Unit4Amazingart單元寫作深度指導介紹藝術作品▲描述藝術品ThissunflowerpaintingwasanoilpaintingbyVincentvanGogh.Thisone(Thepainting)waspletedinArlesin1889.Itshowssunflowersinavase,mostlyinthreeshadesofyellow.Thecoloursoftheflowersrangefrombrightyellowstobrownishyellows,showingthattheflowersareatdifferentstagesoflife.ThesunflowerpaintingsheldspecialmeaningforVanGogh.▲基礎詞匯famous著名的show表達;表現(xiàn)describe描述important...ostimportant... 最重要的……之一beconsideredas被認為……bepopularwith受……歡迎leaveadeepimpressiononme給我留下深刻印象givemeabetterunderstandingoflife讓我更好地理解生活attract/catchone’sattention吸引某人的注意giveavividdescriptionof...生動描述……I.要點解讀本單元的寫作任務是介紹一件藝術作品,屬于事物說明文的范疇。事物說明文,一般是通過對具體事物的形狀、構(gòu)造、性質(zhì)、特點、用途等作客觀而準確的說明,使讀者了解、認識這個或這類事物。II.結(jié)構(gòu)框架寫好事物說明文要從五點入手:一要抓住特征說明事物;二要選好說明角度;三要合理安排說明順序;四要恰當?shù)厥褂酶鞣N說明方法;五要運用準確、簡明的語言說明。III.必備表達1.常用詞塊beskilled/goodat 擅長bekeptingoodcondition 保存完好beenthusiasticabout 對……充滿熱情datebackto... 追溯到……passdown 傳承spreadChineseculture 傳播中國文化inmemoryof 為了紀念……2.必備句式(1)作品特點ItisafamouspaintingdrawnbyWuDaozi,oneofthegreatestartistsintheTangDynasty.這幅名畫是由吳道子畫的,他是唐朝最偉大的畫家之一。ThepaintingvividlyreflectsthelifeofpeopleinSichuanProvince.這幅畫生動地反映了四川人的生活。(2)具體描述Itmeasures50centimeterslong./Itis50centimetersinlength.它長50厘米。Thecolorsrangefromyellowstobrowns.它的顏色從黃色到棕色。Chinesepaintingisknownforitsbrushdrawingsinblackinksandnaturalcolors.中國畫因用黑色墨汁和自然色的毛筆畫而出名。(3)對作品的評價Thepaintingisknownforitsaccurateimagesofpeopleandscenery.這幅畫因精準的人物和風景形象而出名。Thereisnodoubtthatthemasterpieceplaysanimportantroleinthedevelopmentofsculpture.毫無疑問,這部杰出的作品在雕塑發(fā)展史上起著重要的作用。Allthevisitorsspeakhighlyofit.所有游客都對它做出高度評價。IV.優(yōu)化策略1.?開頭引入?簡要介紹藝術作品的名稱、作者和創(chuàng)作背景。吸引讀者的注意力，提出文章的主題。2.?詳細描述?詳細描述藝術作品的外觀、風格、色彩、構(gòu)圖等視覺元素。分析作品所表達的主題、情感或寓意?？梢蕴峒白髌吩谒囆g史上的地位或影響。3.?個人感受?分享自己對作品的感受或理解?？梢越Y(jié)合個人經(jīng)歷或情感，使文章更加生動和真實。4.?結(jié)尾總結(jié)?總結(jié)作品的特點和價值。強調(diào)作品對自己的影響或啟示。可以提出對讀者的建議或期望?！痉段氖纠縄ntherealmofart,therearecountlessmasterpiecesthatcaptivateoursensesandigniteourimagination.Onesuchartworkthathasalwaysfascinatedmeis"TheStarryNight,"amesmerizingpaintingbythelegendaryDutchartistVincentvanGogh.Paintedin1889duringhisstayattheSaintPauldeMausoleasyluminFrance,thispiecenotonlyreflectsvanGogh'suniqueartisticstylebutalsodelvesdeepintotheplexitiesofhisinnerworld.Atfirstglance,"TheStarryNight"drawstheviewerintoitsswirlingvortexofcolorsandpatterns.Thedominantbluesandyellowscreateastrikingcontrast,symbolizingtheturmoilandtranquilitythatcoexistedwithinvanGogh'smind.Thesky,renderedinbold,vigorousstrokes,seemstobealive,withstarsswirlinginacosmicdance.Thecypresstreeintheforegroundstandstallandsolemn,itsdark,twistedformcontrastingsharplywiththevibrantskybehindit.Thisjuxtapositionofelementsaddsdepthanddramatotheposition,makingitavisualfeastfortheeyes.Beyonditsvisualappeal,"TheStarryNight"conveysaprofoundmessageaboutthehumanexperience.ThepaintingisofteninterpretedasarepresentationofvanGogh'sstruggleswithmentalillnessandhisyearningforpeace.Theswirlingstarsandturbulentskymirrorthechaosinhismind,whilethecalmvillagebelowsuggestsalongingforserenityandstability.Thisdualityreflectstheplexnatureofhumanemotions,wherepainandbeautycancoexist.Personally,"TheStarryNight"resonateswithmedeeply.Itremindsmeofthepowerofarttoexpresstheinexpressible,tocapturetheessenceofhumanexperienceinawaythatwordscannot.WheneverIgazeuponthispainting,Iamtransportedtoaworldwhereemotionsarerawandreal,andwheretheboundariesbetweentheinternalandexternalblur.Inconclusion,"TheStarryNight"isnotjustapainting;itisatestamenttothehumanspirit'sresilienceandcreativity.Itteachesusthateveninthedarkesttimes,thereisbeautytobefoundandexpressed.Aswecontinuetoappreciateandstudythismasterpiece,weareremindedoftheenduringpowerofarttoinspire,fort,andchallengeus.Iencourageeveryonetotakeamomenttoimmersethemselvesintheworldof"TheStarryNight,"andtoletitsbeautyanddepthtouchtheirhearts.假定你是校報英文版的編輯李華,你們計劃在下期報紙的“GreatArtworks”欄目中為讀者介紹《六駿圖》。請你根據(jù)提示信息,為其配上一段英文說明。項目內(nèi)容名稱《六駿圖》(TheSixHorses)作者徐悲鴻特點六匹馬形態(tài)各異;表現(xiàn)出了馬的活力;是力量、速度和成功的象征。評價結(jié)合了中國的水墨畫技巧(inkandwashtechnique)以及西方的一些繪畫技巧,是中國最著名的繪畫作品之一。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80個左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。【寫作示例】I.讀題布局II.句式建構(gòu)1.《六駿圖》是由徐悲鴻畫的一幅名畫。TheSixHorsesisafamouspaintingdrawnbyXuBeihong.

2.徐悲鴻是一位著名的中國畫家,他因他的中國水墨畫馬而最為著名。XuBeihongisawellknownChineseartistandismostfamousforhisChineseinkandwashpaintingsofhorses.

3.這幅畫是中國水墨畫技法與西方繪畫技法的結(jié)合,被認為是中國最著名的畫作之一。(1)Thispainting,abinationofChineseinkandwashtechniqueswithWesternpaintingskills,isconsideredasoneofthemostfamouspaintingsinChina.

(2)Thispainting,(whichis)consideredasoneofthemostfamouspaintingsinChina,isabinationofChineseinkandwashtechniqueswithWesternpaintingskills.

4.畫中的六匹馬姿勢各異,姿態(tài)優(yōu)美,活靈活現(xiàn)。Withvariouspositions,thesixhorsesinthepaintingarevivid,gracefulandactive.

5.這幅畫顯示了馬的力量。Thepaintingshowsthestrengthofthehorses.

6.這幅畫是力量、速度和成功的象征。Thepaintingisthesymbolofpower,speedandsuccess.

7.總而言之,這幅畫真的是天才的杰作,馬的形象和它展現(xiàn)的精神令人驚嘆。Inaword,thepaintingisreallyaworkofgeniusandtheimagesofthehorsesandthespiritsitshowsareamazing.

III.銜接成篇TheSixHorsesisafamouspaintingdrawnbyXuBeihong,awellknownChineseartistwhoismostfamousforhisChineseinkandwashpaintingsofhorses.Thispainting,abinationofChineseinkandwashtechniqueswithWesternpaintingskills,isconsideredasoneofthemostfamouspaintingsinChina.Withvariouspositions,thesixhorsesinthepaintingarevivid,gracefulandactive.Thepaintingnotonlyshowsthestrengthofthehorsesbutalsoisthesymbolofpower,speedandsuccess.Inaword,thepaintingisreallyaworkofgeniusandtheimagesofthehorsesandthespiritsitshowsareamazing.1．假如你是李雷，上周參觀了以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”為主題的環(huán)保作品展。請你根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇短文，在英語課上介紹相關展品并分享自己的想法與感受。WhatwereonshowWhattheyaremadeof/fromWhatyouthinkclotheschairsmodelplanes...wastepaperplasticbottlesusedwoodandglass...creativesave......注意:(1)短文須介紹至少兩項展品，可適當發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學校等信息；(3)詞數(shù):80—100。短文首句僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，你校英語社正在舉辦以保護世界野生動植物為主題的繪畫比賽，你創(chuàng)作了以下作品參賽，請寫一篇發(fā)言稿，向評委介紹你的這幅作品。內(nèi)容包括：1.作品主要信息介紹；2.作品解讀。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應為100左右；2.請按如下格式作答。參考詞匯rhinoceros獨角犀牛giraffe長頸鹿Distinguishedjudges,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.3．假如你是李華，你校英語報開設了一個介紹影視作品的專欄，請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示為該欄目寫一篇關于電影《流浪地球》的影評。片名TheWanderingEarth導演郭帆故事梗概該片改編于劉慈欣的同名小說。影片講述了在不久的未來太陽即將毀滅，太陽系已經(jīng)不適合人類生存。面對絕境，人們將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類的新家園。評論1.該電影是中國科幻電影史上的里程碑，自上映以來，深受觀眾歡迎。2.……注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.不要逐條翻譯，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：里程碑landmark_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是學生會主席李華。學校將舉辦一次以＂校園生活·創(chuàng)意無限＂(InnovationsonCampus)為主題的創(chuàng)意作品展評活動。請你根據(jù)以下圖示，以短文形式用英語寫一份書面通知。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3.開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:校園campus

創(chuàng)意作品innovation

頒獎prizegivingNoticeAnexcitingevent＂InnovationsonCampus＂isaroundthecorner.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________eon,everybody!It’syourshowtime.StudentUnion5．你是明啟中學學生李華，最近上海博物館推出了三款文創(chuàng)周邊產(chǎn)品，吸引了不少年輕人追捧，分別是：（1）館藏藏品日歷；（2）中外藝術家明信片；（3）“絲綢之路”主題絲巾。No.1No.2No.3以上海博物館館藏藏品為主題的日歷，印有中華古代水墨畫、書法、歷史文物的展品細節(jié)信息。以中外名畫為主題，色彩艷麗，可作為賀卡、明信片、書簽使用。

以“帆船”為主題元素、以海上絲綢之路航線為底，以淺藍色呼應瓷器配色，100%桑蠶絲材料。售價：79元售價：10元/張售價：330元請比較這三個產(chǎn)品，選擇一款文創(chuàng)產(chǎn)品以贈予外國筆友Tom，從不同角度（如設計創(chuàng)意、實用價值、文化意蘊、銷售價格等）闡述你的選擇理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假如你是李華。你的澳大利亞朋友Tom聽說春節(jié)期間你去了馬街書會(MajieQuyiShow),請你給他寫封回信,介紹下馬街書會的基本情況。歷史700多年性質(zhì)民間藝術盛會;“中國十大民俗”之一時間每年陰歷正月十一至十三地點河南寶豐馬街演員來自全國的曲藝藝人內(nèi)容40多種曲藝和其它傳統(tǒng)曲目注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearTom,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．假如你是李華，上周六參觀了你市博物館舉辦的“遇見藝術家”中國藝術展，請為你校英文報寫一則評論。內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽概況；2.觀展感受；3.意見或建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．你校在學生中開展調(diào)查，想了解學生對藝術鑒賞ArtAppreciation這門課程是否感興趣。請寫一篇短文，給你校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.描述圖表(chart)；2.試分析產(chǎn)生該結(jié)果的原因；3.你的看法。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2.請在答題卡的相應位置作答。AsurveyonArtAppreciation___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．戲曲藝術是中華文明的一個重要組成部分，是我國傳統(tǒng)文化的代表之一。但是在物質(zhì)水平提高和精神文化豐富的同時，戲曲藝術的地位卻逐漸下降，保護傳統(tǒng)文化的形勢迫在眉睫。請你參照以下信息介紹一種被列入國家非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)目錄的劇種——秦腔。主要信息：1．秦腔(QinqiangOpera)，中國漢族最古老的戲劇之一，源于陜西和甘肅的農(nóng)村地區(qū)，流行于中國西北部的陜西、甘肅、青海、寧夏等地；2．秦腔所演的劇目豐富：有神話、民間故事等；秦腔的角色也十分眾多，表演特色鮮明；3．2006年5月20日，經(jīng)國務院(theStateCouncil)批準列入第一批國家級非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)名錄?！⒁猓?.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李華，你校英語社團值?！八囆g節(jié)”之際舉辦一場主題為“藝術”的演講比賽，請你寫一篇演講稿參加，內(nèi)容包括：1．在你看來，藝術是什么？2．藝術給人帶來什么？3．如何提高自己的藝術修養(yǎng)？注意：字數(shù)在80詞左右。參考詞匯：藝術修養(yǎng)artisticacplishmentGoodmorning,everyone!I'mLiHua.It’smyhonortostandhereandgiveaspeechaboutart.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!參考答案1．Hello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,includingclothesmadeofwastepaperandmodelplanesmadeofusedwoodandglass.Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolors.Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!Withthezipperofjeansonthetop,twopocketsontwosides,thebackpacklooksbothusefulandfashionable.Itevenhasa!Ifeltamazedathowwastecouldbeputtosuchgooduse.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergyandbuildagreenerfuture.【寫作分析】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文。要求考生寫一篇短文，在英語課上介紹以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”為主題的環(huán)保作品展上展示的展品，并分享自己的想法與感受。1.詞匯積累許多：anumberof→agoodmany感興趣：beinterestedin→takeinterestin實用的：useful→practical驚訝的：amazed→surprised2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!拓展句：Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforputers,whichismadeoutofapairofoldjeans![高分句型1]Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.(運用了that引導定語從句)[高分句型2]Ifeltamazedathowwastecouldbeputtosuchgooduse.(運用了how引導賓語從句)2．Distinguishedjudges,IamLiHua,andIamhonoredtopresentmyartwork,titled“SaveWildLife,”forthispetition.Inmypainting,agiraffe,anelephant,andablackbearstandtogetheronalargehand,symbolizingourresponsibilitytoprotectandcareforthesemagnificentcreatures.Themessage“SaveWildLife”isprominentlydisplayed,servingasareminderofourdutytopreservethebiodiversityofourplanet.Throughmyartwork,Ihopetoraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofwildlifeconservationandinspireeachofustotakeaction.Wildlifeisacrucialpartofourecosystem,anditisourresponsibilitytoensuretheirsurvival.Thankyouforconsideringmyentryandhopeyouwilllikeit.Thankyou.【寫作分析】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文。校英語社正在舉辦以保護世界野生動植物為主題的繪畫比賽，李華創(chuàng)作了一幅作品參賽，要求考生以李華的名義寫一篇發(fā)言稿，向評委介紹你的這幅作品。1.詞匯積累比賽：petition→contest保護：preserve→protect希望：hope→wish重要性：importance→significance2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Inmypainting,agiraffe,anelephant,andablackbearstandtogetheronalargehand,symbolizingourresponsibilitytoprotectandcareforthesemagnificentcreatures.拓展句：Inmypainting,agiraffe,anelephant,andablackbearstandtogetheronalargehand,whichsymbolizesourresponsibilitytoprotectandcareforthesemagnificentcreatures.[高分句型1]IamLiHua,andIamhonoredtopresentmyartwork,titled“SaveWildLife,”forthispetition.(運用了過去分詞作后置定語)[高分句型2]Themessage“SaveWildLife”isprominentlydisplayed,servingasareminderofourdutytopreservethebiodiversityofourplanet.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語)

TheWanderingEarthisasciencefictionfilmdirectedbyGuoFanandadaptedfromLiuCixin'snovelofthesamename.Thefilmtellsthestorythatinthenearfuturethesunisdyingandthesolarsystemisnolongersuitableforlife.Facedwiththedangerofhumanextinction,peoplewillstartthe"WanderingEarth"project,tryingtoescapefromthesolarsystemwiththeearthandlookingforanewhomeforhumanbeings.ThefilmisalandmarkinthehistoryofChinesesciencefictionfilmsandhasbeenpopularwithaudiencesinceitsrelease.SoIhighlyremendthisfilm.【分析】本篇書面表達屬于影評，考生根據(jù)表格中的提示為校英語報介紹影視作品的欄目寫一篇關于電影《流浪地球》的影評。1.詞匯積累改編：revise→adaptedfrom適合做：isfitfor→issuitablefor面對：facing→facedwithj建議：suggest→remend2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：ThefilmisalandmarkinthehistoryofChinesesciencefictionfilmsandhasbeenpopularwithaudiencesinceitsrelease.SoIhighlyremendthisfilm.拓展句：ThefilmisalandmarkinthehistoryofChinesesciencefictionfilmsandhasbeenpopularwithaudiencesinceitsrelease，whichiswhyIhighlyremendthisfilm.[高分句型1]Facedwiththedangerofhumanextinction,peoplewillstartthe"WanderingEarth"project,tryingtoescapefromthesolarsystemwiththeearthandlookingforanewhomeforhumanbeings.（非謂語動詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Thefilmtellsthestorythatinthenearfuturethesunisdyingandthesolarsystemisnolongersuitableforlife.（that引導的同位語從句）4．Notice

Anexcitingevent＂InnovationsonCampus＂isaroundthecorner.

EveryoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.Notethatyourinnovationsmustbeschoolthings.Alongwithyourwonderfulinnovation,youneedtohandinareport,explaininghowtheideaoccurstoyouandwhatmaterialsyouuse.AllthecollectionswillbeonshowfromJune16to18inthegym.Lookingforwardtotheprizegivingceremony?Sure!

It’llbeheldfrom15:00to17:00onJune18.Sodon’tmissthechanceofbeingthewinner.Yourcontributionwillcertainlymaketheeventahugesuccess.Foranyquestions.CallLiHuaat.eon,everybody!It’syourshowtime.StudentUnion【寫作分析】本篇書面表達屬于看圖作文。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為看圖作文：假定你是學生會主席李華。學校將舉辦一次以＂校園生活·創(chuàng)意無限＂(InnovationsonCampus)為主題的創(chuàng)意作品展評活動。請你根據(jù)以下圖示，以短文形式用英語寫一份書面通知。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：aroundthecorner（即將來臨）；encouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills（鼓勵創(chuàng)造性思維，充分發(fā)揮你的DIY技能）；Alongwithyourwonderfulinnovation（伴隨著你精彩的創(chuàng)新）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。本文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖畫內(nèi)容，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。同時文中使用高級句子。EveryoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.句中使用which引導的非限制性定語從句；youneedtohandinareport,explaininghowtheideaoccurstoyouandwhatmaterialsyouuse.句中使用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語和how/what引導的賓語從句；It’llbeheldfrom15:00to17:00onJune18.句中使用一般將來時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)。5．IamwritingtointroduceandparethreeculturalandcreativeproductsrecentlylaunchedbytheShanghaiMuseum,whichhaveattractedalotofattentionfromyoungpeople.Afterconsideringvariousaspects,Ihavechosenthe“SilkRoad”themedsilkscarfastheidealgiftforyou.Firstly,thesilkscarffeaturesasailboattheme,symbolizingthehistoricalmaritimeSilkRoad.TheuseofalightbluecolorschemeplementsthecolorsfoundinChineseporcelain,creatingavisuallyappealingdesign.Secondly,consideringpracticalvalue,thesilkscarfisversatile.Itcanbewornasafashionaccessoryorusedasadecorativeitemathome.ItnotonlyaddselegancetoyouroutfitbutalsoservesasareminderofthehistoricalsignificanceoftheSilkRoad.Lastbutnotleast,thesilkscarfisreasonablypricedparedtootherluxuryaccessoriesofsimilarquality,whichoffersexcellentvalueformoney,makingitanaffordableandmeaningfulgift.Inconclusion,consideringitsexceptionaldesigncreativity,practicalvalue,profoundculturalsignificance,andreasonableprice,Ibelievethe“SilkRoad”themedsilkscarfwouldbetheperfectculturalandcreativegiftforTom.【寫作分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生比較三款文創(chuàng)周邊產(chǎn)品，選擇一款文創(chuàng)產(chǎn)品以贈予外國筆友Tom，從不同角度（如設計創(chuàng)意、實用價值、文化意蘊、銷售價格等）闡述選擇理由。1.詞匯積累舉辦：launch→hold各種各樣的：various→avarietyof首先：firstly→firstofall總之：inconclusion→allinall2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Afterconsideringvariousaspects,Ihavechosenthe“SilkRoad”themedsilkscarfastheidealgiftforyou.拓展句：AfterIhaveconsideredvariousaspects,Ihavechosenthe“SilkRoad”themedsilkscarfastheidealgiftforyou.【高分句型1】IamwritingtointroduceandparethreeculturalandcreativeproductsrecentlylaunchedbytheShanghaiMuseum,whichhaveattractedalotofattentionfromyoungpeople.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Inconclusion,consideringitsexceptionaldesigncreativity,practicalvalue,profoundculturalsignificance,andreasonableprice,Ibelievethe“SilkRoad”themedsilkscarfwouldbetheperfectculturalandcreativegiftforTom.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語的結(jié)構(gòu)）6．DearTom,I’mgladyou’reinterestedinmyrecenttriptotheMajieQuyiShowduringtheSpringFestival.Thisuniquefolkartfestival,knownasoneofthe“TopTenChineseFolkCustoms”,hasahistoryofover700years.Ittakesplaceannuallyfromthe11thtothe13thdayofthefirstlunarmonthinMajie,Baofeng,Henan.PerformersfromalloverChinagatherheretoshowcasemorethan40typesofQuyiandothertraditionaltunes,makingitatrulyremarkableeventforfolkartlovers.IhadawonderfultimeexperiencingthisvibrantdisplayofChineseculturalheritage.Yours,LiHua【寫作分析】本篇是圖表作文。你的澳大利亞朋友Tom聽說春節(jié)期間你去了馬街書會，要求考生給他寫封回信,介紹下馬街書會的基本情況。1.詞匯積累高興：glad→delighted獨特的：unique→special展示：showcase→display活動：event→activity2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thisuniquefolkartfestival,knownasoneofthe“TopTenChineseFolkCustoms”,hasahistoryofover700years.拓展句：Thisuniquefolkartfestival,whichisknownasoneofthe“TopTenChineseFolkCustoms”,hasahistoryofover700years.[高級句型1]I’mgladyou’reinterestedinmyrecenttriptotheMajieQuyiShowduringtheSpringFestival.(省略that的賓語從句)[高級句型2]PerformersfromalloverChinagatherheretoshowcasemorethan40typesofQuyiandothertraditionaltunes,makingitatrulyremarkableeventforfolkartlovers.(現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)構(gòu)狀語)7．LastSaturday,Ivisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”,whichwasheldbyourcity’smuseum.Manyartworks,includingworksofChinesecalligraphyandlandscapepaintings,wereonshow.Thehostexplainedeveryworkindetail,whichhelpedthevisitorshaveabetterunderstanding.Theworkswereamazingandleftadeepimpressiononme.TheexhibitionnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalpride.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethis,andfutureexhibitionswilllastlongersothatmorepeoplecanhavetheopportunitytoappreciategreatartworks.【寫作分析】本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文。題目要求考生就市博物館舉辦的“遇見藝術家”中國藝術展寫一則評論，需介紹展覽概況，分享觀展感受，并給出意見或建議。1.詞匯積累展示中：onshow→onexhibition,ondisplay解釋：explain→clarify,explicate了不起的：amazing→astonishing,awesome,breathtaking促進：promote→facilitate,advance,further加強：strengthen→enhance,augment以便：sothat→inorderthat2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：TheexhibitionnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalpride.拓展句：NotonlydidtheexhibitionpromotetheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculture,butitstrengthenedournationalpride.[高分句型1]LastSaturday,Ivisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”,whichwasheldbyourcity’smuseum.(運用了過去分詞短語titled…作exhibition的后置定語、關系代詞which引導非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Thehostexplainedeveryworkindetail,whichhelpedthevisitorshaveabetterunderstanding.(運用了關系代詞which引導非限制性定語從句)[高分句型3]Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethis,andfutureexhibitionswilllastlongersothatmorepeoplecanhavetheopportunitytoappreciategreatartworks.(運用了連接詞that引導名詞性從句作hope的賓語并被省略、sothat引導目的狀語從句)8．AsurveyonArtAppreciationAsisshowninthechart,67.24percentofthestudentsfairlylikeit,whileonly9percentdislikeit.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatmoststudentshavefancyonArtAppreciation.Therearesomereasonsaccountingfortheresult.Forinstance,itisthethemultimediaapproachtoteachingthathasmadeArtAppreciationclassesmoreinteresting,rangingfromimagestomovies.What’smore,studentsareencouragedtoengageinartexhibitionsandartisticperformances,whicharousestheirenthusiasm.Inmyopinion,theresultofthesurveyisagoodbeginning.Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalroleinourlife,theimportanceofitcanneverbeoveremphasized.【寫作分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，就學生對藝術鑒ArtAppreciation這門課程是否感興趣寫一篇短文。1.詞匯積累喜歡：like→befondof此外：what’smore→inaddition鼓勵：encourage→inspire重要性：importance→significance2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Therearesomereasonsaccountingfortheresult.拓展句：Therearesomereasonswhichaccountfortheresult.【高分句型1】What’smore,studentsareencouragedtoengageinartexhibitionsandartis