗。ItoldMomwhathadhappened.

媽媽后怕，驚訝我很自豪升華所感驚訝自豪，高興概括總結(jié)：保護(hù)妹妹所看流淚所想所做擁抱，拍肩所說(shuō)微笑。干得好I

told

Mom

what

had

happened.

She

was

astonished

with

her

mouth

widely

opened.

Reaching

out

and

sweeping

me

into

her

arms

with

her

eyes

wet,

she

said

to

me

in

a

low

voice,

“You

did

well,

Brave

Sister!”

Deep

in

my

heart

was

flooding

a

strong

sense

of

joy

and

pride

so

that

I

felt

like

jumping

a

world

of

honey,

so

sweet

and

happy.

In

my

mind,

I

was

only

too

aware

that

I

would

be

the

bravest

sister

for

Sara

in

the

coming

future.

（81

words）語(yǔ)境6：陪爺爺去洞穴運(yùn)鳥(niǎo)糞，爺爺進(jìn)去很久都沒(méi)有出來(lái)。Inthedarkcave,Lingatheredhiscourageandyelledagain,“Grandfather!”

我摸進(jìn)黑洞。爺爺?shù)沟厣A所感擔(dān)心。出了什么事？借景抒情：太陽(yáng)，陽(yáng)光和平，寧?kù)o安全所看所想所做鼓起勇氣；摸入洞里；拖拉；躺草地上躺在地上；呼吸；所說(shuō)In

the

dark

cave,

Lin

gathered

his

courage

and

yelled

again,

“Grandfather!”

But

again,

there

was

no

response.

What’s

wrong?

He

would

be

fine?

Deep

in

my

heart

was

flooding

a

strong

sense

of

worry.

Gathering

all

the

courage

and

energy,

Lin

felt

his

way

into

the

dark

cave

by

the

light

of

his

phone.

Things

went

worse

than

expected.

His

grandfather

was

lying

on

the

ground,

tired

and

exhausted.

After

minutes

of

hard

pull,

both

of

them

came

outside.

Lying

on

the

ground,

Lin

took

a

deep

breath

under

the

sun,

its

beautiful

rays

keeping

everything

peaceful

and

quiet.

（88

words）讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩語(yǔ)句一、動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)第一組頭部動(dòng)作1.與看有關(guān)的動(dòng)作詞匯:glareat怒視glanceat

瞥見(jiàn)gaze/stareat凝視widenone'seyes睜大眼睛raise/liftone'seyes抬起眼睛dropone'seyes/gaze

垂下眼睛/目光shutone'seyestightly緊閉雙眼fixone'seyes

on/upon盯著;凝視looksb.intheeye(s)直視某人佳句:(1)Iliftedmyeyes,sayingnothing.我抬起眼睛,一言不發(fā)。(2)I

didn'tstepaside,lookinghimintheeye(s).我沒(méi)有讓位,直視著他。(3)Singinghappily,thatgirlgazedateverything

aroundherwithinnocentandcuriouseyes.那個(gè)女孩高興地唱著歌,用天真而又好奇的眼神注視著周?chē)囊磺小?.與說(shuō)有關(guān)的動(dòng)作詞匯:add

補(bǔ)充說(shuō);繼續(xù)說(shuō)cry喊叫;呼喊;呼叫murmur低語(yǔ);喃喃細(xì)語(yǔ)repeat重說(shuō)roar

吼叫;咆哮shout

大聲說(shuō);叫;嚷scream

尖叫vow

起誓;立誓;發(fā)誓whisper耳語(yǔ);低語(yǔ);私語(yǔ);小聲說(shuō)yell

叫喊;大喊;吼叫佳句:(1)Afteraslightpause,sheadded,“Thankyou."稍停片刻,她補(bǔ)充說(shuō)道:“謝謝?！?2)

Imurmuredathankyouandranhomealltheway.我低聲道謝,然后一路跑回家。(3)Hesaid,"I'msorryIyelledatyoulastnight.”他說(shuō):“很抱歉昨天晚上我沖著你大吼大叫。”(4)"Willyouyetforgiveme?"theboyrepeatedover

andoveragainwithtearsinhiseyes.“你能原諒我嗎?”男孩一遍又一遍地重復(fù)著,眼里含著淚水。(5)MyteammateswereallscreamingasIdashed

towardthefinishingline.當(dāng)我沖向終點(diǎn)線時(shí),隊(duì)友們都在尖叫。3.其他動(dòng)作詞匯:biteone'slip咬著嘴唇y(tǒng)awnsleepily困倦地打哈欠hideone'sfaceinone'shands用手捂住臉bury/hang/lowerone'shead

埋/低頭佳句:(1)

Iburiedmyheadunderthecovers,pretendingtobe

asleep.我把頭埋到被子底下,假裝睡著了。(2)Realizinghismistake,theboyhunghisheadin

shame.男孩意識(shí)到他的錯(cuò)誤,羞愧地低下了頭。(3)Myfatherlookedoutofthecarwindow,bitinghis

lip,asifthinking.我父親一邊望著車(chē)窗外,一邊咬著嘴唇,仿佛在思考。(4)Afterfinishingthetoughtask,Johnstoodupand

yawnedsleepily.完成這項(xiàng)艱巨的任務(wù)后,約翰站起來(lái),困倦地打了個(gè)哈欠。第二組腿部動(dòng)作詞匯stampone'sfeet跺腳risetoone'sfeetonshakylegs

顫抖著站起來(lái)struggle/jumptoone'sfeet

掙扎著站起來(lái)/站起來(lái)/猛地站起來(lái)kickone'sleg

踢腿dragone'sheavylegs拖著沉重的雙腿走動(dòng)crossthefinishinglinewithweak/shakylegs拖著虛弱的/顫抖的雙腿越過(guò)了終點(diǎn)線佳句:(I)Whenseeinghisgranddaughter,theoldmanroseto

hisfeetonshakylegs.當(dāng)看到他的孫女時(shí),老人顫抖著站了起來(lái)。(2)Withtheencouragementofhiscoach,theathlete

crossedthefinishinglinewithshakylegs.在教練的鼓勵(lì)下,這名運(yùn)動(dòng)員拖著顫抖的雙腿越過(guò)了終點(diǎn)線。(3)Withasinkingheart,Tomdraggedhisheavylegs

backhome,tiredout.湯姆垂頭喪氣,拖著沉重的雙腿,疲憊不堪地回到了家。(4)Onhearingthegoodnews,thegirljumpedtoher

feet,withexcitementsparklinginhereyes.一聽(tīng)到這個(gè)好消息,女孩就猛地站了起來(lái),眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒。第三組手部和臂部動(dòng)作詞匯:clapone'shands拍手holdsth.tightinone'shands

雙手緊緊握著某物diveintosth.迅速將手伸人(包或口袋里)grabone'shand

抓住某人的手holdout/reachoutahand伸出一只手raiseone'shand

舉手spreadone'shands

攤開(kāi)雙手佳句:(1)Wheneveryonestartedclappingtheirhands,Mary

gavethemashysmile.大家開(kāi)始鼓掌時(shí),瑪麗羞澀地向他們微笑了一下。(2)Thelittleboysaidnothing,gavemeawaterysmile

andheldmyhandtightinhishands.小男孩什么也沒(méi)說(shuō),對(duì)我淡然一笑,緊緊地握著我的手。二、情緒和情感描寫(xiě)第一組喜悅和激動(dòng)詞匯:excitementsparksinone'seyes某人的眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒theheartispoundingwithexcitement心興奮地跳著one'sfacelightsupwithpleasure面露喜色withtearsofhappinessflowingdown留下幸福的淚水inagoodmood心情好佳句:(1)Ifoundthatherfacelitupwithpleasure.我發(fā)現(xiàn)她的臉上露出喜悅的表情。(2)WhenIlearnedIhadwonthef