感謝信【試題探究】假定你是李華,經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請你寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝;2.回顧Alex對你的幫助;3.臨別祝愿。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。Step1:審題布局人稱第一人稱(I)為主,第二人稱(you)為輔時態(tài)一般過去時,一般現(xiàn)在時要點1.點明寫作目的,感謝對方的幫助2.具體指出曾經(jīng)的幫助3.臨別祝愿Step2:巧飾亮點要點1:你教我如何學(xué)英語。一般表達:YoutaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.句式升級(強調(diào)句)是你教我如何學(xué)英語。ItwasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.要點2:你幫助我提高了英語并且給了我更多學(xué)習(xí)的自信。一般表達:YouhelpedimprovemyEnglishandgavememoreconfidenceinlearning.句式升級(倒裝句)你不但幫助我提高了英語,并且給了我更多學(xué)習(xí)的自信。NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsoyougavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Step3:銜接然成篇DearAlex,I’veheardthatyou’releavingChinasoon,soI’mwritingtoexpressmysincereblessingandthanks.IcanwellremembertherewasatimewhenIhaddifficultyinlearningEnglish.ItwasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglish.Underyourpatientguidance,IgraduallymadeprogressandbegantobecomeinterestedinEnglish.NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butalsoyougavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.Iwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua【句式儲備】1.篇頭——開篇表意,寫信原因和目的①I’mwritingtothankyouforhelpingmespendwonderfuldaysinLondon.我寫信感謝你幫我在倫敦度過快樂的日子。②Iamwritingtoexpress/show/conveymysincerethankstoyouforyourhelp.我寫信真誠地感謝你的幫助。2.篇中——描述對方對自己的幫助①Without/Butforyourhelp(Ifitwerenotforyourhelp),IwouldnothavemadesomuchprogressinmyEnglish.要是沒有你的幫助,我的英語不會取得如此大的進步。②Haditnotbeenforyourpatientguidance,Icouldn’thavepreparedsowell.如果沒有你耐心的指導(dǎo),我不可能準(zhǔn)備得這么好。3.結(jié)尾——表達謝意①Again,nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.再一次,沒有任何言語能表達我的感激之情。②Yourkindnessandhelpwillalwaysberemembered.我將永遠銘記你的善意和幫助?！就卣箖洹考俣闶抢钊A,你在你校舉辦的英語辯論賽上取得了不錯的成績。請給你的留學(xué)生朋友Chris寫一封感謝信,感謝他對你的幫助,內(nèi)容包括:1.表達感謝;2.感謝的原因;3.表達祝愿。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforthehelpyouofferedme.Tobehonest,yourassistancehasagreatimpactonme.ItwasyouwhomademyEnglishimprovegreatly.Haditnotbeenforyourpatientguidance,Icouldn’thavepreparedsowell.Withoutyouraid,Iwouldn’thavedonewellintheEnglishdebatecontestheldinourschool.I’llbearyourkindnessinmindforever.Again,I’dliketothankyouforwhatyoudidformeandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【要點精練】1．假定你是李華，你被你心儀的大學(xué)錄取了。請你給你在高中期間的外教MrPotter寫一封郵件表達對他的感謝，內(nèi)容包括：1.對老師的辛勤工作表示感謝；2.感謝老師對自己的教導(dǎo)和幫助；3.表達對老師的祝愿。注意：1.可適當(dāng)補充信息，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)為80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，前一段時間你的身體狀況一直不好。你的網(wǎng)友Oliver時常關(guān)心著你。請你用英語寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.目前狀況及感謝；2.介紹健身計劃。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearOliver,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假定你是李華，你在你校上周舉辦的英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎。此前，你的交換生好友Peter給予了你很多幫助。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.分享獲獎的喜悅；2.感謝他的幫助；3.邀請他到你家做客以表謝意。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，學(xué)生會舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動WorkCreatesaBetterLife得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活動已經(jīng)圓滿結(jié)束，請你給他寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝；2．外教的幫助；3．活動的反響。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國倫敦的朋友Peter在你暑期在倫敦旅游期間對你熱情款待和幫助，寫信對他表示感謝，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧你在倫敦時Peter對你的幫助；3.再次表達感謝，表達回報的愿望；注意：1.詞數(shù)80到100之間；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLihua6．假定你是李華，你的交換生朋友Robert上周末參加了你校英語社團舉辦的探訪養(yǎng)老院活動，請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧活動內(nèi)容；3.期待后續(xù)參與。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRobert,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua7．假設(shè)你是高一學(xué)生李華。正在英國某國際中學(xué)交換學(xué)習(xí)。上周末你的同學(xué)Mark邀請你參加了學(xué)校組織的世界圖書日（4月23日）（WorldBookandCopyrightDay）。請你給Mark寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝邀請；2.分享感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假設(shè)你是李華，上周六一外國乘客John發(fā)現(xiàn)了你落在地鐵上的相機，并根據(jù)名牌上的Email聯(lián)系你，將相機寄回?，F(xiàn)你已經(jīng)收到相機。請你給John寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.事情過程；2.你的感受；3.表達感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假設(shè)你是李華，梁教授去年六月推薦你去悉尼大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，現(xiàn)在你已經(jīng)被悉尼大學(xué)錄取，請寫一封信向梁教授表示感謝。悉尼大學(xué)SydneyUniversity；被錄取beadmittedinto/toDearProfessorLiang,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua10．假定你是李華，現(xiàn)在在美國某高中做交換生，你因為受傷在家休養(yǎng)，這期間有不少同班同學(xué)來看望你。現(xiàn)在你即將康復(fù)，請給他們寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.回憶同學(xué)們?yōu)槟阕龅氖拢?.表達你的感謝之情。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1．DearMrPotter,I’mgladtowritetosharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,whichIhavebeendreamingof.Firstly,I’dliketoexpressmygratitudeforyourexcellentteachingandyourcareaswellasloveforme!It’syouwhocheeredmeup.NeverwillIforgetwhatyousaid—doorsopentotheverymanwithfullconfidenceandinstantaction.Withoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.AndIreallyappreciateyourinstructions.Iwishmoreandmoreofyourstudentscouldgototheiridealcolleges.Wishyouallthebest!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你被你心儀的大學(xué)錄取了。請你給你在高中期間的外教MrPotter寫一封郵件表達對他的感謝?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累感激：gratitude→thankfulness表達：express→extend高興的：glad→delighted快樂：happiness→joy2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Withoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.AndIreallyappreciateyourinstructions.拓展句：Ireallyappreciateyourinstructionsbecausewithoutyourhelp,Icouldneverhaveenjoyedsuchajoyfulharvest.[高分句型1]I’mgladtowritetosharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,whichIhavebeendreamingof.(運用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]NeverwillIforgetwhatyousaid—doorsopentotheverymanwithfullconfidenceandinstantaction.(運用了否定詞Never置于句首引起的部分倒裝以及what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)2．DearOliver,Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,somyphysicalconditionhasbeenpoor.Itisyourconcernandencouragementthathavecontinuouslystrengthenedmyconfidence.Ifeelwarmtohavefriendslikeyou.Springhasarrived.Ayear’splanliesinspring.Iamplanningtodevelopadetailedfitnessplanaccordingtowhatyousaid.Firstly,participateinmoreoutdooractivitiesandbreathefreshair.Secondly,handletherelationshipbetweenlearningandhealthcorrectly,andemphasizetheroleofphysicalhealthinlearning.Inthefuture,Iwillcontinuetocommunicatewithyouaboutthissituation.Ialsowishyoubetterhealth.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于“前一段時間你的身體狀況一直不好，你的網(wǎng)友Oliver時常關(guān)心著你”這一情況，用英語寫一封回復(fù)郵件?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累缺乏：lacked→wasshortof增強，提升：strengthened→enhanced參加：participatein→takepartin強調(diào)：emphasize→stress2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,somyphysicalconditionhasbeenpoor.拓展句：Thiswinter,thecoldwasverypopularandIlackedexercise,whichledtomyphysicalconditionpoor.【高分句型1】Itisyourconcernandencouragementthathavecontinuouslystrengthenedmyconfidence.（運用了Itis…that…的強調(diào)句式。）【高分句型2】Iamplanningtodevelopadetailedfitnessplanaccordingtowhatyousaid.（運用了連接代詞what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。）3．DearPeter,IamthrilledtosharewithyouthatIjustwonthefirstprizeinourschool’sEnglishspeechcompetitionlastweek!Thisaccomplishmentisundoubtedlyaresultofyourinvaluableassistance.Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucialinhelpingmeprepareforthecompetition.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Toexpressmyheartfeltgratitude,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomeforavisit.Itwouldbeapleasuretohaveyouasmyguestandtothankyouinpersonforallyourhelp.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生好友Peter寫封郵件，告訴他在上周舉辦的英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎，同時感謝他的幫助?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累激動的：thrilled→excited幫助：assistance→help至關(guān)重要的：crucial→vital感謝：appreciate→thank2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucialinhelpingmeprepareforthecompetition.拓展句：Yourinsights,suggestions,andencouragementwerecrucial,whichhelpedmeprepareforthecompetition.【高分句型1】IamthrilledtosharewithyouthatIjustwonthefirstprizeinourschool’sEnglishspeechcompetitionlastweek!（運用了從屬連詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。）【高分句型2】Toexpressmyheartfeltgratitude,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomeforavisit.（運用了非謂語動詞中的動詞不定式Toexpress作目的狀語。）4．DearPatrick,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestionsonourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.Mostimportantly,thisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewideadmirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封感謝信，感謝外教Patrick對學(xué)生會舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動的大力支持?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累感激：gratitude→appreciation驚人的：amazing→astonishing表達：express→convey各種各樣的：avarietyof→various2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.拓展句：Theirperformanceswhichimpressedpeople,definitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.【高分句型1】IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.(運用了itis...that強調(diào)句型)5．DearPeter,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduringmysummertravelinLondon.FromthemomentIarrived,youwelcomedmewithopenarmsandmademefeelathomeinyourbeautifulcity.Istillrememberhowyoupatientlyshowedmearoundthecity,introducingmetoitshiddengemsandtakingmetoyourfavoritelocalspots.Moreover,yourwillingnesstoaccompanymeonvariousexcursionsmadethetripevenmoreenjoyableandmemorable.Onceagain,thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforbeingsuchanamazinghostandfriend.IwouldlovetohavetheopportunitytohostyouinmycountrysomedaysothatIcanreturnthefavorandshowyouthesamelevelofhospitalityandgratitudethatyoushowedme.Yours,Lihua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。你的英國倫敦的朋友Peter在你暑期在倫敦旅游期間對你熱情款待和幫助，請你給他寫信對他表示感謝。【要點分析】1.詞匯積累誠摯的：sincere→genuine此外：moreover→what’smore各種各樣的：various→avarietyof機會：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduringmysummertravelinLondon.拓展句：IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhospitalityandassistanceduringmysummertravelinLondon,whicharegreatlypreciousforme.【高分句型1】Istillrememberhowyoupatientlyshowedmearoundthecity,introducingmetoitshiddengemsandtakingmetoyourfavoritelocalspots.（運用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句以及現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語）【高分句型2】IwouldlovetohavetheopportunitytohostyouinmycountrysomedaysothatIcanreturnthefavorandshowyouthesamelevelofhospitalityandgratitudethatyoushowedme.（運用了sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）6．DearRobert,Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChineseculture.Tocarryforwardourtraditionandalsohelptheelderly,theEnglishcommunitylaunchedanactivityatthenursinghomelastSaturday.Assoonaswegotthereearlyinthemorning,wegavethemourgiftsanddidsomecleaningfortheelderly.Whatagreatday!Weallbenefitedalotfromthisactivityandhopewecanparticipateinmoremeaningfulactivitiesinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。交換生朋友Robert上周末參加了你校英語社團舉辦的探訪養(yǎng)老院活動，要求考生按照要求給他寫封郵件?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累參與：participatein→takepartin感謝：thanks→gratitude一致地：universally→solidly承認(rèn)：acknowledge→recognize2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.拓展句：AsIknowthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouparticipatedintheactivityofvisitingthenursinghomelastweekend,Iwouldliketoexpressmythankstoyou.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞Knowing作原因狀語、that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalChineseculture.（運用了It作形式主語、that引導(dǎo)的主語從句、動名詞respecting作主語）7．DearMark,ThankyouforinvitingmetotheWorldBookandCopyrightDaylastweekend.ItwasanamazingexperienceandIthoroughlyenjoyedspendingtimewithyou.Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.Inthisactivity,readinggoodbooksenrichedourmind,broadenedourhorizonsandgaveuswisdomaswell.Mostimportantly,beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstoriesgavemegreatpleasure.AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoread

goodbookswithyouinfuture.Bestregards.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。上周末同學(xué)Mark邀請考生參加了學(xué)校組織的世界圖書日，要求考生按照要求給Mark寫一封郵件表示感謝以及分享感受?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累令人大為驚奇的：amazing→surprising有益的：beneficial→helpful大量的：abundant→massive快樂：pleasure→joy2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.拓展句：Itisknownthatreadingisbeneficialtous.【高分句型1】Asweallknow,readingisbeneficialtous.（運用了As引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Mostimportantly,beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstoriesgavemegreatpleasure.（運用了動名詞短語beingexposedtoabundantChinesefolkstories作主語）8．DearJohn,I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindassistanceinreturningmylostcamera.LastSaturday,Itookthesubwayandaccidentallyleftmycameraonit.Later,Ireceivedanemailfromyou,informingmethatyouhadfoundmycameraandwouldmailitbacktome.Iwastrulytouchedbyyourthoughtfulnessandhonesty.Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.Yourkindnesshassavedmefromtheinconvenienceandfrustrationoflosinganimportantpossession.Onceagain,thankyouforyourhelp.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的感謝信。要求考生給外國乘客John寫封電子郵件，感謝其寄回自己丟失的相機?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累真誠的：sincere→genuine意外地：accidentally→byaccident/bychance感動的：touched→moved重要的：important→significant/essential2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.拓展句：Ihavealreadyreceivedthecamerawhichisingoodcondition.【高分句型1】Later,Ireceivedanemailfromyou,informingmethatyouhadfoundmycameraandwouldmailitbacktome.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Ihavealreadyreceivedthecameraandeverythingisingoodcondition.（運用了and連接的并列句）9．DearProfessorLiang,Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Haditnotforyourhelp,Iwouldn'thavebeenadmittedintoSydneyUniversity.LastJune,whenIappliedtobecomeastudentofSydneyUniversity,youreallygavemealotofvaluablehelp.Notonlydidyouwritearecommendationformetotheuniversitybutalsogavemecarefulandpatientinstructionsonhow